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Ash.mx

Well-Known Member
Finally I did a pokemon fanart again, a illustration of the new Pokemon game.

Plusle and Minum ---> they have to be one of the hardest things I have ever draw XD.
I spent a lot of time trying to get them as I wanted... actually ,I couldn´t do that.
Funny thing... their design is so simple that they are hard to draw XD
You know how I like to put black lines in my backgrounds ^^;

It's below VVV
 
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Jason Park

The Steel Master
Wow, great stuff! The poses are quite dynamic, the coloring is great as well! The only thing I see wrong as of right now is the guy's right hand... I think it should be a little bigger. :)
 

Who Said Pikachu?

Pikachu Spotter
Pretty picture!

Crits;
Like Jason Park said, the dude's hand is rather small and looks somewhat odd, it's like the same size as his other one and the major perspective difference really shouldn't allow for that.
Plusle and Minum both seem to have the same minus symbol in their cheeks, I don't know if that's true or if it's just the size of the image that gives that impression or what, so yeah.
Minum's forward foot looks sort of like a blob attached to his body, it needs either more of a line crossing overinto the body or for the shadow you've given it to give it more shape definition.
Otherwise overall it's a really good image, it's got great dynamics and positionings of all the characters and I'm sure if you really wanted to you could fool someone with it as official art, but then that's mean..
Ah well, good job and keep drawing!

Happy hunting!
~Pika!
 

Flame Haze SnS

Yin-Yang
Cool! This pic looks like the official pic I saw somewhere. The background looks cool with those characters and their pokemon! Kudos to Ya!
 

Demise

...An orange blob...
Wow. It really amazes me how people out there can draw, color, and shade on Ms paint.

It's great, but as the other posts said, the boy's hand in the front is too small. It should be bigger.

~;197;
 
You have an impressive talent btw o_O o_O especially at your age, I think you're going to be an amazing Illustrator : ) Looking forward to your work! ^^

Oh for this Picture, for the "rANGER" words, why not make them all capital, have then at "BankGothic Md" Font, and have each letter on their own layer, and move the letters to increase the letter spacing, then adjust the opacity of each layer, you should get a good effect with that ; )

Good Luck! ^_^
 

lilbluecorsola

Binky-boo! <3
Why do I bother critiquing your drawings? XD You know I can never find faults.

Great, dynamic poses, excellent detail on the boy's pants. Perhaps his hand *ought* to be a tad larger, but it's a small detail. I think Plusle and Minun came out very well. Nice job on the girl's badge, it's got a lot of depth. The colors are a little blander than I usually expect from you, but that's okay. It makes it look more like a Sugimori drawing.
 
Very nice.

Not much I can critique on since it's almost flawless. ^__^ Awesome job. One of the best I've seen so far.

Why doncha try adding some highlights on the left side of Hinata's hair to make it a little bit more natural? :)

Great work. I'm impressed.
 

.Bambi.

Be Wise, Tell Lies.
W-whoa. That looks amazing 0_0

OMG I love the way you've drawn Hinata, she looks so cool and confident. I've never liked the look of the Ranger Boy, but you made him look great. So I guess it's pretty much official that Plusle and Minun are the Ranger's Main Pokemon, huh?
 

Ash.mx

Well-Known Member
Thank you to you all for the comments, and for the help too.
About Plusle, it has the right symbol in it´s cheeck, but due to the size it looks like a minus symbol^^;
I did some changes , hope you like it :
GpR1.jpg



and this:
GpR2.jpg
 

Demise

...An orange blob...
I like the colored one, though the black and white one has its one spark.

The right hand of the boy looks better, and nicely done. ^_^


-;197;
 

Myuuvuirocon

<--- Destoria
wow! it tis sweet! I love the color, n' it's almost perfect!

I really really like it! :D
 
Very Very Nice! ; ) You're like a Pro and I think the quality is something that can be published o_O o_O

The Tints and Fading of the background for the second one makes the characters stand out more than the coloured background (if you use a colour background, it takes over the foreground), also allows a close up view of the characters, that's skill : o

I was planning on suggesting shadows, but the symbol at the back already takes that effect in a better way. Also that the glow's been added in to increase sharpness.

I think there's nothing more to say, but just "Perfect"

Great Job! ; )

(Sorry I don't know how to express it, I have a bad range of word-choices ^_^o)
 
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lilbluecorsola

Binky-boo! <3
Hm, I'm not sure, but I think I preferred a white background. ^^; It seems too busy now. But, the tinted one has a neat effect. I think it would look best if there was only a blue tint, instead of half-red, half-blue. It would complement the dark blue symbol behind the characters well.
 

whiteabsol

.:Daisy Dancing:.
Those are nice. I really like the way how you drew Plusle and Minun ^_^
 

Kaiviti

Polynesian*
*dies* that is just awesome...you always create such wonderful pictures!! I love it...and i dont see any mistakes in it (well im no art critique...so i wouldnt know) but this great..just super!!!
 
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übergeek

Guest
Whoa.. Talk about talent... Really great job!
It looks like it could be official artwork or somthing!
The only (very small) thing I could mention is the letter spacing on the word "Pokemon." But other than that... Amazing!
 
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