Pokémon:Opal Version

[kapslock]

Pokémon:Opal Version

Well this is my first comic, so I hope you will enjoy reading it as i did making it. Remember, Constructive crit, we are all mature here, and know how to review properly.The humor may not be ha-ha funny, so bare with me.Well here`s the episodes. Patiantly sits and waits for reviews to come pouring in.
Note, I restarted it, cause I wanted to change the name.
epi 1Stating the Obvious
epi 2Pokémon Cannibals?
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Err sorry for sudden change in speech bubbles, i`m expirmenting with them.
Thanks to,Neopolis3 for the random junk, May`s sprite sheet,and HIS comic pannels.
Spriters Resource for other sprites
pk2.com for Cyndy`s sprite.
ImageShack for Free Image Hosting
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[Blueray]

Welll...

Ups-
So far it looks as if you aren't going to do a journey comic.
Panels fit in ok...

Downs-
Humor is a bit lacking.
Using a may sprite then not editing it and calling it someone else doesn't count as a character.
Some spelling mistakes.

That's all for now...

Just a thought, if a pokemon ate another pokemon it wouldn't be cannibalism. Cannibalism only pertains to eating the same species; it even says in the pokedex that sneasels eat pidgey egg. It would be a way of life for wild pokemon… not all pokemon are gonna eat twigs and crud.
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sorry… I got kind of sciency there.

 

[kapslock]

Well in my comic, it counts as cannibalism Anyway, thanks for the crit.

 

[pika_power]

Welll...

Ups-
So far it looks as if you aren't going to do a journey comic.
Panels fit in ok...

Downs-
Humor is a bit lacking.
Using a may sprite then not editing it and calling it someone else doesn't count as a character.
Some spelling mistakes.

That's all for now...

Just a thought, if a pokemon ate another pokemon it wouldn't be cannibalism. Cannibalism only pertains to eating the same species; it even says in the pokedex that sneasels eat pidgey egg. It would be a way of life for wild pokemon… not all pokemon are gonna eat twigs and crud.
…
sorry… I got kind of sciency there.

Well I agree with you there about the eating other pokemon bit but not using pokedex data duskull opens its mouth tones of time.
But as long as it is funny does it really matter if peoples heads become enlarged and such?
I cant wait for the next ep However I liked the name better as the old one but hey your comic!

 

[Bagonclaw]

The cyndaquil should be zoomed in at the same interval as everyone else is. Ask someone from Fan-Sprites to make a sprite for you. If they take requests, that is. Also, make your items be Poke'- styled.