Pokemon Angels (Vol.1, revised)

[Emma Iveli]

SincE I got two complants from two difrent people about how there isn't that much detail I'm going revsie the chapters so that there is. With the execption of the diolauge that will stay the same.

Prologue:

Hundreds of years ago when Tin Tower was burning in Ecruteak City, 17 women who had wings watched sadly, they are the Pokemon Angels protectors of all Pokemon. Each one represented a type of Pokemon such as fire, dark, grass, ice…etc.

“I can’t believe this is happened” said Ice Angel.

“We must be reborn as humans hundreds of years from now” said Psychic Angel.

“Why do we have to follow your plan?” said Ghost Angel.

“It’s not mine, it’s Ho-oh’s” said Psychic Angel.

“Then why isn’t Fire or Flying telling us” said Ghost Angel.

“Ho-oh told us that he wanted Psychic to tell” said Fire Angel.

“Because he likes it when they fight” said Flying Angel whispering to Ice Angel and Grass Angel.

“Well I don’t” said Ice Angel.

“We need to choose who will be reborn first” said Psychic Angel.

“I will” said Dark Angel

“Who will go last?” said Psychic Angel.

“I will” said Ice Angel.

“Okay, I have asked a Priestess of Ho-oh to build a shrine in our honor” said Fire Angel.

“What?” said Water Angel.

“Ho-oh told us this would happen a couple days ago” said Flying Angel.

“Ho-oh will choose a chosen one who will bring together the hearts of humans and Pokemon. We will all be born around the time he will. A couple years before and a couple years after, now let’s go” said Psychic Angel.

The Pokemon Angels vanished and though out the years most people have forgotten them and many consider it a fairy tale, until now…

 

[Emma Iveli]

Chapter 1: The Legend is Real.

Mina Koki is about to set off on her Pokemon journey her first Pokemon Smoochum. She's about normal height for a girl her age and very skinny, she has long blonde hair and blue eyes; she always wore a pink hair band. She ran down stairs to get her back pack and say bye to her parents her mother looked like her while her father had blue hair very short and green eyes is very muscular from work with Pokemon.

“Honey we a birthday present for you” said her mom.

“Is it Sailor Moon R uncut box set?” said Mina who is an anime fan.

“No it’s the book you wanted” said her dad.

“Tokyo Mew Mew vol. 4 or Legend of the Pokemon Angels?” said Mina.

“Legend of the Pokemon Angels” said her mom.

“Thanks” said Mina. She looked at the hardbound edition.

“Wait Mina your backpack” said her mom.

“Oh yeah at least it’s not heavy” said Mina.

“What does she mean by that” said her dad.

“It’s a backpack that can two tons in it yet weight just a few pounds” said her mom.

Meanwhile Mina was at the edge of her town Manla Town. She was on a hill over looking the fields that her town has for breeding Pokemon, when she saw Matt, the boy she has a crush on. He had dirty blonde hair that was fairly long for a boy and gray eyes. He was pretty skinny and much taller than Mina.

“Hi Matt” said Mina blushing.

“Oh hey Mina” said Matt.

“So your going on your journey too” said Mina.

“Yeah I wanted to train my Tyrouge before I go on my journey for a bit.” said Matt.

“I know” said Mina still blushing.

Suddenly a voice said “Wassup!”

Mina turned around and saw Peter her rival. He has blue hair with what Mina calls a Tenchi style (shot almost shaved head and a small pony tail). He was lean but not very muscular.

“What are you doing here” said Mina

“Well I waited for a year 'till you were 10 so I could battle you” said Peter.

“No way! You choose a Magby for your first Pokemon, while you knew I love ice Pokemon you'd win.” said Mina.

She angrily walked away. She turned around pulled one of her bottom eyelids and stuck out her tongue. Mina walked into the nearby forest.

Later in the forest, Mina was still angry when she ran into a trainer with a Pikachu and three friends. The trainer wore a blue hooded sweat shirt, red hat and jean. One of his friends were a girl with brown hair, blue eyes and wore red, another was a young man with dark skin and dark brown hair his eyes were squinty and finally the last of a little kid with glasses and black hair.
Both Mina and the trainer got up. Suddenly both Mina's and the trainer's stomachs glowered.

“I'm hungry” said the trainer.

“Me too.” said Mina.

“If you want to eat you can join us” said one of the trainer’s friends.

“Really thanks; oh my name is Mina” said Mina.

“My name's Ash” said the trainer.

“I'm Max” said one his friends.

“My name is Brock” said another.

“I'm May” said the last.

“Pikachu” said Pikachu.

Not too long later they were all eating Brock's stew when Ash said Mina "You seemed angry when you bumped me"

“I think it was because my cousin got her angry” said a voice behind them
Mina turned around and saw Maggie, Peter's cousin who lived Ilex Forest but she is no ordinary girl, she is the garden of Ilex Forest, she has powers that no one else but her mother has, she also has a Celebi the guardian Pokemon of Ilex Forest. She has short bright green hair and green eyes; she was about Mina's build but a little taller.

“Hey Maggie what are you doing here?” said Mina.

“I'm going though real world training it will take a few years” said Maggie.

“Cool you want to join me right” said Mina.

“Your right, after all this your 10th birthday and you just got your first Pokemon” said Maggie.

“You just got, your first Pokemon?” said Ash.

“Yep you want to see” said Mina.

Ash nodded saying yes.

“Okay come on out Smoochum” said Mina.

Smoochum come out and went to sit on Mina's lap.

“I guess Smoochum's shy” said Max.

“Guess so” said Mina.

Meanwhile a trio of crooks called Team Rocket was watching them, a young woman named Jessie with extremely long red hair, a young named James with fairly long blue/purple hair and a talking Meowth.

“Look at that Smoochum” said Jessie

“Let's give it to the boss” said Meowth.

“Why?” said James.

Meowth began to fantasize about what would happen if they Smoochum.

“Picture this...the boss tired coming home Smoochum fetches his slippers and pipe, messages his feet and gives him a big kiss and do you what he'll say” said Meowth.

“What?” said Jessie

“For bringing me this Smoochum, I promote you the head of the Hoeen Branch” said Meowth.

“I don't know, that sound like what his wife does.” said James.
Back with Mina, Ash, Pikachu and the others Mina was talking about Peter while eating.

“He's so mean, he makes fun of me and...” said Mina.

Suddenly a bunch of small bombs come off and smoke went all around.

“What on Earth?” said Mina.

When the smoke cleared they saw a Meowth shaped Balloon with Team Rocket in it.

“Prepare for trouble”
“And make it double”
“To protect the world deviation”
“To unite all people within our nation”
“To denounce the evils of truth and love!”
“To extend our reach to the stars above!”
“Jessie!”
“James!”
“Team Rocket! Blast off at the speed of light!”
“Surrender now or prepare to fight!”
“Meowth! That's right”
"Wobbufet!"
“Team Rocket!” said Ash

Mina was really confused then she saw Smoochum was in a net dangling underneath from the basket of the balloon with Pikachu.

“Smoochum” said Mina who collapsed.

“Mina!” said Maggie.

Maggie went over to her friend.

“Well good bye” said Jessie, and the balloon flew away.

“Go you guys I'll stay Mina” said Maggie.

“Okay” said Ash.

Meanwhile not to far way a fire type trainer named Kia was walking. She had long dark brown hair in a pony tail, somewhat skinny and pretty tall. She may seem like your normal girl but she isn't, she is the granddaughter of the keeper of the Angel Shrine, the shrine dedicated to the Pokemon Angels. Her grandfather also wrote the book about the legend. She saw the balloon and saw that Pikachu and Smoochum were in the net.

“That's not good” said Kia.

Meanwhile back with Mina and Maggie, Mina stood up and said “Smoochum, I won't let this happen”

She closed her eyes and her hair grew longer and turned Sky Blue her hair band vanished. She grew taller and her clothes changed to beautiful robes. And she grew wings that matched her hair. She was Ice Angel.

Mina was confused but not as confused as Maggie. For some reason Mina knew what to do and she flew away.

Back with Ash and the others, they ran to catch up to Team Rocket.

“Don't they ever give up; fire the booster rocket Meowth” said Jessie.

“Firing Booster Rockets” said Meowth.

Rockets came from the side of the basket and the balloon flew faster.

“Oh man we'll never catch up” said Ash.

“Hey do you need help?” asked Kia who walked up.

“Yeah but how can you help?” said May.

“Arcannie let's go!” said Kia.

Kia let out her Arcanine, she and Ash jumped on to Arcanine's back and it started to run towards the balloon.

“Oh no they’re catching up” said James.

Jessie saw something flying towards the balloon.

“What is that?” said Jessie.
It was Mina flying towards the balloon very fast.
“How dare you steal Pokemon, especially an ice type because of that I will Freeze your Power!” said Mina scolding Team Rocket.

Kia was shocked at what she saw; Ice Angel and not only that she found out that her Grandfather was right.

“Oh my” said Kia.

“Ice Beam!” said Mina using an attack.

The rockets froze and the Balloon stopped moving.

Mina flew down to the net under the basket froze the ropes, broke it and got Pikachu and Smoochum.

“Pikachu!” said Pikachu.

“Thanks” said Smoochum.

Mina wasn't sure if she just heard Smoochum talk. She flew back just May, Max and Brock got to where Ash and Kia. She handed Pikachu and Smoochum to Ash and May.

Brock practically ran up to her and said “Wow you are a heavenly beauty”

Mina wasn't sure what to do. She was also blushing very hard.

“I'm sorry but I have to finish off theses bozos” said Mina.

“Oh no!” said Team Rocket.

“Blizzard!” said Mina attacking.

Team Rocket's balloon flew away.

“Team Rocket's blasting off again”

Mina waved to them and flew away.

“Grandfather was right” said Kia

Meanwhile Mina got back to where Maggie was who was a little confused. Mina transformed back to her old self. Clothes, hair band, hair color height and all.

“So do you still want to travel with me” said Mina.

“Sure, after all it would be kind of cool to travel with someone with special powers too” said Maggie.

“Really cool” said Mina.

Back with Ash, Mat, Max and Brock, Kia was walking with them.

“What just happened back there, I know what she is” said Kia.

“What do you mean?” asked Ash.

“Many years ago in The Dragon's Holy Land within the Johto the Dragon's shrine was built in the hopes that Pokemon and Humans can work together in peace. Out of that peace were born the Pokemon Angels, each one has the power of each Pokemon type...”

“Pokemon type?” said May.

“You know, water, fire, bug and so on” said Max.

“Well any ways for many years the Pokemon Angels lived in peace until Tin Tower burned, Ho-oh told them to welcome the chosen one...” said Kia.

“Chosen one?” said Ash.

“Yes, it is said that he was chosen by Ho-oh. That there are many legends about him. All Pokemon love him though sometimes it may take awhile. And for some reason that he's clumsy when meeting girls...” said Kia.

“Why was the last one in there?” said Max.

“It's a clue to his identity. He is the one who melt the hearts of humans and Pokemon. The way Pokemon Angels went to welcome the chosen one is to be reborn as humans. It is said that Dark Angel was first to be reborn and will join those who harm Pokemon 'till she awakens and Ice Angel was the last to be reborn but the first to awaken. The one we saw was Ice Angel. So that means that that she is the only one who has awakened” said Kia.

“Wow” said May.

“Oh May, is that Smoochum yours” asked Kia.

“No, a trainer named Mina's Pokemon.” said May.

They got back to find that Mina and Maggie were talking.
”...so I don't know if her name is Pinky, Tiki, Kiki or Kinky” said Mina.

Smoochum ran over to Mina and Mina was happy though she knew
Smoochum was okay.

“Smoochum return” said Mina.

“Your Mina right, may I talk to you” said Kia.

“O…k” said Mina a little confused.

Kia and Mina went to somewhere close by that was private. Not too far from the camp of course.

“Mina, are you the Ice Angel?” said Kia.

“No why?” said Mina.

“Well because your Smoochum was stolen and you weren’t there” said Kia.

“D'oh!” said Mina.

“Plus you just said 'D'oh!' which indicates that I'm right” said Kia.

“What do want?” said Mina.

“I just want to travel with you, see I come from the Angel Shrine, the shrine dedicated to the Pokemon Angels. My grandfather, my parents and my sisters believe in it but I was the only one who didn't.” said Kia.

Mina was silent for a moment then she said "You’re a little like Kagome."

“What?” said Kia really confused?

“Kagome from Inu-Yasha, she never believed in legends until she found for herself” said Mina who is a big anime fan.

“O…k” said Kia still a little confused.

Later they parted ways with Ash, Pikachu and the others.

While Mina, Kia and Maggie were walking Maggie and Kia said “You know if she's going to traveling with us you are going to have to tell her”

“Weird... I guess I forgot to tell that the other knows” said Mina.

“Mina...” said Kia and Maggie.

Meanwhile a woman on top of trees was on the phone with someone she was completely in shadows so you couldn't get a good look.

“Anne to base, the legend is true after all.”

 

[Ryano Ra]

~Fantasy Prince's Review~
Yes, I am back, and I was hoping you would take your time; it seems as though you are very eager to bring this out, adding only LITTLE details. Sure, you described the characters with description, but it isn't enough. You need to thoroughly read over stories and expand your mind to unreachable heights; you need to describe surroundings, describe the humans, describe winds, clouds, sky, sun, grass, anything that is in the area. For example, here's what you put earlier:

Meanwhile a trio of crooks called Team Rocket was watching them, a young woman named Jessie with extremely long red hair, a young named James with fairly long blue/purple hair and a talking Meowth.

Heh..^_^; Sure, we all know Team Rocket well, but you must face the fact that you sometimes need to expand your mind. What if a person, who has never known about Team Rocket, reads this? They would only know their hair color and a Pokemon named Meowth, correct? Now, here is what I would do with that paragraph:

As the three trainers wolfed down food and chatted amongst themselves, a trio of mischievous humans hid behind a group of shrubbery clevorly; the group consisted of two humans, a tall girl with ravishing creamy-scarlet hair and a tall male with short, milky-cobalt hair, and a creamy-colored cat that resembles features of a feline. They whispered as silent as they could between one another, thinking about what needed to be done; they wanted to capture that Pikacku, since (she/he/it) reminded them of the famous Ash Ketchum's Pikachu.

Sure, it might not had fit with what you presented in the story, but I love the way it sounds, don't you? With such description as that, you would definitely love writing details. It is a need in a fic. You have little; that isn't enough at all. I might sound mean, but you need to definitely work more of this; don't break your neck to bring it out because we can always wait. TAKE YOUR TIME.

 

[Emma Iveli]

(Thank you for you criticism)

Chapter 2: A Rocky Awaken


Did I mention Mina was an anime fan? Well she is and been annoying Kia. Mina has a portable TV with satellite, its okay on Friday when she watched Tenchi in Tokyo at 8 but when she watched Inu-Yasha at Midnight on Saturday she felt like she may go insane. It's a good thing for her that Maggie is there.

Sunday morning everyone was eating breakfast they were in a forest with the sun shining. It was pancakes with bananas and whipped cream.

“You know Mina it’s been two days I think you should out Smoochum for air.” said Kia.

“Yeah but...” said Mina.

“Ash told us that those bozos follow him around, Smoochum's safe” said Maggie

“Okay Smoochum come on out!” said Mina.

Smoochum came out with an angry look her face.

“Man it's been two days Mina” said Smoochum.

Mina was shocked she wasn't sure if Smoochum could talk but she was.

“Smoochum is talking” said Mina.

“What I can't hear her” said Maggie.

“That's because Mina is Ice Angel; she can understand all ice types.” said Kia.

“So I can understand all ice types, cool” said Mina

“That's right! I have question for you why didn't you let battle Magby” said Smoochum.

“What?” said Mina.

"Magby's a jerk he's so mean to me I want to beat him so bad" said Smoochum.

"Let's wait! That way we could savor it when we battle him" said Mina.

"Right!" said Smoochum.

"Do you have any what they are talking about?" said Kia.

"I think so, it might have to do with Peter." said Maggie.

"Peter?" said Kia

Maggie sensed something from behind the tree. She knew it had to be someone reviving nature's call.

"Celebi come on out!" said Maggie.

A Celebi came out haply.

"I was wondering what Pokemon you had" said Kia.

"Come on out from behind that tree!" said Maggie.

There was a sound of a zipper being pulled up and from behind that tree came out Peter.

"Wassup!" said Peter.

"Why were peeing there?" said Maggie.

"I just needed to go" said Peter.

"You knew that we were nearby so you chose that tree" said Maggie pointing at him.

"Bi!" said Celebi

"As punishment, go Celebi" said Maggie

Celebi grabbed Peter and they both disappeared in a flash. A second later Celebi came back.

"Uh... Maggie where did that guy go to" said Kia.

"Oh, he'll be back in a few minutes" said Maggie.

"Hey guys!" said Matt who was running towards them.

"Matt!" said Mina.

"Hey Mina, hey Maggie, Peter saw you guys and decided to go over there.
Let me guess Peter's in the not to distant future" said Matt.

"Yep" said Maggie.

"He disserves it" said Mina.

"Oh yeah, this Kia Maxiop she's traveling with us" said Maggie.

"This is Matt Cox" said Mina

"Hello" said Kia.

"Pleased to meet you" said Matt.

A flash of light appeared and a Celebi appeared holding Peter a second later Celebi disappeared.

"That jerk is Peter, he's also Maggie's cousin" said Mina.

"Don't forget, you and Peter hare a cousin" said Matt.

"Yeah, but remember she went missing years ago" said Mina.

"Uh...he he" said Peter who was really dizzy.

Meanwhile in a Team Aqua secret base two members were watching footage of the battle between Mina and Team Rocket. One was a young man with black hair, he was very hard to describe while the other was a young woman with bright red hair and a vacant look in her green eyes.

"So Ice Angel has awakened." said the male member.

"That's right; let me be in charge of capturing them" said the female member.

"Fine Anne, go and get them" said the male member.

Meanwhile a breeder named Beth who specializes in Rock Types was giving her Larvitar a sand bath. She has light pink hair that was in a long and thick braid and sky blue eyes. Larvitar smelled something, it was Mina's breakfast. Larvitar began to run towards Mina was.

"Larvitar, come back here." said Beth.

Beth started chasing it.

Meanwhile Mina and Peter were glaring at each other while eating the pancakes.

Kia whispered into Maggie's ear "Are they always like this"

"Yeah" said Maggie.

"Man" said Kia.

"Oh so you and Peter are traveling together" said Maggie.

"Yeah, I was hoping that Mina would too after all they do like each other" said Matt.

"What!" said Mina and Peter.

The both got up glaring at each other.

"I hate him." said Mina pointing to Peter.

"I hate her." said Peter pointing to Mina.

And Mina and Peter began to glare at each other.

"This is weird" said Kia.

Suddenly Larvitar came over.

"Oh are you lost?" said Maggie.

"Larvitar!" said Beth.

She ran over to Lavartar.

"I'm sorry, I guess Larvitar is hungry" said the Beth.

"That's okay; I'll make more pancakes for you" said Maggie.

"Thanks I'm Beth" said Beth with a simile

"I'm Kia” said Kia.

"Hello, my name is Maggie." said Maggie

"The name's Matt." said Matt.

"And those two are Mina and Peter" said Maggie pointing to Mina and Peter who were still glaring at each other.

Mina felt something from Beth and she didn't know what it was. She looked at Beth.

"Looks like I won that match" said Peter gloating that Mina stopped Glaring at him.

"Peter..." said Mina bitterly.

While Maggie was cooking breakfast a woman's voice shouted "Crawdaunt use you Bubble Beam!"

The attack hit the fire and it went out.

"Oh man." said Maggie.

"So hello, the name's Anne I'm from Team Aqua. Any ways I'm here for you Ice Angel" said the woman who was the Team Aqua member at Mina.

"I don't know what you’re talking about" said Mina playing innocent with big eyes and a soft voice.

"I saw you transform" said Anne.

"I don't what you mean" said Mina still innocent.

"And besides that is just a fairy tale" said Peter.

"Oh yeah, Crawdaunt use Bubble Beam on that girl." said Anne.

Crawdaunt stalled for a bit then did the attack. The attack hit Mina but it bounced off her and hit Larvitar. Larvitar fainted.

"Larvitar" said Beth.

"See a Pokemon Angel can not be hit a Pokemon attack" said Anne.

"I have no choice" said Mina who transformed to Ice Angel.

"Whoa it's real!" said Peter.

"Awesome"! said Matt.

"Larvitar, you'll pay for doing this" said Beth.

She closed her eyes she grew slightly taller. Her hair grew slightly and turned gray her hair was no longer in a braid. Her Clothes changed to beautiful robes. And grew wings the same color of her hair. Beth was Rock Angel.

"Even better, two is always better then one" said Anne.

"Like Twix" said Peter.

"Peter..." said Maggie.

"How dare do you this to my Larvitar, I will rock your world!" said Beth scolding Anne.

"I don't want to this but Ice Beam!" said Mina attacking Crawdaunt.

An Ice Beam attack came from her palms

"Same here, Rock Throw" said Beth attacking Crawdaunt.

She raised her hands and rocks appeared and hit Crawdaunt.

Crawdaunt was unable to battle.

"Crawdaunt return" said Anne.

"I'll be back" said Anne and she ran away.

Mina felt something from Anne it was similar to what she felt from Beth but it was like she knew Anne but didn't know where.

"Tell us now, what's going on" said Peter.

"Fine" said Mina.

"Larvitar, are you all right." said Beth.

"Yeah I'm fine" said Larvitar.

Beth was unsure what had heard.

"Uh... Larvitar is talking to me" said Beth

"You'll get used to it" said Mina.

Later Mina, Maggie, Kia and Beth were parting ways with Peter and Matt at a fork in the road.

"So you promise you won't tell" said Mina.

"I won't" said Matt.

"Then again" said Peter.

"Would you like to go 50 years into the future?" said Maggie.

"I won't tell" said Peter very quietly.

"Good" said Maggie.

"So bye" said Mina and they went into different directions.
Not long later Beth said "So I should travel with you"

"Yeah Pokemon Angels should stick together for a while" said Mina

"Plus the two of traveling with you" said Maggie.

"So Mina you do like Peter don't you" said Kia.

"No way! I hate his guts!" said Mina.

"Oh really' said Kia

"Yes" said Mina.

"So you do like him" said Kia

"I said I don't" said Mina

"But you said yes" said Kia.

"Uh... You can't catch me" said Mina who began to run.

"Hey wait up!" said Kia.

"Come on slow down" said Beth.

"Mina wait up!" said Maggie.

 

[Emma Iveli]

Chapter 3: Two Found But Only One Awaken

It's been about a week since Beth awakened. Kia thought Mina being an anime fan was a problem but Beth falls in love with every cute guy she sees. Good thing that Larvitar knows what to do: distract her. Other than that everything has been fine except that Mina and Beth have had this funny feeling about Anne.

They were in a forest. It was Friday night around 8:00 PM, so Mina adjusted her satellite to pick the signal for IC.

"Come on, come on pick up the signal" said Mina adjusting the satellite.

"What's going on?" said Beth.

"Its Friday 8:00 Tecnhi in Tokyo is coming on." said Maggie.

Mina had gotten the signal and looked at her watch.

"Good I have five minutes" said Mina.

"Mina hey I was wondering did you feel something from Anne?" said Beth.

"Yeah, like the same feeling I got from you" said Mina.

"Could it be... she's one of us too" said Beth.

"It's possible" said Kia.

"What?" said Mina, Beth and Maggie surprised at what Kia had said.

"The legend says that Dark Angel would join those who harm Pokemon" said Kia.

"Wow so Anne may be Dark Angel" said Mina.

"I wish if we knew for sure" said Maggie.

"There are two ways one of us catches a dark type or Water Angel awakens" said Kia.

"But who knows how long that would take" said Mina

"Did somebody say dark type" said a voice behind Mina.

She turned around and saw Sneasel. This is a Dark/Ice type.

"I heard that you need me so I'll join you Ice Angel" said Sneasel.

"Really, cool" said Mina.

She stood up with the V is for victory sign "I caught a Sneasel" she said.

"You know what Tenchi's excuse for not attending class is?" said the announcer on TV.

"Oh it's starting" said Mina who ran to her TV.

Meanwhile in the nearby Pokemon center, Anne who was in civilian clothes was at the cafeteria.

"Oh those Pokemon Angels, how dare they do that to Crawdaunt they are going to pay" said Anne angrily while crushing trash with her hands.

What Anne didn't know was that the Pokemon Master Maddie was listing to her. She was very tall and has look of true greatness to her, even for her young age at 17, she has light yellow hair in a long pony tail and orange eyes. She was reading a book and drinking tea. She sipped her tea and got up and left the Pokemon center.

"I knew my dreams were right" said Maddie as she was leaving.

The next day it was very misty in forest. Mina, Beth, Maggie and Kia were playing a guessing game while they were walking.

"Okay who I'm I now? Yeah! Okay! What!" said Mina doing an impression.

"Hm... Little John?" said Beth.

"No, try again" said Mina.

"Oh I got it Dave Chappell doing Little John" said Kia.

"Yes you got it; you could have also said Little Jon doing Dave Chapple doing Little John" said Mina.

"Okay I'm confused" said Beth.

"Um... excuse me, do you know who the Pokemon Angels are?' said Maddie walking up.

"No" said Mina, Beth, Maggie and Kia playing innocent.

"Well to bad I think they might be in danger" said Maddie.

"What?" said Mina and Beth.

"Hey where have I seen your face before?" said Kia.

"I know aren’t' you Maddie Ricker?" said Maggie.

"That's right" said Maddie.

"Wow, I think we can trust her" said Mina, and everyone else nodded.

Not too long later Mina and Maddie were talking while Maggie was cooking lunch.

"I'm sorry we lied, but we had to" said Mina.

"That's okay I understand, when you awakened did?" asked Maddie.

"A week and a day" said Mina.

"One week ago my dreams started." said Maddie.

"Dreams?" said Mina.

Mina and Beth felt something from Maddie. Mina took the legend from her backpack.

Mina begin to read "There are two ways for a Pokemon Angel to awaken, one is to have her power awaken and the other is to have her memories which take the form of dreams, until the Pokemon Angel realizes what the dreams mean then her powers will awaken at any time she wants"

"So that means, that you think you may be..." said Beth.

"...Dragon Angel" said Maddie

"Whoa" said Mina

Suddenly a woman's voice said "Crawdaunt use your Bubble Beam"

Anne was standing there in uniform.

"Anne!" said Mina.

"Let's transform" said Beth.

"Right!" said Mina

"Dragonair! Kingdra! Come on out!" said Maddie.

Maddie's Pokemon came out to defend.

"You too Sneasel!" said Mina

She called out Sneasel to see if Anne is indeed Dragon Angel.

"Dragonair! Kingdra! Distract Crawdaunt" said Maddie.

"Sneasel is she..." said Mina

"Yes she is Dark Angel" said Sneasel.

Mina was shocked, she could fight her, she couldn’t. Mina fell to her knees

"Why do you look so shocked?" said Anne.

"I can't fight" said Mina.

"Then she is..." said Beth.

"Your wide open" said Anne.

Anne kicked Mina and Beth.

"Like I said you can not be hurt by a Pokemon, but you can by a human." said Anne.

"That's enough" said Maddie.

"What?" said Anne.

Maddie closed her eyes; her hair slightly grew longer, came out its pony tail and turned to an orange color. Her clothes changed to robes and she grew wings that matched her hair color.

"All right" said Mina.

"Yeah!" said Maggie.

"You shouldn't hurt them, it isn’t right, the dragon will show you her rage." said Maddie scolding Maddie.

"How do they know these lines" said Maggie.

"Grandfather told me that they righted wrongs in the past and they always scolded them apparently when the first awaken that is the first thing they remember" said Kia.

"It reminds of Sailor Moon" said Maggie.

"Twister!" said Maddie doing an attack.

She used her wings to attack with a tornado. Anne and Crawdaunt got hit and flew away.

"And they're out of here" said Kia.

"You guys okay" said Maddie.

"Yeah" said Mina.

"All right Maddie's awakened!" said Dragonair.

"Yeah!" said Kingdra.

Maddie smiled at her two Pokemon.

Later everyone was eating lunch which were sandwiches since Anne destroyed their lunch asked Mina "Is Anne..."

"Yes, she is Dark Angel" said Mina

"How can we fight someone who is one of us?" said Beth.

"I think we should if she will ever awaken" said Maddie.

"Your right." said Maggie.

"You know for some reason Anne reminds of someone but I can't my finger on it" said Mina.

"Same here" said Maggie.

"What about you guys" said Mina.

Everyone shocked their heads no.

"I wonder..." said Mina.

Meanwhile in a Team Aqua base Anne was talking to the male member.

"So in order to test it I need a strand of Pokemon Angel hair." said Anne.

"Yes but after they transformed to their Angel form" said the male member.

"I'll get it" said Anne.

Her superior walked away and said to himself "If she awakens Team Aqua will be the strongest Team in the world."

 

[Emma Iveli]

Chapter 4: What's with This Girl?

Maddie was having fun traveling with Mina and the rest. She felt much more comfortable with the group then alone. Though she knew that everyone was little worried about Anne.

One day they were in the forest around noon on a nice sunny day.

"I'm hungry" said Mina.

"Oh look there is a little lake let's eat over there" said Kia.

Just then a Missadrevus came out. And surprised everyone but Maggie.

"Cool a Misdrevus I' m going to catch it, go Celebi" said Maggie.

"So you do have a Pokemon" said Maddie who didn't know Maggie has a Celebi.

"Celebi use Psychic" said Maggie.

Psychic was very effective. And Missadvreus fell to the ground

"Okay Pokeball, go!" said Maggie.

The indicator light flashed for a bit and turned off. Maggie picked up the Pokeball and did the V is victory sign.

"All right I caught a Missdreauvus!" she said.

"Bi Bi!" said Celebi.

"All right let's eat now" said Mina.

They all let out their Pokemon and Maggie set up a camp fire right next to the small lake and began to cook. Everyone let out their Pokemon. Mina's Smoochum and Sneasel, Beth's Larvitar, Maddie's Dragonair and Kingdra, Maggie's Celebi and Misdrevus and Kia's Arcannie.

"It's so amazing that she cooks for all of us" said Maddie.

"Yeah she's always been like that" said Mina.

"So you knew each other for a long time" said Maddie.

"Yeah she'd always come up for Christmas, Summer and my birthday" said Mina

"Don't forget that's it's Matt's and the jerk's birthday too" said Maggie.

"Oh yeah" said Mina

Hey your Pokemon are lame" said a voice.

Mina turned around and saw a girl. She was about Kia's height; she had black hair that was a long as Mina's that she down with no accessories and deep blue eyes.

"Why did you say that?" said Mina

"Because they are" said the girl.

"What" said all of them.

"Except for that Kingdra, it's so cute and cool and adorable and awesome" said the girl.

"I want a battle!" said Mina.

"Me too" said Maggie

"So do I" said Kia.

"I may be a breeder but I want to too" said Beth.

"So do I, even though you did say nice things about my Kingdra" said Maddie.

"I'm sorry but I only have one Pokemon, Azumarill, in fact I love all water Pokemon that's why your Pokemon are lame" said the girl

"So you specialize in water Pokemon" said Kia.

"Yes that's right the names Megan Kathi" said the girl.

"I changed my mind" said Beth.

"Me too" said Kia.

"Which one of us is going to battle her" said Maggie.

"Draw straws, whoever gets the long one wins" said Maddie holding three straws, two short one and one long.

"Kia you hold it" said Mina.

"Okay" said Kia.

Kia held out her hand wit the straws, Mina, Maggie and Maddie picked and Mina was the one who got the long one.

Mina walked over to Smoochum and asked her "Smoochum is it okay if I use Sneasel, I think he's down he thinks he lived his purpose"

"Sure after all it's kind of depressing to look at him right now" said Smoochum.

Sneasel was depressed; he thought he outlived his purpose finding out if Anne is Dark Angel. He squatted, looking down at the ground while grinding one his claws back and forth on the ground.

Mina went over to him and said "Hey you want to battle with me?"

"I sure do!" said Sneasel.

Mina turned around and said "Okay I'm ready!"

"This is a one on one battle between Mina and Megan, there is no time limit let's begin" said Maddie who refereeing.

"Okay Sneasel Faint Attack" said Mina

Sneasel’s faint attack was so strong that Azumarill knock out.

"Azumarill is unable to battle the victory goes to Mina" said Maddie.

"All right Mina." said Maggie.

"Sneasel is that strong" said Beth.

"No, because Mina has awakened any Pokemon she battles with has the strength of a Pokemon that's level is 100" said Kia.

"You should have told me earlier" said Beth.

"Sorry" said Kia.

"That's okay" said Beth.

Megan went to check on Azumarill.

"So is it okay?" said Mina.

"Yeah, I'm sorry I shouldn't have all those things about your Pokemon" said Megan.

"At least Mina beat you" said Kia walking up to them.

"I said I was sorry okay" said Megan.

Maddie and Beth walked up to them. Mina, Maddie and Beth felt something from Megan.

"Hey do you think that Megan is a..." said Mina.

"Pokemon Angel too. I have the feeling" said Maddie.

"It's a good thing we can double check" said Beth

"You mean if she's Water Angel?" said Mina.

"Oh yeah I can ask Kingdra" said Maddie

A few minutes later Maddie was talking to Kingdra at the alike where it was.

"Yes she is the Water Angel" said Kingdra.

"You’re not saying that because she said nice things about you?" said Maddie

"For the last time no" said Kingdra some what irate.

"So is Megan really Water Angel" said Mina.

"Yeah." said Maddie

"Are you sure he's not saying that because she said nice stuff about him" said Mina.

"I already said no" said Kingdra very irate.

"Hey lunch is ready" said Maggie.

"Okay" said Mina.

While they eating Mina said to Megan "Why did you say those things about our Pokemon" said Mina.

"It's my hobby" said Megan.

"Whaa?" said everyone else not sure what to think or say.

"I make comments about everyone its fun" said Megan.

"Well it may be fun for you but not everyone else" said Mina.

"That's right you shouldn't" said Kia.

"Crawdaunt use your Bubble Beam" said Anne's voice.

Anne was there with Crawdaunt right next to her. She had an evil smile on her face.

"Anne!" said Mina.

"Hello Pokemon Angels" said Anne.

"Not again" said Maggie whose fire was put out.

"Anne what do you want?" said Mina

"That's for me to know and for you find out" said Anne

"Let's transform" said Mina

"Right" said Beth and Maddie.

They transformed and Anne said "Get them Crawdaunt"

Crawdaunt grabbed Mina by the hair. Mina began to panic.

"Get it off me! Get it off me!" said Mina.

"Mina's panicking" said Beth.

"I know" said Maddie.

"How dare you use that Crawdaunt" said Megan.

She closed her eyes and her hair grew slightly longer and turned blue. She grew taller and her clothes changed to beautiful robes. She grew wings that matched her hair color. Megan is indeed Water Angel.

"So you didn’t say that just because she said nice stuff about you" said Maddie to Kingdra.

"I told you so" said Kingdra gloating just a little bit.

"Is that Kingdra talking" said Megan.

"Can we get back to me and get this off me" said Mina.

"Oh right" said Megan.

"Mina I'll help this time" said Maggie.

"No that's all right I don't think it's time yet" said Mina.

"'Kay" said Maggie.

"Stop this Crawdaunt" said Megan.

"No continue" said Anne.

"No Stop" said Megan

"No Continue" said Anne

"Stop" said Megan.

"Continue" said Anne.

"Stop" said Megan.

"Continue" said Anne

"I can't take no more" said Crawdaunt who was dizzy.

Crawdaunt let go of Mina and fainted from confusion.

"Crawdaunt return" said Anne.

She ran towards where Crawdaunt was and picked up something from the ground.

"I'll be back" said Anne.

"Who is she the Governator" said Megan sarcastically.

"Mina you okay" said Kia.

"Yeah" said Mina.

"Maggie, Mina what did you mean earlier" said Maddie.

"Nothing, nothing" said Maggie and Mina.

Mina transformed back and said to Megan "You should join us"

"I know since I'm a Pokemon Angel too, it might be fun travel with you guys' said Megan.

"This is going to be a nightmare" said Maddie to herself.

"I wonder how long she can make it making fun of us" said Mina to herself.

"Oh Man I just that Beth won't fall in love with a cute today" said Maggie to herself.

"Why did she have to be a Pokemon Angel?" said Beth to herself.

"I just she dislikes Mina looking anime as much as I do" said Kia to herself.

"Let's go" said Megan.

Mina realized not only they haven’t cleaned up the camp site but they haven’t even finished lunch

"Hey wait we need to get ready first" said Mina.

Meanwhile Anne was looking at a sky blue strand of hair, it what she pick up from the ground. It was from Mina in Angel form.

"This is too perfect" said Anne.

Not too long later Kia was telling Megan all of the things about the others. While there were walking to the nearest Pokemon center.

"Mina is a huge anime fan and stays up past midnight on Saturdays and Beth falls in love with every cute guy she sees." said Kia

"Oh here is the Pokemon Center" said Mina.

"All right!" said everyone else.

 

[Emma Iveli]

Chapter 5: Flowers and Romance.

They all got to the Pokemon Center where they checked in their Pokemon for check ups.

"Please don't big a deal about one of my Pokemon" said Maggie to Nurse Joy.

There was a big crowd in the Pokemon center watching something. It clearly had to with a Pokemon

"I'm going to go watch" said Mina.

"Me too" said Megan.

"I'll come too" said Maggie.

All three girls went over to the crowd. The other three deiced to stay near the counter.

"Nurse Joy!" said a voice behind them.

"I know that voice" said Kia.

She turned around and saw Ash, Pikachu Max, May and Brock who was holding Nurse Joy's hand.

"Hey it's been a while" said Kia walking towards Ash.

"Kia" said Ash.

"Where's Mina and Maggie" said May.

"They are part of that big crowd over there" said Kia.

"Kia you know them?" said Maddie.

"Yeah, I met them on the Mina started her journey" said Kia speaking in a code meaning the day Mina also awakened.

"This is Maddie" said Kia.

"Maddie as in the famous dragon Master" said Max.

"That's right, I was lonely and I met Mina and she invited me" said Maddie.

"And this Beth" said Kia.

Beth was looking at Brock, and blushing.

"Oh uh" said Kia.

Kia noticed that Beth was blushing meaning that she fell in love again. She walked towards Brock.

"I think you’re cute" said Beth.

"You do? I think you are too" said Brock blushing as well.

"Whaa?" said Maddie, Kia, Ash, May and Max.

Meanwhile with Mina, Maggie and Megan they were watching Bellosom dancing to music. It was very gracefully too. A girl who was a little taller than Megan was training Bellossom. She has aqua hair in two Sailor moon style buns (one on each side of her head) and pink eyes.

"Her hair and eye color reminds me of Sasami from Tenchi" said Mina.

"O...k" said Megan.

"Okay that's enough, Bellosom" said the girl, "I think it'll be ready for the next Pokemon contest after evolving."

As the crowed dispersed Maggie went up to her.

"That was amazing" said Maggie.

"Really, thanks" said the girl.

"It wasn't that good" said Megan.

"Megan, you have at least started making comments tomorrow after joining us today" said Mina.

It was still the same that Megan joined up so Megan was still new.

"But its so fun" said Megan.

Mina and Megan felt something from the girl.

"Do you feel something from her?" said Megan whispering to Mina.

"Yes, I do I think she might one of us" said Mina whispering to Megan.

"We'll going to go talk to our friends." said Mina to the girl.

They got to where Maddie, Ash, and the others were.

"Oh hey Ash, May, Max, Pikachu what’s the matter." said Mina.

"That" said Maddie pointing at Brock and Beth looking at each other lovingly.

"Whoa!" said Mina very loudly.

Mina thought that Brock might be like Beth, the way he went up to her the first time she transformed.

"It's the end of the world" said Megan sarcastically.

"Megan." said Mina glaring at her.

"Oh yeah I forgot to introduce my self" said the girl walking up, "I'm April Tyson, I'm a coordinator"

"Hey guys what's the matter?' said Maggie.

"That" said Mina pointing to Brock and Beth.

"Oh my gosh!" said Maggie very loudly.

Later in the cafeteria Mina, Ash, Max, Kia, May, April, and Pikachu shared a table for Dinner while Maddie, Megan and Maggie who was sitting in for Mina shred a table. Beth and Brock shared a table.

"Wow Brock is like that too" said Kia.

"I'm surprised Beth is too" said Ash.

"I remember he tried to pickup Nurse Joy right when you got to the counter, and when I first met you guys he did it to M- Ice Angel too" said Kia.
Mina sat next to Kia blushing a little bit.

"Wow so have you been to any contests" said May to April.

"Yeah a lot but I haven't won any thing yet" said April.

"I haven’t won anything ether" said May.

"Don’t give up, I've been doing contests for three years, so don't give out hope" said April.

"Three years..." said May

May began to think how long it might take for her to win a ribbon.

Meanwhile Maddie, Megan and Maggie were planning how they can find out about April.

"So I think you and Kia will invite April to sleep in your room" said Maddie,

"And Celebi will if April is Grass Angel, right" said April.

"Also we need to think of a way to punish Megan when makes those comments" said Maddie.

"Agreed" said Maggie.

"What?" said Megan.

"Remember you not just traveling with the Pokemon Angels but with two other people too" said Maggie.

"Yeah" said Maddie.

"Oh man" said Megan

Later in the room that Mina, Beth, Megan and Maddie were sharing as there are two bunk beds in each room of the Pokemon center. Mina was n the top right, Megan on the top left, Maddie on the bottom left and Beth on the bottom right.

Beth was still happy about Brock, "He's nice and he's a breeder and he used to be the leader at a rock gym" she said hugging her pillow.

"Wow, I've seen her fall in love but not the other guy" said Maddie.

"I know," said Mina.

"So I was wondering about..." said Megan.

"Love" said Maddie.

"Yeah, I had no idea we could," said Megan.

"Yes we can, in fact years ago, I fell in love with who would become the Blackthorn Gym Leader" said Maddie blushing.

"And Matt..." said Mina blushing.

"Who's Matt" said Megan.

"He's nice and sweet and kind and..." said Mina.

"Okay forget I asked" said Megan.

"What about Peter?" said Beth.

"Peter you know I hate him" said Mina very angrily.

"Oh really?" said Beth.

Mina began to blush.

"I said I do hate him!" said Mina.

"Okay calm down" said Maddie.

The next day Mina and her group and Ash and his group were headed in the direction to a fork in the road.

"So guys want to go in this direction" said Max looking at his Pokenav.

"All right" said Mina.

"Hey are sure that I should join you" said April.

"Yeah you were headed to Rustborrow City anyways right" said Maddie.
Mina nodded. Celebi told Smoochum that April is definitely Grass Angel.
Meanwhile the bozos I mean thieves: Team Rocket were looking Ash though the binoculars.

"So were doing the grab Pikachu and escape plan" said Jessie.

Suddenly James' Cacnea came out of its Pokeball and began to yell at James.

"Meowth translation" said James.

"I will not steel Pikachu while Grass Angel is around" said Meowth.

"Grass Angel?" said Jessie and James.

"One of the Pokemon Angels we ran into not too long ago" said Meowth.

"Pokemon Angels?" said Jessie and James.

"That's right, remember that girl with wings that was Ice Angel, protector of all Ice Pokemon, she must have saw that took that Smoochum. If the Normal Angel was around I'd be with Cacnea" said Meowth.

"So we wait for a while" said Jessie.

Not too long later after they went past the fork Mina and her group were talking.

"So April, have you ever heard of the Pokemon Angels" said Mina.

"Yes I have" said April.

The night before April had a dream in which she was Grass Angel and two other Angels were fight over something one was Light Purple while the other was Purple.

Meanwhile with Ash's group Brock was really depressed after separating from Mina's group

"Don't worry I'm sure we'll see her again" said May.

"Really" said Brock.

"Yeah" said Ash.

Suddenly a metal hand grabbed Pikachu off of Ash's shoulder.

"Pika!!" said Pikachu.

"Prepare for trouble"
"And make it double"

Back with Mina, she looked up to nearby trees and saw Team Rocket's balloon.

"Not them again" said Kia.

"Ash is in trouble, transform" said Mina.

Mina, Megan, Maddie and Beth transformed to their Angel forms.

"Whoa, it can't be... that dream was a memory" said April.

Like with Mina she was obsessed with the Pokemon Angels, she read and memorized the book. She knew that dreams were memories.

April closed her eyes. Her hair came out its buns, grew slightly longer and turned green. She grew taller and her clothes changed to beautiful robes. She grew wings that matched her hair. She is indeed Grass Angel.

"Boy that was conveniently fast" said Maggie.

"Let's go!" said Mina.

Back with Ash, Team Rocket was still doing their motto.

"Jessie!"
"James!"
"Team Rocket! Blast off at the speed of light!"
"Surrender now or prepare to fight!"
"Wobbufet"
"Meowth! That's right!"

"Quite an interesting speech, well we got 5 right here" said Mina's voice.

"What?" said Team Rocket.

All five Pokemon Angels were standing on trees, well it looked like they flying just above them.

"How dare continue to steal Pokemon, I will freeze your power!" said Mina scolding Team Rocket

"The friendship between Pokemon should never broken I will rock you world!" said Beth scolding Team Rocket

"Stealing Pokemon is a horrible crime; the dragon will show you her rage!" said Maddie scolding Team Rocket

"Stealing Pokemon is very bad, my wave will crush you!" said Megan scolding Team Rocket.

"Using a grass Pokemon to steal is unforgivable, I will root you out" said April scolding Team Rocket.

"Using a grass Pokemon?" said Mina.

"I told you not to steal Pikachu today!" said Cacnea coming out of its Pokeball.

"Uh-oh" said Team Rocket.

Cacnea used Pin Missile on the Arm of the hand that was holding Pikachu. It broke, let go of Pikachu and it began to fall, Beth flew down to get it.

"Beth wants more flitting time" said Megan.

She flew down and handed Pikachu to Ash.

"You are most beautiful of them all" said Brock running towards Beth.

"I think you are handsome" said Beth blushing.

"Cacnea use Pin Missile on the Balloon!" said April.

Cacnea did Pin Missile; the Balloon popped and flew away with Cacnea on it

"Team Rocket's blasting off again!"

"Hey Rock, we'll leave you here if you don't return soon" said Megan.

"Okay Water" said Beth, "Bye"

"Nice seeing you guys again" said Mina.

And they all flew away to where Kia and Maggie are.

"Boy that was tough" said April.

"You if it weren't for those bozos I wouldn’t have awakened" said Mina who transformed back.

"Really" said Beth who transformed back.

Mina nodded with a smile.

"Hey April, how were able to awaken so fast?" said Kia.

"Well, I read the book and it said that Dreams are memories for Pokemon Angels. I figured right after you guys transformed. Though I didn't see the ones from my dream" said April.

"What color were they" said Maddie.

"One was purple the other was light purple. They were arguing over something" said April.

"Oh I know who those are, the Purple one was Psychic Angel and the Light Purple one was Ghost Angel. I know because they always fought over stuff like that" said Kia.

"Cool" said Mina.

April then asked "Do you know the others are?"

"Just Dark Angel..." said Mina quietly.

"What happened?" said April she ten remembered the legend "She's part of
Team Aqua or Magma isn’t she?"

"Yes, let's hope she joins us soon" said Mina.

Meanwhile in a Team Aqua base Anne was looking at blonde hair.

"So it works after all" said Anne.

 

[Psychic]

Ah! No! This is too close to a script fic! Noooooo! Wrong wrong wrong wrong wrong!

I read the prologue and half of the first chapter and got a headache! Not to offend, but it's true! A few absolutely neccesary pointers for begginers:

Description: Ever heard of the expression show, don't tell? That means that instaed of telling the reader:

Hundreds of years ago when Tin Tower was burning in Ecruteak City, 17 women who had wings watched sadly, they are the Pokemon Angels protectors of all Pokemon. Each one represented a type of Pokemon such as fire, dark, grass, ice…etc.

You would show them everything. Those two sentances could be made into a paragraph. Exapmle:
Hundreds of years ago, there was a great tower, located North of Ecruteak City. The Tin Tower was a marvelous building, a huge creation that spriraled and twisted its way up from the ground, trying to touch the heavens. The once beautiful Tower was burning. Red, orange and yellow flames licked at the building, the heavy smoke floating upwards like a dark bird taking wing. Watching the doomed Tower with sorry were 17 woman, the Pokémon Angels, so they were called because of their affiliations with the diferent Types they represented. Each Angel wore a long robe that depicted in some way their Type: the Angel of Fire wore robed of bright red, with yellow flames seeming to come from the very fabric, also showing in her orange eyes, which burned with an inner flame, the Water Angel wore a robe of deep blue, her ocean blue eyes looking on with deep concern.
All copywrights to Psychic. No stealing please.
(Oh, and exactly where were the Angles? In the Tower? Flying near the Tower?) See, it's much better to give exapmles of everything. Most readers would prefer to read something like that *points at what I worte* than what you have. You are just way too blunt with everything. It feels like because in the Prologue there is little description, the diferent Angels just don't have much personality.
Also, what do places look like! Show show show! Don't tell, show!

Plot: the Prologue gets you off to a good start, orginal, but tipsy. You could easily go astray and wander with these 'characters'. I am personally worried that they'll all become Mary-Sues. Though I havn't read the entire story (and I don't exactly plan to if the entire thing sound like this) I can still guess where most of it is going.

Ok, wow, in Chapter 1 you included way too many characters way too quickly without even describing them (keep in mind that if you describe a character, the reader has a mental image they can attribute that person to). Try and slow down the pace a bit, by adding in description!

Grammer: you often forget about periods and commas. You have run-ons and comma splices. (I think.) Did you type this up on Microsoft Word first? If not, then do start.
Ahhhhh! Said said said said said! I can't even count how many times you write 'said' instead of 'asked' or 'pointed out' or 'questioned' or 'inquired'! It's all way too repetitive!

Holes: You leave a lot for the reader to guess. Like what Pokémon look like, or who Ash is. When writing you have to pretend nobody knows what these things are.

All in all, just think about what I said, edit your work and maybe get someone to Beta it (AKA be your Editor, which is someone who checks your work before you post it), and try and re-read everything you write first, pretending you've never read it before.

I will finish reading this later, then I'll post an even longer review. In the meantime, just listen to your reviewers, and...stuff.

~Psychic

 

[Emma Iveli]

Thank you for your crizisim. But I'd also like to say that it is hard for me to type. I understand I'm no good with descritions and other thing. My stories I have written have good diolauge and characters *couch*kinkytheinanerabbit*cough* However there is a reason I'm no good with spelling and grammer: it is hard for to type as I am disabled, I have Muscular Dystrophy. If someone crirtizes me on that fact I will make a new sig:

If you make fun of my spelling and or grammer, then you are an awful person and as I am disabled and its very hard for to type. These people have made fun of my typeing with nollage of my disabiles:
(List here)

This is just a warning for now.

 

[Emma Iveli]

Chapter 6 Anne's plan and Megan's other hobby.

Mina, Maddie, and Beth are very happy they have had good luck for the past two days with finding other Pokemon Angels; first there was rude Megan, Water Angel. Mina has thought of a good way of dealing with her: use big paper fans to hit her on the head. And famine April, Grass Angel. They also have finally had a mission that they agree on: Find the rest of the Pokemon Angels, find the chosen one and awaken Anne. It is now the day after April Awakened and its breakfast. It was in a sunny day in the forest but there was a terrible smell.

"Why is Megan cooking breakfast?" said Mina who watching an anime DVD on her personal DVD player.

"She insisted on it, she says it's her other hobby" said Maggie.

"It smells funny" said Kia.

"Why does this feel so familiar" said Mina who watching the Ranma ½ episode "Ranma Trains on Mount Terror".

Megan served every one her French toast and it tasted awful.

"What did you put in this?" said Maggie.
Megan showed the indents: eggs, vanilla, vinegar, rice, peas and chopped up gummy worms.

"What on earth?" said Maggie.

"Okay" said Kia.

"I have a bad feeling" said Maddie.

"What" said April.

"I don’t know" said Maddie but it's really bad.

"Are you sure it’s not an upset stomach?" said Kia.

"I'm sure" said Maddie.

Meanwhile Anne was getting a trap for the Pokemon Angels ready. She had finished burying it.

"They have to be heading this way" said Anne wiping sweat from her forehead while leaning agonist a shovel.

Crawdaunt was looking worried about something; he had finally realized something important about Mina. He knew he could not bear to her hurt.

Not too long later with Mina and the rest everyone was hungry.

"I told you should've eaten my cooking" said Megan.

"Do you eat it?" said Kia.

Megan went silent; she didn't eat it ether after all she wasn't good at it.

"I have an idea; we eat lunch early" said Maggie.

"And I'll cook" said Megan.

Every glared at her.

"Just a joke" said Megan who wasn't joking.

Meanwhile with Anne she was watching them from the bushes.

"Come on a few more feet" said Anne.

Unfortunately for her they stopped about ten feet from the trap.

"D'oh!" said Anne.

"Did some one just say 'D'oh!'" said Mina.

"I don't think so" said Maddie.

"Oh well I have an idea of how to get our minds Karaoke" said Mina.

She pulled a karaoke machine out of her backpack

Everyone look at her like something was wrong probably because she took out a karaoke machine out of her back that holds a TV, a small satellite, a personal DVD player and over 70 DVDs

"What's wrong you guys?" said Mina.

"What's with your back pack" said Megan.

"Its Rock brand you know" said Mina.

"Wow that cost a lot" said Kia.

"Well after my dad is the only licensed person to sell Pokemon eggs" said Mina

"Wait your dad is John Koki?" said Maddie.

"I'm from Manla Town and my last name is Koki haven’t have put two and two together" said Mina

"Guess not" said Maggie cooking soup.

"Well any ways this is a special machine that you can programs songs into, I mostly have anime songs but I do have 'I Wanna hold your hand'" said Mina.

"Yet me guess, it have to do with anime" said Kia.

"Yeah, there was a Sailor Moon version made" said Mina.

"Can we see?" said April.

"So can you do a song?" said Megan.

"Sure thing" said Mina.

She turned it on and set and began to sing the first ending theme to Cardcaptor Sakura.

When she was finished Lunch was ready so put her karaoke machine away.

They began to eat tomato soup.

When they started eating Maddie says "I think today maybe the day"

"What day?" said Mina.

"When Anne awakens" said Maddie everyone was quiet all of a sudden.

"Are you sure" said April.

"So I hope you are right" said Mina, "I can't bear to battle her"

"Same here" said Megan.

After they done, Maggie and Azumarill washed the dishes and they headed towards Rustborrow City.

"All right they are there, Crawdaunt use you’re Bubble Beam!" said Anne.

"Everyone heard it got in front of Maggie who happened to in the direct path.

"Thanks" said Maggie.

"So it's you again" said Maddie.

"That's right" said Anne.

"Transform!" said Mina and all five Pokemon Angels transformed to their Angel Form.

"Perfect" said Anne taking out a remote. She pushed a button and a strange orange light surrounded them.

"I'm feeling weak" said Mina.

"But I feel fine" said Kia.

"So do I" said Maggie.

"You two are just normal girls after all; this energy wave doesn’t affect humans or Pokemon only Pokemon Angels. It makes them weak until they pass out." said. Anne.

"It doesn’t affect humans or Pokemon" said Maggie to herself.

She thought about it and came up with a plan.

"That's it, Mina let out Sneasel, I have a plan" said Maggie.
Mina didn't hesitate; she knew what Maggie's plan was: Maggie was going to use her powers.

"Sneasel listen to Maggie" said Mina.

"Right!" said Sneasel.

Mina started to transform back to her human form.

"Mina!" said Maddie.

Maggie stepped out of the energy wave with Sneasel.

"Battle with Crawdaunt and talk to it" said Maggie, "I'll handle the remote"

"What do you mean?" said Anne.

"Maggie put her hands into the air and said "Light Spectral Energy Blast!"

A white sphere formed in Maggie hands and laser shot out of it though it narrowly missed Anne.

Whoa!" said Maddie.

"I can't believe it." said Kia.

"What is this power?" said Anne.

"I'm a guardian of Ilex Forest, I have powers that no else but my mother has. I protect many forests as time. I think its best if you don't mess with me." said Maggie.

"Maggie" said Mina smiling.

Mina fainted from the energy wave.

"Mina!" said Maggie and Sneasel.

Both Megan and April transformed back and then fainted.

"Look if we ever want Anne to awaken pushes her in to the energy wave." said Sneasel to Crawdaunt.

"I think you maybe right" said Crawdaunt.

Crawdaunt turned around and began to try to get Anne into the energy wave.

"Stop! What are you doing" said Anne.

"Light Spectral Energy Blast" said Maggie doing her attack that missed Anne, though it missed Anne dropped the remote and fell into the energy wave. She began to feel weak.

"What's going on? I'm human. They were unaffected, why aren't I?" said Anne who fainted.

Crawdaunt crushed the remote and the energy wave stopped.

"Ah... that feels better" said Beth.

"That's right" said Maddie.

"So why did Anne pass out just after a few seconds?" said Maggie.

"I guess it was because her powers hadn't awakened" said Kia.

"I think we should change her clothes" said Maddie.

"Your right" said Maggie.

As time went by Mina, April and Megan woke up however because Anne hadn't awaken yet it would take while for to wake up. Hours later when it was dark Maggie was cooking dinner when Anne finally woke up.

"Huh? What's going on? Why am I in these clothes" said Anne.

"You passed out, we changed your clothes so no one would run away or call the cops" said Maggie.

Anne jumped for a moment because it was a surprise.

"Have any interesting dreams?" said Maggie.

"What do you mean?" said Anne.

"Your Dark Angel, the dreams you had were memories, Kia told me that, that because it was shock you would have them.” said Maggie.

It all came back: she had a dream in which she saved a Poochyena from a bad Pokemon trainer.

"So where are the others" said Anne.

"Over there, they're doing karaoke I don't think that would mind if you joined" said Maggie.

"Okay" said Anne who got up.

Anne began to walk to where the karaoke was, it was not far away from the fire.

When she got there Kia finished with her song.

"Hey!" said Kia looking at Anne.

Anne thought Kia was going to yell at her but Kia said "If you want to go, your turn is after Mina"

"Okay" said Anne.

"Okay you guys, I won't do 'I Wanna hold your hand' or anything in English ether" said Mina.

"You there are songs in English" said Megan.

"Yeah, because of Sailor Moon and Cardcaptor Sakura were on TV, some companies dub songs, the song at the end of Tenchi Muyo in love was in English because the guy who did the music wasn't Japanese and for some reason the theme song to .hack//SIGN was entirely in English" said Mina.

"O...k" said Megan.

Mina chose the song Dearest from Inu-Yasha. She sang very beautifully.

"Wow" said Anne.

"I know she's good, Maggie told me that she has been a fan since she was just a little kid" said Maddie.

"Really" said Anne.

"So are going to go back" said Maddie.

"I don't know" said Anne.

"I think if you back you'll be in danger, if they find out that you are Dark Angel, they’d use the way they planning to use us." said Maddie.

Anne was silent; she knew was right, she didn't want to herself in danger or her family. That second she realized that she doesn’t remember anything since she joined Team Aqua, her family, her last name, her home town. All she remembers is that she was 12 and Crawdaunt was a Corpfish which was her first Pokemon.

Mina finished her song and said to Anne "Want to come up? I could help you" said Mina.

"Sure" said Anne.

"I know of a great English song, you'll the singing part and I'll do the rapping part" said Mina

"Okay" said Anne.

Mina chose the English Tenchi Universe theme song.

When Mina was doing her part Anne realized she could be free from Team Aqua and find out who she really is.

When they finished the song Anne asked Kia "Hey you’re the one with Arcannie right? I can I borrow it?"

"Why?" said Kia.

"To burn my Team Aqua uniform" said Anne.

When everyone heard it they all smiled.

The next day they all got ready. Anne was like a new person there was a look in eyes that said she was a new person. She felt so happy.

"Hold on for second" said Anne pulling out a strange looking cell phone.

"Hey it's Anne, I quit. I don't believe in this any more and I'm not joining Team Magma ether, good bye"

Anne finished the call and stomped one the phone.

"So Anne I bet your family will happy that you quit" said Mina.

"I should tell you this I don't remember anything before I joined Team Aqua, nothing: my family, my friends, my hometown not even my last name. Only my birthday, age and that my first Pokemon was Crawdaunt. With you hopefully I'll find the answers" said Anne.

"Maybe you will" said Anne.

Meanwhile back at the Team Aqua base the male member was talking another

Team Aqua member who was female. He was giving her Anne's mission

"So it's up to you complete Anne's mission got it. I know you can handle it" said the male

"Got it" said the female member.

 

[Psychic]

Thank you for your crizisim. But I'd also like to say that it is hard for me to type. I understand I'm no good with descritions and other thing. My stories I have written have good diolauge and characters *couch*kinkytheinanerabbit*cough* However there is a reason I'm no good with spelling and grammer: it is hard for to type as I am disabled, I have Muscular Dystrophy. If someone crirtizes me on that fact I will make a new sig:

If you make fun of my spelling and or grammer, then you are an awful person and as I am disabled and its very hard for to type. These people have made fun of my typeing with nollage of my disabiles:
(List here)

This is just a warning for now.

0.0 Hey, chill chill. I know people with all kinds of diseases, sicknesses and cancers, I'm not a stranger to this kind of thing, but you'll have to forgive me for not reading your profile before reading your story. -_- Lordy Lordy, don't get so uptight, I can't exactly blame you for that, but you don't have to scream, my hearing is fine.
I mean, fine, ever see Charboy's sig? 'Please excuse my spelling as I am deaf.' Instead of yelling at people for not checking your profile, just put in something like that.

-_- One more thing: you can still just always write it piece by piece, instead of trying to cram everything. Write a couple paragraphs, ones that are a few sentances long, take a nice break then continue. Or do what you do, then leave it alone and come back to it, adding in everything else. Whatever is best for you.
Anyways, just be patient with what you write, and maybe I will read the rest anyways. I did say it was an interesting plot.
But of course, you'd much rather threaten me. (j/k, but you know, threatening others isn't the best way to make friends.) x_x

~Psychic

 

[Emma Iveli]

I didn't mean you in peticaul, I was putting up a warning just in case. Also I would also like someone to reveiw the plot and jokes. Also I would also like to say I already finshed wrttign Vol. 1 and when I put them up all I do is alter them in some way.

 

[Teal]

For having so much dialouge in the story (it's like 80% of it..) you should really be able to describe said dialouge better. Everything is blablabla said, "..." then blablabla said, "autghade"

 

[Emma Iveli]

(Thank you you for your critsisim)

Chapter 7: A Fired Up Relationship

The three day good luck streak was over, oh well. But Anne is feeling more happy and is more comfortable with the others: Mina and her anime, Maggie and her powers, Kia and the fact she didn't believe in the legend, Beth and the fact she falls in love with every cute guy she's sees, Maddie and her fame, Megan and her comments and April and her love for flowers, she loved them all except for Megan and her comments she's trying to tolerate it for now. The weird thing she knows Mina and Maggie from somewhere but can't put her finger on it.

It was few days after Anne had joined them, it was a very sunny morning and they had all finished breakfast.

"Good breakfast" said Anne.

"Thanks" said Maggie.

"Why don't we just relax here all day and continue the journey tomorrow" said Mina.

"What you a Pokemon trainer or a Slackoth" said Kia.

Everyone giggled at that except for Megan who said “You laugh at that but not at mine"

Anne hit Megan in the head with a big paper fan.

"Kia's funny, yours are just rude" said Anne.

Everyone else nodded in agreement.

"Magby get the red haired woman." said a voice.

"Huh?" said Anne

Just then a Magby came in as if it were going to attack Anne. Anne had no idea why it was going to attack her.

"Magby!" said the Magby as it was about to attack Anne.

Smoochum came out of its pokeball and said to Magby "Stop now you jerk!"

"Oh I know who said that" said Mina.

"And I know where he is" said Maggie, she pick up a rock and threw it to a nearby bush. Peter came out with a lump on his head.

"Hey watch it" said Peter.

Crawdaunt came out of its pokeball and pounding on Peter and no one knew what was going on. Not even Peter.

"Please stop Crawdaunt" said Anne.

"Okay" said Crawdaunt.

"How dare you trick my cousin and my rival, sure they may be dense and I don't know about the other two girls but I they are!" said Peter.

Peter did not know that she is Pokemon Angel then again he doesn't travel with them. Anne got angry about this.

"Crawdaunt can you please" said Anne.

"All right!" said Crawdaunt, who started pounding on Peter again. A few minutes later Crawdaunt stopped and Mina, Maggie, Kia and Beth were looking down on him.

"What do you mean dense" said Mina angrily.

"Uh-oh!" said Peter.

He began to grovel for his life.

"Please don't hurt me oh great Ice Angel" said Peter he was serous and sarcastic at the same time.

"O...k" said Mina.

"Anne is Dark Angel, and she recently quit Team Aqua because of that" said Maggie.

"That's right" said Kia.

"You should really learn more" said Beth.

"Let me guess, that's Peter" said Maddie.

"Guess so" said April.

"I wonder why Crawdaunt attacked him" said Megan.

"You really want to know?" said Crawdaunt coming up to Megan.

"Yeah" said Megan.

"Good thing I was planning on telling you today any ways" said Crawdaunt dragging Megan by her arm.

A few minutes later they were in a private place no too far away from the other were.

"Okay it’s a long story..." said Crawdaunt.

Back with the others, Matt got to where the others were.

"Hi Matt" said Mina blushing.

"Hey guys, I told Peter not to attack her but he wouldn't listen" said Matt.

"You were right, now can you please get your foot off my hand" said Peter who was on the ground still begging to Mina.

"Oh sorry" said Matt.

"Quit calling me Wimp-o!" said Smoochum glaring at Magby.

"Magby Mag!" said Magby Glaring at Smoochum.

"Stop it now!" said Smoochum still glaring at Magby.

"Tell your Pokemon to stop calling my Smoochum names" said Mina.

"How do know it is?" said Peter.

"Because Smoochum's saying it" said Mina.

Back with Megan Crawdaunt finished its story. Megan looked sad after hearing it.

"That's terrible" said Megan.

"I know and I didn't know what happened until I evolved" said Crawdaunt.

"Wow, so Mina and Anne are..." said Megan.

Yeah, I know. We should tell them when she remembers" said Crawdaunt.

"Unless Mina figures it out first." said Megan.

"And Maggie too" said Crawdaunt.

"Let's go back" said Megan.

They got back to where the others are and Mina and Peter were fighting.

"Look just because you have super powers you can boss me around" said Peter.

"What?! I heard what Smoochum was saying and you were begging that I wouldn't hurt you!" said Mina.

"I know that is what I am saying; just because you have super powers you think you can boss me around" said Peter.

"Nani?! That's it let's battle" said Mina.

"Nani?" said Peter.

"It means what, in Japanese" said Mina.

"Do it later, it's too early" said Maggie.

"Yeah" said Kia.

"Fine after lunch" said Mina.

"Fine!" said Peter.

Hours went by; Maddie, Megan and April were introduced to Matt and Peter. Also they were told that Anne couldn't remember anything from before she was 12. Peter thought that something was familiar about Anne. Maggie had just started making lunch.

"I'll finally battle him" said Mina to herself.

"I'll finally battle her" said Peter to himself.

Meanwhile a trainer named Deborah was walking. She had black hair, shoulder length and green eyes. She was very skinny. She hasn't eaten anything since she was the Pokemon center and that was two days before.

"So... hungry...need food" she said.

She stopped for a second and said "Oh sprits of the forest guide me to food"

The wind blew and she smelled Maggie's cooking.

She saw where Maggie was cooking and walked up to where their camp was and said "Can you please share, I haven't eaten in two days".

"Sure why not" said Maggie.

Kia walked up and said "don't I know you from somewhere"

"No I don't think so" said Deborah.

"Oh I remember now you went to the Angel Shrine before I went on my journey. You bought one of each souvenir we had including my grandfather book" said Kia.

"Weren’t you the one didn't believe the legend that your family's shrine is dedicated" said Deborah.

"Fire type trainer?" said Kia.

"Fire type trainer" said Deborah.

"You didn't believe the legend, ha ha ha!" said Peter.

"Shut up!" said Kia glaring him.

"Lunch is ready" said Maggie.

During lunch, Kia and Deborah got along great, Deborah as it turns out is in to legends and whenever she comes upon a shrine she goes on a shopping and buys one of each souvenirs the place has, which is why she hasn't eating in two days.

"I recently heard that the legend of the Pokemon Angels is true." said Deborah.

"I know, I saw one" said Kia lying somewhat.

"Oh that's pretty cool" said Deborah.

"Yeah but I'm afraid that my grandpa or one of sisters might say over and over again 'told you so'" said Kia telling the truth.

"That's too bad." said Deborah.

"Wow you have sisters, how many?" said Anne.

"4, two older two younger" said Kia.

"What are their names?" said Anne.

"Subaru, Lexis, Mercedes and Porsche" said Kia.

"All car brands" said Maggie.

"I know my parents made a deal, my dad name the girls while my mom names the boys" said Kia.

"Hey what's with them?" asked Deborah pointing to Mina and Peter eating very quickly.

"Don't ask" said Megan.

"Done" said Peter.

"Finished" said Mina.

"That's great, let everyone else finish first" said Maddie.

Meanwhile someone was watching them though binoculars. It was the female Team Aqua member. She was in shadows so you couldn't see what she looked like.

"Anne I won't get you this time" she said.

Ten minutes later with Mina and the rest... "Your done, can we battle yet?" said Mina.

"We need to relax after eating" said Anne.

"Fine" said Mina.

Ten minutes after that... "Can we battle now?" said Peter.

"After I do the dishes" said Maggie.

"Aw, man!" said Peter.

Five minutes after that... "Now you can battle" said Maddie.

"Finally!" said Mina.

"All Right!" said Peter.

Everyone got ready for their battle.

"This is a one on one battle between Mina and Peter the battle ends when the opponents Pokemon is unable to battle" said Maddie.

"All right Smoochum I choose you!" said Mina.

"Come on out Magby!" said Peter.

Both Pokemon came out of their Pokeballs. Both ready to battle.

"And begin!" said Maddie.

"Magby use Flame Thrower!" said Peter.

"Smoochum dodge and Use Confusion!" said Mina.

Magby's attacked missed after Smoochum dodged and Smoochum's attack hit, Magby flew a few feet because of the Psychic attack and it was unable to battle.

"Magby is unable to battle, Mina is the winner!" said Maddie.

"No fair!" said Peter.

"What?" said Mina.

"You won because you are a Po-" said Peter who was interrupted by Maggie and Anne grabbing his mouth.

"You shouldn't say that in front of Deborah" said Maggie.

"That's right I think Team Aqua may still be after us, I don't think she's member, I just think we shouldn't let it get out" said Anne.

"Anne why helping me?" said Maggie.

"Don’t know instinct I guess" said Anne.

Anne, Mina, Beth, Megan, Maddie and April felt something Deborah.

"Can she be..." said Anne.

"Hmmhmh hmmhmh" said Peter.

"What?" said Maggie letting of Peter mouth.

"I said let me go" said Peter.

Suddenly five orange ropes appeared and grabbed Mina, Beth, Maddie, Megan and April. All 5 began to feel weak.

"Guys!" said Anne.

"Hmm... What's going on?" said Deborah.

"Anne you’re lucky, I went easy on you just because we were friends. I will just take your fellow Pokemon Angels" said a voice.

"You guys are Pokemon Angels?" said Deborah.

"So you didn't have to grab my mouth then!" yelled Peter.

"Shut up!" said Maggie.

"These ropes contain the energy wave that makes Pokemon Angel weak, you can not fight" said the voice.

"Well I can try" said Anne.

"Anne don't" said Kia.

"Let me handle it" said Maggie.

"This something I need to do" said Anne.

She closed her eyes; her hair turned black, and grew longer. Her clothes changed to beautiful robes and she grew wings that matched her hair.

"She is" said Deborah.

"Faint Attack!" said Anne.

She tried to destroy the ropes but she touched one and it hurt her.

"Tee hee hee! You can’t touch it" said the voice.

"That's enough" said Deborah.

She closed her eyes; her hair turned red and grew longer. Her clothes turned to beautiful robes and she grew wings that matched her hair.

"Deborah" said Kia.

"Wow" said Matt.

"With fire they don't need to touch the ropes" said Maggie.

"That is such a generic comment when this kind of stuff happens" said Peter.

"Shut Up!" said Maggie.

"Flame Thrower!" said Deborah and all the ropes burnt.

A flame thrower attack came from her hands.

"I should have brought more ropes" said the voice.

"Show yourself, now!" said Deborah.

A blond woman jumped down from the top of a tree, but no one saw her face.

"I decided not to get you because we were friends I guess I was wrong" said the woman who ran away.

"I'll get her" said Deborah.

Anne held her hand in front of her.

"No not yet" said Anne.

"I'll be back" said the woman.

Hours later Anne explained that woman was a Team Aqua member.

"...So it seems that she has an even more powerful thing then I unleashed on you" said Anne.

"Yeah those ropes were certainly stronger then what you did to us" said Megan.

"I'm really worried if they have these with out me knowing then this is bad" said Anne.

"I think Anne's memory be the key" said Maddie.

"I don't think that maybe the case" said Megan knowing the truth.

"What ever it is this sounds dangerous" said Matt.

Everyone else nodded.

"It's a good thing we don't travel with you" said Peter.

"Well you should" said Mina.

"No way!" said Peter.

"So it looks like what I think it is" said Beth.

"No it's not it" said Mina blushing.

"Oh come on, you can't hide it" said April.

"No! It's not like that" said Mina still blushing.

The next day they were at a fork in the road.

"This way is to, Meteor Falls" said Matt.

"Well we are going to Rustborrow City, to get my first badge" said Mina.

"I thought you gave up chances on the Hoeen League" said Peter.

"SHUT UP!" said Mina glaring at him.

Later they were near Rustborrow City they talked as they walked.

"I can't believe I'm a Pokemon Angel" said Deborah.

"I know, I was obsessed the legend too" said Mina.

"You too?" said Maddie, April, Anne, Megan and Beth at the same time.

"I guess it's a sign of who is a Pokemon Angel" said Deborah.

"I always thought it was my missing cousin she was obsessed wit the legend too." said Mina.

"Missing cousin?" said Anne.

"Yeah, she vanished along with her family 6 years ago. They found the house was burned down but there were no bodies, no one knows if there are alive or not" said Mina very sadly.

"Oddly enough she's also the jerk's cousin too" said Maggie.

"So you two are a thing" said Maddie.

"I said it's not like that" said Mina.

"I'm pretty sure she's alive" said Megan.

"Wow a nice remark from Megan" said Beth.

"What's that supposed to mean" said Deborah.

"You'll find out, and here" said Maggie handing her a big paper fan.

"What do you do with this?" said Deborah.

"I said you'll find out" said Maggie.

They got a ledge over looking Rustborrow City. It was beautiful.

"There's Rustborrow City" said Kia.

"My first gym battle awaits" said Mina.

 

[Emma Iveli]

Chapter 8: Mina’s First Gym Battle.


The day after they got to Rustborrow they went to the gym. The rocky building was next to a school. There was sign saying “teaching a class, please come back this afternoon.”

“Great...” said Mina.

“Let’s go shopping” said Maggie.

“Good idea” said Kia.

So they went shopping, Mina bought some new anime DVDs: Nurse Witch Komugi, Angel Tales and Flame of Recca. Everyone else bought clothes. Megan got into accident at Old Navy when she spilled soda on some cloths and had to buy them. Later they headed back to the gym.

“This is unbelievable. They shouldn’t sell food there.” said Megan.

“If you have one in my size give it to me okay.” said Maddie.
Mina was looking at her large collection of anime DVDs. Maggie was walking to her.

“Peter often, said that you were an anime fan first and Pokemon Trainer second.” said Maggie.

“Peter!” said Mina.

“Calm down, calm down” said Anne.

“That’s right you wouldn’t want to be up set at your battle” said Maddie.

“So rock type gym.” said Beth.

“Oh yeah wouldn’t the leader’s Pokemon be powered up?” said Maggie.

“No it doesn’t work like that. If we are cheering for the Pokemon or battling with it then Pokemon will be stronger with we a cheering or battling against it, it will ether lose on purpose or be honorably and fight a great battle” said Deborah.

“Oh that's good” said Mina.

“So do you think they will fight honorably” said Maddie.

“Let’s hope so” said Kia.

They got the gym to find that the leader was there. A young woman with brown hair and eyes. She wore blue dress.

“Excuse me, I’d like to challenge you” said Mina.

“Of course” said The Gym Leader named Roxanne, “May I ask you something, can I tape our battle I like to show tapes of the battles to classes at the Pokemon Academy”

“Sure” said Mina.

“So, you teach at the school next door” said Beth masking conversation.

“Yes, I was one of the best students and I worked so hard I became gym leader” said Roxanne.

“Wow that pretty cool” said Mina.

Not long later the battle began. Everyone else went to stands that surrounded the gym.

“This is a two on two battle between the Leader of the Rustborrow gym,
Roxanne and the challenger Mina Koki of Manla Town. The winner is decided when both of an opponent's Pokemon is unable to battle to battle. There is no time limit. Let the match begin.” said the referee.

“Geodude I choose you!” said Roxanne.

“Come on out Sneasel” said Mina.

“Geodude use Roll Out” said Roxanne.

“Dodge it and use faint Attack” said Mina.

Geodude attack missed while Sneasel’s attack hit. With Mina's power combined with Sneasel’s attack Geodude was unable to battle.

“Geodude is unable to battle.” said the referee.

“Geodude is fighting honorably” said Beth in the stands.

“I guess it because you want it to” said Maddie.

Back on the battle failed.

“Return Sneasel!” said Mina

Back in the stands...

“Why is she returning it” said Megan.

“Mina wants to be fair to all her Pokemon” said Maggie.

“That nice” said Kia.

Back on the battle felid.

“I choose you Nosepass” said Roxanne.

“Come on out Smoochum” said Mina.

“Use Rock Tomb” said Roxanne.

Nosepass’ attack hit Smoochum. Barley anything happened/

“Smoochum use Confusion” said Mina.

The attack hit, with Mina's power combined with Smoochum's attack, Nosepass was unable to battle.

“Nosepass is unable to battle. Mina is the winner” said Referee.

“All right” said Mina.

“Your Pokemon are super strong, you won this Stone Badge” said Roxanne.

“Okay” said Mina with a tone in her voce that sounded like she's the one that lost.

Later that night in the woods Mina was thinking about if she should give it back.

“You want to give it back don’t you” said Deborah.

“Yeah I do” said Mina.

“Don’t” said Maddie.

“What?” said Mina.

“See in a way, it was training, the more battles you have the more you can hold back your power” said Maddie.

“What?” said Mina.

“I’ll show. Kia can I borrow with Arcanine” said Maddie.

“O…k” said Kia.

Kia let out her Pokemon. Maddie called out Dragonair.

“Okay, Dragonair, use Hyper Beam on Arcanine.” Said Maddie.

“Okay” said Dragonair.

It hit and Arcanine wasn’t hurt.

“What just happened?” said Arcanine.

“What I did, was that I made Dragonair’s power as weak as possible. Because of my skills of a Pokemon trainer I was able to control how much power my Pokemon has. You’re still young but the more battles you have the more you’ll get better” said Maddie.

“Thanks” said Mina.

“Hey where are we headed next?” said Maggie.

“There’s a Pokemon Contest in town, so let’s do that right April?” said Megan.

“Oh yes right” said April.

“Okay after that let’s to Dewford Island” said Mina.

“Okay!” said everyone else.

“I just hope she isn’t there” said April to her self.

 

[Emma Iveli]

Chapter 9: Contest Rivalry

A day after Mina’s gym battle they got to the Rustborrow Contest Hall. It had beautiful gardens every where and many beautiful Pokemon training.

“Kia can I try something on Arcanine?” said April.

“O…k” said Kia.

April let Bellosom.

“Bellosom use Solar Beam!” said April.

The attack hit Arcanine but nothing happened.

“Hey I’m not hurt. What happened? And why did you use me that experiment try someone else!” said Arcanine.

“The attack” said Mina.

“Because contests involve beauty instead of power, I learned how to control my Pokemon’s power already” said April.

“Oh wow” said Mina.

“That Solar Beam was so weak!” said a voice.

April turned around and saw a girl with long black hair she had a Sailor Moon hair style and had brown eyes.

“She kind of looks Meilin.” said Mina to her self.

“If you want to win. You better not try that Solar Beam, Ape” said the girl.

“Look Maya! I was showing my friends something and my name is April, not Ape.” said April.

“Yeah sure smell you later.” said Maya.

“Who is she?” said Anne.

“She’s my rival” said April.

Not too long later April was battling with a Shroomish that she asked. Mina came with some rice balls.

“Here, you should take a break” said Mina.

“Thanks.” said April.

She sat down and began to eat them.

“Hey Grass Angel may I start traveling with you?” said Shroomish.

“Yes you can” said April.

She got did the V is for Victory, said "All Right I caught a Shroomish!" and sat back down.

“Hey I was wondering if there was something happened with Maya” said Mina.

“Before we were rivals, we the best of friends. We did everything together. But when she got our first Pokemon she suddenly didn’t want to friends any more. It was so strange so choose to train Pokemon that are strong against grass types” said April who began to cry.

Maya was walking by with both of her Pokemon, Vulpix and Beautifly.

“I think I’m going to use Beautifly in the contest” said Maya.

She saw April crying. She hid behind a nearby bush.

“I don’t know what happened, but she just turned mean” said April.

Maya thought about some thing for a second.

“Maybe I should tell her after this contest” said Maya to herself.

A few days later the contest began.

Everyone was in the stands except for April.

“It April’s turn next” said Mina.

On stage...

“Next is April Tyson” said the Announcer.

April entered the stage. She closed her eyes, took a breath and let Bellosom.

“Use Petal Dance!” said April.

A lot of petals appeared.

“Now use Twister.” said April.

All the petals spread though out the hall.

“Pretty” said Mina.

There was a standing ovation.

"A lovely combination as Flowers upon the contest hall" said the announcer.

“Thank you, Thank you” said April.

“That was so cool” said Maggie.

Her score was 29.9. A very high score.

“And now finally Maya Kiki” said the announcer.

“Beautifly, Use Silver Wind!” said Maya.

“Now use tackle!” said Maya.

“Finish it off string shot!” said Maya.

It wasn’t as good as April’s but it was good.

In the last 4 were both April and Maya. However they weren't going to face each other in the first round.

Back in the stands...

“Let’s just hope April wins” said Mina.

“Yeah” said Anne.

Back on stage, both April and Maya won their first battles.

Back in the stands...

“Oh wow!” said Mina.

“Let’s hope April can pull it off.” said Anne.

“I think April is going to beat that Pokemon to a pulp” said Megan.

“No I don’t think so” said Mina.

“Now begin the final battle 5 minutes battle between April Tyson and Maya Kiki.” Said the announcer.

“Okay Bellosom use Petal Dance!” said April.

The attack hit Beautifly lost a lot of points. For some reason Maya threw in a towel.

“Maya Kiki, are you giving up?” said the announcer.

“Yes, I have gotten tired today, I quit this time.” said Maya.

“Maya?” said April.

“I wonder…” said Mina.

April received the Rustborrow Ribbon, Mina and the others were happy for her. Maya asked her meet her later.

“So what do you want to talk about?” said April.

“Well I want to say I’m sorry, I just wanted you to do your best and let our friendship not get in the way.” said Maya.

“Really?” said April

“Yes. And I’m sorry” said Maya.

"Sorry for what?" said April.

"I thought if I was mean to you would work harder. I thought you would have won by now. I have run some stuff I need to do but I want to join your large group of friends" said Maya.

"Really" said April.

"Really" said Maya.

"I'm so happy" said April.

Later, they said good bye.

“So your join us in Slateport” said April.

“Yes, I try to get you something” said Maya.

“Thanks see you later” said April.

“Bye.” said Maya.

So Maya and the group went to separate directions.

“So you guys patched things up.” said Mina.

“That’s right soon we will have a new friend” said April.

 

[Emma Iveli]

Chapter 10: Don’t be fooled by the Rocks that I Got.

So they got to the port of Rustborrow and the ferry had left for the day. It could have worse.

“Oh man!” said Mina.

“What should we do!” said Maddie.

“We could go shopping.” said April.

“NO!” yelled Megan still angry about what happened at Old Navy.

“Okay, okay, calm down, calm down” said Maggie.

“Hey why don’t we ride Pokemon?” said Mina.

“Can’t Dragonair can only take three tops” said Maddie.

“Crawdaunt can only bus one” said Anne.

“And it would look pretty people might go crazy if they us using Celebi’s power” said Maggie.

“Why don’t we fly there and Maggie and Kia ride Dragonair” said Beth.

“No, Team Aqua’s after us and with that new weapon it might pretty dangerous” said Anne.

“If only there was a fast way” said Mina.

“You could always ride us” said some voices that only Mina, Megan and Maddie could hear.

All three began to look around.

“Who that?” said Maddie.

“I don't know.” said Maggie.

“I heard it too.” said Mina.

“Yeah some one saying “You can ride us.”” said Megan.

Three Pokemon came out of the water, a Dewgong, a Salamence, and a Gyarados.

“Ahhhh! Gyarados!” screamed everyone but Megan.

They all began to cower in fear.

“Calm down everyone, I just want to give you a ride and travel with Water Angel” said Gyarados.

“Gyarados only wants to give us a ride.” said Megan.

“Same with us, Ice angel, Water Angel” said Dewgong.

“That’s right Dragon Angel” said the Salamence.

“Really?” said Megan, Mina and Maddie.

“Yes.” said all three Pokemon.

All three did V is for Victory signs.

“I caught a Dewgong!” said Mina.

“I caught a Gyarados!” said Megan.

“And I caught a Salamence!” said Maddie.

Meanwhile in a Team Aqua sub members of Team Aqua were planning something. In the dark pits the watched the Pokemon Angels. There were three of them one woman and two men.

“So when they go to Dewford Island, we will get them” said a Male Team Aqua member.

“Remember I am the leader of this plan so we follow it!” said the female Team Aqua member. “Okay, okay, calm down, calm down” said another male member of Team Aqua.

“Fine then Jimmy” said the female member.

“Right Jennifer” said Jimmy.

“The name is Jenny from the Block” said the female Team Aqua member.

She was the one who attacked them in the forest, however Anne knew how incompetent she was in doing her job. She was extremely incompetent, think Mihoshi or chef Wiggum.

“So you are dismissed.” said Jenny from the Block.

“Right!” said Jimmy.

He and the other member left the room.

“So during the plan do you think Anne will speak her mind?” said Jimmy.

“Hopefully, even if we fail and Anne tells her, it will be a success” said the other member.

“That’s right, if Anne will tell her.” said Jimmy.

Meanwhile they all headed for Dewford Island on the Pokemon, Mina and April rode on Dewgong, Maddie, Maggie and Beth rode Salamence, Deborah and Kia rode Dragonair, Megan rode Gyarados and Anne rode Crawdaunt.

“Look why isn’t any riding Gyarados with me?” said Megan.

“No reason.” said everyone else.

“Look there has to be a reason” said Megan

There were two, no one wanted to ride a Gyarados and no one wanted to ride with Megan as she tends to fun of everyone and its getting tiring.

“There isn’t one.” said everyone else.

“Tell the truth!” said Megan.

Meanwhile on the sub they caught sight of them.

“All right to the air when ready.” said Jenny from the Block.

The sub began to play the song Jenny from the Block which was her trade mark.

Meanwhile everyone heard something.

“What that sound?” said Mina.

“It sounds like an awesomely bad song” said Megan.

“It's the song Jenny from the Block” said Anne.

The sub came up to the surface.

“Hello hello, remember me” said Jenny from the Block come from out the sub.

“I know you, your that Team Aqua member from before aren’t you” said Deborah.

“That right, my name is Jenny from the Block!” said Jenny from the Block.

“Her name is Jennifer Lowis” said Anne.

“It is not! I refuse to accept that name! I love J-Lo so much, she is such a great actress and a wonderful singer…” said Jenny from the Block.

While she was talking about J-Lo, they left, the Pokemon swam and flew away.

“What’s with her?” said Mina.

“The worst member of Team Aqua, she’s the worst of the worse. And every single of her partners quit or asks to be resigned.” said Anne.

“Wow and here I thought she was all though” said Deborah.

“She's like the Mihoshi of Team Aqua.” said Mina.

“Mihoshi?” said Anne.

“Mihoshi from Tenchi Muyo, she brings down all her partners with the GP. If you are made her partner it might mean death to your career.” said Mina.

“That Jennifer all right” said Anne.

While this was going on Jenny from the Block was still talking about J-Lo when she noticed that they were gone.

“Oh great how dare they do that.” said Jenny from the Block.

She went back into the sub and took out a gun that shot out the ropes.

“Now I got you!” said Jenny from the Block taking aim.

Kia was laughing about how Jenny from the Block and Mihoshi were alike when an orange rope grabbed her.

“Huh? What this?” said Kia.

And she was pulled away.

Everyone turned around and saw Kia being pulled away by the orange rope.

“Is this her handy work?” said Mina.

“You bet!” said Anne.

“Looks like we have to transform” said Deborah.

Everyone else nodded.

Jenny from the block was pulled Kia in. Not knowing she had the wrong girl.

“And now I have one of them, and that is all I need” said Jenny from the Block.

“Aim better.” said Kia.

“Who are you?” said Jenny from the Block.

“One of the two girls that are traveling with them!” said Kia.

“Oh yeah I forgot about that” said Jenny from the Block.

“O…k” said Kia.

“You will not use her as bait or I will freeze your Power!” said Mina scolding her.

“You must have bad aim because you missed your target because of that I will Rock your world!” said Beth scolding her.

“You should not kidnap any one; the dragon will show you her rage!” said Maddie Scolding her.

“I’m extremely angry you do this at sea, my wave will crush you!” said Megan scolding her.

“You have no idea how we are, I will root you out!” said April scolding her,

“You should not have done that, my Fire will burn you!” said Deborah scolding her.

“You have no idea how bad you are in Team Aqua, my darkness will consume you!” said Anne.

“What was that last one?” said Jenny from the Block.

“Well…” said Anne.

She tried not to say that she was the laughing stock of Team Aqua, so she deiced to t point out one her other problems.

“No likes your nickname” said Anne.

“What it not true.” said Jenny from the Block.

“Oh its true.” said Jimmy coming out of the sub.

“What are you telling the truth?” said Jenny from the Block.

Both Anne and Jimmy nodded.

She ran into the sub crying. Jimmy unties Kia. And Deborah picked her up and put her on her back.

“Thanks.” said Kia.

“No thank you, we finally get to here her call herself Jennifer. Even if we did fail at this mission everyone other member of Team Aqua will be happy, I owe all you one.” said Jimmy.

“Really, okay.” said Anne who was blushing a little.

“Well see you later hopefully not in a battle” said Jimmy who then went back into the sub.

Mina noticed she was blushing.

"What's that all about?" said Mina.

"Nothing" said Anne.

"Oh really?" said Mina.

"Really" said Anne.

She few back to where Maggie and the Pokemon were.

"It wasn't my imagination was it?" said Mina.

Later they got to Dewford Island.

“Boy that was kind of fun.” said Anne.

“Well at least we won that round.” said Mina.

Meanwhile Jenny from the Block was filing her report. She was on talking to the member via satellite.

“And so Anne told me how bad my nickname is” said Jenny from the Block.

“So I guess your changing right?” said the male member.

“Yes to J-Lo.” said Jenny from the Block.

“That’s even worse” said Jimmy to himself.

“Oh really any ways for the next mission I will take over” said her superior.

“All right J-Lo out” said J-Lo.

In a Team Aqua base the male member thought about something.

“Anne will regain her memories, hopefully she will rejoin after she remembers” he said to himself.

 

[Emma Iveli]

Chapter 11: Mina’s Second Gym Battle.

The day after Mina and the other got Dewford Island they all went to the gym. When they got there they met the gym leader Brawly. He has Blue-green hair and eyes. Unfortunately he was taking the day off to go surfing. Well that’s what Mina thought, she couldn’t understand him because he was speaking 1960’s surfer dude. So like the last time they diced to something else while waiting.

“You know lets go to the beach” said Mina.

“Sure” said Beth.

“Okay let’s go” said Maggie.

They all went back to the Pokemon center and got their bathing suit, towels and other stuff you need you get at the beach. Some of them let their Pokemon but only a few. When they got there Mina, Beth and Larvitar they built a sandcastle, Megan and Azumarill played near the water and every one else sunbathed. Suddenly a big wave hit Megan.

“Oh man” said Megan.

“Whoa are you okay” said Brawly walking up with a Hariyama.

“I’m fine” said Megan extremely dizzy still on the ground.

“Megan you should be careful” said Mina who walked up.

“Oh, your one who challenged me today” said Brawly.

Mina nodded, “I know that you ether need a break or this training” said Mina.

Beth walking by of course she was blushing.

“Oh man” said Mina put her face into hand.

Larvitar knew what was going to happen so he started to cry. Beth noticed and ran over to him.

“Larvitar what’s wrong.” said Beth.

She began top cutlet him, both Brawly and Mina and stared at her. They went back to their conversation.

“Yeah you’re right I use surfing to train, what a better then to play in nature” said Brawly.

“So what I want to battle now” said a voice behind Mina.

Mina turned around and saw Peter.

“Wassup! Look I want to battle now” said Peter.

Maggie show up where they were.

“Peter what are you doing?” said Maggie.

“Hey Maggie.” said Peter.

“You told me that you wanted talk to Mina about something” said Maggie.

“Oh, Yeah.” said Peter.

A few minutes later they went to an area covered by bushes.

“You know Mina about Anne” said Peter.

“What about her” said Mina.

“You know we have a cousin named Anne that we share” said Peter.

“The one that went missing” said Mina.

“Has, Anne the one you travel with, has lost all memory of her past?” said Peter.

“Yes, remember we told you, why are you asking?” said Mina.

“Well…” said Peter.

Meanwhile, Maggie, Megan, Beth, and April were watching them though the bushes.

“How sweet” said April.

“I know my stomach is hurting because of it” said Megan.

Maggie hit her with a big paper fan.

“Ow! You didn’t have to hit so hard.” Said Megan.

“Shh!” said Maggie.

“Oh, that makes sense” said Mina still in conversation.

“Hey it’s been awhile catch any good Pokemon?” said Peter.

“Well I just caught a Dewgong yesterday” said Mina.

“Cool, the other day I caught a Cloyster” said Peter.

“Couldn’t help to catch an ice type huh?” said Mina.

Peter laughed, “I guess your right” he said.

“They’re laughing now stomach really does hurt” said Megan.

All three girls hit her with big paper fans.

“Ow that really hurt” said Megan coming out of the bushes.

“Hey were you watching us” said Mina.

“Yes, why don’t you kiss now” said Megan.

“It’s not like that!” said Mina.

“Yeah why would I kiss her, she so uncute” said Peter.

“What?!” said Mina.

A few minutes later Peter came out of the bushes holding his noise since it was bleeding.

“What happened?” said Maddie.

“Peter said the worst thing he could say to a girl? said Megan.

“Oh, she beat him up” said Anne.

“Yes that right, it was awesome” said Crawdaunt coming out nowhere.

“You always love to see Peter get hit, don’t you?” said Megan.

“Sure do” said Crawdaunt.

“Why?” said Anne.

“See you later” said Crawdaunt who ran away.

“That was odd” said Anne.

The next day everyone including Peter and Matt went to the gym. Peter went first, Deborah cheer for Magby and Megan cheered for Cloyster which gave them strength to do it. Second was Matt’s, Tyrouge pulled though and his second Pokemon a Snorunt gave it all it got, because of Mina cheered with all her heart.

“She didn’t cheer for me” said Peter in a huff.

Finally it was Mina’s battle.

“This a battle between Mina of Manla Town and Brawly of Dewford gym, this is a two on two battle with no time limit, when both of a trainers Pokemon is knocked out the winner is decide, now begin” said Referee.

“Go Machop!” said Brawly.

“Go! Dewgong” said Mina.

“Dewgong?” said Anne.

“Mina knows what she’s doing” said Megan.

“Machop, use Karate Chop” said Brawly.

“Dewgong, use Ice Beam” said Mina.

Dewgong use its Ice Beam before Machop attacked and Machop froze.

“Macho is unable to battle, Mina is the winner” said the referee.

“No fair, Mina is a Poke…” said Peter but his mouth was shut by Maggie and Anne.

“Remember don’t say that in public” said Maggie.

“Return Dewgong.” Said Mina, “Go Smoochum”

“Interesting, go Hariyama.” Said Brawly, “Use Knock Off”

“Dodge and use Confusion” said Mina.

Smoochum dodged that attack and did Confusion and Hariyama was knocked out.

“Hariyama is unable to battle Smoochum is the winner” said the referee.

Later, Matt and Peter were leavening the Island. While and the others were going to stay for a while.

“So you’re going to stay here for a while?” said Matt.

“Yeah, there’s a contest in Slateport in a few weeks, and April is competing, plus we're getting another member of group” said Mina.

“Remember the Manla festival is happening soon” said Peter.

“I know I’ll be there” said Mina.

Matt and Peter left on a boat.

“The Manla festival?” said Anne.

“It’s a festival with games and stuff, I have to go there to help out, its after the contest so you guys want to go?” said Mina.

“Of course” said Maggie who been there several times before.

“Sounds fun” said Maddie.

“Okay so we are there after the contest” said Mina.

“Manla festival huh? Why does that sound familial?” said Anne to herself.

 

[Emma Iveli]

Chapter: 12 Anne’s Memories


A young girl who was 12 was playing at the Ruins of Oldale with her Corpfish, her name is Anne Maira. She had bright red hair and green eyes. She noticed something wrong, her house was on fire. She ran down to her nearby house with her Corpfish. She ran in and couldn’t see anything because of the smoke.

“Corpfish, use Bubble Beam on this fire” said Anne.

The fire went out and she saw men holding her parents with ropes.

“Who are you?” said Anne.

“We’re members of Team Magma, we have been waiting for you to return from your trip join us or we’ll keep your parents” said one of men.

“No way” said Anne.

“Suit yourself” said the Man. They all left with Anne’s parents.

Hours later Anne was sitting in her burnt out house with her Corpfish.

“I should call Officer Jenny, and move in with Aunt Kim or Aunt Crystal” said Anne to Corpfish.

“Or you can join us” said a man behind her.

“What?’ said Anne.

“My name is Jonathan, if you join Team Aqua and you can get your parents back” said the man with black hair.

“Okay.” said Anne.

Jonathan let a Pokemon out of its pokeball and suddenly everything went dark, she was all alone. Orange ropes from all around tied Anne. A mysterious woman with black hair and black wings appeared out of nowhere.

“Who are you?” said Anne.

“I’m you” said the woman.

“What does that suppose mean?” said Anne.

The woman giggled, she touched the ropes and all but one disappeared.

“Um, what about the last one” said Anne.

“I’ll get it” said Jonathan’s voice.

The final rope disappeared and Anne felt pain as it was disappearing.

Anne woke up from the dream she was having, she looked around and saw that it was late at night and all her friends were asleep.

“What a strange dream, I always have dreams about memories from the past. That defiantly wasn’t a memory” said Anne.

She put her head down and fell back to sleep.

The next morning everyone was awake, Maggie was getting ready to cook breakfast while everyone else was brushing their hair brushing their teeth, getting dressed or talking.

“I wonder why the kids in the Lucky Charms commercial don’t try to steal his gold, I did read this fanfic in which an insane Azumarill that can talk threatened him for his gold with a gun.” said Mina who was talking to April.

“Uh Mina I need to talk to you” said Megan who just walked up.

A few minutes later Mina, Maggie and Megan were talking.

“What do you want to talk with us about” said Mina

“Don’t be angry but I’ve been holding out on you guys about something” said Megan.

“What about?” said Mina.

“Well um…” said Megan.

Meanwhile Deborah was brushing her hair when a Combusken came out of the bushes.

“Oh wow, it’s really you Fire Angel, can I ask you a question” said Combusken.

“Yeah what” said Deborah.

“Can I join you on your journey” said Combusken.

“Sure” said Deborah.

“Hey, big brother, wait” said a Torchic who came out of the bushes.

“Too bad little sis, I’m going to be the one who gets to travel with her” said Combusken.

“Wow the fire Pokemon, just seem to love you” said Kia.

“She’s cute, I would like to travel with her” said Combusken.

“But you already got dibs on Fire Angel” said Torchic.

“Oh man who I’m going to choose” said Combusken.

“I always wanted a Torchic” said Kia with a simile.

“I love to travel with you said Torchic.

“Why couldn’t I choose” said Combusken.

“I caught, a Combusken” said Deborah doing the V is victory sign.

“And I caught a Torchic” said Kia doing the V is victory sign.

“Kia you live in the Angel Shrine right, are descended from the founder of it” said Deborah.

“Yep, don’t tell them yet okay. I plan to tell the others at the same time as my parents” said Kia.

Back with Mina, Maggie and Megan, Mina and Maggie were surprised about what Megan told them.

“So Team Magma did that to Anne.” said Maggie.

“And Anne’s my cousin” said Mina.

“And Peter’s” said Maggie.

“Does that mean that Anne is also your cousin?” said Megan.

“No, Anne’s father and Peter’s mother were brother and sister, while my father and Peter father are brothers” said Maggie.

Mina was going though her backpack looking for something after piles of books, DVDs, Box sets, a DVD player, her TV and Satellite, Karaoke machine CDs, pokeballs, pokenav and her pokedex she found what she was looking for. A hand made Sailor Mercury plush doll.

“How can you fit all that in there?” said Maggie

“What’s that?” said Megan looking at the doll

“Anne made this for me on my 4th birthday, she came to town just for that occasion” said Mina.

“Oh yeah, I remember that. Because Peter destroyed the gift she got for you: a Sailor Moon picture book” said Maggie.

“They made Sailor Moon picture books?” said Megan surprised.

“Yeah and that jerk destroyed it, any ways because of that Peter got a time out even though it was also his birthday” said Mina.

“Wait you have the same birthday” said Megan.

“Matt’s too” said Maggie.

“Anyways she showed me how to sew and made the doll at the same time. It helped me a lot and I use it as a cosplay contest good luck charm” said Mina.

“Cosplay?” said Megan.

“I could put on costume to show you but I see an issue of Animerica to show you” said Mina.

She turned to the page that she wanted and showed Megan various pictures of people dressed like their favorite anime character.

“Cool” said Megan.

“The sad part is…” said Mina but couldn’t finish.

“Not too long after that got home to Oldale Town the disappeared” said Maggie.

“Wow, that’s sad” said Megan.

They all came back after Mina put everything back into her backpack.

“Oh right I should back to breakfast” said Maggie.

They went back to where the others were. Mina walked over to Kia and Deborah.

“You guys seem happy” said Mina.

“Yeah, I caught a Torchic” said Kia.

“And I caught a Combusken” said Deborah.


“That’s great” said Mina.

“Hey guys” said Maggie, “A bunch of Scythers are trying to attack me” said Maggie.

“Okay let’s help” said Mina.

“Arcannine, Torchic come on out” said Kia.

“Ninetales, Combusken come on out” said Deborah.

“Here’s your Pokemon” said Mina handing Maggie her pokeballs.

“Okay Missdreauvus come on out” said Maggie.

“Ninetales, Combusken…” said Deborah

“Arcannine, Torchic…” said Kia.

“Use your Flame Thrower” said Kia and Deborah.

The attack hit some of the Scythers.

“Missdreauvus use your Shadow Ball” said Maggie.

The attack hit the rest of the Scythers and all but one threw away. Maggie got one her pokeballs. And she threw it.

“Okay Pokeball go!” said Maggie.

The pokeball’s indicator light lit up and few seconds later it stopped moving.

“Alright I caught a Scyther!” said Maggie doing the V is victory sign.

Later after they ate breakfast the walked for a little bit when they saw a beautiful lake with a waterfall.

“Oh wow, what a beautiful lake” said Mina.

“Why don’t we hang out here” said Megan. Everyone else nodded.

They all put on their bathing suits let out all their Pokemon and ether swam or hung out on the shore.

While Megan was swimming she was pulled down into the water.

“Megan!” said Mina.

She came out of the water on the top of a Tentacruel.

“That was just a harmless joke, hey can I join you” said Tentacruel.

“Sure All right I caught a Tentacruel” said Megan doing the V is Victory sign.

Not too long later a Corsola came out of the water and asked “Rock Angel, Water Angel can I join one of you?”

"You only have one Pokemon while I have three, I'll let you take this" said Megan.

"Thanks. All right I caught a Corsola!" said Beth doing the V is for Victory sign.

Anne was sunbathing. She couldn’t shake off the dream she had the night before.

Meanwhile the male of Team Aqua was watching them, that member was Jonathan. He was the member who was recruited Anne when she was just 12.

“Send this not to Anne.” said Jonathan to his Hypno.

Back with the others Mina asked Anne “Would you like to volleyball with us”

“No thanks” said Anne.

Suddenly the note flew in Anne’s face.

She took it and read it.

It said “Dear Anne, it’s been a long time. Meet me 50 yards away to the west alone. If you bring any other Angel or that creepy psychic girl something bad will happen to them. You may bring as many dark Pokemon. From Jonathan.”

“I have to go. Can I borrow Sneasel?” said Anne.

“Sure” said Mina.

“Got to go” said Anne.

She left with Crawdaunt and Sneasel. Not too long later Anne was alone in the wood.

“Hello Anne” said Jonathan.

“Jonathan! What do you want about” said Anne.

“Just to help you” said Jonathan.

“What?” said Anne.

Suddenly the orange rope came and grabbed from all around.

“Remember” said Jonathan “Remember what Team Magma did”

Anne began to remember, the dream that she had the night before as of the events. Team Magma kidnapped Anne’s parents and they burned her house down. But that wasn’t all, she now realized what happened Jonathan used his Hypno on her, to make her forget, to make her do what Team Aqua wanted her to do.

An Umbreon came out of the bushes and cut the ropes with its teeth.

“Anne!” said Sneasel and Crawdaunt.

Back with Mina and the others Mina and Megan felt something was wrong.

“I think we should go” said Mina

“We’ll be right back” said Megan, then she said “Maddie can I borrow Kingdra and Beth can I borrow Corsola”

“Sure” said Beth and Maddie.

Both girls left with all the Pokemon.

Meanwhile Anne was on her knees in shock.

“If you join up again you can get your parents if they are still alive” said Jonathan.

“No, what you did was much worse you used your Pokemon to hypnotize me.

That’s just disgusting” said Anne.

“Well if you join you we won’t harm the other Pokemon Angels, because they are the only ones you have left” said Jonathan.

“Oh no she doesn’t she has people who care and worry if she’s okay everyday” said a voice.

The both looked up and saw Megan and Mina in their angel forms.

“How dare you make a family worry for the 6 years for that I will freeze your power!” said Mina scolding Jonathan.

“To make a young child do things that she would never do, my wave will crush you!” said Megan scolding Jonathan.

Anne realized something she has two cousins from Manla Town, Mina and Peter, that Mina is her cousin.

“Blizzard!” attacked Mina.

A snow storm blew all around and when it settled Mina and Megan were on the ground.

Megan looked like she was going battle him and Mina was tending to Anne. All their Pokemon were all around Jonathan too.

“Anne, are you okay?” said Mina.

“I’m okay.” said Anne.

Anne got up and Sneasel, Crawdaunt and Umbreon started to glow black.

“Anne?” said Megan.

Anne began to transform.

“Anne don’t you’ll exhaust yourself” said Mina.

She changed to Angel form and all the dark Pokemon that were glowing strange beams of light came out of them and into Anne.
“How dare you do this to me, Dark Moonlight Laser” said Anne as a black beam of light came out hands.

“Wow” said Mina.

“I know” said Megan.

Jonathan was hit by the beam, he wasn’t hurt that bad.

“Hmm, a power attack, an attack that each Angel has.” said Jonathan.

A helicopter came by with the Team Aqua symbol.

“I’ll be backing Anne you can make sure of that” said Jonathan.

Jonathan went into the helicopter. Anne fell to her knees and detransformed.

“Anne, are you okay?” said Megan who detransformed.

“Yeah but I think I'm too weak to walk back” said Anne.

“Here, you can piggy back me” said Mina still in Angel form.

“Thanks” said Anne.

“Um but first, may I join you your journey Dark Angel” said Umbreon.

“Sure I caught an Umbreon!” said Anne doing the V is for Victory sign.

"Funny, you can catch a Pokemon yet you can't walk back" said Megan who changed back.

Mina hit her with a big paper fan.

"Not cool" said Mina.

Not too later while they were walking back.

“Mina, do you have a cousin who’s missing?” said Anne.

“I do, I told you that and I know you are her” said Mina.

“You knew?” said Anne.

“Well actually she found out today, I knew about since a few days after you joined us” said Megan.

“I told her, I knew it would be best for you not to know ‘till you remember. I hope you’re not mad at me” said Crawdaunt.

“No that’s fine, Mina there was something familial about you that I couldn’t put my finger on. Now I know you’re my favorite cousin” said Anne.

“I would say that you were flattering me, but he did destroyed the present you gave me, and kicked Crawdaunt when it was a Corpfish and…” said Mina

“That’s why I always like to see him in pain.” said Crawdaunt.

They got back to the lake and all the others were suspired to what they found.

“What happened?” said Maddie.

“Anne you look tired” said Kia.

“Mina’s in Angel form I wonder why.” said April.

“There must have been a fight with Team Aqua” said Maggie.

“Yes there was” said Megan.

Anne got off of Mina’s back and Mina detransformed.

“We need to talk” said Mina.

Meanwhile with Jonathan he was talking to his superior.

“So she regained her memories yet she did not rejoin?” said the man on the phone.

“Yes and she used Dark Moonlight Laser” said Jonathan.

“What?! Due to these circumstances I will have to demote you.” said the superior

“What?!” said Jonathan.

“Not only that I’m afraid you are going to have to work with J-Lo” said the Superior.

Jonathan hung up the phone.

“Nooooooooo!” yelled Jonathan at the top of his lungs.

Ash, May, Max Brock and Pikachu were in forest many miles away from the helicopter.

“Did you hear something?” said May.

"I don't think so" said Ash.

Meanwhile back with the others Anne was about to tell the story about what happened.

“Six years ago my family just came back from a birthday party for my two cousins and another kid who lived in the same town, while my parents unpacked I want to play with Crawdaunt who was a Corpfish. While I was playing Team Magma came and burned the house down. I saw it and I put it out” said Anne

“Ahem!” said Crawdaunt.

“Crawdaunt and I put it out. Team Magma also kidnapped my parents. Hours later Jonathan recruited me into Team Aqua. Not only that he has a Hypno and hypnotized me. He made me forget all my memories of my family and my past. But after I awakened all of Hypno’s affect on me was slowly waning. Please help me find my parents” said Anne.

“Of course” said Deborah.

“It’s important too” said Kia.

“Wait, shouldn’t we contact your cousins or their parents” said April.

“Oh we don’t need to do that, both of her cousins know and one her cousin’s cousins” said Megan.

Maddie thought for a second and said “Mina and Peter.”

“Yep,” said Maggie.

“Oh Anne I have still have this” said Mina holding out her Sailor Mercury doll.

“You still have it” said Anne very happily.

“It’s my cosplay good luck charm. It helps me win many cosplay contests” said Mina.

“Cosplay?” said Kia.

“It means costume play, it common at anime cons, it’s when you dress up as your favorite character.” said Mina.

“You for some reason while you were there I sensed some strange power” said Maddie.

“I did too” said Beth.

“Did one of you do a power attack?” said Deborah.

“Power Attack?” said everyone but Kia.

Mina got her book out and began read.

“The power attacks are attacks that no Pokemon can use, though it uses the Pokemon’s love the Angel and turns it to her energy.”

“So then that's what she did.” said Megan.

“You mean she used the Dark Moonlight Laser” said Kia.

“So that’s the attack I used.” said Anne

“Mina’s is Ice Snow Wind, Megan’s is Water Fall Blast, April’s is Grass Flower Blizzard, Deborah’s is Fire Burn Storm, Maddie’s is Dragon Rage Supreme and Beth’s is Rock Hard Crash.” said Kia.

“You’re less like Kagome then I thought” said Mina.

“Mina… Well any ways the more Pokemon of the type more powerful the attack, it could have been stronger” said Kia.

“If so that would have killed him” said Megan.

“I didn’t want him die, I just wanted him to suffer” said Anne.

“For some reason I have a feeling that he” said Deborah.
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[Emma Iveli]

Chapter 13: True Friendship and True Love.


Maya was waiting for April and the others, she had a present for her to say I’m sorry for all those years, mean while Jimmy a member of Team Aqua who was the members of J-Lo’s crew recently became an informant for the police, he was in Slateport hoping to make a deal with Anne. Jimmy was always in love with Anne, and her recently found out that Team Aqua using her for the own purposes. He decided to betray Team Aqua and help out Anne the police. He would do anything for Anne. He loves her that much.

With Mina and the rest, they were having a conversation about Anne while on their Pokemon to Slateport.

“I still can’t believe you guys are cousins” said Megan on her Gyarados, who was the only one

“You say that every day for the past two days” said Mina on her Dewgong who was riding with Maggie.

“I know it is unbelievable, I’m so sorry what I did you” said Anne who ridding her Crawdaunt.

“Old news” said Mina, “What I want to do is find Aunt Kay and Uncle Cal”

“Yeah, if they are alive” said Kia who was riding on Salamence with April and Maddie.

“Hopefully they are” said Beth who was riding Dragonair with Deborah.

“With, all of us helping we will find out” said Maggie.

“Right” said Anne.

“Here we are Slateport City” said Mina.

“Who wants to bet my parents bagged about me?” said April.

“That’s a funny joke” said Beth.

“No I’m not joking, I come from Arukas Town, it’s a town big on the legend of the Pokemon Angels, in particular me.” said April.

“So you told your parents” said Kia.

“Yes I did. And I think they bragged to everyone in town.” said April.

They got to the beach many people ran away in terror because of Megan's Gyarados.

"Ahhhh! Gyarados" said many people on the beach.

Mina, Maddie, Megan and Anne returned their Pokemon to their Pokeballs.

"Why does that always happen?" said Megan.

"I don't know maybe because your train a Gyarados!" said Deborah.

The part of the city near the beach. Maya was there holding her gift. She ran to them.

“April!” said Maya, “Or should I say Grass Angel”

“Knew it, they bragged didn’t they” said April.

“Yep, hey I got this for you” said Maya showing her a Roseila egg.

“What is it?” said April.

“It’s a Roseila egg” said Mina.

“How do you that?” said Maya.

“You got that Manla Town right?” said Mina.

“Yeah you’ve been there?” said Maya.

“Mina Koki” said Mina.

“Koki? As in Koki Eggs?” said Maya.

“That’s right, I’m their daughter” said Mina.

“Cool,” said Maya.

“Thanks.” said April

“Anne” said a voice.

Everyone turned around. It was Jimmy of Team Aqua, he wasn’t' wearing his uniform though.

"Trying to trick us are you? said Maddie.

"I don’t think so, didn’t he said he owes her one" said Mina

“That's right, he’s just became an informant of Team Aqua” said Officer Jenny who was with him.

“Jimmy, I can’t believe it.” said Anne.

“You caught weren’t you” said Mina.

“No he came on his free will, he told me he's in on the mysterious Project Angel, he be a great help to the force” said Officer Jenny then she left.

There was a moment of silence. The wind blew almost romantically.

“So you heard” said Anne.

“Yes, about how erased your memories, that was so awful some of those in Project actually transferred to other projects and some members even quit they were so disgusted.” said Jimmy.

“And you became an informant” said Anne.

“I’d do any thing for you” said Jimmy.

Anne began to blush.

That night they were all in the Pokemon center.

Maya, April, Mina and Maggie shard the same room.

“So what going on?” said Maya.

“It’s a long story” said Mina.

“Please I want to hear it” said Maya.

“Okay, Anne lived with her family in Oldale Town. After she came from her cousins Birthday party in a different town her parents were kidnapped by Team Magma. A member of Team Aqua named Jonathan erased her memories of her past, she did not remember her family, her friends even her last name. For years she did not even realize this. She was assigned to find and kidnapped the Pokemon Angels not realizing that she is one too. She helped out Beth, Maddie and Megan awaken. We found out that she is the Dark Angel about the time Maddie awakened. One day not too long after April awakened Anne awakened and quit Team Aqua. For a while Anne had amnesia that she wanted to find out. Not too long she remembered. Now not only are trying to find the chosen one and the other Pokemon Angles, we are trying to find out what happened to her parents.” said Mina.

“Oh that’s awful, does any one of her family know that she’s okay after been missing for years?” said Maya.

“Well her cousins who she went to their Birthday parties right before. As well as one of her cousin’s cousin” said Maggie.

“Really, how did they find out” said Maya.

April giggled, “Mina is one of Anne’s cousins and Mina’s rival Peter, is both Anne and Maggie’s cousin” she said taking care of her egg.


“Oh that’s nice that you found out” said Maya.

"I know,” said Mina.

“So if Anne didn’t have a hand helping you two and Deborah” said Maya.

“Well another member of Team Aqua did with Deborah, while with April and me it was this trio of thieves known as Team Rocket” said Mina.

“Yeah they are pretty bad they tend to be thrown hundreds of feet in the air every single time they try to do something, they follow a group of Trainers, one of them has a Pikachu and they are after it.” said Maggie.

“Beth’s boyfriend is one of them” said Mina.

“Oh wow.” said Maya.

Meanwhile Anne and Maddie were sharing their room.

“So you like this guy right?” said Maddie.

“Yes, he’s always been there for me” said Anne.

“Oh really” said Maddie.

“Are you gossiping” said Anne.

“I guess so” said Maddie.

“Wow you sure have been hanging out with the others a lot.” said Anne.

“What just because I’m a Pokemon Master, I can’t gossip?” said Maddie.

“Your right” said Anne.

“So then what about him?” said Maddie.

“He was always a nice guy, always kind and gentle around me, he told me about how is family that his family is poor and he wanted to join one of the Teams to make money for them, I’m glad he did this in a way, he is just not the person to be in Teams” said Anne.

“How sweet” said Maddie.

The next day they ate breakfast in the Pokemon center.

“Hey in few days is the Pokemon contest, if you want to practice I’ll help you” said Maya to April.

“You’re not entering?” said Mina.

“No, I already won this contest before, so there is no reason to” said Maya holding up her Ribbon.

“Oh wow” said Mina.

“I also need practice, I recently caught a Caterpie, and I need to practice with it.” said Maya.

“I have to go now” said Anne.

“You have date?” said Megan.

The nearest person who was Maggie near Megan took out her fan and hit her.

“Kind of” said Anne blushing and she left.

“Why did me Maggie” said Megan.

“Out of habit” said Maggie.

“Where did she get that fan?” said Maya.

“Mina made them, she’ll make one for you soon, Megan often says rude things and we use them as punishment” said April.

Not too long later Anne met Jimmy by the beach.

“Hey” she said Blushing.

“Hi” said he said also blushing.

They went for a walk on the beach.

“So I was wondering do you know how to contact your relatives” said Jimmy.

“No, Mina is my cousin” said Anne.

“Mina is the youngest in your group right?” said Jimmy.

“And she’s also Ice Angel” said Anne.

“So I guess it runs in the Family” said Jimmy.

“She still hasn’t told her parents about who she really is, so I don’t think she’s told them yet.” said Anne.

“Oh but, at least one of your relatives know” said Jimmy, “I was wondering, what about your other friends?” said Jimmy,

“Oh the other Angels or my others friends?” said Anne.

“Both” said Jimmy.

“Okay, Beth falls in love with every cute guy she sees but she also has a boy friend, Maddie is the opposite of her rep and is kind. Megan is rude and obnoxious but she’s kind and you can tell she’s has a pure heart. April, she’s just a nice person, she very kind and she loves flowers, Deborah is a strange she’s knows every legend and is very smart. Maggie is a very sweet girl, she’s been Mina’s friend for such a long time, and she hasn’t changed a bit. Kia is a little mean at times but she’s a very kind person. And Maya, she just joined us yesterday, she’s been friends with April for years” said Anne.

“I was wondering, do you like me” said Jimmy,

“You mean in that way?” said Anne.

“Yes…” said Jimmy.

“That was my answer” said Anne blushing.

“Really” said Jimmy.

Anne kissed him on the cheek. Jimmy began to blush.

Meanwhile April and Maya began their practice battle.

“I’m going to make this an awesome battle.” said April.

“Okay.” said Maya.

“This is a mock contest battle, one Pokemon will be use and begin with a time limit of 5 minutes" said Maddie.

“Because April is a coordinator she can control her power, and because of that this going to be a good battle.” said Mina.

“You can do it April.” said Kia.

“Go Bellosom” said April.

“Go Caterpie” said Maya.

“Use Sweet Smell” said April.

Caterpie smelled the smell and didn’t movie

“Use Tackle” said April.

“Caterpie, doge it” said Maya,

Bellossom attack hit. Caterpie could still battle.

Caterpie use string shot!” said Maya.

Caterpie’s attack hit Bellosom was like a mummy. April turned up her power for bit so that Bellosom could break though. She turned down the power again.

“Bellosom use poison powder!” said April.

“Caterpie, dodge and use tackle.” said Maya.

Caterpie dodged the attack. It hit Bellosom.

“Bellosom use Solar Beam!” said April.

Bellosom’s attack hit and April won.

“Caterpie is knocked out April is the winner!” said Maddie.

“Sorry” said April.

“That’s okay,” said Maya.

“How nice” said Mina.

Maya’s Caterpie began to glow.

“Oh wow” said Maddie.

Caterpie evolved into Medapod.

“All right” said Maya.

“That’s so cool” said Maggie.

Just then April’s Egg began to glow.

“April, your egg is hatching.” said Mina.

“Really can you help me” said April.

“Okay, first carefully take out of the case.

“Okay” said April.

“I have this.” said Mina taking out a piece of fabric.

April carefully put it in to the fabric.

And so the waited for them it to hatch, so they began to talk.

“Mina I was wondering what happens to the eggs that hatch before they are bought” said Maddie.

“We keep the Pokemon, so that they can be happy and make friends with the other Pokemon. Half the eggs are raised from the eggs laded from out Pokemon, the other half are sent form the different Pokemon leagues in case the Pokemon the are laying are not the Pokemon they want” said Mina.

“What?” said Megan.

“See all the different leagues have special Pokemon mating spots, sometimes they find Pokemon eggs that are not of the Pokemon for begging trainers” said Mina

“Like for this league, Treeko, Torchic and Mudkip” said Maggie.

“Oh I get it” said April.

“Usually the eggs we get from the Pokemon Leagues are grass, water and fire types” said Mina, “We have every type of Pokemon, well not all but most Pokemon from ghost to psychic, from dark to steel we have every single type”

“Cool” said Kia.

Suddenly the egg changes shape.

“What happening?” said Deborah.

“Its hatching” said Maggie.

It stopped glowing. And it complies hatched into a Roseila.

“Oh my goodness, it you!” said Roseila jumping onto April.

“Looks like it found out” said Mina.

“Grass Angel saw me hatch. I’m so happy” said Roseila.

“I’m glade your happy” said April.

“Uhhh… who is April talking to?” said Maya.

“She can understand all grass types” said Maddie.

“I wish some one can translate my Pokemon” said Maya.

“I can do it, Vulpix only though” said Deborah.

“Okay that’s fine” said Maya, “Come on out Vulpix”

Vulpix came out its pokeball.

“Oh finally! You finally join April. I know how bad it hurt you to make fun of her and you are best friends. I’m happy you finally are going to travel with her” said Vulpix.

“Well what did it say?” said Maya and Deborah translated.

“Oh you knew I felt how sweet” said Maya.

“Oh, Grass Angel, will you be my mommy” said Roseila.

“Okay” said April.

Later at dinner, Mina noticed that Anne seemed really happy.

“Oh so you kissed” said Mina.

“Well…” said Anne.

“You didn’t you” said April.

Anne began to blush.

“I guess your lucky Megan didn’t follow you, she would have made a rude remark” said Deborah.

“Hey!” said Megan.

Everyone began to laugh.

“To bad he’s going away tomorrow,” said Anne.

“Too bad, maybe you will meet later” said Mina.

“We already thought ahead” said Anne.
Later they were in her rooms again.

“Love, I envy her” said April.

“I know first Beth and now Anne” said Maggie.

“So maybe we will get boyfriends too” said Mina who began to blush.

“What’s with her?’ said Maya.

“She likes a boy from her home town, named Matt.” said April.

“You’ll meet him when we go to Manla Town.” said Maggie.

“So Mina are you going to tell your parents?” said Maya.

"Yes, we’re heading to Manla town soon any ways" said Mina.

“I heard that there was going to be a there festival soon” said Maya.

“So you want to go?” said April.

“Of course” said Maya.

The next day Jimmy left and Anne went to go say bye to him. He was leaving on a boat.

“If you can, come to the Manla Festival, okay” said Anne.

“I’ll try” said Jimmy, and he left on a boat.

As she watched the boat leave she sighed.

She walked around town when suddenly she felt something touch her leg and felt weak. She looked behind her and saw an orange rope.

“Oh no!” said Anne.

“That’s right it me” said J-Lo

“And me too” said Jonathan who was extremely depressed.

“Oh Jenny from the Block and Jonathan” said Anne.

“That’s no longer my name, its J-Lo now” said J-Lo.

“But that’s even worse” said Anne to herself.

“Thanks a lot” said Jonathan.

“What?” said Anne.

“Because you didn’t join back up I was demoted” said Jonathan.

“And assigned to work with J-Lo, why didn’t you quit” said Anne knowing that any member of Team Aqua would rather quit then work with J-Lo.

“He wouldn’t quit, when I’m his partner” said J-Lo

“Oh I see, you have a thing for” said Anne.

“Any ways, you have no family your parents are probably dead, ether you join up again or we take you by force” said J-Lo.

“You didn’t hear Mina's speech correctly didn’t you.” said Anne.

Meanwhile, April, Maya, Mina, Maddie and Deborah were eating ice cream and walking not too far away. Mina began to sense something.

“I think Anne's in trouble." said Mina

Sneasel came out it Pokeball.

"That's right" said Sneasel.

“So do you think Team Aqua is involved” said April.

“I think so” said Maddie.

“Come on lets transform” said Mina.

They transformed.

“Wow” said Maya.

“Okay, can I borrow Vulpix?” said Deborah.

“Right” said Maya.

Everyone let out their Pokemon.

All the Pokemon Angels and their Pokemon surrounded J-Lo and Jonathan.

“Guys” said Anne.

“To trick someone is not right, I will root you out.” said April scolding them.

“How dare you do, my fire will burn you!” said Deborah scolding them.

“To use one’s loneness for your proposes, the Dragon will show you her rage” said Maddie scolding them.

“To think someone’s family is nonexistent is not right I will freeze your power” said Mina scolding them.

“So I see one of those 4 Pokemon Angels is your relatives. Which one, Maddie is famous, so I doubt it” said J-Lo.

“Did you just refer to me by my given name?” said Maddie.

“Yes I did, in fact I know I’m after you but can I have your autograph?” said J-Lo.

Everyone stared at J-Lo.

“Just admit it, you have a thing for her” said Anne.

“I don’t know what you’re talking about” said Jonathan.

Sneasel cut the rope. Both Crawdaunt and Umbreon came out of its pokeballs. All three began to glow. And Anne transformed.

“No way” said Mina.

“Now leave, I can use my power attack” said Anne.

“Let’s go, Anne, may be the most dangerous Pokemon Angel of them all” said Jonathan.

“But I want my autograph” said J-Lo.

“Come on lets go” said Jonathan holding J-Lo’s arm.

Both ran away.

“Looks like he likes her” said Anne who detransformed.

"Why are you better?" said Mina.

"I don't know" said Anne.

Later in the Pokemon center Kia was thinking.

“I got it, because Anne can use her power attacks, all Dark Pokemon lend her their power which counterattacks the energy wave” said Kia.

“So we still need to learn our power attacks, other wise we may get captured.” said Maddie.

“Anne is the only who can do so, she’s okay” said Kia.

“She’s lucky” said Megan.

“I calculated whose attack will be strong; Beth is the weakest since we only have two rock Pokemon in entire group. Anne, Mina and Maddie are the follow since our group only have three dragon, dark and ice each, followed by April since we have grass type Pokemon, Deborah is the second strongest with 5 fire Pokemon in our group, it helps that Kia, is a fire type trainer and Megan is the strongest with a total of 6 water Pokemon in out group. If we find Flying, Psychic, Ghost, Poison, Bug and Fighting Angel are awakened soon then our Pokemon will help them.” said Maggie.

“Thanks for those stats” said Mina.

“Let’s just hope they don’t attack soon” said April.

A few days later, April won her contest and every one headed to Manla Town.