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Pokémon: Danny's Snagging Journey

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Pokefan64

Lets-a-go!
Pokémon: Danny's Snagging Journey

Hi, and welcome to the comic!

Logo!

The comic is about a boy called Danny who works in a PokéMart in Lavender Town. To find out more, read the comics ...

If you have any questions, please ask!

If you don't know what to rate me on, use this form:

Storyline: Is it clichéd, has it got a good storyline? Rate out of 10 and give reasons!
Spriting: Does it have good, well-positioned and well-used sprites? Rate out of 10 and give reasons!
Speech: Is the wording good and are the speech bubbles okay? Rate out of 10 and give reasons!
Other: Anything else that you want to add.
Overall Rating: Well duh - out of 30.

Bios:

Danny's Bio

More bios to come when more characters are introduced!

Trainer Cards:

Danny's TC
Maxxa's TC

And now for the comics:

Chapter 1:

Comic 1 - The Robbery!
Comic 2 - A Challenge
Comic 3 - The Battle
Comic 4 - Explanation, Part 1
Comic 5 - Explanation, Part 2
Comic 6 - Mom-napped!
Comic 7 - Danny Sets Out

Chapter 2:

Comic 8 - Wild Oddish!
Comic 9 - Youngster Joe!
Comic 10 - Maxxa Emerges ...
Comic 11 - Gee, that was easy!
Comic 12 - Danny's new buddy

Mini-Comics:
Mini-Comic 1
Mini-Comic 2

More to come soon.

Fan Stuff:
None yet.

Credit:
The Spriter's Resource
VgMaps
Deefunx (for battle scene stuff)

I know that they are short, plz don't complain about the length.

I hope you enjoy my comic!

~Pokefan64;245;
 
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Chinese Teletubbie

Orange Champion
How many comcs do you have to make at a time? Well YAy another shadow pokemon (sarcasim) and there isnt much of a plot just a guy who works in a shop who will probably go on a pokeon journey if you decide to continue the comic
 
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Pokefan64

Lets-a-go!
Chinese Teletubbie said:
Well YAy another shadow pokemon (sarcasim)
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So how many story lines of comics are clichéd in your opinion?

Chinese Teletubbie said:
and there isnt much of a plot just a guy who works in a shop who will probably go on a pokeon journey if you decide to continue the comic
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He is not going to go on a Pokemon Journey, thanks.

I am sorry if you have a miserable life, but don't take it out on other people.

~Pokefan64;245;
 
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SamsGFX

<< May Is Sexci!
Pokefan64 said:
So how many styles of comics are clichéd in your opinion?



He is not going to go on a Pokemon Journey, thanks.

I am sorry if you have a miserable life, but please don't take it out on other people.

~Pokefan64;245;
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You tell him xD

I thought it was quite good, I'll definitely keep reading!
 
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Anton_91

Comic Trainer!
I like it alot. Got the humor, the sprite and the plot. And even if he goes on a Pokémon Journey, yeah it might be original but at least he doesn't live in pallet town and is on his way to the prof. oak in the first comic. Good job.

Make sure not to quit this one, promise?? This one is the best of your three comic. Make sure to update often so you won't lose your readers. :)
 
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Pokefan64

Lets-a-go!
Mutanton_91 said:
Make sure not to quit this one, promise?? This one is the best of your three comic. Make sure to update often so you won't lose your readers.
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poke_fan_12 said:
Well its better than your other ones, So keep the updates flowing to keep the readers happy,
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Don't worry, we're going to keep on going on this one. :)
Everyone please remember that Hazzer helped me do this aswell!
Thanks for the comments everyone.

Comic 4 WILL come soon.

~Pokefan64;245;
 
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PK

SO BEAUTIFUL!!
Well this is what I think... Well the recolor on the shadow machop is good and the editing is sorta no offense so so... But can you atleast show Machop using the attack... instead of just blacking it out.
 
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Matt`

r u srs?
I'm sure it would be a lot easier to stick with one comic, rather than to manage multiple ones. :/

Sprites - Mixing Hoenn overworld sprites with Kanto overworld sprites = not a good idea. There are small differences in the sprites that makes it look like you chopped off a Hoenn head and pasted a Kanto head onto it.

Plot - It seems original. Not many people start their comics at the pokemart.
It also kinda dosen't make sense that the main character would agree to battle the criminal, and if the criminal won, he would get the stuff. But if the criminal lost, he would willingly give up and say "lol, u beat me, i gues i hav to giv dis bak now."?
And its not like the main character would actually allow the criminal to go free say "u won fare and square, lol. u get to keep it."? Not very realistic.
 
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zuloon

Bboy Zuloon
Chinese_Teletubbie (what kind of an odd name is that), you know you're just jealous.
 
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Hazzer

Crab People
Sorry I didn't post, i had a party last night and it went on untill 12:00
Thanks pokefan64 for posting them.Like Pokefan64 said WE ARE NOT GOING TO GIVE UP ON THIS ONE
Thanks ~Hazzer;009;
 
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munchlaxboy

Catching up on XY
Storyline: 9/10 I like where this is going. A boy finding out about Shadow Pokemon then catching them to save the world is a pretty good plot.
Sprites: 8/10 Well done positions. Good sprites for the characters personality.
Speech: 6/10 Meh, I don't really get some of the words.
Overall Rating: 23/30
 
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EmberGryphon

Meowth Fanatic <3
Having never played Colleseum or XD, I can ignore plot holes. >_> Anyway, good issue. I'm always happy to see sprite comics that use commas. :D ...I don't ask for much.
 
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