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mo_money

money gansta
i don't see anything wrong with it, the only thing that bothers me though is that this looks like a journey comic,but at least you had a reason(a funny one).
 

Blaze Dragon

T3h Blazing Ranger!
The links doesn´t work
 

Zac Rhodes

Call me Zac
Wow two replies already, I finnished the comic #2 "Psyco Killer"
and , mo_money my comic will not be like other journey comics it will be better.
the links work for me Blaze Dragon
 

LGameboyR

Pokemon Battler
I like it it's funny, but if it's a cliche, I don't care, a comic is a comic, it's funny too!
 

SoulGuardian

PICHU ROXORZ!

Torchic23

gee that's swell
I like it! And I usually don't read these comic things, so I guess I was lucky to find a good one! It's pretty funny so far, continue!
 

Zac Rhodes

Call me Zac
SoulGuardian said:
Yes, the links do work. Anyway, the comic is pretty good and I see that Red is trying to destroy everything cliche' around him. Also, you have HORRIBLE grammar and spelling so PLEASE improve on that. Do your best!^^
I am aware about my speeling and gammers[joke] but I don't know how to fix that problem because looking up each word that I don't know would take to long and thanks for all the kind words
 

Tabby Catty

Courtney loves Ruby
so far you're off to an excellent start because you actually had a reason to go on a journey, you didn't go to the professor to get you pokemon, and you got an otherwise uncommon starter to end up with you are heading in the right direction
 

Blaze Dragon

T3h Blazing Ranger!
It was my computer, now they work. Is funny by now, but a journey?
 

OmegaDragon

guess whos back?
As others said, so far your on a right track, making this comic different from cliches. To fix spelling and grammar, I would suggest to spell check the script first before you put it into the comic.
 

NEO GOHAN

OVER NINE THOUSAAAND
Redwell said:
mo_money my comic will not be like other journey comics it will be better.
every journey comic says that. :/ few can live up to that promise.
at least the reason's a bit original. but lame. *1star'dforlamejourney*
 

blueguy

used Metronome!
Uninspired, riddled with errors... Thumbs down... :( On the flipside it doesn't look too bad... it's just really poorly written.
 

mo_money

money gansta
i don't really care about the grammar as long as i can read it,nice new eppi. btw.
i'm glad to see that this is not a "i'm old enough to go to the professor to get my first pokemon" comic.
 

Zac Rhodes

Call me Zac
I understand the comments about the errors in spelling and grammer but do not say the comic's story is poorly written or cliche because there has only been two comic so far, I am realy poor at in spelling and grammer, wich I plan to fix.
 

POKErUsAm

Macho man!
I really think, if you keep the comic up, it will be very succesful.
It is very funny so far, but if you are on paint, then you might have trouble with battle scenes and stuff.
 

blueguy

used Metronome!
POKErUsAm said:
I really think, if you keep the comic up, it will be very succesful.
It is very funny so far, but if you are on paint, then you might have trouble with battle scenes and stuff.

I make PokéChow with nothing but Paint. Battle scenes are quite simple. There are tutorials and everything if one is confused in the Fan Sprites forum. It's all a matter of looking around and putting some effort itn.

Redwell said:
I understand the comments about the errors in spelling and grammer but do not say the comic's story is poorly written or cliche because there has only been two comic so far, I am realy poor at in spelling and grammer, wich I plan to fix.

I said nothing of clichés, but from what I have seen so far, your comic is poorly written. Even if your dialogue was perfectly grammatically correct it would still be clunky and odd.
 

Zac Rhodes

Call me Zac
blueguy said:
I said nothing of clichés, but from what I have seen so far, your comic is poorly written. Even if your dialogue was perfectly grammatically correct it would still be clunky and odd.
I didn't say you where the one who said anything about clichés, but you are right it is clunky and odd, something I need to work on.
 
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