Pok-e-oh

[Ranmakuu]

The first ever fan fiction that has Pokemon and Yu-Gi-Oh combined enjoy

Episode I: Pocket Monsters Adventure

(At Pallet Elementry School)

Michael: Hey Ash do you wana play some basketball

Ash: No thanks I'm fine

Michael: Well that's okay then Andrew will play with us then

(The whole class left expect for Ash)

Ash: Finally I been carring around this puzzle it's called the Miyan Puzzle the anicent puzzle that no one never slove and the secert is

(Ash's Miyan Puzzle Box get stolen)

Gary: Heh you were talking to yourself about this puzzle of yours

Drew: Sheesh only a girl could take care a box

Gary: Yeah let's play keepaway with it

Drew: Torment time

(Drew and Gary passes the box back and forth and Ash is trying to get it)

Gary: Heh you never catch it

(Amanda appears and got the box)

Amanda: Hey leave Ash alone he is just ten years old you know

Gary: What a big bully let's make a run for it

Drew: Right

(Drew and Gary runs away)

Ash: Thanks Amanda for the box and all so thanks

Amanda: Always count on me though so is there a puzzle in there

Ash: Yeah a ancient puzzle that been passed down for genrations

Amanda: Interesting let's get the puzzle together

Ash: Okay

(In The Hallway)

Gary: Hey Drew that girl Amanda she is such a bully huh

Drew: Yeah and look I got a part of the puzzle

Gary: Let's throw where Ash can't find it

Drew: Good Idea (Throws The Piece of the puzzle out of the window and it lands on the water)

Gary: He never know

(At 4:30pm at Ash's House)

Ash: Hi mom I have a friend over so don't we mind

Deila: Sure I won't mind I will get dinner started

Ash: Great so now for the puzzle we must do

(At Ash's Room)

Amanda: Hey a Super Famicom since when you get that

Ash: Ever since I got into gaming I once have a Famicom but now it broke

Amanda: Oh let's get started on the puzzle

(A Mightnight at Ash's Room)

Ash: Man that took forever now for the last piece (Checks in the box) Hey's it's gone where is it where is it

(Five Minutes later)

Ash: I can't find the last piece (Crys)

Amanda: Maybe Drew and Gary took it I must talk to them

(Ash calls Gary)

Ash: Hey Gary you know where the last piece is at

Gary: Heh it's at your mother's house

Ash: I AM AT MY MOTHER"S HOUSE TELL ME WHERE IS IT

Gary: Is at the school and it's at the pool area

Ash: So that where is it at

(At the school)

Ash: I must find the piece of the puzzle look I found it

Amanda: Great I will put to it

(Ash turns into Yami Ash)

Yami Ash: Man that is good stuff

(TO BE COUNTINED)

I got the stuff from the Yu-Gi-Oh manga Volume One and I made up the name to replace Thrisian, Joey, and Titia

 

[Godslayer]

Terrible grammar, terrible plot, terrible fic.

 

[Psychic]

...way to flame and get yourself a ban, Godslayer. Not that you're wrong, but even on the internet there is something called 'etiquette'. I doubt that you wouldn't run home crying if you received a comment like that if you were a six-year-old.



Ranmakuu, sweety, deary, lovesie. We have Stickies. We have Rules. You best follow those rules if you don't want to get into trouble. ^^ Because right now, you're breaking the rule where you can't post scripted fics. That already gets you into trouble.

Then add on the fact that your grammar really needs help. Go ask your mom, dad, sister, brother, cousin, teacher, or even someone from around here to help you write with proper English grammar.

Of course, then there's the part where there are hundreds of Pokémon/Yu-Gi-Oh crossovers, most of which are of a much higher quality than this, even though I have yet to see any that are good. Really, right now this has a poor plot that is really just a rip-off of Yu-Gi-Oh with just Pokémon characters instead. Not impressive.



But I somehow doubt that telling you all this will do any good, so I'll just tell you to try your hardest to get help with writing, and try reading other threads here.

~Psychic