Pokemon: A Cindaquils war

[Imperial Flygon]

Pokemon: A Cyndaquils war

Well this is my fourth comic I am doing.
It's about [SPOIL]A cyndaquill that goes to the Pokemon wars because of his terreble government.[/SPOIL] Well I think that explains enough. You might find the cyndaquils comments dumm so tell me and i'll promise to fix it. well here it is.
Reading rules
REad left to right

Chapter oneA wierd side
Comic 1. What!!
Comic 2.The ride there
Comic 3.Treeks is asleep
Comic 4.Flear meets a future friend
Comic 5. What lies behind the door(not Narnia)

 

[Neopolis]

Learn a basic rule of comics. People read from left to right. Left panels come first, then right ones.

 

[Imperial Flygon]

Thanks Neoplolis, I'll fix that problem. Oh yeah thank you for being the first post of this comic thread.

 

[Blaze Dragon]

It isn´t "Cindaquil" is "Cyndaquil"

 

[+Erin+]

not a funny comic,well if its ment to be funny its not,and i'm the type of guy that likes funny stuff,good try anyway

 

[Imperial Flygon]

It isn´t "Cindaquil" is "Cyndaquil"

Oh goodness i made a mistake like that.

not a funny comic,well if its ment to be funny its not,and i'm the type of guy that likes funny stuff,good try anyway

Oh adn not sopposed to be be a funny comic. Just a comentings of a cyndaquil.

 

[Omega Pirate]

I took me a while to figure out what was going one, then I realised that PEOPLE READ LEFT TO RIGHT.

 

[Imperial Flygon]

Well, then i hope you did atleast enjoy it.
I can't help myself so here is another update.]
Comic 2 The ride there Credits to serebii spriter resource.

 

[Omega Pirate]

'Well i'll tell you when were there flear'

I don't know what a flear is, I'm guessing that's supposed to mean 'dear'.

"Well, I'll tell you when we're there, dear"

Is how it should be said, assuming 'flear' is 'dear'.

And;

'Well were takin Lugias air'

Should be said as;

"Well, we're takin' the Lugia's Air"

Simple punctuation and spelling. And that Lugia animation is incredibly annoying and distracting.

 

[Abraace]

Slight gripe...the whole comic moves when Lugia comes into land. Visually this irratates the eyes.

 

[Imperial Flygon]

i really gotta balance the animations. Well here is the newest update. It was the only kinda comic I tried to make funny.
Comic 3. Treeks is asleep

 

[Omega Pirate]

Ever heard of a thing called punctuation? You should try it sometime.

 

[Imperial Flygon]

I did put punctuation but they got a littled mixed wth the letters.

 

[Matt`]

Oh adn not sopposed to be be a funny comic. Just a comentings of a cyndaquil.

Usually comics are supposed to be "comical". That's the whole point.

 

[Imperial Flygon]

well ya but some comics aren't funny. WEll here is my latest update.
comic 4. Flear meats a new friend

 

[Pokefan26]

Backrounds need shading, if you don't know how to shade, I suggest a shading tutorial. And it really isn't funny.

 

[Iron Lugia]

The bad parts: Plot (not really bad but meh.), Backgrounds, Reading order.
Good parts: Cyndaquil, which more than makes up for it.

 

[Blaze Dragon]

Usually, names go with CAPITAL letter, but you don´t put (and put, and put) Flaer and Blazen

 

[Imperial Flygon]

Fixed that in this new comic.....
Comic 5.What lies behind the door