How come no one else sees the errors in this?
I'll be blunt, because variation is sweet. Sorry, pal.
Her head/shoulder size ratio is horribly out of proportion; it's way too small of a ratio. The head looks big compared to the body. Her midsection, while almost hourglass like, looks thick, almost like she has extra weight, and I KNOW you didn't mean for that. The left arm looks manly; it's probably because of the line definition in the elbow. I know you like detail, but no. Do not do that kind of stuff unless you know how. Also, where the hell did her hands go? Did they disappear? Not good. Oh, it also looks like she has a pig nose. Again, try not to define so much in a smaller pic such as this.
The Milotic looks too thin at the end, and its head looks a bit too large as a whole. And what's the huge bulge 1/3 of the way below its head? That just looks really bad.
At least the shading is alright, since you seem to have a definitive lightsource.
Sorry. But I had to deviate from all these artgasms people are having over this, because it's really not worth artgasming over.
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