Pokémon, Life in Verdanturf town

[kapslock]

Pokémon, Life in Verdanturf town(New episode!)

A mod can close this, i made a new thread for my comics.Pokémon:Opal Version

 

[Dafearo(svensk)]

MANY spelling errors, not much humor and....well... I can't see the plot yet but I bet it's about a girl who thinks her life is boring so she starts an adventure...

 

[kapslock]

Meh, not an adventure, atleast a BLAND freaken journey comic.If i do, I`ll have a good reason to.Thanks for the C-C.(Fixed the mistakes)
Err.. come on, I`m not afraid of alittle crit people. I need it to improve!
New episode, Pokémon Cannables?

 

[kapslock]

Why is`nt anyone posting? Does my comic suck that bad?

 

[SoulGuardian]

Don't douple post and yes it sucks. (Sheesh and you say mine sucks!)

 

[Neopolis]

SoulGuardian, stop being so immature and accept that this comic is better then yours. -_-

Try to work on the spelling though. Can-ni-bal

 

[kapslock]

Thanks Neo, SoulGardian, I don`t want to start a flame war, but yours wasn`t good cus you had eye burning colors, and other unessary things.I did not say your comic sucks.So you just flamed me with your post.

 

[SoulGuardian]

Thanks Neo, SoulGardian, I don`t want to start a flame war, but yours wasn`t good cus you had eye burning colors, and other unessary things.I did not say your comic sucks.So you just flamed me with your post.

Oh sorry.....I won't flame you...

 

[kapslock]

That`s allright Merry X-mas.

 

[pika_power]

Alright and rather funny and just as a question will this be like the earlier udates of a town call littleroot?

 

[kapslock]

Whadea mean? This is MY comic MY ideas,I'm no thief.

 

[Rinrei]

Okay, this is an okay comic. I can see lots of space for more improovements. Like your spelling errors, you need to work on that. Humor too. Good luck!

 

[kapslock]

Thanks Rinei, The spelling I can't fix.I only notebook on my comp.When I had an icky virus, it deleted my MSWord.I could type it on the forums, and use the spell check, but i'm afraid of another virus.

 

[SoulGuardian]

Well this is my first comic, so I hope you will enjoy reading it as i did making it. Remember, Constructive crit, we are all mature here, and know how to review properly.The humor may not be ha-ha funny, so bare with me.Patiantly sits and waits for reviews to come pouring in. Well here`s the episodes.

epi 1Stating the Obvious
epi 2Pokémon Cannibals?
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Err sorry for sudden change in speech bubbles, i`m expirmenting with them.
Credit to,Neopolis3 for the random junk, May`s sprite sheet,and HIS comic pannels.
Spriters Resource for other sprites
pk2.com for Cyndy`s sprite.

Actually I think its good because you always do the right things like they said "Why don't we start a journey?" and "Nah, everyone else is doing it." I was in a bad mood when I said it sucks and I'm VERY, VERY, sorry...

 

[kapslock]

SG, sorry tot, but let`s try not to turn this into a apology thread.

 

[Socrates With A Lobotomy]

Fairly good, but not the best comic I've seen. Could use more humor, but I have high hopes for this simply because you have smart-talking Pokemon in it..

 

[kapslock]

He he thanks I've got writer's block apparently.If any one has an idea feel free to pm me.

 

[P-Man]

At least you didn't go like "AH! What a day to start an adventure!" In the first comic.

 

[kapslock]

He he thanks P-Man that's a lot especially coming from you. I'm re-doing comic one, better speech bubbles, grammar and sprites(maybe).

 

[pika_power]

Whadea mean? This is MY comic MY ideas,I'm no thief.

I did not say you did. I was just asking if it would be the same sort of style. Not everyone who starts an adventure comic is a theif likewise not everyone who starts a comic about a person in a town is a theif.

If this stays like the first few strips (without the bad point pointed out in other posts) it will be a nice change and a safe harbor from adventure comics.