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Pokémon Legends

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Stealth.Scizor

Scizor Trainer
Pokémon Legends

This is my First Comic
It is about a child of the age af 14 and his name is...GARY >.<
All criticism and positive comments are apreciated.
If there are lots of replies then i will continue making them :)

Stealth.Scizor ;212;

Profiles

Chapter 1
The Begining
I hate Tentacools
Rage!!
Uh Cr*p
Sea Beauty
Pallet At Last
Yeeeeah!! Nooo!!..YEEEAH!!
Huh?
Lick Him!
Latest Episode
http://i4.*******.com/16ay32d.png

Again All posts are appreciated

Credit To All At The Spriters Resource
 
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SoulGuardian

PICHU ROXORZ!
This has bad grammar and it's very unoriginal and cliche. This is really starting to get annoying. Please, MAKE A NON-CLICHE COMIC! Jesus Christ! Uh, sorry about that but every new comic I see is cliche! Please come up with a better plot! The good thing is that the water gun looks good.

Please, give your comic a plot twist.
 
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ZTcrazy

Yo!
SoulGuardian said:
This has bad grammar and it's very unoriginal and cliche. This is really starting to get annoying. Please, MAKE A NON-CLICHE COMIC! Jesus Christ! Uh, sorry about that but every new comic I see is cliche! Please come up with a better plot! The good thing is that the water gun looks good.

Please, give your comic a plot twist.
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Okay, calm down. This is his first comic, so let him do what he wants. I don't think it's cliche at all, it's too early to tell as well and you can't do much to make it different at the start, if you're doing a journey comic. He made it different by adding a strange character in, didn't you see? Don't make up stuff and complain about it. ¬.¬

Anyway, I do agree about the grammar though. If you edit that then it will look much more neat and tidy, you'll be surprised. But great job on your first comic! :)
 
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SoulGuardian

PICHU ROXORZ!
ZTcrazy said:
Okay, calm down. This is his first comic, so let him do what he wants. I don't think it's cliche at all, it's too early to tell as well and you can't do much to make it different at the start, if you're doing a journey comic. He made it different by adding a strange character in, didn't you see? Don't make up stuff and complain about it. ¬.¬

Anyway, I do agree about the grammar though. If you edit that then it will look much more neat and tidy, you'll be surprised. But great job on your first comic! :)
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You're right...I think I am being to hard on him. It's just that I'm a little confused with his comic.
Sorry Stealth.Scizor...
 
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Stealth.Scizor

Scizor Trainer
Thats OK
I respect all your comments
 
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Stealth.Scizor

Scizor Trainer
new episode
http://i5.*******.com/166yau1.png

soz 4 double postin
 
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Eevee_Master

♥Eevee♥
I think that your comics are realy funny. ^.^
 
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Blaze Dragon

T3h Blazing Ranger!
Don´t shorten words. Do you say OMG, or Oh my God? Guess the latter. Also, is Co-ordinator not Co-ordinater
 
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Risk Alchemist

Guest
it's good. I like it, but I can't pick out exactly what you should change....I'll figure it out....meh -.-
 
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Eevee_Master

♥Eevee♥
still funny ^.^
 
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Stealth.Scizor

Scizor Trainer
Lol
Here is anuva episode (Already!?!?!)
http://i4.*******.com/16ay32d.png
 
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ZTcrazy

Yo!
XD. Great comic SS, I can see it going a long way and you have a good story coupled with humour. Only, in one slide you spelt Gastly (Ghastly). Other than that I can't wait fo9r the next chapter! :)
 
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Eevee_Master

♥Eevee♥
I agree with that person ^

^.^
 
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