Overall, I assume you have, like many, read PokéChow and were inspired to create your own comic, right? The way the episodes are titled... a murderous Pokémon... There's just something about it which seems similar... The overall style, I believe, tries to mimic that of my own.
I dislike the comic for a few reasons. There is no discernable plot. So far it is a collage of random and sometimes badly conceptualized jokes. The thing with my comics is that while I try to get a good punchline in, a good joke, every episode, I also try to move the plot along. At the end of the day, behind all the jokes there's a basic semblance or thread that holds the story together. Your comic lacks this absolutely.
Your jokes are largely bad, to be quite honest. The problem is that while it appears that you're giving a good effort to be funny it's just not translating well. The one joke that amused me, I will admit, was in Episode 4 with the Wailord. That was funny, albeit quite random and nonsensical. As for the "killer Oddish", it's a fact that you ripped that off from me, changing the Pokémon and its descriptor. Honestly, I don't believe anyone will ever be able to get away with a murderous Pokémon in a Fan-Comic without it being compared to the MP, so it shouldn't be tried.
Graphically... it's meh, though your speechbubbles become quite horrendous. The points from them are difficult to follow, and the text inside is VERY badly placed. It's... just yeah...
The blueguymeter™ says...
Graphics 7/10
They could be better. Major work needs to be done with the speechbubbles as far as placement of words and the points stemming from them.
Wording, Grammar and Spelling 8/10
This is one of your strengths. It wasn't perfect (I noticed a few errors) but it was pretty good.
Storyline 0/10
You have none.
Effort 10/10
You seem to be trying but you have to give it a bit more.
Potential 7/10
With work this could become a good comic.
You score a 62/100 on the blueguymeter™!
Keep on trucking!
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