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Pokemon:A whole new world

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X-dramon

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Cursed

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No offense, but you just linked to a map of route 29. You didn't even rip it. I'm going to assume that you simply linked to the wrong image.

As for the two comics I saw in your photobucket album, they were hard to read because of their size, the solarbeam seemed to be a mass of mud in the midst of osmosis, and a main character seems to have obtained a very powerful pokemon, relative to the starters in a standard journey comic.
 
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X-dramon

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Yeah, cause I copied the wrong thing from photobucket I dident even know I uploaded it.

And that was not a main charater, it was the first bad guy, he well I'm not gonna ruin the third one, lol and yeah I'll try to fix the to smallness
 
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Cursed

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It's okay, I just felt like I needed to point that out. Good luck, but I still can't read your comics. I recommend practicing with your tools, and rewriting your old comics, and please, spell check your work. You haven't sorely messed up, but spelling and grammar are the two things that I see as the failing points of several comics.
 
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X-dramon

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Right now I'm making the battles of ep.2 in two spreat parts so you can read them, hope this will be better for everyone.
 
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Jackson

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*rubes his head*... ok I have a few things to say...
1. Use speak bubbles.. this is the number one thing that can make a comic good or bad.
2. Zoom in on your people a little dont fill out your whole comic with a pic. of a town that you only care about 20% of whats going on there...
3. try and make some of your own sprites.. dont just us the ones from the games and say its.. Billy.. or Bobby.. make a Billy or Bobby.

work on these things and your comic will be good
 
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Cursed

Heroic Sociopath
When I said I couldn't read your comic, I meant that I couldn't read due to the text size. Maybe the dialogue is the saving point for your comic at this point; I can't tell.
 
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X-dramon

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Jackson said:
*rubes his head*... ok I have a few things to say...
1. Use speak bubbles.. this is the number one thing that can make a comic good or bad.
2. Zoom in on your people a little dont fill out your whole comic with a pic. of a town that you only care about 20% of whats going on there...
3. try and make some of your own sprites.. dont just us the ones from the games and say its.. Billy.. or Bobby.. make a Billy or Bobby.

work on these things and your comic will be good
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I will do that and how do I get spech bubbles?

I might make a new comic and delete this one
 
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