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Pokemon Angels (Vol. 3)

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
Pokemon Angels
Vol. 3
By Emma Iveli


Prologue:

Mina Koki is just your average trainer that is until she found she is Ice Angel. One of 17 Pokemon Angels who were reborn to the make sure that the hearts of humans and Pokemon can melt into one to accomplish that they must find the chosen one. Mina has already found half the Pokemon Angels: Beth Tiuion, Rock Breeder who falls in love with every guy she sees AKA Rock Angel, Maddie Ricker, a famous Dragon master AKA Dragon Angel, Anne Mara, a former member of Team Aqua who was being controlled by them as well as Mina’s long lost cousin, AKA Dark Angel, Megan Kathi, a sarcastic Water Trainer, AKA Water Angel, April Tyson, a feminine Grass Coordinator AKA Grass Angel, Deborah Odison, a spiritual Fire Type Trainer and Ronnie Sansom, the heir of the Sansom Fighting Pokemon Dojo, who would rather be a pop idol as well as Beth’s childhood friend AKA Fighting Angel. Joining them on journey are Maggie Macels, a girl with psychic powers and guardian of Ilex Forest, Kia Maxiop, a decedent of Fire Angel and grand daughter of the keeper of the Angel Shrine, a shrine dedicated to the Pokemon Angels, Maya Kiki April’s former rival and best friend and Missy Jiku former Team Magma member who was after them however due to some issues she had she wanted to quit. Sometimes they are joined by Peter, Mina’s rival and Anne and Maggie’s cousin, Matt Cox, Mina’s crush and Ash and his companions May, Brock and Max. They three members of Team Aqua, Jonathan the member who singed up Anne and controlled her, “J-Lo” a Jennifer Lopez fan and Lily Milo, Anne’s “Rival” at Team Aqua. And Team Magma who has recently sent a new agent Charles Stigginmob to get them. Now they continue their journey finding the other Pokemon Angels.
 

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
Chapter 1: Is Steel Angel a Boy?!

Mina and the rest were running from a lot of Magnemite for they have entered the Valley of Steel which was bad mistake as all the Pokemon are very territorial. One of the, said it might be a great place for training but it was an extremely bad idea to begin with.

“Um… hasn’t anyone thought releasing out Fire Pokemon?” said Maggie.

“…” said Deborah, Kia, and Maya.

“You hadn’t?” said April.

“How are we when we are running like crazy!” said Maya.

“Vulpix I choose you!” said Maya.

“Everyone come on out!” said Kia.

“I choose everyone!” said Deborah.

“Go Salamence!” said Maddie.

“Hitmonchan come on out!” said Ronnie.

“I choose you Gyarados!” said Megan.

“Salamence!” said Maddie.

“Gyarados!” said Megan.

“Use your Flamethrower!” said Megan and Maddie.

Both Pokemon used the attack and is hit some of the Magnemite.

“Hitmonchan! Use your Fire Punch!” said Ronnie.

Hitmonchan used Fire Punch on the rest all of them floated away.

“You guys had Pokemon that knew fire attacks?” said Mina.

“…” said Maddie, Megan and Ronnie.

“At least they are gone, whose idea was to come here any ways?” said Mina.

Everyone began to stare at Megan.

“Was it a bad move?” said Megan.
“Of course it was” yelled everyone else.

“Well all we can do is have out all our fire Pokemon out and wade it out” said Mina.

Laugh began to be heard though out the valley.

“You guys are pathetic, you can’t even think you call out fire Pokemon” said a voice.

They looked up and saw a boy wearing a blue baseball cap and emerald green eyes on al edge of the cliff he had a Beldum over his shoulder and looked pretty young, about Peter’s age.

“What?!” said Kia.

He jumped on from the ledge and said “The name is Sammy, Steel Trainer. Hey if you want to get out I’ll help”

“Let me guess your looking to catch a Pokemon, right?” said Maddie.

“That’s right, after teaching my Mawile Fire Blast and Flamethrower” said Sammy spinning a pokeball on his finger.

“Oh, so how many are you going to catch?” said Kia.

“Well just one, since it is dangerous here” he said, “I’ll help you guys out, and maybe you should have about three Pokemon out, this way if one gets injured you can switch out if need and you have lot of Pokemon that know fire attacks” said Sammy.

“That’s a good idea” said Deborah.

Megan retuned Gyarados, Ronnie returned Hitmonchan, Deborah returned all her Pokemon except for Ninetales and Kia returned all her Pokemon except for Houndour.

“Wait is it a good idea to listen to him?” whispered Missy to Deborah.

“He’s a normal person and unless whether Team tries to catch us then we should pretend we are normal trainers” said Deborah.

“Makes sense” said Missy.

Just then the Pokemon Angels got a feeling from Sammy.

“Excuse us for a minute” said Mina.

All 8 went to private place.
“What’s with them” said Sammy.

“You don’t want to know” said Missy.

“I don’t even want to know” said Maya.

With the Pokemon Angels they were discussing about the feeling they got from Sammy.

“What was that feeling I had?” said Ronnie.

“It was a sign that we found a Pokemon Angel probably Steel Angel but…” said Mina

“Sammy is clearly is a guy, he can’t be a Pokemon Angel.” said Megan.

“And what’s worse is that none of use have any Steel Pokemon” said Anne.

Mina began to giggle.

“Mina what’s so funny?” said April.

“Well one of two sonaireos might happen if Sammy.” said Mina.

“What?” said Maddie.

“Well first off it might be like the Starlights girl when transformed, boy the rest of the time” said Mina.

“That’s pretty gross” said Anne.

“The other?” said Megan.

“Well is the other thing is that Sammy is a cross dresser.” said Mina.

“Oh come on, like that’s true” said Megan.

“Wanna make a bet?” said Mina.

“Sure thing, if Sammy is a boy and not Steel Angel, you have to eat my cooking” said Megan.

“And if Sammy is a cross dresser and Steel Angel you have dress up as an anime character of my choice and do karaoke from that anime?” said Mina.

“What if Sammy is guy and he’s Steel Angel?” said Anne.

“Or just a cross dresser?” said Ronnie.
Both thought about it for a few minutes.

“Nothing…” said both.

They got back to the rest of group. Both Mina and Megan had big smiles on their faces.

“Sammy, we would like you join out group” said Mina.

“That’s right so I can prove something Mina” said Megan.

Sammy was extremely confused.

“Fine then. Let’s continue.” said Sammy.

And so the counted after the long introductions, the most they ever saw were Magnemite and a few Magneton. But the Pokemon continued to protect them. Then a Skarmory appeared.

“All right that’s a Pokemon I’d like!” said Sammy.

He took out his Pokeball and yelled “Mawile I choose you!”

The Pokemon was ready for battle.

“Mawile, use Thunderpunch!” said Sammy.

Mawile jumped up into the air and used the attack on the Skarmory. The Skarmory couldn’t move.

“Now use Flamethrower!” said Sammy.

Mawile used the attack and the Skarmory fell to the ground.

Sammy took out a Pokeball.

“Pokeball, Go!” said Sammy.

The indicator light flash, the ball stopped moving and the light turned off. Sammy picked up the Pokeball, did the V is for Victory sign and said “All right, I caught a Skarmory!”

“That’s so cool!” said Mina.

“I have seen a Pokemon caught like than since…” said Megan but her mouth was covered so she could finish by Maddie.
“We can blab until they attack” said Maddie.

“What’s that about?” said Sammy.

“You don’t want to know” said Mina.

Meanwhile nearby, Jonathan, J-Lo and Lily were discussing about a new plan.

“Okay so we lay these special rope traps.” said Jonathan.

“That’s lame though” said Lily.

“She’s right” said J-Lo.

“Well I’m running out of ideas” said Jonathan.

“And taking ideas from Team Rocket?” said Lily.

“Yes” said Jonathan sulking running his finger on the ground in a back and forth manner.

“According to this, these ropes can withstand all 8 types of attack that Pokemon Angel can deal” said J-Lo.

“Maybe we should attach them to a giant robot even though Ice Angel will want destroy it” said Lily.

“That may one of the best ideas” said J-Lo, “Hey are going to use that plan”

“Fine!” said Jonathan still depressed.

“He’s been like that for a while” said J-Lo.

“Yeah and I don’t know why.” said Lily.

Back with Mina and the others they counted to fight Pokemon after Pokemon.

“Wow and your Pokemon are not even getting tired” said Sammy.

The ground began to shake.

“Must be the Steelix that lives here” said Sammy.

A giant robot appeared that was shaped like Crawdaunt.

“Great it’s Team Aqua” said Missy.
“All right, if he is a she and Steel Angel I’ll win” said Mina to herself.

“All right he’s not Steel Angel I win” said Megan to herself.
The Crawdaunt robot stop ropes at Anne and Beth. And then reeled them in closer to the robot.

“What is this thing?” said Beth.

“Ropes that resist Ice, Dragon, Rock, Grass, Water, Fighting, Fire and Dark attacks” said Lily.

“Sounds like something that Team Rocket would use to catch Pikachu” said Anne.

“Well we tried to come up with a better idea” said Jonathan.

He began to get even more depressed.

“Great…” said J-Lo.

“Let’s grab the rest” said Lily.

The robot shot the ropes one by one.

“Mina what the heck is going on?” said Sammy walking up to Mina who still wasn’t tied up.

“Time for your turn Ice Angel” said Lily.

“Ice Angel? As in the Pokemon Angels?” said Sammy.

Mina transformed just as when the rope was about to hit her, she grabbed Sammy since he was in the way. They were going high up into the air.

“That was close” said Sammy.

Sammy’s hat fell off to revel that he had long lavender hair. Mina was somewhat surprised.

“Sammy is you a girl?” said Mina.

“Did I say other wise?” said Sammy.

“So you are a girl.” said Mina.

“You thought I was boy, it figures everyone thinks I’m a boy” said Sammy.
“I hope it a draw” said Megan tied to the robot.
Both Mina and Sammy got to the ground.

“I have a strange feeling about this” said Sammy.
She closed eyes, her hair turned silver, her clothes changed to beautiful robes and she grew wings that matched her hair. Sammy was indeed Steel Angel.

“Damn it! Mina was right!” said Megan.

“Trying to steal the others is not right! I’ll use my metal to cut you down to size!” said Sammy scolding them.

Sammy flew up to Megan.

“Metal Craw!” said Sammy. Her finger nails began to glow she use them, to cut the ropes.

“Why am I thinking of Iron Reaver Soul Steal?” said Missy.

“It looks just like it” said Mina.

“Steel Wing!” said Sammy.

Her wings began to glow and she cut the ropes that tied Anne, Maddie and Ronnie.

“Iron Tail!” said Sammy.

“Iron Tail? But we don’t have tails” said Mina.

A bendable shaft of light appeared at the bottom Sammy’s back. She used it to cut the rest of the ropes.

“Pretty cool!” said Maggie.

“Great…” said Jonathan.

Mina took out her wand.

“Lovely Ice Snow Storm!” said Mina doing her wand attack.

The robot flew away.

Both Mina and Sammy detransformed. Sammy sat down for a rest.

“Well Sammy, you did a great job” said Beldum to Sammy.

“Thanks” said Sammy not noticing that Beldum talked.

“3, 2, 1” said Megan counting down to when Sammy would notice that she can understand Beldum.
“Why is Beldum talking to me” said Sammy.

“You can under all Steel Pokemon, oh and here’s your hat.” said Missy.

“Thank, wow that’s so cool” said Sammy putting her hair up and putting her hat back on.

“Megan, when we back you better not welch on our bet” said Mina.

“So Sammy why did you tell us you a girl?” said Maddie.

“Sorry, I wasn’t going to say anything until someone called me a he” said Sammy.

“I’m pretty sure the Narrator did” said Missy.

“What?” said Sammy.

“Nothing” said Missy.

They continued on their out. After they made it out, Mina made Megan put on a Sailor Uranus costume and sing La Solder.

“Why did I have to say anything?” said Megan.
 

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
Chapter 2: Sammy gets a Crush

About two weeks after Sammy joined Mina sang happily one Sunday morning in a forest while Sammy was extremely tired. The reason: Inu-Yasha had started up again on Saturdays one 11:00 PM three weeks before.

“I’ve been lost and low since you let me go…” sang Mina.

“Why is she so happy, I’m extremely tired, why does she stay so late on Saturdays?” said Sammy.

“Well one thing she that she’s used to it” said Missy.

Megan stopped for a second se sensed something.

“Hey can we stop to get some more Pepto-Bismol?” said Megan.

“Did you eat your own cooking?” said Sammy.

Beth figured out what she meant so she Megan in the head with a big paper fan.

“Hey quit saying those kinds of things” said Beth.

“Hey you sense a couple fire Pokemon and I know who they are” said Deborah.

“Same thing with some grass Pokemon” said April.

“Chances are that they will find us.” said Mina.

“Who are they?” said Sammy.

Nearby Ash and his group were lost.

“Why are always lost?” said May.

Suddenly, Ash’s Grovyle, Corpfish and Torkoal, May’s Bulbasaur and Combusken and all three of Brock’s Pokemon came out their Pokeballs and began to run the Pokemon Angels direction.

“What’s going on with them?” said Max.

“I bet I know” said Brock.

He began to run in the direction.

“Should we follow him?” said Ash.
“Pikachu” said Pikachu.

“Yeah” said Max.

All of them went into the direction.

Mina and the rest saw all the Pokemon.

“Where did those Pokemon come from?” said Sammy.

“Oh they belong to friends of ours” said Mina.

All of the Pokemon got there.

“Hey Ronnie, Deborah! I evolved!” said Combusken.

“That’s so cool” said Ronnie.

“Yeah it is” said Deborah.

Brock’s Forretress came up to Sammy.

“I’m so happy I get to meet you Steel Angel” said Forretress.

“Uh… thanks” said Sammy.

“Beth!” yelled Brock.

Beth ran over to Brock and they began to hug.

“She has a boyfriend? Did she fall for like 5 guys at the Pokemon center” said Sammy.

“Yeah, it is creepy” said Megan.

Mina saw Ash, Pikachu, May and Max running towards them.

“Hey guys” said Mina.

“Oh hi Mina, how have things been going?” said Ash.

“Fine, I have great news for you” said Mina.

Sammy saw Ash, and began to blush.

“He’s cute” she said.

She besides Mina and introduced her self to Ash.

“Hi my name is Sammy Bangle pleased to meet you!” said Sammy.

“This is Sammy, she’s Steel Angel.” said Mina.

“So tat explains why Fortress ran over her.” said Max.

“How can a boy be a Pokemon Angel?” said May.

“Oh I should tell you my real name, it Samantha” said Sammy removing her hat reveling her long hair.

“Yeah, Sammy’s a tomboyish cross dresser!” said Megan.

Sammy hit Megan in the head with a big paper fan.

“What was that for?” said Megan.

“No reason.” said Sammy blushing.

May seemed to notice that Sammy was blushing.

“You have a crush don’t you” said May.

“I do not!” said Sammy.

“Who do you have a crush on?” said Ash.

“How dense can he be?” said Mina to herself.

“This ought to be interesting, I’ve never seen Sammy have a crush, it should be funny to see act girly for a change” said Beldum who has a tendency like Pikachu to hang out, outside its Pokeball.

Sammy shot a glare at Beldum, Beldum began to feel scared.

“I didn’t mean it, I was joking” said Beldum.

“What did Beldum say?” said May.

“Nothing!” said Sammy.

Maggie cleared her throat, “I have an idea how about having Brunch! I’ll cook!”

“Great idea” said Mina.
And so Maggie made brunch, she made a buffet with the help of Celebi. Meanwhile n a Team Magma base Charles watched the monitor.

“Now that they lights only works on only two of them we have devolved a new, we altered the way the energy wave works. Not only does it weaken them but it uses their weakness. Each one is now fueled by that Angels weakness for example: Ice Angel’s would be made up of Fire, Fighting, Rock and Steel. Fire Angel’s would be be Water, Ground and Rock, Dragon Angel’s would be made of Ice and Dragon you get the idea. We deiced to make the ropes again since it would the easiest to use, we can make as much rope as we want no matter what however if the 9th Pokemon Angel appears then we have to wait for a bit about a week to develop the new rope” said a Team Magma scientist.

“That is fine, I doubt the 9th Pokemon Angel won’t be found for quite a while” said Charles.

Back with the Groups they were eating brunch.

“Isn’t it a little too much?” said Max.

“I do admit it’s a little over board but we’ll probably eat the leftovers for a quite a while” said Maggie.

“And when it spoils I can feed it Peter” said Mina who then did an evil laugh.

“I think you went a little over board with that laugh” said Maggie.

Sammy looked at Ash while blushing; she barley even took a bite.

Maya waved her hand over her face.

“Hello then there?” said Maya.

Maya decided to take a pieced of shrimp from Sammy’s plate.

“That’s my shrimp” said Sammy coming out her Ash loving daze.

“At least you went out of it, I think maybe you should not try to come forward with your feelings for a couple years maybe you might find the guy.” said Maya.

“Why he’s perfect” said Sammy.

“But he’s dense as can be.” said Maya.

“Maya’s right, he didn’t even get why I was heartbroken once” said Mina.

“And there are many other times when he didn’t get it” said May
“But he’s perfect” said Sammy.

All three of the girls who tried to talk her out it, all stared at her.

“She’s completely out of it” said Maya to herself.

“I just wish she sees him when he sees some in love” said May to herself.

“I wonder what she’s do when she finds out that he accedently destroys the bikes of the girls who travels with him” said Mina herself.

Meanwhile Team Rocket was in their Meowth shaped balloon. Watching Ash so they can steal Pikachu.

“Great the Pokemon Angels are there again” said Jessie.

“Why don’t we just grab Pikachu and run as a fast as we can” said Meowth.

“Wobbufet!” said Wobbufet coming out it’s Pokeball.

“That’s a great idea” said Jessie.

Not too long later a metal hand grabbed Pikachu off of his shoulders. It was Team Rocket in their balloon, Jessie dressed as Grass Angel and James dressed as Ice Angel

“Prepare for a trouble because we’re dressed like you”
“And make it double because you ought to”
“To protect the world from devastation”
“To untie all people within out our nation”
“To denounce the evils of truth and love!”
“To extend out reach to the stars above!
“Jessie!”
“James!”
“Team Rocket! Blasting off at the speed of light!”
“Surrender now or prepare to fight!”
“Meowth that right!”
“Wobbufet!”

“Oh god! That’s 10 times worse than Man Mercury!” yelled Mina, referring to the time James was dressed like Sailor Mercury.

“Hey I put a lot of time into my costume!” said James.

“Well I guess, its worse since he’s dressed like you, hey I was wondering where did you the ideas to dress up like Ryoko and Sailor Mercury that time?” said Missy.
“Well the twerp was taken by Team Magma we had to read something so we read some of Ice Angel’s comics.” said Jessie

Both ripped off their costumes and the balloon began to leave.

“You no you don’t! Go Skarmory!” said Sammy, “Get Pikachu and pop that balloon!”

Skarmory freed Pikachu and used Wing Attack to pop the balloon. It went blasting off.

“Team Rocket’s blasting off way too soon!”

Skarmory flew down, Pikachu went over to Ash.

“Thanks Sammy” said Ash.

“No problem” said Sammy blushing.

“Even if you did rescue Pikachu, he’s still not to notice you” said Beldum.

Sammy began to glare at Beldum.

“I was kidding! Kidding!” said Beldum.

“Looks like Beldum is making comments that Megan would make” said Ronnie.

“Looks like it” said Maggie.

A rope that was light blue and purple was wrapped around her.

“What is this?” said Ronnie who began to feel weak.

Ropes began to be tied around all of the other Pokemon Angels except for Sammy, the one that tied Mina was red, light brown, grey and silver, the one that tied Deborah was blue, brown and grey, the one that tied Maddie was sky blue and orange, the one that tied April was red, sky blue, bright pink, light blue and bright green, the one that tied Megan was yellow and blue, the one that tied Beth was blue, green, light brown, brown and silver and the one that tied Anne was light brown and bright green. All of them began to lose their strength. Charles laugh could be heard thought out the forest.

“Charles!” said Missy.

“Remember the old ropes these are much stronger then them and can’t counter by any power unless the power is from another Pokemon Angel like you’d find one right now!” said Charles.

“Well you’re not up with the times!” said Sammy.
She transformed in her Angel form.

“Aw &@#$!” yelled Charles.

“Heh Heh. He said &@#$” said Beldum.

“So did you” said Sammy.

“No I didn’t” said Beldum.

“Any ways, how dare you do this to my friends my metal cut you down to size!” said Sammy.

“Well you7 can’t find me!” said Charles.

“Skarmory, tackle that tree!” said Sammy.

Charles fell out the tree that Skarmory hit, he also had a megaphone with him.

“He should have thought of a better place to hide” said Maya.

“You can’t find I’m not really here!” said Charles.

“He’s a bad liar always has been like that time in the bathroom…” said Missy.

“That wasn’t mine, I was holding it for a friend!” said Charles.

“See I told you” said Missy.

“He’s kind of pathetic isn’t he?” said Sammy.

“Not at all he’s a little in between Jessie and James and someone else from Team Magma I can’t think of” said Missy.

“I still win any ways” said Charles.

“He’s only bad when he begins to panic…” said Missy.

“Well he is panicking” said May.

“Well you forgot I’m here!” said Sammy.

She went over Mina who was tied up and unconscious.

“Iron Reaver Soul Stealer!” said Sammy trying to Metal Craw but stopped when she realized that she got the name wrong.
“Wait that’s Inu-Yasha’s attack, thanks a lot Missy it’s because of you I listened to too much Inu-Yasha!” said Sammy.

“Sorry” said Missy.

Sammy’s Mawile and all 4 Steel Pokemon began to glow silver.

“All right, the Steel Silver Shower! Sammy’s power attack” said Kia.

“Okay” said Sammy, began to twirl around “Steel Silver Shower!” she said as various sharp items. One hit May.

“That didn’t hurt” said May.

“Much like the Ability Rough Skin, it only hurt people she dislikes” said Kia.

“And you never believed the legend” said Max.

Kia began to giggle nervously since he hit a sore spot.

The sharp objects cut all the ropes and injured Charles.

“I’ll be back” yelled Charles who ran away.

Sammy detransformed and did the V is victory sign.

“How was that? I can so that any time I want!” she said.

“Not exactly, you need to absorb that energy and hold it in for a week, and then you’d be able to use3 over and over again” said Kia.

“Oh…” said Sammy.

“Dofus” said Beldum.

Sammy began to glare at her Pokemon.

“I was kidding! Kidding!” said Beldum.

“We should wait ‘till the others wake up and discus what happened, after Ash is the chosen one” said Maggie.

“What Ash is the chosen one?” said Sammy getting very excited, “That is so cool!”

“Great Maggie, now she’s going to like him even more” whispered Maya to her.

“I didn’t think that was a problem.” said Maggie.
“Even he doesn’t notice me I’ll get him” said Sammy to herself.

Not too long later at a Team Magma base Charles covered in band aids told the Team Magma scientist about what happened.

“Well what were the chances that they would find Steel Angel so soon, I’ll make her rope but it will take a week” said the Scientist.

“Thanks” said Charles.

He left the lab.

“So big brother, you can’t seem to get it stair with them. You panic too easily and every since that timer with the…” said a young girl about Missy’s age.

“I said I was holding it a friend!” said Charles.

“Well anyways with Missy around they will know you weakness maybe next time they might throw snacks” said the girl.

“I said I was holding it for a friend!” said Charles.

“Anyways my point is that I would like to help you, after all you are my older brother, I asked dad, but I’m going to do the opposite of he said and help you .

“He said no? I thought he wanted Team Magma to succeed something like that” said the girl.

“Something like that, any ways Charles I think I can help you with my problem if you can with mine” said the girl.

“You mean that you wet the bed” said Charles.

“I don’t!” screamed the girl, she coughed and said “Agreed, we will get them”

“Okay Dianna” said Charles.

Meanwhile everyone had woken up and they were discussing what would happen.

“So these new ropes are unaffected by the Power Attacks and the Wands” said Kia.

“That’s bad, very bad” said Mina.

“So are we going to do?” said April.

“I don’t know but probably try to dodge and destroy the ropes that tie up the others, for now it’s the best was after all the ropes can only affect the one it is meant for.” said Anne.

“Anyways, I think the two groups should part.” Said Mina, “After all Ash still has a gym battle”

“And you have nothing” said Megan.

Meghan hit her in the head with a big paper fan.

“Oh Brock!” said Beth.

“Oh Beth!” said Brock.

Max began to tug on Brock’s ear and Ronnie pulled Beth by her arm.

“Bye you guys” said Mina and the groups parted.

With Ash’s group they talked about Sammy.

“Sammy sure was nice, even before she knew I was the chosen one” said Ash.

“Well yeah she likes you” said May.

“Really of course of them like me.” said Ash.

May just stared at him, since he doesn’t get it.

Back with Mina’s group Sammy was putting her hat back one.

“Hey did that girl go?” said Beldum.

Sammy shot a glare at her Pokemon.

“I was kidding! Kidding!” said Beldum.

“Well I’m going to get Ash top notice me!” said Sammy.

“…” said everyone else.

“What is it?” said Sammy.

“Nothing” said Mina.

“Okay then” said Sammy.

“Its going to be like trying to teach Akane to cook, its just going to end in disaster” said Mina to herself.
 

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
Chapter 3: How Jonathan got his Groove Back

Both Lily and J-Lo staked out the Pokemon Angels while Jonathan in his underwear rocked back and forth, signing “ring around the roses” while holding a can of beans.

“Okay that has to stop!” said Lily.

“I can’t I’m a mess! I used to be someone…” said Jonathan.

“He’s gotten too depressed, what we are going to do?” said J-Lo.

Lily took out an interdemontionel boom box, she turned it on and it began to play Eye of the Tiger.

“Let this song, flow though you and lead to victory.” said Lily.

“Oh come on it’s the new millennium like that song would work now days” said J-Lo.

“Well how do we get him out of his little depression period?” said Lily.

“I know, Jonathan. You haven’t used you Hypno in while try using it” said J-Lo.

“It has not effect on the Pokemon Angels why should we try it?” said Jonathan.

“I didn’t say we should use it one the Pokemon Angels, just their little friends!” said J-Lo.

“J-Lo, that’s a brilliant idea!” said Jonathan.

“Let’s get the creepy psychic girl!” said Lily.

“No, we’ll need some sort of Power Amplifying Device to control her” said Jonathan.

“Let’s get the other girl!” said J-Lo.

“The other girl?” said Jonathan and Lily.

They thought for a moment.

“Oh she’s that girl with the long dark brown hair in a pony tail, the girl who trains fire Pokemon right?” said Lily.

“No, the Fire Angel’s descendant” said J-Lo.

“Oh she’s the girl with orange hair and likes anime” said Jonathan.

“No that’s the former Team Magma member” said J-Lo.

“Oh she’s the girl with purple wavy hair and glasses” said Lily.

“No that was a disguise that the former Team Magma member wore so that she ashamed her sister who also wanted out of Team Magma but didn’t know that her sister wore a disguise.” said J-Lo.

“Who else is there?” said Lily.

“The girl with pig and buns, the coordinator” said J-Lo.

“Oh yeah, that girl” said Jonathan, “We do it right now!”

He got up while his teammates stared at him. He didn’t know why until Lily pointed out “Maybe you should get dress first”

He noticed he was still only his underwear.

“I just noticed, but isn’t he wearing Jigglypuff undies?” said J-Lo laughing.

“I’ll get dressed right now!” said Jonathan who was embarrassed.

Meanwhile the group was waiting for someone by a large tree.

“I wonder when they get here?” said Missy.

“Who are we waiting for again?” said Sammy.

“Well…” said Mina.

“Wassup!” yelled Peter who showed up right behind Mina.

Mina jumped in surprise; after she took a moment she yelled “Sit!” and whacked peter in head with her mallet.

“Certainly not him that for sure” said Mina.

“You know him?” said Sammy.

“He’s Peter, Mina’s rival and Anne and Maggie’s cousin” said Maya.

“Wait, I thought Anne is Mina’s cousin.” said Sammy.

“Okay I’ll explain, Mina’s mother sister and Peter’s mother’s brother are married. Peter’s father’s brother married Maggie’s mother, get it now?” said Maya.
“Sort of” said Sammy.

“Hey guys!” yelled Matt running up.

“Hi Matt!” said Mina blushing.

“So are you waiting for someone?” said Matt.

“Yes, it’s…” said Mina.

Mina was cut-off by someone yelling “Hey Missy!” It was Chrissie with Larry and Jon.

“Chrissie, how are things?” said Missy.

“Fine, so how are things?” said Chrissie.

“We found Steel Angel” said Missy.

“I heard that you guys found the 9th one but I didn’t know who” said Chrissie.

“This is Sammy.” said Missy.

“Steel Angel’s a boy?” said Chrissie.

“I’m not!” said Sammy.

“He looks like boy to me.” said Peter getting up with a mallet on his head.

“A lot of the time she acts like a boy.” said Beldum.

She shot a glare at Beldum and threw it at Peter. Beldum hit Peter so hard he had a bloody nose.

“That’s for agreeing with him” said Sammy.

“Hey!” said Peter.

“This is the way we milk the cow so early in the morning” said Beldum who was very dizzy.

“I’m a girl!” said Sammy.

“O…k” said Chrissie.

“Oh hey Maya” said Jon.

“Hi” said Maya blushing.
They just stood there for about a minute then Maya coughed.

“Hey, it’s getting late how about I make dinner and we can talk over dinner.” said Maggie.

Mina began top laugh an evil laugh, but Maggie interrupted her by saying “I threw out those leftovers so you can’t poison him, I’m, sorry”

“D’oh!” yelled Mina.

Later after it was got dark, they were discussing about what happened with Team Magma.

“Yeah they already used the weapon against us.” said Mina.

“Well as you it drains your energy by using your weaknesses. Fortney by Sammy’s arrival they won’t attack for a few more days since they need to make a rope to beat her.” said Missy.

“It can be safe to assume that Team Aqua will use the same tactic, so we all have to do is wait.” said Anne.

“Oh shoot we’re running out of fire wood” said Maggie.

“I’ll go get some” said Maya.

She got up and continued into the woods. Jon watched her leave and he began to blush.

“So you like her?” said April.

What no, no I don’t” said Jon.

“Oh come on, by the way you were excited to her I can tell you like her” said Chrissie.

“She’s right” said Larry.

“…” said Jon.

“So you do” said Maddie.

“Well, I don’t if she likes me” he said.

“But you she does” said April.

“But that was years ago, things could have changed” said Jon.

“Who knows, she may still like you” said Mina.

Meanwhile in the woods Maya still searched for fire wood when she heard “Hypno!”

“What was that?” she said.

“Hypno!” said the voice.

She turned around saw Jonathan’s Hypno.

“Oh it’s just a Hypno” said Maya.

Hypno began to hypnotize Maya.

“Everything is going as planed.” said Jonathan.

Not too long later Maya came back without the fire wood.

“Maya where’s the fire wood?” said Maggie.

“I forgot, I’m feeling tired so I’ll go to bed now” said Maya.

She took out her sleep bag and went right to sleep. Deborah began to get a bad feeling.

“What is it Deborah?” said Mina.

“Nothing” said Deborah.

Later while everyone was sleeping Maya got up.

“Who should she attack first?” said Lily up in a tree.

“I know, Grass Angel, after all she’s her best friend” said J-Lo.

“Do it Hypno!” said Jonathan.

Maya went over to April and took a roll of tape. She unrolled some of and began place some on April’s mouth. But April woke up and hit her. April then realized she hit her best friend.

“Maya?” said April.

“Now Grass Angel come with me” said Maya.

“Everyone wake up, something’s wrong with Maya!” yelled April.
Everyone woke up and saw Maya holding the piece of tape.

“How nice that all awake, let me show a lit6tle surprise” said Maya.

She took out a flash light and said “I choose everyone!” All four of her Pokemon came out all but Vulpix was ready for battle.

“Maya please fight him!” said Vulpix.

Deborah didn’t know what Vulpix meant “What happening with Maya?” she said.

“Maya’s being controlled by someone but I don’t know who, Butterfree, Beautifly and Nidoran are being controlled as well” said Vulpix.

Deborah repeated what Vulpix had said. Anne knew who did it.

“Jonathan come on out now! I know you’re the one doing it?” said Anne.

Jonathan, J-Lo and Lily jumped out the trees.

“It figures that you’d find out. After all you know what it feels like to be controlled by me” said Jonathan.

“By using your friend to try to capture you then it be an easy win” said Lily.

“You should use Maya like that” said April.

April began to run towards them when Ronnie stopped her.

“I’ll handle it” said Ronnie.

She ripped off the night gown she was wearing to revile a light ink martial arts uniform underneath.

“So Ronnie does know Martial Arts” said Peter.

“I guess there was no need for to use up ‘till now” said Mina.

“Of course, you can’t be fighting trainer with out know some martial arts.” said Beth.

Ronnie began to run towards Team Aqua, Jonathan let out his Hypno and began to show the flash light on it.

“Hypno use Psychic” said Jonathan.

Hypno unleashed the attack, it hit Ronnie and she went flying.
“Ronnie!” said Beth and she ran over to friend.

“The light can actually make Pokemon attacks able to hit Pokemon Angels.” said Jonathan.

“It true” said Missy, “I guess we forgot to tell you”

“It’s a little too late now!” said Sammy.

“You didn’t even that weapon exist until now, so how can it be too late for you?” said Beldum.

Sammy shot a glare at her Pokemon, “I was kidding! Kidding!” said Beldum.

“Well maybe you should go flying now!” said Jonathan.

“Time for the separation part of the plan?” said Lily.

All three Team Aqua members and Mayas shined the lights on Hypno. Vulpix began to get scared and ran to Deborah.

“Hypno use Hyper Beam!” said Jonathan.

The attack hit the large group and they all went flying.

“They will probably separate and hopefully we’ll be able to find them while they are separated.” said Lily.

“We will win!” said Jonathan.
 

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
Chapter 4: Getting Back Together

The blast separated the groups, Ronnie and Beth were together, Larry, April, Maggie, Maddie and Chrissie were together, Sammy and Missy were together, Anne, Jon, Megan, Kia, Deborah and Matt were together and Mina and Peter were together. Team Aqua and Maya deiced to wait ‘till it was Sun rise to find them.

With Mina and Peter, Mina had just woken up to find that she was in a valley.

“Where am I?” said Mina.

“I don’t know maybe a small valley” said Peter.

Mina turned around and saw Peter was on the ground.

“So where’s is everyone else?” said Mina.

“I don’t know, when I woke up you were the only here!” said Peter.

“Then let’s leave!” said Mina.

“I’d love to but can’t!” said Peter, his leg was bleeding very badly.

“Ow…” said Mina.

“Well it must be nice being a Pokemon Angel, your barley have a scratch on you” said Peter.

“Look we have to think of something.” said Mina.

With Anne’s group Jon was angry, extremely angry. So much he punched a tree in half.

“I can’t believe they did that to Maya!” he yelled.

“Clam down okay, I know what they was terrible, but what they did to me was worse, still we have to get Maya back no matter what” said Anne.

“Anne’s right, so what are we going to do?” said Kia.

“I have a plan, we break into 3 groups, Deborah and Kia is one, me and Anne the second and Jon and Megan is the third. If you find someone, the place we will meet is the big tree that you were waiting at” said Matt.

“That sounds like a good idea.” said Megan.

“Be careful what you do around Megan she might make a rude comment” said Anne.
Megan began to glare at her.

“Hey Matt did Peter catch any new Pokemon recently in the 9 types that we have? It may help incase he sounds out his Pokemon” said Kia.

“He did catch an Aron. It might be used” said Matt.

“That’s good.” said Deborah.

“Let’s go look!” said Megan.

The three groups separated to look for the others.

With Beth and Ronnie, Ronnie was still hurt from the Hypno attack.

“Can you walk?” said Beth.

“I think so” said Ronnie.

Ronnie got up, but collapsed from the pain.

“Here use me as a crutch I’ll help you walk.” said Beth.

“Thanks” said Ronnie.

They began to search for the others.

With April’s group they talked about what to do.

“Okay so we’ll search in the sky for the others, using out Dragon Pokemon” said Maddie.

“Good idea” said Maggie.

“So April you’ll take Salamence by yourself, Chrissie you’ll come with me on Dragonair.” said Maddie.

“And Larry can come with me on Flygon” said Maggie.

Both let out their Pokemon and began to search by the sky.

With Sammy and Missy they called out everyone’s names.

“Mina!” said Missy.

“Maggie!” said Sammy.

“No use we’ll have, go find them” said Missy.

“But I’m still the newbie, I can’t even use my Power Attack” said Sammy.

“Don’t worry thing will turn out all right” said Missy.

“Okay!” said Sammy.

“Unless one of their Pokemon knows fire attack then we are in deep trouble” said Beldum.

“Well who asked you!” yelled Sammy.

“Just ignore it, even though right now no else can understand it” said Missy.

They began to search for the others. Back with Mina and Peter she noticed his leg would stop bleeding.

“Let me see your leg!” said Mina.

“No way! You’ll probably injure it more” said Peter.

“If I do then Maggie will fix ‘till then I have to do it” said Mina.

Mina tore off her sleeve and tied it around his leg.

“SO how are going to find the others.” said Peter.

“We use our Pokemon of course not all of them just those who’d be useful” said Mina.

“Like who?” said Peter.

“Some on out Sneasel, Spheal!” said Mina.

She wrote two notes, she gave one to Sneasel and one to Spheal.

“Okay Sneasel try to find Anne and Spheal find Megan. If you find someone else except for Maya and Team Aqua give them the note.” said Mina.

Both headed up the cliff, Mina turned around and said “Well aren’t you going to send out Magby?”

“Oh right, Magby I choose you!” said Peter.

Peter gave the same intrusions as Mina, Magby climbed the wall as well.

“So do you have any Rock, Steel, Grass, Dragon or Fighting types that I don’t know about” said Mina.

“I just caught an Aron” said Peter.

“That’s perfect, except it need different instructions” said Mina.

Mina wrote another note. And Peter told Aron to find just Steel or Rock Angel. Aron went up the cliff.

“Wow, your pretty good that this, I bet this isn’t the first time you were separated from the group.” said Peter.

“It is” said Mina, “Why did you have to be with me?” said Mina.

“Got a problem with it?” said Peter.

Mina began to laugh, “Well sometimes your okay like now, so it all right” she said.

Peter began to blush, so did Mina. Back with Sammy and Missy they saw an Aron, it was Peter’s.

“An Aron, awesome, I should catch it. I always wanted one!” said Sammy.

“Wait, I have a trainer and he’s in danger, he asked me to find you or Rock Angel. I have note written by a blonde girl’s he with” said Aron.

Sammy read the note “Hey it’s Mina, I’m stuck in a valley with Peter! That Jerk! But he’s injured pretty badly Well I hope you find me Aron should lead the way, thank Mina”.

“So we should fallow Aron” said Missy.

“You bet!” said Sammy.

Megan and Jon saw a Salamence, Megan began to wave her arms wildly.

“Hey over here!” yelled Megan.

April heard her voice and went down to the ground.

“Megan, Jon you two are all right!” said April.

“Why do you have Salamence” said Megan.

“Oh I went looking for the others, I happened to be with Maddie.” said April.
“We have a plan, if you find someone tell them to head to the big tree” said Megan.

“We’ll head there together.” said April.

“So if it takes a while to find someone then we’ll go search” said Megan.

“Good idea” said Jon.

So all three headed on Salamence to the big tree to wait for the others.

With Matt and Anne Tyrouge came out of its Pokeball.

“You can sense Ronnie” said Matt.

Tyrouge nodded and Anne and Matt began to fallow Tyrouge.

With Deborah and Kia, Combusken came out its Pokeball.

“So can sense Ronnie” said Deborah.

“Yes, I sure can” said Combusken.

Deborah and Kia began to fallow Combusken.

With Beth and Ronnie, Ronnie needed to take rest.

“When we find Maggie, she’ll heal an injury you have” said Beth.

“That good” said Ronnie.

“Ronnie” yelled Tyrouge’s voice.

“That’s Tyrouge!” said Ronnie.

“Ronnie!” yelled Combusken voice.

“That’s also Combusken.” said Ronnie.

“Over here!” yelled Beth.

Anne, Matt, Tyrouge, Kia, Deborah and Combusken got there was the exact same time.

“Ronnie’s still hurt from Hypno attacked her” said Beth.

“I think that one of groups should still search while one of use head to the big tree” said Anne.
“Rock, Paper, Scissors for the big tree!” said Kia.

“Deal!” said Anne.

Kia dealt rock and Anne dealt Scissors.

“Looks like your group has to still search” said Kia.

“Okay” said Anne.

“We’ll take turns, helping Ronnie get to the tree” said Deborah.

Ronnie’s Hariyama came out of its Pokeball.

“I’ll carry Ronnie” said Hariyama and Ronnie translated.

“That’s good” said Kia.

The two groups separated one hading to the big tree the other find others.

With Sammy and Missy they got the valley.

“Hey Mina, Baka! Are you down there?” said Missy.

“Yes!” said Mina.

“Who are you calling a baka, I learned what that is on the web!” yelled Peter.

“Only a baka looks it up on the internet months after first being a call a baka” said Mina as if nothing before this has happened.

“Hey, I’ll get you out!” said Sammy, “Come on out Skarmory!”

Sammy flew down the valley on Skarmory, she and Mina put Peter on him and all three flew up on Skarmory.

After a while of rest, Missy pointed out “So you guys had some fun”

“What do you mean?” said Mina.

“You know, not that sick but K-I-S-S-I-N-G” said Missy.

“No way I hate him!” said Mina.

“I hate her!” said Peter, they began to glare at each other.

“I knew it, it a Rumiko Takashi-esque romance!” said Missy.

“No it isn’t!” yelled Mina as the top of her lungs.

Everyone in the forest heard Mina’s scream.

Megan, April and Jon were at the big tree.

“That was Mina” said Megan.

“Maybe we should find where she is” said April.

Anne and Matt were in the middle of the forest.

“Was that Mina?” said Anne.

“Sounded like it. Let’s see” said Matt.

In the sky, Maggie and Larry still searched when they heard Mina's voice.

“That Mina’s yell” said Maggie.

“How can you tell?” said Larry.

“Well if you knew Mina as long as I did then you can tell” said Maggie.

With Kia’s group they head it too.

“I know that right now we should avoid Mina but…” said Kia.

“Yeah, I know but we should” said Beth.

“I just hope she won’t be that angry by the time we fine her” said Ronnie.

With Maddie and Chrissie they heard it too.

“Well by the way my sister tells me about these things, she must be with them and Peter is there too” said Chrissie.

“She can be pretty angry when around Peter.” said Maddie.

And so everyone headed to where Mina was. One by one each group got there.

“They got to a fight yet again?” said Anne.

“I pointed out it’s a Rumiko Takashi style romance” said Missy.

“I told you it’s not like that!” said Mina.

“I think I’ll Heal Ronnie first” said Maggie so that she wouldn't have to deal with Peter like this.

“Look at the facts, you yell out sit and then whack him in the head with a mallet. If you electric Angel and he ask woman to bear his children then it would perfect” said Missy.

“Can some please tell what you mean?” said Sammy.

“I’ll explain: “Sit!” comes from Inu-Yasha with Inu-Yasha and Kagome’s relationship, the mallet come from Ranma ½ with Akane and Raman’s relationship, the Electric Angel joke came from Urusei Yatsura since Lum shocks Ataru when she gets mad at him, and the bearing child comments come from Miroku, enough said” said Missy.

Finally all of the Pokemon that were searching for the Pokemon Angels found their back.

“That’s great that you found each other so fast!” said Spheal.

“Yeah it is” said Mina’s Sneasel.

“Return Sneasel, Spheal” said Mina.

“Return Magby!” said Peter.

“After Peter gets healed what should we do?” said Maddie.

“We should stay and let them come to us, they were expecting us to separated and they’d be surprised to find that we found each other before we even ready” sad Mina.

“And we find a way to get Maya back” said April.

With Team Aqua, they were getting ready to find them, when Lily saw on a monitor that they were together.

“No way!” said Lily.

“What is it?” said Jonathan.

“They are already reunited! Thanks a lot J-Lo, you choose the time!” said Lily.

“We can always get them now with their puppet friend, it would be a tough battle for them” said J-Lo.

“Agreed!” said Lily and Jonathan.
The sun was beginning to rise.

“I have an idea, everyone but Peter listen!” said Mina.

“Why me?” said Peter.

“Well let’s just say if I would you, it would ruin the plan” said Mina.

“You’re lying!” said Peter.

“I’m not actually after the plan I’ll tell you why I didn’t tell you” said Mina.

“Fine” said Peter.

And so Mina told them the plan. Just then Maya and her three Pokemon that were under her control showed up.

“Maya!” said April.

“Maya snap out of it!” said Jon.

“It’s no use we have to fight her” said April.

The three Team Aqua members jumped out of the trees.

“Grass Angel is right” said Jonathan.

“Guys are you to transform?” said Mina.

The other Pokemon Angels nodded and all 9 transformed.

“How dare you do this to my friend! My Metal will cut you down!” said Sammy scolding them.

“Injuring me is something you must pay for! You don’t stand a fighting chance!” said Ronnie scolding them.

“Friendship is a valuable thing! My fire will burn you!” said Deborah.

“Doing this has made me very angry! My darkness will consume you!” said Anne.

“What you did to my friend is unforgivable! I will root you out!” said April.

“Hurting my friends like this is punishable! My wave will crush you!” said Megan scolding them.

“How dare you do this! The dragon will show her rage!” said Maddie.

“How dare you harm my best friend like that! I will rock your world!” said Beth.

“Mew Mew style, Mew Mew Grace, Mew Mew Power in your face!” said Mina… scolding them?

“Mina…” said Anne.

“God Mina, you screwed up this!” said Peter.

“Oh yeah!” said Mina.

“You're such a baka!” said Peter.

“I’ll baka you!” said Mina.

“You’ll baka me? What is that suppose to be a threat?” said Peter.

Mina took out her mallet and began to chase Peter.

“Where’s a barrel when you need one” said Peter.

Team Aqua stared that the sight. They didn’t know what to think. While they were distracted, Ronnie used high jump kick on Jonathan.

“That’s for what you did to me earlier!” said Ronnie.

“Go uh… girl” said Jonathan.

“Nidoran use poison sting” said Maya.

Maya shined the light on Nidoran, she did the attack but it was block by a Flamethrower.

“Vulpix!” said Kia.

“She was separated by the blast, I’m glad she’s safe” said Deborah.

“Please Maya snap out of it!” said Vulpix.

“It’s no use! We have to attack her! Maggie please heals when we are done” said Deborah.

“Come on out Mawile!” said Sammy.

“Are you sure this plan will work? It’s too…” said Beldum.

Sammy cut it off, and said “Just lend me your energy, not your two cents”

All 3 of Sammy’s Pokemon and Peter’s Aron began to glow silver.

All the Pokemon Angels but Mina who was still chasing Peter with her mallet ready to do their Power attacks.

“Steel Silver Shower!” said Sammy doing her attack

“Fighting Ki Punch!” said Ronnie doing her attack.

“Fire Burn Storm!” said Deborah doing her attack.

“Dark Moonlight Laser!” said Anne doing her attack.

“Grass Flower Blizzard!” said April doing her attack.

“Water Fall Blast!” said Megan doing her attack.

“Dragon Rage Supreme!” said Maddie her attack.

“Rock Hard Crash” said Beth doing her attack.

Just as the attacks were about to hit Maya, Jon jumped right in front.

“Maya… I love you!” he said then collapsed.

Hypno came out its Pokeballs and began to get dizzy and fainted. Maya snapped out it. She got up and said “Why did you do that me?! Why?”

“We thought that your friends, would not fight you but we were wrong. We will try that again!” said Jonathan.

“Right now, I’m going to make you pay, Vulpix, use Fire Spin!” said Maya.

Vulpix launched the attack, a Fiery tornado hit Team Aqua and made them fly away.

Maya went over to Jon and began to hold him.

“Jon…” she said.

Maggie went to intercept him, “He doesn’t have mu8ch injuries.” She said.

“He’ll be happy that Mina’s plan had worked” said April.

“What plan! Tell me!” said Peter.

“Well me saying the Mew Mew Magical Girl slogan would get you tease me, because of that I was able to chase you with my mallet causing a distraction.” said Mina.

“And Jon decided to help by getting injured and confessing his love at the same time in front of your eyes. He knew it would be a good idea because of my powers” said Maggie healing Jon.

“Guys…” said Maya.

The Pokemon Angels detransformed just as Jon was waking up. Maya gave him a big hug.

“Thank you so much” she said.

“Maya…” said Jon.

Maya began to cry.

“We should leave them alone.” said Mina.

Everyone else nodded. Later they found their camp nothing was destroyed fortunately. Maggie made breakfast and Mina did some karaoke. After breakfast the three groups went their separate ways.

“See you soon sis” said Chrissie.

“You too” said Missy.

“Baka!” said Mina glaring at Peter.

“Idiot!” said Peter glaring at Mina.

“Bye Maya, see you soon!” said Jon.

“I’ll e-mail you!” said Maya.

The three groups parted. Later they discussed what happened.

“So you think that they will strike soon?” said Mina.

“Let’s hope not. Hurting the people we love would be hard even if Maggie can heal them” said Anne.

“Anne’s right, we must try to ruin this plan as soon as possible!” said April.
“Well first I have to learn how to use my Power attack permanently” said Sammy.

“Knowing you, you’d botch every time you receive the power” said Beldum.

Sammy glared her Pokemon “I was kidding! Kidding!”

“Well we should continue to find the other Pokemon Angels” said Mina.

Everyone else nodded at.

“No matter what we will beat Team Aqua and find the others” said Mina to herself.
 
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CaptainBlue

Guest
It was a good idea, however it could have been written better. A little more decription would be better. But as it is, its okay. not brilliant, but okay.
 

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
(Thank you for the critisim. Also this chapter is difrent then I orenglly intented due to a certain event that happened to me as an anime fan. Because of that I have a comeo. That cahpter is little frantic than ususal)

Chapter 5: Mina, Peter and Some Displaced Anger

It has been a week since Maya was under Team Aqua’s control. And nothing much has happened. Well except for the fact that both Missy and Maya have been teasing Mina about Peter. Missy stopped a few days after wards when Maya began to get a little out hand. One morning she was signing Angel Chronicle.

After she finished Maya said “Why didn’t you sing something from Ranma?”

She gave the mike to Missy and went over to where Maggie was cooking breakfast. Mina sighed heavily, and it wasn’t just Maya, something else was bugging her too.

“Maya’s getting bad?” said Maggie.

“Yeah, she never teased me as much before” said Mina.

Anne walked up, and placed her hand on Mina’s shoulder.

“I think it might be the face that Maya was under Hypno’s control. There are effects that last longer then the hypnotism. I was depressed for while until I regained my memories. I read that there are effects after Hypno hypnotism that there are effects after it. Since Maya was under their control for a few hours I think she has a few more days of teasing” said Anne.

“Great…” said Mina.

“I have an idea” said Maggie.

Later the group desisted to separate temporally because of this. Mina, Anne, Maggie, Megan, Sammy and Missy formed one group, while Maddie, Beth, April, Ronnie, Deborah, Maya and Kia formed the other.

“So in a few days we’ll comeback” said Mina.

“Wait if you trying to get away from Maya then why are you bringing Megan, she’s worse” said Kia.

“Mina…” said Megan.

Mina handed her a big paper fan and Megan hit Kia with it.

“Well the main reason is that she won’t cook for you guys.” said Mina.

“Oh.” said everyone in Maya’s group.

“Oh yeah I’m taking the Karaoke Machine” said Mina.
“Can I switch groups?” said Ronnie.

“O…k” said Mina.

And so Ronnie joined Mina’s group.

“Okay we’ll meet at the Pokemon Center in Ruiberio, since there’s a Pokemon contest agreed?” said Mina.

Everyone nodded and the two groups nodded and separated. With Mina’s group they just walked in the forest when suddenly Crawdaunt came out and began to run very fast.

“I’ve been forgetting to do something!” yelled Crawdaunt as he ran.

“We better follow him” said Anne.

They ran as fast as they can and they found a campsite where Crawdaunt was beating up someone, it was Peter.

“And this is for last time! And the time before that! And that week spent in the past! And that time when our friends was captured by Team Magma! Ye ha!” yelled Crawdaunt.

“Why is Crawdaunt impersonating Howard Dean?” said Megan.

“I have no idea” said Anne.

“Will someone help please help and stop starring” said Peter.

Both Megan and Anne stopped Crawdaunt from attacking Peter while Maggie and Mina helped him up.

“So Mina you’re helping him up” said Missy.

“Look I told you I may do that stuff to him but it is not like that, using interdemensional mallets in anime is as common as the girl cross dresser or the girl in sailor fuku” said Mina.

“Hey! Is that crack at me?” said Sammy who is a girl cross dresser.

“I don’t think, it would have been a crack at me too” said Ronnie who coincidently wears a sailor fuku.

“Don’t take it personal, the writer of this fanfic is just a huge anime fan and she decided to use some anime stereotypes for some of Pokemon Angels” said Beldum.

“What?” said Sammy/
“Nothing” said Beldum.

Matt had showed up holding fire wood, Mina ran up to him

“Hi Matt.” said Mina blushing.

“Oh hey Mina how are things going fine?” said Matt.

“Fine but we had to separate, Maya had some side effects from Hypno that made her more of a tease and she kept on teasing me so I needed a vacation from her” said Mina.

“So all of us tagged along” said Sammy.

“So the boy’s here” said Peter.

“What?!” yelled Sammy.

“Well you do act, talk and dress like a boy” said Beldum.

Sammy picked up her Beldum and threw it at Peter, who was still being supported by Maggie.

“Why am I getting attacked by Pokemon today?” said Peter.

“The last one was being attack with a Pokemon” said Maggie.

“So I can trade my stock options with out liability?” said Beldum who was dizzy.

“What was that for?” yelled Peter.

“Stop calling me a boy!” yelled Sammy.

“Now, now” said Missy.

“Well Peter did disserve this after he’s a jerk and a baka” said Mina bitterly.

“You know Mina, I noticed you’ve been upset about something and its not just Maya” said Missy.

“Missy’s right is there something going on?” said Anne.

“If I tell what I found out Missy will get upset.” said Mina.

“Tell me” said Missy.

“Okay, ADV deiced to not relies Pichi Pichi Pitch” said Mina.
“What?!” yelled Missy at the top of her lungs.

Meanwhile in San Francisco City a teenage girl with brown hair wearing glasses with a Swablu on her head who was on the computer writing a fanfic heard Missy’s yell.

“Must have been some other anime fan who heard the news about Mermaid Melody” said the girl and the Swablu nodded.

“Wow, she took it better than I thought she would, she was even more excited than me.” said Mina.

“When did you hear it?” said Missy.

“Emma PMed, she found it on Anime News Network” said Mina.

Emma is a fanfic writer in San Francisco City, she’s a huge anime fan and also a flying type trainer, and ironically she’s the one who heard Missy yell. Both Mina and Missy are fans of hers as well as friends.

“And she’s been waiting for to, what did she do?” said Missy.

“The same thing she did when Animerica was announced it was going canned get into a least one anime, ironically she was already planning to get into Ah! My Goddess.” said Mina.

“So let’s try Ultra Maniac” said Missy.

“Good idea” said Mina.

“Do you have any idea what they are talking about?” said Anne.

“No clue” said Sammy.

“Is that any reason to crew my head off?” yelled Peter.

“Well you don’t understand!” yelled Mina.

“It just a TV show” yelled Peter.

“It would have been if ADV got someone to put it on TV, now I’m afraid the evil empire might get it” said Mina.

“The Bush Administration?” said Peter.

“No 4kids” said Mina.

“That was lame” said Sammy.
“It sure was” said Missy.

“Anyways, you don’t understand how I feel” said Mina.

“Of course I don’t I’m a normal person who likes normal things” said Peter.

Mina was about to punch when Ronnie blocked the punch.

“Look, I know you guy7s are under stress but we need to relax” said Ronnie.

“That’s right, let’s do some anime karaoke!” said Missy holding Mina’s karaoke machine.

“Fine” said Mina.

“Hey let’s a do group, it might be fun” said Missy.

“I’ll join” said Mina.

“Me too” said Ronnie.

“Let’s do Wedding Wars” said Mina.

“Okay” said Missy.

Al three sang the song, after it was finished Mina and Peter began to argue again.

“Baka!” said Mina.

“Idiot!” said Peter.

They began to growl at each other.

“Why does this remind so much of a Pokemon Battle?” said Matt.

Meanwhile Charles and Dianna were watching them.

“So we can strike now while they are distracted” said Dianna.

“Say, I was wondering, you just joined right and dad didn’t allow it, why?” said Charles.

“No reason” said Dianna.

Back with Mina, she began to chase Peter since she was so angry with him.

“Why you little get back here” said Mina.

“My guess she’s just transferring her anger onto him, only ½ of that anger because of him” said Maggie.

“Your right” said Missy.

Anne collapsed as well as Ronnie, Sammy and Megan.

“What’s wrong?” said Missy.

“What’s that?” said Matt pointing to a red, light brown and brown rope on Sammy’s ankle.

“He’s back!” said Missy, “Come on out Sneasel!”

Sneasel came out its Pokeball, “Go attack that tree!”

Sneasel cut down the tree and both Dianna and Charles fell out.

“So Missy, you found us.” said Dianna.

“So Dianna, it’s been awhile” said Missy.

“It sure has after all you betrayed Team Magma” said Dianna.

“Your logic is flawed, one thing is that Team Magma betrayed me, they including your own dad and blamed innocent people.” said Missy.

“They did brainwash me!” yelled Anne.

“How did you get better so fast?” said Matt.

“I cut the ropes, it was easy” said Sneasel.

“Beldum cut the rope!” said Sammy weakly.

“How am I, I only know Body Slam and I can only learn Body Slam!” said Beldum, in a gloating way.

“When I get better I swear, I don’t know what I’m going to do” said Sammy who was very angry.

“Looks like I have to help everyone by myself, after all Mina won’t do any thing” Said Anne pointing at Mina and Peter.

“By the way what’s with them?” said Dianna.

“Mina and Peter have Rumiko Takashi style relationship” said Missy.

Mina heard that, she ran over to them and yelled “It’s not like that!”

“Good, then you can help” said Anne.

“Fine” said Mina.

Both transformed into their Angel Forms.

“Tying our friends like this is bad! My darkness will consume you!” said Anne scolding them.

“Doing this when I’m a bad mood is not a good idea! I will freeze your power!” said Mina scolding them.

“This all over an anime.” said Peter.

“So what attacks and we use to break the ropes?” said Anne.

“I know!” said Mina, “Icicle Spear!” she shot a lot of icicles former hands, they cut/froze the ropes.

Missy cleared her throat, “As I was saying another thing was she was a member when I quit” she said.

“What?” said everyone else but Charles and Dianna.

“I just joined last week” said Dianna with a giggle.

“Then why are trying to get revenge on something that you have no reason for?” said Mina.

“Umm… got to go!” said Dianna who ran away as fast as she can.

“Hey Dianna!” said Charles chasing after her.

“Why you little!” yelled Sammy.

They all turned around and saw Sammy was choking Beldum.

“That won’t work, I don’t have that kind of system” said Beldum.

“I don’t care!” said Sammy.

“I guess the recovery time is much faster” said Anne.
“That does make since you were able to battle very quickly isn’t that right Mi…” said Missy, she turned to Mina to see se she wasn’t there. She was trying to kick Peter but Ronnie was holding her back.

“Maybe we should separate now” said Maggie.

“You got that right” said Missy.

Later about an hour after the two groups separated, everyone talked about what happened.

“Geez I never saw Mina get so angry before” said Megan.

“Actually you did see her last spring, I was on vacation, let’s say have you ever noticed that scar on Peter’s ankle?” said Maggie.

“I hit him with a shovel when I heard that ADV Sailor Moon license expired and it was going to be near imposable to get the uncut versions. He had to get stiched” said Mina.

“So it wasn’t just us teasing her” said Missy.

“Nope, most of it was just her displacing her angry onto him” said Maggie.

With Peter, he was looking at hid scar on his ankle, “It’s a good thing there wasn’t a shovel” he said.

“Or something else” said Matt.

Back with Mina, Missy asked “I wonder what’s going on with Maya’s group?”
 

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
Chapter 6: It’s a Scooby Doo Parody

While Mina was displacing her anger onto Peter, Maya, Maddie, April, Kia, Deborah and Beth happened upon an old mansion, it was old and crumbling.

“This might be the perfect place to look for Ghost Angel” said Maya.

“But the legend says that Ghost Angel was a smart person who hated the whole idea of haunted houses” said Kia.

“But what if she’s a lost lonely little girl?” said Maya.

“I doubt it” said Maddie.

“Plus I think the writer is saving that for a different one in a later volume” said Kia.

“What?” said Maya.

“Nothing” said Kia.

“Okay anyways we are going in!” said Maya.

Meanwhile J-Lo, Jonathan and Lily watched them enter the house.

“Let’s go after Fire Angel’s decedent, she has the power to control all fire Pokemon, so she may be able to confuse them since Fire Angel is around” said J-Lo.

“I think we should try to learn their names, after all we know Maddie is Dragon Angel and Anne is Dark Angel” said Lily.

“Lily’s right maybe we should it’s beginning to get tiring” said Jonathan.

“Fine then, we’ll learn whoever is in this group” said J-Lo.

The other two nodded in agreement. Meanwhile the group was about to go in when an old man stopped them.

“You wouldn’t want to go in there, it’s haunted and not just ghost Pokemon ether.” said the old man.

“Well are a brave group” said Maya.

“Why do I suddenly get the feeling that it’s going to be like Scooby Doo?” said Maddie.

“I never really liked that cartoon.” said Kia.

“Me nether” said Maddie.

“Did you know that the anime VA who played Koga in Inu-Yasha and Principal Kuno in Ranma ½ played the villain in the 2nd Scooby Doo movie” said Maya.

Everyone starred at her, “What, someone needs to mention anime in Mina and Missy’s absence” said Maya.

“With you its creepy” said April.

“Please don’t do that again” said Kia.

And so they didn’t take the old man’s warning seriously and went in. What they didn’t know was that Team Aqua already went in. The doors shut on their own which freaked Kia out.

“That was scary!” yelled Kia.

“Don’t worry it was probably some Pokemon” said Maddie.

“Okay” said Kia.

They were in large room with many doors and stair case everything was worn and old. Hypno appeared at one of the doorways next to the door. Kia saw it but before she could say anything it hypnotized her. She began to walk to the door.

“Kia?” said Deborah.

She counted to walk and when she got though the door way, the doors closed on their own. Everyone tried to open it but failed.

“This is bad” said Deborah.

Ninetales came out its Pokeball, and said “Kia is under Jonathan control I can sense it as long as your other Pokemon and Vulpix are near you then the control won’t affect us due to her powers”, Deborah translated.

“So then we have to find her.” said Maya.

“It will be a hard fight plus I think we should split up…” said Deborah.

“If we have to unmask someone I will scream” said Maddie.

“Maddie’s right, if Ninetales jumped into my arms scared I’d be confused” said Deborah.

“Then you might be…” said Maya.

“No drug jokes, that’s a very tired joke about Shaggy.” said Beth.

“Beth’s right” said April.

And so the group split up, Deborah and Maya was in one group and April, Beth and Maddie were in the other. With Team Aqua they put Kia in a suit of armor to scare them.

“I think we should catch them using her and not do this whole thing” said Jonathan.

“Got any better ideas?” said J-Lo.

“I do, separate the fire Pokemon from Fire Angel and the other girl” said Lily.

“Good and then we’ll scare the Pokemon away from them” said J-Lo.

“O…k” said Lily.

“This is just like one big Scooby Doo joke” said Jonathan.

“Your right” said Lily.

“So what, if we can get them then we can be victorious” said J-Lo.

“This is going to be last mission she leads” said Lily.

“I don’t know, both of out missions seemed to fallow the same formula, kind of like Team Rocket, so this change seems” said Jonathan.

Meanwhile with Maddie’s group, Bellosom was using flash to light the way. All three heard someone yelling “What?!”

“What was that?” said April.

“It sounded like Missy and judging by the sound she’s miles away” said Beth.

“With a yell like that I bet it could be heard in Johto” said Maddie.

“I bet it was heard in Johto” said April.

That yell was in fact heard in Johto, San Francisco City is in that region. Back with Maya’s group they used Butterfree to light the way, they heard Missy’s yell and Ninetales who was still out her pokeball jumped into Deborah’s arms.

“Talk about Scooby Doo parody” said Maya, “And you should know that was Missy, I overheard Mina and that an anime’s release was canceled that they liked, do I think Missy was responding to that.”

Kia, dressed in a suit of amour was in the same hall way. She began to swing a sword at them.

“How predictable is this?” said Maya.

“Very” said Deborah, “Ninetales, use Flame Thrower!”

“Butterfree, use Confusion!” said Maya.

The two attacks hit Kia and she fell but she was still under Hypno’s control and Ninetales told them.

“Great…” said Deborah.

“I got an idea.” said Maya, she clear her throat ad yelled out, “Is that Porsche? Your oldest sister who backstabbed you so she could travel with us?”

“Is that going to work?” said Deborah.

Kia snapped out it and began to search for her sister. “Where is she that little…” she said.

“Wow, I guess sibling rivalry can always snap a person out" said Deborah.

With Jonathan, Hypno came out it Pokeball very angry.

“She must have gotten so angry that she snapped out of it” said Lily.

“They must have brought up sibling rivalry, if I remember correctly she has 4 sisters” said Jonathan.

“All of them named after cars” said J-Lo.

“Hate to be in that family, well the name part anyways, so looks like we lost this one” said Lily.

Meanwhile with Maddie’s group they happened upon a room with a huge pile of cash.

“Great… this is going to like Scooby Doo after all.” said April.

A blue flame floated by them all three stared at it.

“Oh come on, that’s clearly a Will-O-Wisp” said Maddie.
“Like that’s going to scare us.” said April.

“Get out!” said a voice.

April pulled out an interdemensional mike and began to say “Look, you can’t scare us!”

“Oh yeah!” said the voice.

“We’re ot exactly human” said April into the mike.

“So what?” said the voice.

A door opened and a very stupid looking monster that was clearly a guy in a costume showed up.

“…” said all three.

“You three should transform” said Bellosom and April translated.

“Should we?” said Maddie.

All three stared at the guy, “Oh yeah” said Beth.

All three transformed, this scared the guy in costume.

“What the heck?” said the guy in the costume.

“I’ll scare him even more! Magical Leaf!” said April.

April shot out many glowing leaves and the guy in costume ran away.

“We should fallow him just so incase he runs into Maya and Deborah.” said Beth.

The other two nodded in agreement.

Back with Maya’s group Kia was taking of the amour bit by bit.

“At least I didn’t do anything to you guys except try to scare you.” said Kia.

“I know.” said Deborah.

“Help me!” yelled the guy in costume.

All three girls stared at him since he still had the costume on.

“These strange women with wings tried to attack me” said the guy in costume.
Deborah knew what this was and knew what who these women were.

“Hey I’m going to transform if that’s all right” said Deborah.

“Fine with me” said Kia.

Deborah transformed and said “Did they look like this but with grey, green and orange hair?”

The guy the costume fainted and Maya began to tie him up, while the other three showed up.

“So you got him and Kia’s okay” said April.

“That’s good” said Beth.

“We should unmask him!” said Kia.

Maddie let out a scream and everyone looked at her then remembered what she said earlier.

“See I told you I would” said Maddie.

Maya ripped off the mask and it was the old man who warned them not to go in.

“That was predicable” said Ninetales.

“I saw that mile away” said Deborah.

“Me too” said Maya.

So they detransformed and called the closest Officer Jenny. Later she carted him away.

“I would have gotten away with it if it wasn’t for these meddling girls and that dumb illusion” said the old man.

“Yes… illusion” said Kia.

“I salute, we were looking for this bank robber for months, in fact he was featured on America’s Most Wanted.” said Officer Jenny.

“Tell them we’d like to remain anonymous” said Maddie.

“I under stand why, the last time you caught guy…” said Officer Jenny she began to cough as if she was hiding something.

“So it’s known though your family that’s good” said Maddie.
“My guess she punched a camera man” whispered Kia to the other 5 who nodded in agreement.

“Any ways, we have to go.” said Maddie who overheard them.

“Bye and thanks” said Officer Jenny.

And so they headed to Rubella Town. Kia’s hatred for anime became even worse, however since she was under Hypno’s control less time then Maya it was way shorter in fact it ended about an hour before they got into town. When they got the Pokemon Center they saw Mina’s group.

“How was your time?” said Maya.

“Fine, all I did was argue with Peter, yours?” said Mina.

“Caught a bank robber who act6ed like a Scooby Doo villain and Kia was under Hypno’s control for half an hour so all her increased anger towards all anime died about an hour ago” said Maya.

“I figured it was like that, at least it wasn’t too long” said Mina.
 

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
Chapter 7: Why is Jimmy Cheating On Anne?

It was the day before the Pokemon Contest and both Maya and April were getting ready. For it by practicing with their Pokemon. Since it’s an R1 contest it means that they have to use two Pokemon, Maya planned to use Beautifly for the Appeal Round while use Nidoran for the Battle Round, April planned to use Bellosom for the Appeal Round and Chikorita for the battle.

“I’ll be the one who’ll win” said April.

“I will!” said Maya.

“The plus side is that we will get the best fight ever” said Mina.

“That should boost reader ship” said Sammy.

“What was that?” said Mina.

“Nothing” said Sammy.

“Sammy if you make too many jokes about this being a fanfic then readership levels will drop” said Beldum.

“You just made on yourself” said Sammy.

“I said nothing!” yelled Beldum.

Meanwhile at a nearby Team Aqua base Jimmy was getting ready for his vacation he was planning to go to Rubella Town to see Anne. Lily came into the room.

“So going to the girl friend, even though she’s the enemy?” said Lily.

“Yes, everyone knows we are dating even the top brass, they don’t mind you know, it because Anne was such a popular member and the fact that I didn’t quit when I found out she was brainwashed sealed the deal.” said Jimmy.

“Shoot there goes my squeal plan” said Lily.

“What?” said Jonathan.

“Oh well time for plan b, Hypno!” said Lily.

Hypno showed up and began to hypnotize Jimmy.

“This is the best plan of all and I can finally get revenge on her.” said Lily.

Jonathan came into the room, “You know we can get into big trouble if e get caught, he’s one of the most trust worthy members after all” he said.

“I know but still even we fail I can just imagine her face” said Lily.

She ripped the bottom of her uniform off to revile a light blue sun dress, her hair was now in two braids and she wore glasses.

“You sure you can do this she can see though your disguises you know” said Jonathan.

“Well if her emotions are blinding her then we can get away with it” said Lily.

“I hope your right” said Jonathan.

So Lily and the hypnotized Jonathan headed to Rubella Town. He stopped by the Pokemon center to see only Megan and Sammy were there.

“Oh hey Jimmy, Anne went shopping with Missy and Mina. She’ll be back soon” said Megan.

“I’ll go find her” said Jimmy.

His Wartortle and Mudkip came out. “Is it okay if we stay here with you Megan?” said his Wartortle who looked very scared.

“Sure…” said Megan.

Lily who was just outside the Pokemon center saw what happened.

“They may the one flaw in my plan, I just hope it works out.” said Lily.

Jonathan left the Pokemon center, both Mudkip and Wartortle were not ready to talk.

“I wonder what’s wrong with them” said Megan to herself.

“Jimmy’s pretty cute” said Sammy.

“You should know he’s Anne’s boyfriend” said Megan.

“But Ash’s is still cuter” said Sammy.

“But I doubt he’ll notice you any time soon” said Megan.

“Plus the fact that you dress like a boy” said Beldum

Sammy began to glare at her Pokemon, “I was kidding, Kidding!” it said.
Meanwhile Mina, Anne, and Missy were walking down a street holding a lot of shopping bags.

“Thanks for help us” said Mina.

“Of course I would, plus Maggie is busy April helping with the contest so I know she’s busy, plus with all the DVDs you bought, I don’t you and carry it on own” said Anne.

“Your right” said Missy.

Anne stopped walking, she saw Jimmy walking with a girl who was Lily, however she didn’t recognize Lily. Mina and Missy saw them too. Lily kissed Jimmy on the cheek. Anne dropped the bags and ran away to the Pokemon Center.

“Anne…” said Mina she was about to fallow Anne but Missy stopped her.

“Mina, I think we should pick the bags first” said Missy.

“Right” said Mina.

Meanwhile April was practicing her appeal with Bellosom, who was dancing to music while doing attacks. When she was done Maggie clapped at this.

“That was perfect” said Maggie.

“Why are you my coach again?” said April.

“It was Mina’s idea since I’m the only other one who trains a Grass Type and this is your first R1.” said Maggie.

“Oh yeah” said April.

Meanwhile Maya counted to practice by herself with Beautifly. When she was done she talked to Beautifly.

“I hope I do good enough, I never got the second round in an R1 before” said Maya.

Beautifly comforted her, “Your right, I can do it” said Maya.

Deborah, Beth, Maddie, Ronnie and Kia had gotten back to Pokemon Center after shopping as well, they got at the same time Anne got there. She ran past Sammy and Megan and went to her room and locked the door.

“I wonder what’s wrong” said Kia.

Both Missy and Mina got there, very tired from carrying a lot of DVDs.
“We’ll tell you but… little help?” said Mina.

Not long later Mina told all those who weren’t practicing what happened, that they saw happened, Lily kissing Jimmy but of course they didn’t know it was Lily.

“That’s just plain awful.” said Sammy.

“Something’s going on, I know, his Pokemon are absolutely scared” said Megan.

“I think I should ask someone I know, she might know something about love” said Mina.

Mina made a call on the center’s phone, a voice answered since it was temporally voce only.

“Hello?” said the voice.

“Emma is that you?” said Mina.

The picture showed Emma, the same girl who heard Missy yell.

“Hey Mina, what is it?” said Emma.

“Well it’s like this…” said Mina who then told the story about happened.

“Mina… why are you asking me?” said Emma.

“I thought you knew a thing or two about love” said Mina.

“I could have sworn I told you. I know very little about dating” said Emma.

“I did forget sorry.” said Mina.

“Yeah remember I only started dating three moths ago. But Ric is such a sweetie” said Emma begging to blush, “Any ways I have an idea, use your Pokemon to ambush him. Then make him tell but keep it safe. Make him tell why he’s cheating. Oh yeah I was wondering did Missy yell “What?!” few days ago? I realized about an hour after I heard a yelled I remembered it was Missy’s voice” said Emma.

“Wow, that yelled really was heard in Johto, I thought it was joke” said Mina.

“Any ways tell e how it all went” said Emma.

“Call you later” said Mina.

Mina hung up and told everyone else what she was going to do.

“Don’t do that!” said Mudkip.

“Are you ready to talk?” said Megan.

Mudkip shook its head no.

“Well anyways I think someone should go talk to her.” said Missy.

“I’ll do it” said Deborah.

“Really?” said Mina.

“With Houndoom helping I think I’ll be able to get her out” said Deborah.

“Thanks” said Mina.

Deborah and Houndoom tired in vain to talk Anne out her room and both of Jimmy’s Pokemon refused to talk. That night Team Aqua had a meeting in an ally.

“At least the Pokemon hadn’t squealed yet” said Lily still in her disguise.

“Especially since that Mudkip was raised by Ice Angel’s father as an egg” said J-Lo.

“Wait a second you mean her father is John Koki?” said Jonathan.

“Well yeah” said J-Lo.

“Then that would make Ice Angel Mina Koki since he only has one daughter.” said Jonathan.

“Oh how ironic that we found out the name of Ice Angel because her farther is famous” said J-Lo.

“I know…” said Lily.

The next day Anne was still lock her room, Mina wearing a disguise made of different parts of cosplay costumes (Sailor Fuku for Ronnie’s Ran costume, her Osaka wig and Missy’s glasses her used when she was dressed as Sasami Sango. She prepared for it. Megan still hoped that Jimmy’s Pokemon would talk and Sammy was with her.

“I’ll make sure I’ll be back in time for the last contest battle.” Said Mina

“Wait we will talk now!” said Mudkip.

“What is it?” said Megan.

“Jonathan is controlling Jimmy” said Wartortle.

“And Lily is the girl that kissed him” said Mudkip and Megan translated both things.

“I’m going to look!” said Mina.

“Mina wait!” said Megan.

“I can’t, Anne is cousin. I have to do this” said Mina.

“Let me come with you, you know if they are separated from me, Hypno will take full control of them” said Megan.

“Right” said Mina.

“But first, lose the disguise” said Megan.

“Oh yeah” said Mina.

“I’ll go tell Anne!” said Sammy.

And so Mina and Megan went to look for them while Sammy went to tell Anne.

Meanwhile both Maya and April signed up for the contest, Maggie, Maddie, Missy, Beth, and Ronnie were thereto watch.

“Where is everyone?” said Maya.

“Don’t you remember, something came up and they should make for the last battle which you guys should be able to participate in” said Missy.

Mina and Megan continued to look and then Megan sensed something. “This way!” she said.

The turned a corner and in a park, were J-Lo, Jonathan and Lily, who was still in her disguise.

“So Mina and… Water Angel showed up” said Lily.

“How do you know my name?” said Mina.

“Well we found out after figuring out John Koki is your dad” said J-Lo.

“You found my name just be my dad is famous, that’s kind of pathetic.” said Mina.

“We know it is” said J-Lo.
Lily pulled the bottom of her sundress and she was in her underwear.

“What happened?” said Lily.

“You used that to put on your disguise, you tried to do the opposite” said J-Lo.

“Hold on for a second!” said Lily.

She ran away then appeared a second later in uniform.

“Any ways how dare you do that Anne, Megan time to transform” said Mina.

Both transformed while they were doing it Jonathan wrote down “Megan= Water Angel”

“Hurting my cousin like that is unforgivable. I will freeze your power!” said Mina scolding them.

“You should have hurt someone we love. My Wave Will Crush You!” said Megan scolding them.

In the Pokemon center Sammy finished explaining what happened. Anne opened the door and ran out as fast as she can.

“She must want to get the fast” said Sammy.

“Let’s fallow her” said Deborah.

Sammy nodded and both fallowed.

A minute later with Mina, she and Megan were staring down Team Aqua when Anne’s voice yelled out “Hold it right there!”

“Anne!” said Mina.

“How dare you do this me!” cried Anne, she transformed.

“Making me think Jimmy broke my heart it unforgivable. My darkness will consume you!” cried Anne as she was scolding them.

“Looks like you will be first to be captured, Jimmy. Take her down” said Lily.

Jimmy, still under Hypno’s came at with a rope he was about a two feet away from Anne, she said “{Please stop. Please. Its not you. I know you stop because I Love You”

Jonathan’s Hypno came outs Pokeball and to cry.

“No!” said Lily.

Jimmy fell to the ground but Anne caught him.

“Jimmy!” said Anne.

“Anne…” said Jimmy.

Lily took out a flashlight, shined it on Hypno and said “Hypno use Psychic!”

Hypno attack was to hit both Anne and Jimmy but Anne blocked the attack form hitting Jimmy, the Psychic attack hit Anne but nothing happened.

“Why didn’t it work?” said Lily.

“Maybe it because she’s Dark Angel?” said Jonathan.

“What does that have to with anything?” said Lily.

“Even with the lights the attacks only work pending on the type and since that was Psychic attack it didn’t work on Dark Angel since Psychic attack have no effect what so ever on Dark types” said Jonathan.

Both Sammy and Deborah showed up of the scolded Team Aqua.

“How dare you do that Anne! My Flame Will Burn You!” said Deborah scolding them

“You hurt Anne big time! My Metal Will cut you Down to size!” said Sammy scolding them.

Sammy’s Mawile and Skarmory came out their Pokeballs and began to glow silver. Sammy about to do her power attack when Anne said “No, save that for another week let me take care of them”

Sammy nodded she knew that Anne had to it. Anne asked Mina to take care of Jimmy. Anne stood up and said to them “This is 10 times worse then what you did to me!”

“Are you sure about that?” said Jonathan.

“I’m sure” said Anne.

She took out her wand and did her wand attack “Wonderful Dark Moon Surprise” she said while using her wand attack. The attack hit and all three members and Hypno went flying into the air.

“Anne I’m sorry” said Jimmy.

“I know” said Anne who went to hug him.

Kia showed up and said “Hey if you hurry we can see the last round of the Pokemon Contest”

“Let’s go!” said Anne.

And so everyone headed to the contest hall. April’s first match was ju7st ending.

“Now finish it off with Giga Drain!” said April who was fighting a Luvdisc.

April won the match since her opponent’s Pokemon was unable to battle.

Mina and the rest got where the others were sitting.

“So is Maya in?” asked Mina to Missy.

Missy nodded happily.

A few minutes later the battle began.

“These two have battled many times before against each other, the last two one of them gave up after one attack. I hope its not going happen this time” said the announcer.

“I choose you Nidoran!” said Maya.

“Chikorita, I choose you!” said April.

“And begin!” said the announcer.

“Chikorita start with Hidden Power!” said April.

Chikorita’s attack hit and Nidoran lost some points.

“Nidoran, use Poison Sting” said Maya.

The attack hit Chikorita and it lost more points.

“Okay use attract!” said April.

Chikorita used the attack and Nidoran fell in love. Nidoran lost some points.

“Nidoran use Blizzard!” said Maya.

But Nidoran did nothing. “Oh no due to Attract’s effects, Nidoran refuses to attack” said the announcer.

“Wow good technique from April” said Missy.

“That’s amazing” said Mina.

“Use Razor Leaf!” said April.

Chikorita used Razor Leaf it made a pattern.

“It looks like flower how beautiful” said the announcer.

“It looks like the Sakura Wars symbol” said Mina.

“It does” said Missy.

“Please Nidoran use Toxic!” said Maya.

Nidoran snapped out of its loved filled daze and used the attack. Chikorita lost a lot of points.

“Now use Poison Sting!” said Maya.

The attack Chikorita and it was knocked out. Maya won the contest.

“I won!” said Maya.

“That was the best turn around I have ever seen” said the announcer.

Maya got the ribbon, later Mina called Emma.

“How did things go?” said Emma.

“Well it’s hard to explain” said Mina.

“Then try to.” said Emma.

“Well it’s like this, the girl had something on Jimmy and she made him go n dates with her. That’s all” said Mina.

“You’re lying” said Emma.

“How do you know” said Mina.

“I’m a fanfic writer.” said Emma.
“Well I can’t tell the truth, it’s too unbelievable" said Mina.

“Well at least you told me the truth about that. I have to go. Tell Missy I said hi and call me again soon” said Emma.

“Bye” said Mina.

Later Jimmy and the group parted.

“It’s a shame that your vacation was cut short” said Anne.

“Yeah it has to be, due to what happened” said Jimmy.

After a hug they parted, much later at a Team Aqua base a high ranking officer was yelling at J-Lo, Jonathan and Lily.

“How dare you do that to Jimmy, he’s one of the best agents we have, controlling him and it wasn’t just to capture the Pokemon Angels, was it Lily” said the high ranking officer, he knew about the fact that Lily hated Anne.

“Well… umm…” said Lily.

“Jimmy could you leave the room” said the high ranking officer.

“Yes sir” said Jimmy.

He left the room, when he was out he said to himself “I know that they won’t get into trouble.”

Back in the room the high ranking officer ask them “So you used this technique on two other people before?”

“Yes, two of the companions who traveled with them.” said Jonathan.

“How well did it work?” said the officer.

“It worked very well in fact the first time but the second time we used a stupid tactic in doing so and it failed.” said Jonathan.

“What do you mean stupid?” said the officer.

“Scooby Doo parody” said Lily.

“That is stupid” said the officer, “Any ways I’ll allow this technique, as long as you don’t use any other members”

“Really!” said Lily.

“Under one condition” said the officer.

“What?” said Jonathan.

“Lily needs to scrub the bathrooms for one month” said the officer, “It was her plan”

“Sure thing” said Jonathon.

“What?” said Lily.

“Of course” said J-Lo.

“Hey don’t I have a say in this?” said Lily.

“Sorry!” said J-Lo and Jonathon at the same time.

“Hey!” said Lily.
 
M

mindripper

Guest
Ok. While original in nature, for some reason I was reminded of Pwoer Rangers, and that is not a good thing. Also, why so much speech? Speech helps to convey the feelings and thoughts of characters very succinctly, but too much ruins the flow of your work. Try to have some descriptive text between your speeches.

Description is very lacking here. I am sorry to say that, but you really have to improve on that. there were many mistakes as well, both spelling and grammar. Try to improve on that ok? Use a spellcheck or type on MW to root out errors.

Your fic seriously needs some solid descriptive text in it as well. Do try to add it. I will try to be more positive after your next chapter, but you really have to improve.

However, seeing that english is not your first lang, you have done an admirable job. If I had to write a fic in my second lang, my fic would then qualify as a comedy fic. take care and hope you take my advice.
 

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
(Thanks for the critisim, oh it may seem like Power Rangers but its more like Sailor Moon or Mew Mew Power, in others words transfroming school girls fighting evil the only diffrence is that its girls only)

Chapter 8: Ash VS. Peter

One day while Mina and the group walked though the forest they heard a yell.

“You baka! How could you win to Mina?! Did she let you win because you’re the chosen one?!”

“That’s Peter’s voice” said Maggie.

“I’m still angry about MMP!” said Mina and she began to run.

“Great” said Anne.

Suddenly Crawdaunt came out’s Pokeball and fallowed Mina.

“I wonder what’s going on?” said Sammy taking off her hat.

About an hour before Peter and Matt met Ash and is companions. Of they talked, Peter challenged Ash to a Pokemon battle. Peter lost, not only that but Ash mentioned he beat Mina resulting in that yell. When Mina got there they were glaring at each other, then Peter saw Mina.

“Oh Peter, I’m still angry about MMP!” she said.

“Oh no!” said Peter.

He tried to run away but Crawdaunt stopped him. Crawdaunt held him down while Mina began to beat him.

“Beating him up relieves al my stress” said Mina happily.

“It’s been like a week, shouldn’t you be over all ready” said Peter.

“No” said Mina.

Ash, Brock, May, Max and Pikachu stared at the site.

“Is this a joke?” said Ash.

“I don’t know” said May.

“Brock!” said Beth as she was running towards them.

“Beth!” said Brock.

The met and began to hug as usual.

“Didn’t see that coming” said Megan.

Missy hit her in the head with a big paper.

“We should get them off of him.” Said Anne, and Megan and Maggie nodded.

Anne got Crawdaunt back into its Pokeball while Megan got Mina off Peter. When Mina was fully off him Maggie began to heal any injuries.

“What’s with her?” said Max.

“Well you know how big of an anime fan Mina is, a company that got an anime both Mina and Missy were waiting canned the release to due the fact it was too expense” said Sammy who then winked at Ash.

“You know he’s too dense to notice you” said Beldum.

Sammy glared at Beldum, “I was kidding! Kidding!” said Beldum.

After Maggie was all done with healing Peter, she said “Hey, its lunch time, so I’ll make some!”

“Good Idea!” said Matt.

While Maggie made lunch they did karaoke, after Megan finished Kagami no Naka lunch was ready. While they all ate both Peter and Ash glared at each other.

“This is new” said Missy.

“Sure is a welcome change” said Anne.

“Did we enter the Twilight Zone?” said Megan.

Mina hit her with a big paper fan.

“I’m not the only one who can glare at Peter” said Mina.

“I thought it was because of your Rumiko Takashi style romance” said Maya.

“Maya…” said Mina angrily.

“Rumiko Takashi style romance?” asked May.

Missy explained that it when two people love each other but can’t express their feeling so the lash out on each other with insults and pain both emotional and physical.

“That does sound like Peter and Mina.” said May.

“It does not!” yelled Mina.

“I think Peter would agree with Mina but he’s too busy glaring at Ash” said Megan.

Peter and Ash were indeed still glaring at each other.

“When will they stop?” said Sammy.

“I have no idea” said Mina.

Peter stopped glaring and said “I’m still a better trainer”

“Why is that?” said Ash.

“I never lost a major tournament” said Peter.

“That’s because you never in one” said Ash.

“And it took you a year to go out on a journey just you can battle me” said Mina.

“That’s not true” said Peter.

Matt, Mina and Maggie starred at him, all three knew him.

“But for Matt it took two years” said Peter.

“Yeah but I was training for two years, you did nothing but lounge around the house with Magby” said Matt.

“So what I’m still the better then him!” yelled Peter.

“You lost to him” said Mina.

“That doesn’t prove anything” said Peter.

“Yes it does you lost fair and square. With Mina she was practicing to lose” said Ash.

“What?” said Peter.

“You mean she’s practicing in losing?” said Peter.

“I told you” said Mina

“When?” said Peter.

“When I announced I’m not battling in the Hoeen League” said Mina.

“Still I’m the better trainer!” said Peter.

“You are not!” said Ash.

“Am too” said Peter.

Ash and Peter began to say that for while, everyone starred at them. After 5 minutes Mina, Missy, Anne, Ronnie, May and Sammy deicide to karaoke since they were still going at it. While Mina and Missy were singing Yasahii Yoake the heard a sound in the air, it was Team Rocket’s balloon.

“Prepare for delicious trouble”
“And make is scrumptious double”
“To protect the world from devastation”
“To untie all people within out our nation”
“To denounce the evils of truth and love!”
“To extend out reach to the stars above!
“Jessie!”
“James!”
“Team Rocket! Blasting off at the speed of light!”
“Surrender now or prepare to fight!”
“Meowth that right!”
“Wobbufet!”

“Great can’t you not bother us right now!” said Mina.

“We want to steal Pikachu!” said Jessie.

“Don’t bother us right now!” yelled April with an aura of anger.

“We locked Cacnea into its Pokeball” said Jessie.

“Let me guess you heard the word Baka and you thought it had to do with me?” said Mina.

“What else?” said Jessie.

“Just because someone said Baka does not mean its me” said Mina.

“But you made up the word” said Jessie.

“What a baka...” said Missy.
“It means idiot in Japanese” said Mina.

“Hey! That’s what you called me earlier!” said Ash.

“Well you are an idiot” said Peter.

Ash began to get very red.

“Mr. Tomato Head” said Peter slyly.

“Don’t call me that” said Ash still red.

“But Jessie I don’t like locking up Cacnea like that” said James.

“Well if you want to capture Pikachu we have to” said Jessie.

“Time for grabbing” said Meowth.

He used a metal hand to grab Pikachu and he brought up to the balloon. Ash did seem to notice as usual.

“You won’t get away with this” said Sammy.

“Sammy let me handle this” said Mina.

Sammy nodded in agreement.

Mina transformed into her Angel form, “Trying to Steal Ash’s Pikachu for I don’t many times is wrong! I freeze your Power!”

“Oh like we are very scr…” said Jessie but before she could finish her sentence Mina already broke the hand using Ice Punch.

“Don’t worry I have plan” said Meowth.

A net dropped on Mina and Pikachu. Pikachu tired to use an electric attack but Meowth said “Its shock proof, freeze proof, burn proof, water proof, steel proof, dragon proof and what ever else your powers are” said Meowth.

“You’re not going to get away with this” said Anne.

“I think we are” said Jessie.

Meowth pressed a button and rockets came from the side and it flew away very fast.

“Meowth can’t it go slower?” said Jessie.

“It can’t” said Meowth.

Suddenly one the rocket exploded, Team Rocket, Mina and Pikachu went flying.

“Team Rocket’s blasting off again!”

“Why me?” said Mina.

Ash still glared at Peter when Sammy walked up and slapped him.

“What kind of trainer are you?” said Sammy.

“Why did you hit me?” said Ash.

“Answer the question, what kind of trainer lets a petty argument get in the way of his Pokemon well being” said Sammy.

“She’s right” said Anne, “Though I suspect this might be a plan to get him to notice her” she said under breath.

“Ash, Peter, Pikachu and Mina were captured which is way than when I was captured by those bozos” said Maddie.

“You were captured by those bozos, but you’re a Pokemon Master” said Sammy trying to suppress a laugh.

“Any ways we should rescue Mina and Pikachu from them” said Maya.

“Of course” said Ash.

“No way” said Peter.

“Why?” said Maggie.

“It will cause Maya and Missy to say that we have one of those relationships we deny it then Mina whacks me with her mallet. I don’t to expense that” said Peter.

“You want to have something worse… how about getting set to cave man time” said Maggie glaring at him.

“Wow, I haven’t heard a threat like that since I met Peter” said Kia.

“Okay I’ll do it!” said Peter who was very scared.

“Now let’s go rescue Mina and Pikachu!” said Ash pointing.

“But the balloon went that way” said Megan pointing the other direction.

“You really weren’t paying attention were you?” said Matt.

A littler after Team Rocket got to the ground safely they tied up Mina who was still in Angel form, with freeze proof ropes and put her in a freeze proof cage then they put Pikachu into a shock proof cage. They also took Mina’s pokeballs.

“I understand the cage, but why did you have to me?” said Mina.

“Well so you would get away if the cage broke” said Jessie.

“I just think this overkill.” said Mina.

“Well I can easily take them off you know” said Mina.

She detransformed, because her wrists were smaller she could slip out of the ropes.

“Hey can’t do that” said James.

“Sure I can” said Mina with a cute smile.

“Are you trying to be cute?” said Meowth.

“I thought it was working” said Mina, “Plan B, did I ever told you that I’m a master at interdemensional items?”

“I know about the mallet, but I bet that too weak” said Jessie.

“Oh it’s not that” said Mina, she took out a boom box and a mike. She turned on the boom box which had various anime songs on it. She sang along.

“She’s just an ordinary girl in a Magical World…” sang Mina.

“So what are you doing trying to entertain us?” said Team Rocket.

Meanwhile the group tried to find any sign of Mina, Pikachu or Team Rocket. When they heard music.

“I know that song!” said Missy.

“It’s from that lame show Cardcaptors, the one that booted off because it looked like it was boys show but it was meant for girls” said Peter.

Everyone stared at him, “Okay so I watched it” he said.
“Let’s fallow the music!” said Missy.

Everyone agreed and they began to fallow the music. With Mina, Team Rocket just stared at her singing. That is until everyone else got there.

“Well isn’t it the cross dresser” said Peter.

“Watch you mouth” said James.

“My name is James, I like wearing women’s clothes” said Peter in a really high voice.

“He’s over doing it” said Mina.

“If you want a battle your going tot get, do it Jessie” said James.

“Yeah… wait why do I have to do it?” said Jessie.

“You know if James lets out Cacnea what will happen” said Meowth.

“Your right, Go Seviper!” said Jessie.

“Go Cloyster” said Peter.

While the battle was going on Sammy and Anne went over to the cages.

“Hey guys” said Mina happily.

“I’ll have you out” said Sammy.

She transformed and used Metal Crawl, which she got right this time on the cage but nothing happened.

“Ha ha! That cage can handle and attacks unlike Pikachu’s cage…” said Meowth who then realized he made mistake.

“Oh really, Metal Crawl!” said Sammy attacking the cage.

“Pikachu!” said Pikachu.

Maggie teleported next to Anne. “Mina I know there are only 4 attacks that will work, fortunately one of them is an Ice Type move!” said Maggie.

Mina thought about it and she knew. She transformed back into her Angel form and put the boom box and the mike in the other dimension. “Sheer Cold!” she said the cage began to freeze.

“Metal Crawl!” said Sammy breaking the cage.

Peter finished Jessie’s Seviper in one move.

“Oh Team Rocket!” said Mina.

“Team Rocket turned around and saw Mina holding her Wand and Pikachu sparking.

“Lovely Ice Snow Storm!” said Mina doing her wand attack.

“Pikachu use Thunder Bolt!” said Ash.

The combined attack made Team Rocket go flying.

“Team Rocket’s blasting Off Again!”

Ash turned to Pikachu, “Sorry” he said.

“Pikachu Pika Pi” said Pikachu.

“That’s all right I forgive you” translated Beldum.

“Really, thanks” said Ash.

“Pikachu” said Pikachu.

“That’s okay, your mom was great last night” said Beldum.

“You honestly except me to say that?” said Sammy.

“Uh…” said Beldum.

“What did Beldum say?” said Ash.

“I won’t say it because I like you” said Sammy winking at Ash.

“O…k” said Ash.

“He’s not going to notice you just because you winked at him” said Beldum under its breath.

Later the three groups parted ways.

“Good bye MR. Tomato Head” said Peter.


Ash began to get very red and was about to fight with him when Mina said “Peter, Sit!” who then whacked him in the head with a mallet.

“Oh Brock!” said Beth.

“Oh Beth!” said Brock.

Max began to tug on Brock’s ear and Ronnie pulled on Beth’s arm.

“See you soon” said Mina.

And the three groups parted.

“Oh what did Beldum say that Pikachu said?” said Mina.

“I’ll tell you but don’t tell Ash” said Sammy, she translated.

“Maybe you should start throwing Beldum more, if it said that?” said Mina.

“I’m with Mina, that’s just perverted.” said Megan.

“Okay I will, I’ve itching to any ways” said Sammy putting her hat back on.

“What?” said Beldum.

“You should haven’t said anything about him” said Sammy.

“Great…” said Beldum.
 
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Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
Chapter 9: Ronnie’s Training

Ronnie was little nervous, it was the first time she saw her father in months. She also needed to talk to him.

“Why are we meeting your dad again?” said Sammy.

“Well my dad said he was training in the area with a few students.” said Ronnie.

“She wants to talk to him about something, right” said Beth.

“That’s right” said Ronnie.

“Hey! Ronnie!” said a voice.

Ronnie turned around, it was Steve.

“Oh hey Steve” said Ronnie who was blushing.

“It sure has been while” said Steve who was also blushing.

“Hey Steve” said Beth.

“Hey, Rock Breeder” said Steve.

Beth began to unusually angry “I thought you weren’t going to call me that any more” said Beth.

“When did I say that?” said Steve telling the truth.

“I swear I will get him” said Beth.

“So Rock Breeder, are you going to the nearby hot springs. Rock Breeder.” said Steve.

“That’s it!” said Beth, she transformed into her Angel from. She summoned a large boulder and lifted over head.

“That’s not going to faze me” said Steve, “Some on out Hitmonlee, smash that rock!”

Steve’s Hitmonlee came out and kick the rock so hard it crumbled.

“Steve that was unfair!” said Beth.

A few young men all in Martial Arts uniform run by with some fighting Pokemon.

“Hi Beth!” said first one who bright red hair.

“Hey Beth!” said the 2nd who had green hair

“How’s it going Beth?” said another who had blonde hair.

“Yo Rock Angel, see you later” said the last doing the finger gun and clicking who had blue hair.

Beth realized what they said and began to blush “A lot of the Sansom Dojo used my real name except for one who me Rock Angel” she said very happily unti8l she realized something. “Wait a second they were ether calling me by name and your still called me Rock Breeder!” she yelled.

“Wow I never seen Beth this angry” said Sammy.

“Me nether” said Mina.

“I have but that’s because we are best friends and grew up in the town” said Ronnie.

She placed her hands on the ground “Rock Tomb!” she said many rocks sounded Steve.

A Machamp showed up and smashed all the rocks.

“Now Steve, you know shouldn’t tease Beth like that, her power maybe rocks but she can still find a way to hurt you” said Ronnie’s dad walking up.

“Yes master” said Steve.

“Father, meet Missy and Sammy two new companions who travel with me” said Ronnie.

“Um… hi” said Missy shyly so he would recognize her from when she attacked the dojo.

“What’s up?” said Sammy.

“You’re now traveling with one of the girls who attacked the dojo and a boy?” said Ronnie’s father.

“Hey I’m a girl! Wait Missy attacked Ronnie’s dojo, why?” said Sammy.

“Well I quit Team Magma, so did my sister we didn’t like doing that stuff” said Missy.

“She and sister are now considered traitors. Her sister is traveling with two other members of Team Magma who quit” said Ronnie.

“Oh…” said Ronnie’s father.

“Hey father, can I speak with you alone” said Ronnie.

“Of course” said her father.

They walked away fro some where private. When both of them were gone Steve said “Rock Breeder”

“What a piece of me? I’ll give if you want it!” said Beth.

“Any attack you throw I’ll doge it” said Steve.

Beth raised her hands in the air and said “Ancient Power!”. Several rocks came flying at him, most of them hit him.

“That didn’t hurt Rock Breeder” said Steve who was in pain.

“Sand Storm!” Beth twilling, a tornado appeared and it was made of sand. It Steve hard.

“That barley hurt” said Steve who was even more pain.

With Ronnie and her father they talked.

“I don’t think Steve listened to you, at least Maggie will heal him” said Ronnie.

“What did you want to talk about?” said Ronnie’s father.

“Rock Throw!” said Beth’s voice in the distance.

“Well I… I don’t want to be the heir any more” said Ronnie.

“Rock Blast!” said Beth’s voice in the distance.

“I know I know you never wanted to, I always knew you wanted to be singer.” said Ronnie’s father.

“Rollout!” said Beth’s voice in the distance.

“You knew?” said Ronnie.

“Yes!” said her father.

“Rock Tomb!” said Beth’s voice n the distance.

“Yes, I knew as well as Steve. We made a plan to unofficially make him the heir until you came and told me” said her father.

“Ha-Ha! I successfully dodged that one! Don’t use something you already used on me” said Steve’s voice in the distance.

“Thanks” said Ronnie.

“Why you little!” said Beth’s voice in the distance.

“Under one condition you must train with us. You friends can relax in the hot springs” said her father.

“Rock Hard Crash!” said Beth’s voice in the distance.

“I will, maybe we should get back.” said Ronnie.

“My leg! Oh god my leg!” screamed Steve’s voice in the distance.

“Oh my god! Maggie heal him now!” screamed Mina voice in the distance.

“I will I will!” screamed Maggie’s voice in the distance.

“Is that bone?!” seamed Sammy’s voice in the distance.

“I think that's muscle!” screamed Maya voice in the distance.

“I know one might hit me with a fan due to force of habit but I really do have a stomach ache” screamed Megan’s voice in the distance.

“Maybe we should wait like 10 minutes” said Ronnie with a disgusted look on her face.

10 minutes later Maggie was done healing him.

“I’m tired that was the most damage I ever had to heal.” said Maggie.

“I’m, surprised that you have that kind of power” said Steve.

“Is it okay to come over?” yelled Ronnie.

“Yes, he’s all healed up!” yelled Maggie.

Both Ronnie and her father came back.

“There’s some hot springs nearby. Maybe you girl should relax” said Ronnie’s father who then slapped Steve on the back of the head.

“I’m sorry master” said Steve “I now know not to anger Beth.”

“I’m so sorry” said Beth who detransformed during Steve’s healing.

That’s fine” said Steve getting up.

“It’s like he wasn’t even injured” said Ronnie’s father, “I’ll show to the hot springs. Ronnie you should get changed for training”

“You’re going to train?” said Megan.

“Yeah I’ll explain later” said Ronnie.

Ronnie’s father showed them to the hot springs, both Ronnie and Steve were alone.


“So why did you do that?” said Ronnie.

“Well as they say old habits die hard” said Steve.

“I can see that.” said Ronnie.

Steve led Ronnie to place she can change into her martial arts uniform.

“SO the light green one this time” said Steve.

“Yeah the pink one was dirty” said Ronnie, she took out all 4 of her pokeballs and let out her Pokemon.

“Wow so you caught a couple. Medicham fits you” said Steve.

“Thanks” said Ronnie, blushing.

Meanwhile with Mina group, they wrapped towels around themselves and they got settled in a hot spring.

“This is so relaxing” said Mina.

“I know” said Maggie.

“So you are a girl!” said Beldum.

Sammy threw Beldum into a tree.

“So nice to get that out” said Sammy.

“Where’s the peanut butter!” said Beldum who was dizzy.

Meanwhile Charles watched form a nearby bush.

“I will get them I will!” he said. He turned around to see Dianna relaxing in a hot spring behind him, “You could help you know”

“I don’t want to.” She said.

“Why?” said Charles.

“Because they will think you are a peeping tom of course, do you know what they will do?” said Dianna.

“No…” he said.

“Suit your self” she said.

Charles began to get closer, the nose he made in the bushes startled Mina and the rest.

“What was that?” said Missy.

“I don’t know” said Anne.

“It’s a peeping” said Maddie.

“He’s in there!” said Mina throwing a bucket at Charles. It hit Charles in the face. He fell to the other side of the bushes.

“See bro, I told you that would happen” said Dianna.

“That doesn’t prove anything” said Charles.

Meanwhile Ronnie was battling with the student with blue hair. She used Mankey and the student used Machop.

“Mankey use Fury Swipes!” said Ronnie.

“Right!” said Mankey.

Machop fainted after one move.

“One hit man that’s a powerful attack” said another student who was watching.


“Ronnie is the winner!” said Ronnie’s father.
“I did mean to that!” said Ronnie, “I’m too powerful!”

“That’s okay” said the other student holding out his hand.

“Okay” said Ronnie.

“By the way, does Beth have a boy friend?” said the student.

Ronnie thought about it then she figured it would be wrong for Beth to have boyfriends even though Brock also does flirt.

“I’m sorry but yes” said Ronnie.

“Oh man!” said the student, “I was the only one was teasing her so that she’d notice me”

“Well if things don’t work out I tell her” said Ronnie.

“Thanks” said the student.

“Next battle, Steve and Ron” said Ronnie’s father.

“Right!” said Steve.

“Okay” said the student with the bright red hair.

“Be sure to easy on me” said Ron, the student with the red hair.

“I will, Weasley” said Steve.

Ron’s last name was Smith, but everyone called him Ron Weasley because of his love for the Harry Potter books and the fact his name is Ron and he had bright red hair.

“Go Hitmonlee!” said Steve.

“Go! Hitmontop!” said Ron.

“Hitmonlee use Jump Kick” said Steve.

“Hitmontop use Rapid Spin then dodge!” said Ron.

Hitmontop spun out the way and Hitmonlee fell to the ground.

“Hitmonlee please get up” said Steve.

“I will” said Hitmonlee although Ronnie was the only who can understand it.

“Hitmontop use triple kick!” said Ron.

Hitmontop spun to Hitmonlee, the kick which was hidden in the spinning “It’s on the right!” said Steve. Hitmonlee caught the kick.

“Now, use Double Kick to send it flying!” said Steve. Hotmonlee's kick it to get it off balance and kick it again to send it flying.

“Steve is the winner!” said Ronnie’s father.

“That battle was for Ronnie!” said Steve.

Ronnie began to blush, “Thanks” she said.

Meanwhile with Charles, she was two black eyes and a bloody nose which he used tissue to plug it up with.

“You know it’s not too late to quit and have nice time.” said Dianna.

“Now way!” said Charles.

“As your little sister I’m obligated to speared this rumor abut this to the girls of Team Magma, I mean the first three times that’s okay, but now you look like a peeping tom” said Dianna.

“I don’t care I’ve just establishing my presence but not I will use ropes” said Charles.

He loaded a rope gun and shot an Ice Rope at Mina. It tied to her wrist.

“Guys!” said Mina.

“Oh no!” said Anne.

He began to shoot the other ropes.

“Get Ronnie” said Beth.

“All right I caught all of you!” said Charles coming out of the bushes.

“So you were the peeping tom!” said Missy noticing that he was injured, “I never thought you were such a pervert trying to catch them while we were in the hot springs”

“I tried to stop him, I knew he would injured but no he had to do his own way!” yelled Dianna’s voice on the other side of the bushes.

Maggie had gotten dressed and went to find Ronnie, a few seconds later she did.

“Ronnie! Charles is trying to capture the others” said Maggie.

“Dad I’ll be right back!” said Ronnie.

“I’ll with you” said Steve.

“I don’t think that’s a good idea.” said Maggie.

“Why not” said Steve.

“Because they are in the sot spring” said Maggie.

“Oh.” said Steve.

Both Ronnie and Maggie got the hot spring Charles was yelling “Look this doesn’t make me a pervert!”

“You tired to kidnap them while they are enjoying a hot spring what part of that not being a pervert don[t you under stand?” said Dianna’s voice.

While Charles was distracted Ronnie transformed, “Trying to kidnap my friends right is perverted! You don’t stand a fighting chance!” she said scolding them.

“I’m not a pervert!” yelled Charles he realized why she was in his trap “Wait why didn’t you get trapped?”

“I wasn’t there” said Ronnie.

She went over to Beth’s rope, “Karate Chop!” said Ronnie breaking the rope. She began to the same for Mina and Anne.

“You can’t escape!” said Charles loading the Fighting Rope. While he was distracted Beth transformed.

“Rock Throw!” said Beth using the attack to stop the rope before it hit Ronnie.

“Trying to attack my best friend that! I will Rock Your World!” said Beth.

Steve deiced to see what was going so he hid in some nearby bushes.

“I have an idea!” said Beth, “I break the rest of the ropes while you take care of him!”

Ronnie nodded “Sky Uppercut!” she said then launched him into the sky.

“I’ll be back!” he yelled.

“Rock Throw!” said Beth.

Missy looked over the bushes at Dianna. “I won’t attack you I’m relaxing. I swear” said Dianna.

Missy could tell she was telling the truth. “Okay I believe you just leave when you’re done” said Missy.

“Ronnie!” said Steve exiting the bushes then he forgot why he was hiding in the bushes.

“Get out of here!” screamed Mina.

“Leave now!” yelled Beth.

“Go away!” yelled Missy.

“I’m leaving, I’m leaving!” said Steve.

At the end of the day the training trip was over.

“As they say getting there is half the fun” said Steve.

“Yeah!” said Ronnie.

Ronnie’s father clapped his hands “I have an announcement to make, Ronnie is no longer the heir, Steve is now the heir.” said Ronnie’s father.

“How that was unexpected” said Ron.

“I didn’t think so” said the student with the green hair.

“Thank you for the honor, but I refuse” said Steve.

“What?” said Ronnie.

“I have realized that Ronnie should be the heir, I under stand that she is confused about her destiny and she has no idea to what path to fallow. Pending on which path she chooses I will become heir.” said Steve.

“Steve…” said Ronnie.

“Ronnie, will you still be heir for now?” said her father.

Ronnie thought about for a second “Of course I will” she said.

“See that was unexpected” said the student wit the green hair.

The two groups parted. Later Beth said to Ronnie “So your unsure weather or not being a pop star is your turn dream”

“Yeah, I don’t know” said Ronnie.

“Don’t worry I’m, sure you will choose on our journey” said Mina.

“I will” said Ronnie.

Meanwhile in a Team Magma base every single female member talked about Charles.

“Hey did you hear he tired to kidnap the Pokemon Angels while they were in a hot spring” said a female member.

“I heard they were naked” said another female member.

Charles heard this as he was walking down a hall he was so embarrassed.

“I should have listened to Dianna” he said.
 

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
Chapter 10: Matt under Hypno’s control


It was a very foggy day in a forest. Matt and Peter got separated in the forest. They called out for each other.

“Peter!” yelled Matt, “Peter!”

He continued to search, “Hypno!” said a voice. “Peter is that you?” said Matt. Though the tick fog he saw 4 figures he ran to them but when he saw who they were, Jonathan, J-Lo, Lily and Jonathan’s Hypno he backed away.

“Well isn’t that boy, the one she likes” said Lily.

“I thought it was the other kid” said J-Lo.

“Well I think she’s confused about her feelings right now so she likes both” said Lily.

“Oh…” said J-Lo.

“Well any ways Hypno now!” said Jonathan.

Hypno began to hypnotize Matt. “Now give me all your Ice, Rock, Fire, Fighting, Steel, Dark, Water, Dragon, and Grass.” said Jonathan.

Matt handed three Pokeballs, “Now go find your friend and after that Mina and her friends” said Jonathan.

“I’ll turn off the fog machine” said Lily, she went to a giant machine that was producing the heavy fog. She turned it off and the fog shortly.

Peter who was also searching for Matt was glad the fog had lifted.

“It will be easer to find him” said Peter.

She heard someone was coming on the path so went to see if it was Matt. So he ran to see. But it wasn’t Matt it was Mina and company.

“Hey guys” said Peter.

“Hello Baka!” said Mina.

“You’re not still angry about MMP?” said Peter backing away.

“Nope” said Mina.
“Good, I thought I was going to get in…” said Peter who was caught off by Crawdaunt who came out of it Pokeball and hit Peter a few feet in the air.

“Well I guess he was wrong” said Maggie.

“He sure was” said Mina.

“Crawdaunt return!” said Anne returning Crawdaunt to its Pokeball.

Peter got up, he was very dizzy “I can’t wait for Crawdaunt to get over this” he said.

“As long as you are a jerk he’ll come after you” said Mina.

“Mina…” said Peter.

“Mina does have point” said Maggie.

“Say where’s Matt?” said Mina happily.

”We got separated” said Peter.

“I’ll find him!” said Mina.

“I’ll help since he has Tyrouge.” said Ronnie.

“Me too he does have Bellspout after all” said April.

Missy and Sammy saw him coming from the other side of the path.

“Hey here he comes now” said Missy.

“Matt!” said Mina who to him.

“Hi Mina” she said blushing, Mina sensed that Snorunt wasn’t with him, “Where’s Snorunt?”

“I don’t sense Tyrouge” said Ronnie.

“I don’t sense Bellsprout with him” said April.

“Oh I lost them” said Matt, “I would like to help me”

“Me?” said Mina blushing very red.

“Yes” said Matt, he grabbed Mina’s hand “Mina, I really like you”

Mina blushed bright red so red is that is pokeball red. “I really like you too” she said.

Both Maggie and Peter began to get upset.

“Mina…” said Peter.

“Matt…” said Maggie.

Everyone stared at Maggie because of what he said.

“Maggie… do you like Matt?” said Missy.

“No…” said Maggie.

“Hey Matt, I’ll help out” said April.

“No I want to be along with Mina.” Said Matt, “You stay here”

“I’ll leave my backpack here this way you watch my DVDs and do karaoke while you’re waiting” said Mina.

Matt grabbed Mina’s hand they began to walk together.

“I’m getting a bad feeling about this” said Maggie.

Mina and Matt walked though the forest, Mina was the happiest she’s ever been.

“Bellspout!” said a voice.

Mina turned around and saw Bellsprout.

“It’s your Bellsprout” said Mina happily.

“Bellsprout, use you’re Sleep Powder” said Matt who took out a flash light and a surgical mask. Mina had no idea what was going on. Matt put on the surgical mask and shined the light on Bellsprout.

“Matt why…” said Mina right before she fell asleep.

Lily, J-Lo and Jonathan were in a tree right above Mina.

“You were right, she did fall for it” said J-Lo.

Meanwhile with other they did karaoke since Mina was gone. Maggie was singing Ya Pa Pa when she sensed something.

“Mina…” said Maggie.

“Maggie what is it?” said Missy.

Maggie put down the mike, let out Celebi and began to chant “I am one with nature, nature is a part of me” over and over. She began to glow green. She suddenly stopped. “Mina was captured by Team Aqua!”

“That’s bad!” said Missy.

“How?” said Anne.

“The hypnotized Matt, they made preparations for all of too in case any of you and me went to save her” said Maggie.

“Is there any way to her?” said Missy.

“I must transfer my power to another someone they wouldn’t except” said Maggie.

“Permanently?” said Maya.

“No just temporally.” said Maggie.

“I’ll do it!” said Missy.

“No I will!” said Maya.

“I’m sorry to say this but nether of you can’t. Nether one of you shares the same ancestor as me” said Maggie.

“What do you mean?” said Missy.

“I’ll explain, a Guardian of Ilex Forest can only have one child, a daughter, then she becomes the next, unless a corrupted soul gets into the mix…” said Maggie.

“Corrupted Soul?” said Maya.

“Yes, when a Guardian in training becomes corrupted, when she uses her powers for evil too many times. I don’t want to get in to it, any ways. There must always be father. If there is an emergency, then a Guardian or Guardian in training can transfer to a relative on her father’s side of the family and must be related by blood. So in other words Peter has to be one” said Maggie.

“Great… you guys will say stuff. I won’t go and save her” said Peter.

Anne and Maggie began to glare at him a lot. He began to get scared of what they might do.

“Okay I’ll do it” he said with a small whimper.

A minute later Peter stood a few feet away from Maggie. “To this boy I lend him my powers. We share the same grandfather and he can use it. Now Power go into him!” said Maggie. A green glow came from her body and went into Peter’s body.

“Its done, one thing you should know is that you need to borrow Celebi and another is that you can’t use any of my attacks you need come up with own” said Maggie to Peter.

“Like what?” said Peter.

“Make up as you go along like Light Saber for example” said Maggie.

“Light Saber?” said Peter.

Suddenly a beam of green light came from his hands and it was like a light saber “I should have told do not think of something and say it one thing at my skill level you can only have one attack” said Maggie.

“Great so I’m stuck with a Star Wars rip-off?” said Peter.

“Pretty much” said Maggie.

“At least I played with toy swords when I was little” said Peter.

Later Peter left with Celebi and Cloyster out.

“I hope this works” he said.

Meanwhile Mina woke up in a cage. She saw J-Lo and Lily starring at Jonathan who was drunk off Celebration “Juice”

“The Blue Man Group is just a rip-off of The Smurfs and The Smurfs they should have one of them kill the rest off in a 7 like way or turning to Zombies” said Jonathan who was speaking drunk talk.

“What?” said Mina.

“Looks like Mina is awake.” said Lily.

“What’s going on?” said Mina.

“We hypnotized one of your crushes.” said J-Lo pointing to Matt who was still under Hypno’s control.

Mina noticed she was tied up “Oh this is going to be easy to get out” said Mina, she tried to transform but she got an electric shock.

“Oh that rope will shock you if you try to transform.” said Lily.

“That’s right giant hamster” said Jonathan.

“Is he drunk?” said Mina.

“Yes” said both J-Lo and Lily at the same time.

“Why aren’t you two drunk?” said Mina.

“Well thing is we’re both 18 and Jonathan is over 21” said Lily.

“You work for Team Aqua yet you obey the age limit?” said Mina.

“Silly isn’t it?” said J-Lo.

“What if any of my friends come?” said Mina.

“We have that covered, unless its one of the normal people then we launch a trap.” said Lily.

“Great…” said Mina.

Meanwhile in the forest Cloyster stopped it began to dance around. Peter just stared.

“You saying that we are near enough for me to continue without you guide me?” said Peter.

Cloyster nodded and Peter returned it to it pokeball, he took a step an alarm sounded. With Team Aqua they saw on a screen who triggered the alarm.

“Peter!” said Mina happily.

“So you do like him” said J-Lo.

Mina began to blush “I don‘t like him!” she said.

“What should we do?” said Lily.

“Well he’s probably going to challenge us to a Pokemon in an attempt to save her” said J-Lo.

Peter continued on his way when he got their high tech camp.

“So you came here to save your Girlfriend” said J-Lo.

Peter began to blush bright red “No way I came because I was the only who can!” said Peter.

“What do you mean” said Lily.

“Well… hey where’s the guy?” said Peter.

Lily pointed embarrassingly to the drunken Jonathan.

“Let me guess he drank celebratory “juice” and then got drunk” said Peter.

“It was…” said Lily but J-Lo shut her mouth and said “Don’t say it or we’ll anger 4kids”

“But this is a fanfic” said Mina in the cage.

“What?” said Peter.

“Nothing” said both Mina and J-Lo at the same time.

Peter cleared his throat “Any ways as I was saying I’m the only who can save her, Light Saber!” he said and the Light Saber came to his hands.

“What the heck you have psychic Powers too?” said Lily.

“No just temporally, Maggie has the ability to lend powers to her blood relives, Peter just happens to her cousin” said Mina.

“Creepy psychic girl- Maggie” said J-Lo writing Maggie name down on the list of names.

“Wait I thought you were Anne’s cousin.” said Lily.

“I thought Mina was Anne’s cousin” said J-Lo.

“Let me explain Anne’s mom and Mina’s mom are sisters, my mom and Anne’s dad are brother and sister, my dad and Maggie dad are brothers” said Peter.

“It’s true” said Mina.

“Oh” said J-Lo and Lily. While they were distracted he used the light saber to cut the cage.

“Let me guess the first thing you thought up was a Light Saber, I won’t tease you I know of a way since it’s more of an energy Light Saber to beat them with” said Mina.

“How?” asked Peter.

“Focus your light saber into an energy beam you shoot 2with” said Mina.

Peter got up to test this out, he aimed to the monitors that showed various area of the forest. “I hope your Mina” he said. A ball of light came from his hand and a laser beam came out. He turned to Mina and said “Cool, where did you coke up with that?”

“Tenchi Muyo, surprisingly they have light sabers in it” said Mina, “But before you save Matt can you please untie this rope? Maybe use your powers because it may give you an electric shock” said Mina.

“So you me injure you with the light saber?” said Peter.

“What?!” said Mina.

“No I’m kidding, Celebi!” said Peter, Celebi who was hiding the forest sop that she wouldn’t given away Peter’s powers appeared. Celebi used Psychic on the ropes and it came undone.

Mina transformed in her Angel form “Brainwashing Matt and Capturing me, you’ll regret it! I will Freeze your Power!” said Mina scolding them.

“Hey, Tapir Guy, have you seen this Star Wars movie?” said Jonathan talking to Hypno who let out its Pokemon while no one was noticing.

“Hypno! Hyp! No! No! No!” yelled Hypno.

“What was that?” said Mina.

Smoochum came out its Pokeball and translated “When you’re drunk you shouldn’t let me out of my ball! Because of that I’m letting that kid free from my control!”

“O…k” said Mina wh0 then translated for Peter and Team Aqua. A second late4r Matt came of Hypno’s control “What’s going on?” said Matt.

“Good he’s out of it!” said Mina.

Matt grabbed the three Pokeballs and stopped behind Mina. “Blizzard!” said Mina and all of Team Aqua flew away.
Mina turned to Peter “Thank you” she said.

“Mina did I say anything to you while I was out of it?” said Matt.

Mina thought about it for moment, she was unsure whether it was Hypno’s control or not. “No you didn’t” she said. She detransformed and said to “”Peter who us the way back”

Late they got to the camp site where everyone got settled Peter returned the Power “Power return to your proper owner” he said.

So they ate dinner, went to sleep and the next day the two groups parted. With Mina’s group Maya kept on saying stuff about how she was very nice to Peter.

“Look it all because he was rescued me okay” said Mina.

“Sure deny it” said Mina.

“SO was it true was Jonathan drunk?” said Anne.

“Sure was, I bet he won’t attack us today” said Mina.

“Why?” said Maya.

“Well…” said Mina and she explained why.

“Oh…” said Maya.

“Hey I just remembered there’s another contest in a nearby town!” said April.

“Oh yeah, the Luki Town Pokemon Contest” said Maya.

“Next stop Luki Town” said Mina.
 

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
(Okay I a few things to say, if you have somethign to say please say it in a reveiw. Also please don't ingore the add I put... I need the money)

Chapter 11: April’s a fangirl?

They got to Luki Town Pokemon Center to see a lot of Pokemon Coordinators. April got really excited when she saw a boy with bright green hair.

“Oh my Gawd it Drew he is teh hawtness” said April.

“April, did you just say “Oh my Gawd its Drew, he is the hawtness?” half of those aren’t even real words.” said Maya.

“Oh yeah I have to make a call” said Mina.

“I’ll go with you” said Missy.

Mina and Missy made a call to Emma.

“Hi, you two saw my site right?” said Emma with a smile.

“Yeah” said Mina.

“It’s cool that you’re doing that” said Missy.

“I know, becoming an associate of VIZ and putting special links on my site, plus I’ll get money for each purchase made though my site” said Emma.

“I forgot what’s your site's address again?” said Missy.

“emmasanimeplace.net” replied Emma.

“I think I should buy all my Viz products from that” said Mina.

“Might I recommend getting America Vol. 12 no. 4. It has a letter I wrote in it, but they misspelled my last name.” said Emma.

Sammy walked up and said “You know, the add for your site, I doubt readers will go…”

“…” said all three.

“I have to go now!” said Emma who hung up the phone very fast.

Sammy cleared her throat “You guys should see how April’s acting, it’s pretty funny” she said.

“Okay” said Mina.

Meanwhile April ran up to Drew in a very stalkerish way.

“You’re Drew…” said April.

“O…k” said Drew.

So what’s so special about him?” said Sammy walking up.

“He’s an awesome coordinator he’s won 4 ribbons so far and he’s trains a Roseila!” said April.

“Well you have won few too” said Mina.

“That’s right April you won the Rustborrow and the Slateport” said Maya.

“Maya you have one more than me” said April.

“That may be true…” said Maya.

“I also have a note book with all the contests he ever been, who he fought against and who won” said April.

She began to look at it “No way!” she yelled.

“What is it?” said Mina.

“Slateport and Fallarbor… you know May?” said April.

“You know her too, well she considerers me her rival” said Drew.

“It’s a small world after all…” sang Mina.

“So you do her” said Drew.

“My friend Beth is Brock’s boyfriend” said April.

“But doesn’t he flirt with every girl he sees” said Drew.

“Beth’s the same way with guys” said April pointing to Beth walking up to a cute guy blushing. Ronnie tugged her arm and said “Come on Beth let’s go get ice cream”

“Ok then” said Drew.

“And Sammy has a crush on Ash” said April.

“Great…” said Mina.

“What is it?” said Anne.

“I have that song stuck in my head now” said Mina.

Everyone stared at her. The next day April was practicing with her Bellosom.

“So then you trying to impress him?” said Missy who walked up- with Mina.

“Yes” said April then she noticed Mina had a strange look on her face, “You still have it’s a small world stuck you head?”

Mina nodded, “I know it embarrassing” she said.

“I think Emma knows the Ranma version” said Missy.

“Gotta go!” said Emma who ran away very fast.

She went to the phones in the Pokemon center and called Emma. For some reason Emma looked a little upset about something.

“Emma what’s wrong?” said Mina.

“Well my boyfriend is over and…” said Emma.

“And he broke up with you?” said Mina.

“Oh, no not that.” said Emma, “We tried to kiss but his Electrabuzz, Lum came out of its Pokeball and shocked him. I’m trying to stop her” said Emma.

“Is it a bad time to ask for it Jusenkyo After All?” said Mina.

“It should take less than a minute. Let me guess you have it’s a small world stuck in your head.” said Emma.

“Yes” said Mina.

“Okay back in a second” said Emma.

As minute waited she heard a young man’s voice yell out “Please Stop Lum!” and Emma’s voice saying “Eugene use Fury Swipes!” Emma came back breathing heavily.

“I had to use my family’s Persian to stop her. Anyways I e-mailed the song to you” said Emma.

“Thanks” said Mina.

Later April continued to train when Maya who was training elsewhere saw what she was doing.

“You might to be careful.” said Maya.

“Why?” said April.

“Well you might botch the contest in attempt to try to get him to notice you, after all you are just a fan girl” said Maya.

“I’ll show you who’s just a fangirl!” said April, she stormed off, and before she entirely left she turned around, pulled down her bottom eye lid and stuck her tongue out.

“I just hop that she doesn’t botch it” said Maya to herself.

That night in Maya, Mina, Anne and Sammy’s room Maya was very concerned about April.

“So you two got into a fight?” said Sammy who on the bottom left bunk.

“Yeah, I’m afraid she might botch it” said Maya who was on the bottom right.

“Don’t worry until the contest, that way you Pokemon won’t get confused ether.” said Anne who on the top left.

“Your right” said Maya looking up Anne.

Mina said nothing, everyone began to look at her.

“You still have that song stuck in your head?” said Sammy.

Mina nodded while clutching her pillow.

“But I thought that Ranma version would have fix things” said Maya.

“Did nothing” said Mina.

“But wait then we found out that Melody knew Ash too you did have that song stuck your head.” said Anne.

“Maybe it was because the world was in danger and I had to consecrate on something else” said Mina.

“Whose Melody?” said Sammy.

“Oh right, you weren’t with us at that time” said Mina.
Mina began to tell the story about that time on the orange islands Sammy got very happy when Ash had a major role “It’s so cool that Ash did that! Wait did you say Miroku doll? Isn’t he that guy on Inu-Yasha who touches wo…” said Sammy but was cut of by Anne saying. “We should go to bed, after all tomorrow is the contest”


The next day the contest began, April was going to use Bellosom and Maya was going to use Vulpix. And so the contest began, both Maya and April got into the 2nd round so did Drew. In fact the 2nd battle was between Drew and Maya.

“I don’t know who to root for” said April after the results in the locker room.

“Well ether way just wins this battle and you’ll have to face ether him or me” said Maya.

“I know…” said April.

Not long later the contest battle began. April fought against a girl with a Togetic. April was ready to battle when she began to get weak. She fell to the ground. Maggie saw in the crowd what was happening.

“There’s a rope tied to April’s ankle!” said Maggie.

“What are you to do?” said Sammy.

“I know come on out Celebi! Time Freeze! Except those who know the secret who are in this contest hall!” said Maggie.

Everything became black and white except for Maggie, Kia, Missy, Maggie, Beldum, Celebi and the Pokemon Angels.

“We need to find something in color” said Maggie.

“Over there! There are two people in color!” said Missy pointing to two people in the crowd they got up and ripped f their clothes, it was Dianna and Charles.

“You two we should have known!” said Missy.

“Of course it them, they’re the only one who uses the ropes” said Mina.

“Well ether way you guys are going down!” said Dianna taking out a rope gun.

She shot at the whole group and each Pokemon Angel was tied.

“That was perfect!” said Charles.

“A little too perfect!” said Maya showing up with Vulpix, “Vulpix, use flame thrower on the ropes.”

The attack burnt the ropes away and everyone got better.

“It’s best if I get rid of them! Teleportation Beam!” said Maggie.

She shot a beam that made them and both vanished.

“Where did you send them?” said Mina.

“The place that Team Rocket would if they blasted off again.” said Maggie.

“Oh” said Mina, she thought of second “Hey that’s song no longer stuck in my head”

Everyone stared at her. “Well it’s true” said Mina.

“Okay Maya go back to the locker room and April get back onto the ground! The second Celebi is back in its ball time will flow normally again” said Maggie.

When Celebi went back into its ball Time went back its normal flow, there was a little confusion such as if anyone saw a Celebi or for a couple people where did those two people go.

April won her battle against the girl while Maya lost her battle against Drew. April had to face Drew in battle.

“So who do you think will win?” said Anne.

“I think April will” said Maddie.

“Why do you say that?” said Mina.

“Well she’ll get over excited in trying to impress Drew and she’ll lose control of her power, the last she wasn’t sure if she’d be facing Maya or Drew if she won so it was different” said Maddie.

The battle began, April made the first move “Bellosom, use Petal Dance!” many petals flew towards Roseila, it hit and Roseila was unable to battle.

The crowd starred at the site, everyone in the group faces went blank “See I told you” said Maddie.

April’s face was blank too “I was so excited to battle with Drew, I lost control of my Powers and beat Drew with one move” said April.

And so April was presented with Luki ribbon.

“That was the strongest Petal Dance I’ve seen” said Drew to April.

April began to blush bright red “He complemented my Pokemon’s attack” said April to her self.

Later as they leaving town April continued to blush.

“At least she should be her old self by tomato” said Deborah.

“You said it” said Megan.

“So then what’s next on our route?” said Maggie.

“We need to think of a place” said Mina.

“Okay so anywhere” said Missy.

“I wonder if Team Magma is all right” said Maggie.

Meanwhile Dianna and Charles were stuck 9on a branch on the edge of a cliff.

“This is new” said Dianna.

“No kidding” said Charles.
 

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
I'm busy for the next couple so don't execpt a update for this until a couple weeks.
 
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Well, I would just like to say that you shoudn't put thank you for your critisim, because its just really rude and the people that are giving you "critisim" are just trying to help you so you will have a better fic.
Anyway, I like your fic a lot ^^ , ust put in a little more dailog(hope I spelled that right ^^;;;;) and you need to describe more, then it would be an even better fic ^^ , :D!!!! I hope you take this as friendly advice and not "critisim"
 

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
(Okay, I will from now on. Oh yeah I was very busy and I also had bad writters block and any ways it's back so enjoy this next chapter. Oh yeah one more thing, I'm not being mean to my boyfriend by giving him an Electrabuzz that shocked him, it was his idea)

Chapter 12: Burnt Toast


It was a beautiful morning, Mina and the rest did their Saturday morning routine, everyone got dressed, brushed their hair and teeth, and talked while Maggie cooked breakfast and Mina and Missy watched Mew Mew.

“So they watch Mew Mew in the morning and Inu-Yasha at night? Interesting schedule” said Sammy.

“You said it” said Deborah.

They smelled something bad, “Okay who stopped in something?” said Maddie then she saw there was a second breakfast being made by Megan.

“Unfortunately I did have enough supplies for the breakfast I was hopping to make so Megan has to cook half the breakfast. So to divide it equally, so I think that 5 of the Pokemon Angels and1 of the girls gets to eat the break fast I’m cooking” said Maggie.

“Okay Pokemon Battle. It will be one on one, April VS. Maddie, Deborah VS. Sammy, Beth VS. Anne and Me VS. Ronnie.” said Mina.

The first battle was t was Mina vs. Ronnie as Mina.

“I don’t get Mina’s parings.” said Maya.

“Well April and Maddie makes since because they can’t control their powers with ease, Mina and Ronnie since they are training, while Mina randomly picked the other 4.” said Missy.

“Oh now t makes sence” said Maya.

The battle began “Spheal use Powder Snow!” said Mina.

The attack hit Medicham and it was knocked out.

“I guess Mina isn’t playing fair” said Missy.

“When Megan’s cooking on the line I guess playing fair is not an option” said Maya.

The next battle was April VS. Maddie. April used Roseila while Maddie used Bagon.

“Roseila, use Petal Dance!” said April.

The attack hit Bagon and it was knocked out.

“My guess Maddie threw the match” said Missy.

“Makes since” said Kia.

The next battle was Anne VS. Beth. Anne used Crawdaunt while Beth used Geodude. Anne used one attack and Geodude was knocked out with one hit, which was Bubble Beam.

“Wow, I guess weaknesses still do apply” said Missy.

“I didn’t know that” said Kia.

And finally the battle was Deborah VS Sammy. It was Mawile VS Ninetales.

“Deborah is going to win” said Kia.

Indeed Deborah did win with Fire Spin. Missy deiced to sacrifice herself and eat Megan’s cooking. When it was time to eat all of those who had to eat Megan’s cooking besides Megan swallowed their pride and ate it. Then they got sick very badly. The next day after everyone was better they continued on their journey.

“I was hopping it would be good” said Megan crying.

“You’d better practice on all the water types because that’s the only to try.” said Sammy.

“I’ll do that!” yelled Megan.

“What?” said Mina.

All of Megan’s Pokemon, Mina’s Dewgong and Spheal, Anne’s Crawdaunt, Beth’s Corsola and Maddie’s Kingdra came out.

“Cook for us!” they all said.

“I will!” said Megan.

“If all of them get sick then I’m getting into Zatch Bell” said Missy.

Megan cooked for all the Pokemon and of course they got sick.

“Looks like another anime for me!” said Missy.

“They look very sick, maybe we should go the Pokemon center” said Mina.

“Yeah” said Beth.

All them hurried to the Pokemon center and got their Pokemon safely there. Nurse Joy complained to Megan.

“Well you shouldn’t feed them that food” said Nurse Joy to Megan.

“Yes Maim” said Megan.

Meanwhile Missy was on the Computer when she got a message to call Emma.

“Hey Mina! Come over here” said Missy.

Mina read the message “The Evil Empire will soon fall! Call me. P.S. Sorry for not contacting earlier, I’ve been very busy”

And so both Mina and Missy called Emma.

“Hey guys, you got my message” said Emma who had Swablu on her head.

“Sure did” said Mina.

“So what’s it about?” said Missy.

“Well the first thing I’d like to say, I got into One Piece.” said Emma.

“Oh.” said Mina.

“Wow, your second 4kids show.” said Missy.

“That means I have started the revolution!” said Emma.

“What you mean?” said Mina.

“I started a group called the P.O.A., it about a week old but I need members to join and sign the petition.” said Emma.

“Online?” said Mina.

Emma nodded, “Wait what if that doesn’t work so well?” said Missy.

“I have plan b!” said Emma.

“Plan B?” said Missy and Mina, “What is it?”

“It’s a secret.” said Emma.

“Okay…” said Mina.
“How do we sign it?” said Missy.

“Just go to my site.” said Emma.

“Okay.” said Missy.

“Darling! Darling! Darling!” yelled a voice on Emma’s end of the phone.

“Emma Please help!” yell another voice on Emma’s end.

“Great Rick need help with Lum, I have to use Eugene to battle again, I’ll be right back” said Emma.

Emma being the flying type trainer she needed to use another type to battle with Lum, her boyfriends Electrabuzz. Ashe got up and left but her Swablu left.

“Swab blu blu, blu blu swab” said Emma’s Swablu.

“You know what’s its saying?” said Missy.

“I know who can, come on out Smoochum.” said Mina.

“Swablu, swa swa, blu blu bluuuu!” said Swablu.

“So you just wanted to tell some well any ways that’s great news.” said Smoochum.

“Swablu?” said Swablu.

“Well Mina’s one too.” said Smoochum.

“Blu!” said Swablu, “Swablu, Swablu.”

“Your right it would be best if Mina and Emma meet it would be time to tell them” said Smoochum.

“Swa!” said Swablu nodding.

“Smoochum what are you talking about?” said Mina.

“Just some that’ private” said Smoochum.

Emma came back to the phone.

“Emma, who was yelling “Darling”?” said Mina.

“Well you might laugh at this, especially since you two are Urusei Yatsura fans too, Rick taught his Electrabuzz Lum how to say “Darling”, however since Lum his first Pokemon she fell in love with him and shocks him, but I think I already told you that.” said Emma.

“Yeah about the shockings.” said Mina.

“I have to go, but you should check out my first AMV on animemusicvideos.org, since you guys like Tenchi.” said Emma.

“Hey Emma, trying to get people to do some though subliminal ads?” said Sammy walking up.

“IO wasn’t finished!” said Emma, “Any ways, right now the link is pretty bad since the music video ends mid way though but I hope to fix it soon, see ya!”

Meanwhile Megan was fishing in a nearby pond thinking, “Maybe I’m not meant to be a cook” she said to herself.

“Megan!” said voice.

Megan turned around to see it was Anne and Maggie.

“You shouldn’t give up” said Maggie sitting next to her.

“Yeah just because you gave food poisoning to everyone and all the Water Pokemon you shouldn’t give up.” said Anne.

“But… I don’t want ot hurt anyone” said Megan.

“I have to say your cooking has improved, as you know before we were reborn your cooking was worse, it was able to kill Pokemon.” said Anne.

“It was able to KILL?” yelled Maggie.

“Any ways it may take a while but don’t give up” said Anne.

“Okay” said Megan.

Megan line tugged, “All right I caught something” said Megan.

“Reel it in” said Anne.

Maggie just stood there, she was still shocked about that her food was able to kill, that was until she saw what Megan caught.

“It’s a Feebas!” said Megan.
“Wow they are so rare” said Maggie.

Meanwhile in the Pokemon center, Nurse Joy was checking on a Hypno.

“Are you sure it injured?” said Nurse Joy.

“Just look a little closer” said the trainer who was in the same room.

The Hypno began to hypnotize her.

“And they must fight a Nurse Joy how interesting” said the trainer, he pulled the bottom of his pant to revel that he is Jonathan.

Back with Megan Feebas asked her if she could join.

“Of course you can I always wanted a Feebas” said Megan very happily.

“Yippee!” said the Feebas.

Megan put Feebas in a pokeball, did the V is for Victory sign and said “All right I caught a Feebas”

There was loud explosion from the Pokemon Center.

“Our group is the only there right now, right?” said Maggie.

“I have a bad feeling about this” said Anne.

All three got inside the center, to see Nurse Joy trying to shock the others with a Pikachu.

“”If any of you transform I will shock you” said Nurse Joy.

“Um… did you have brain fart or something, Pikachu’s shocks can’t affect us” said Mina.

“But we can to your little friends” said Jonathan appearing behind Nurse Joy.

“Well Water Angel and the ***** aren’t here. I’m going to look for them.” said Lily.

“Look like another fight” said Megan.

Anne nodded. However Lily got a call.

“Hello” said Lily, “What, yes!”

“What is it?” said Jonathan.

“We’ve been ordered to retreat due to news on something we’ve been hopping for” said Lily.

“Fine” said Jonathan, he released Nurse Joy from his control and she fainted.

Both members left and the past by Maggie, Megan and Anne.

“So looks like no battle this time but the next time we meet you better be lucky” said Lily to Anne.

“I will” said Anne.

“I wonder what that was all about” said Mina.

Later the members got to a Team Aqua base.

“It’s a shame that this had to happen during J-Lo’s vacation” said a Male member with black hair member showing them something.

“Will you get on with this Glen” said Lily.

“Fine” said the member named Glen.

He lifted up a sheet and underneath it were the remnants of a transmitter.

“As you know I was on vacation last week and I went to Mandarin Island in the Orange Islands. I discovered a destroyed Team Rocket base. A while back they used a Drowzee to control Pokemon, if I could reverse engineer this then you can use this control the Psychic Girl.” said Glen.

“That’s great” said Jonathan.

“I did have a fun time too… Gigity gigity gigity!” said Glen.

“Whoa too much info!” yelled Lily.

“Sorry was I thinking out loud?” said Glen.

“…” said both Lily and Jonathan.

“Any ways, you should try and use a decoy until we have this up and ready.” said Glen.

“I know of the perfect on too, let’s just say that it would seem like an accident” said Jonathan.
 

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
Chapter 13: Team Aqua’s Decoy

After the incident at the Pokemon Center, they headed to well they don’t have a destination…

“Mina where are we?” said Maya.

“I think somewhere in between Fortree and Lilycove” said Mina.

“Where are we headed?” said April.

“I wish I knew.” said Mina.

“Let’s take a rest” said Maggie.

Suddenly the ground collapsed beneath them and all went falling into a hole.

“What just happened?” said Anne.

“We fell into a ninja trap?” said Mina.

“Will someone get off my head?” said Kia.

“Will some one get off my back?” said Maggie.

“Will all of you get of me!” yelled Megan.

“We got Pikachu!” said a familial voice.

Everyone who could looked up and saw it was Team Rocket.

“Bakas…” said Mina.

“Maybe you should look down!” yelled Anne.

“Hey you’re not the twerps!” said James who began to cower.

“Of course we’re not them” said Mina.

What should we do?” said Meowth.

“Well I say we recover the hole and wait for the twerps since they are tangled up” said Jessie.

And so Team Rocket covered the hole back up. The next people who were on the road were Ash and company and they did fall into the trap.

“Great another Team Rocket trap” said Ash.

“Pikachu…” said Pikachu.

“Is it me or did we land on something soft?” said May.

“You did and you please move your foot, it’s in my face!” said Mina.

“Sorry.” said May.

She moved her foot and Mina sat up.

“What are you doing in this trap?” said May.

“Well its simple, Team Rocket thought we you guys then when they found out it was us in the hole they covered it up.

“I see…” said Max.

“Since I can get up looks like Team Rocket will be blasting off again.” said Mina.

She squirmed around a bit and got into position, she transformed and flew to the top.

“Putting us into this is a crime, I will Freeze your Power!” said Mina.

“Well you should prepare for trouble”
“And make it double”
“To protect the world from devastation”
“To untie all people within out our nation”
“To denounce the evils of truth and love!”
“To extend out reach to the stars above!
“Jessie!”
“James!”
“Team Rocket! Blasting off at the speed of light!”
“Surrender now or prepare to fight!”
“Meowth that right!”
“Wobbufet!”
“Chime, Chime”

“So you caught a Chmecho, its cute.” said Mina.

“You think so” said James.

“Bye” said Mina she took out her wand and did Lovely Ice Snow Storm.

“Team Rocket’s Blasting Off Way Too Soon!”

Mina looked to the hole and said “Now how are we going to you out?”

So they deicide to use May’s Bulbasaur to get Ash, Pikachu, May, Max, Brock out. Then the rest squirmed until one of the Pokemon Angels was free enough, this continued until there was enough room to get everyone.

“Oh Brock” said Beth.

“I'm getting tired of that always happening when those two get together” said Mina.

“Me too” said April.

“Since its lunch time I’ll cook!” said Maggie.

There was a big gust of wind.

“Hello Pokemon Angels!” said a voice.

“I know that voice. Jonathan!” yelled Anne.

“Jonathan?” said Ash.

“Boy you do know us don’t you Anne.” said Lily’s voice.

“That’s right Anne!” said J-Lo’s voice.

“Where are you?” said Anne.

“I think they up the on that giant fan!” said Mina pointing up.

“Thank you Mina.” Said Lily who was holding a ten pound bag of sand, she wasn’t the only one the others too.

“”Time to use Sand Storm!” said J-Lo.

“But wouldn’t the Pokemon attack be more effective?” said Missy.

“…” said all three members.

“So would attack like Smoke Screen or Haze” said Mina.

“Shaddup!” said Lily.

All three members poured the sand over the fan which cased a sandstorm. While everyone was distracted J-Lo grabbed Max.

Ash and the gang was confused, “What just happened?” said Ash.

“The three Team Aqua members after us.” said Anne.

May began to look around, she was very worried.

“May what’s wrong?” said April.

“I can’t find Max” said May.

“Maybe the little brat fell into the hole” said Beldum and Sammy translated expect for the little brat part.

“I know your trying to catch me off guard so I’d translate the stuff you say” said Sammy glaring at Beldum.

Mina and May looked into the hole, Max wasn’t there but some one else was, Lily.

“Little help!” said Lily.

“Oh I’ll help you.” Said Anne with an aurora of anger.

“I’m sorry if I ever call you a *****!” said Lily crying.

Not too long later Megan was cooking soup while Lily was tied up.

“You did something to Max didn’t you?” said May.

“Why would I know?” said Lily.

“So why are you cooking?” said Mina.

“It was Anne’s idea, I practice with out hurting any of you or Pokemon” said Megan.

“I see” said Missy.

Megan was done she put on an innocent face.

“You look hungry, would you like some soup?” Megan.

“Why is Megan giving her soup?” said May.

“You’ll see” said Maddie.
Megan fed her the soup, the second she swallowed it she began to feel sick.

“What did you feed me?” said Lily.

“Megan’s cooking” said Anne.

“You haven’t heard of the Legend of Water Angel’s cooking have you, it is that is was so bad it could a person or Pokemon could die, not even a Snorlax would eat it” said Kia.

“Though I do have admit I have gotten better since my past life” said Megan who began to feed Lilt some more.

“Tell us now!” said Anne.

“They are trying to control that little twerp, no more soup! No more!” said Lily.

“Oh yeah!” said Anne.

Anne began to stuff Lily’s mouth with soup.

“Take this and this!” yelled Anne.

“Okay, Anne went bye bye” said Maggie.

“So what’s with Anne?” said Ash.

“Anne and Lily are rivals, I don’t know the whole story, she never told us” said Mina.

“Not even you?” said Missy.

Mina shook her head, “Any ways we should try to find a way to snap him out.” She said.

“You don’t have to worry about that” said Maggie.

“How do you know?” said Mina.

“Right now I can sense it, I can sense that there are something’s going on with Hypno.” said Maggie.

“What do you mean?” said May.

Meanwhile with Team Aqua, they had Max tied up.

“What are you going to do?” yelled Max.

“Control you so that we can finally get them… say where’s Lily?” said Jonathan.
“I don’t know, I heard her scream help me I’m stuck in a hole!” said J-Lo.

“We’ll just look for her after the decoy plan.” said Jonathan.

“Decoy plan?” said Max.

“He didn’t say Decoy Plan, he said… me coy fan” said J-Lo.

“Me coy fan?” said Max, “It sounds like your hiding something.”

“That’s a lie!” said J-Lo.

“Come on out Hypno!” said Jonathan, “Hypnotize this little boy.”

“No!” said Hypno.

“What?” said Jonathan.

“Hypno! No! No! No!” said Hypno.

“What trouble at the old mill?” said J-Lo.

Max, Jonathan and Hypno stared at her because she said something stupid.

“I’ve always wanted to say that” said J-Lo.

“Hypno” said Hypno who began to dance around.

“I see so it would be stupid to that to someone with no Pokemon” said Jonathan.

“Well any ways maybe we should do a hostage negotiation thing, him for one of the Pokemon Angels” said J-Lo.

“I doubt that will work.” said Jonathan.

“Why not?” said J-Lo.

“Well I got this feeling like that’s a bad idea, like they have something we need” said Jonathan.

Back with Maggie she was explaining what she meant.

“Hypno will refuse to it since there is no use in hypnotizing him, he’s younger than all of us and he has no Pokemon so it’s like saying “Hey Fight this Little Boy we know you’ll win”” said Maggie.

“I get it” said May.

“Maybe we exchange hostages, since Lily don’t look too good” said Deborah.

Everyone stared at Anne stuffing Lily’s face, while Megan cooked… something, it indescribable except it smelled bad.

“Say Mina, do you have speakers for your Karaoke Machine?” said Maggie.

“Sure do!” said Mina.

She took out two large speakers, “Whay what’s the plan?” said Mina.

“Well first I’d like to announce the exchange then I’ll tell them fallow the music, which you will sing.” said Maggie.

“Okay.” said Mina.

“Is it okay if I help?” said May.

“Not at all, Max is your brother.” said Mina

“Hey can I do it too?” said Ronnie.

“Sure can” said Mina.

Maggie set up the speakers and put them on 11.

“Hey Mina where did you get these speakers?” said Maggie.

“I forgot but I bought them because they up ‘till 11 which is higher then 10” said Mina.

“Why couldn’t they make 10 louder?” said Maggie.

“I doubt that 10 year olds will get the joke” said Sammy.

“I doubt no one will notice that you made yet another reference to this being a fanfic” said Beldum.

Sammy used Beldum to hit a tree.

“Ix-nay of on the anfic-fay” said Sammy.

While this was going on Maggie got the speakers ready.

“Okay all set!” said Maggie.
Meanwhile with Jonathan, J-Lo and Max. Max tried to get them to tell what he meant by decoy.

“I heard you said decoy plan” said Max.

“I said Me Coy Lan! That’s my real name” said Jonathan.

“But she said Me Coy Fan” said Max.

“Fine, we have a plan to get them once and for all this is just a decoy for when we are truly ready” said Jonathan.

“So y6ou think that you trading me for one of them will work?” said Max.

“Even if we only get one it’s a double success” said J-Lo.

“O…k” said Max.

“Testing, testing! Will the real Slim Shady Please Stand up!” boomed Maggie’s voice though the forest. “Okay, J-Lo, Jonathan. Please give Max back, in exchange we have Lily. I think you should get here fast… no really she’s going to vomit if she eats anymore of Megan’s cooking.”

“Get me now! No more food! No more!” screamed.

“No, I did not put the mike up her, she heard me say about it and screamed about the food. Please come soon, just the music.” said Maggie.

When Maggie stopped talking the song Kizuna from Mermaid Melody Pichi Pichi Pitch began to play.

“Looks like it won’t be a double success after all.” said J-Lo.

And so the Team Aqua members dragged Max to where the music was coming from. When the three girls saw Team Aqua was there with Max. They stopped singing.

“Max!” said May happily.

“Here’s the boy where’s Lily?” said Jonathan.

Mina pointed to Anne feeding Lily Megan cooking.

J-Lo went over to Lilt and grabbed her.

“Hey I wasn’t done yet.” said Anne.

“Anne I think she can’t it any more so maybe you should stop” said J-Lo.

“Okay” said Anne.

Team Aqua left, “At least the boy doesn’t know what the true plan is.” said Jonathan.

“That’s true” said J-Lo.

“I don’t want to eat anything for the next week” said Lily.

“What did they feed you?” said J-Lo.

“Soup and other stuff that I don’t know what it is.” said Lily.

Later while the sun was setting, the two groups walked together, “So you don’t have a plan on where to go?” said Ash.

Mina shook her head no.

“Why not travel with us for a while, it might be fun” said May.

“Okay we can do that” said April.

Both Max and Anne were worried about something.

“What is it you guys?” said Maggie.

Max told them about the decoy plan and Anne told them about Lily told her recently.

“So this new plan must be very bad.” said Mina.

“If I think what it is then the whole earth in trouble” said Maggie.

“What?” said Mina.

“Nothing” said Maggie, she sighed and said to herself “I’m sorry, I wish I could tell but I can’t. I’m so sorry about what is going to happen”

Back in a Team Aqua bade Glen was finishing the power amplifier when Jonathan, and J-Lo came holding Lily.

“So how long ‘till it’s ready?” said Jonathan.

“By tomorrow afternoon” replied Glen, “What’s with her?”

“She ate a lot of Water Angel’s cooking” said J-Lo.

“Did Anne force her to eat it?” said Glen.

“Yeah” said Jonathan.

“We’ll pick up in a few days once Lily’s better” said Jonathan.

Just as the three were leaving the lab, Jimmy entered.

“So what did you want to talk about Glen?” asked Jimmy.

“You saw the website right?” asked Glen.

“Yeah I anciently clicked on an ad.” said Jimmy.

“Promise you tell anyone about it! Promise!” said Glen.

“Fine then in exchange I get to tell Anne about the Power Amplifier” said Jimmy.

“No!” said Glen.

“Fine I guess I have to everyone about the Ponyta then” said Jimmy.

“Fine then I’ll let you tell” said Glen.

“Thank you” said Jimmy who left the lab.

“I hope I get there in time” said Jimmy to himself.
 

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
Chapter 14: Maggie: Controlled

Mina and the others were traveling with Ash and Company. All the days were fine but what Ash and the others weren’t expecting was the horrors of Saturday. First was Mina and Missy getting up at 8:00 AM to watch Mew Mew Power. Then at 9:30, Missy watch Zatch Bell for the first time liked it and finally at midnight, Mina and Missy watched Inu-Yasha. This caused Ash, Pikachu, May, Brock and Max to not have a good night’s sleep.

“I’m so tired!” said Ash.

“Pika…” said Pikachu.

“Why do you stay up so late?” said Max.

“Because the DVDs won’t be out for at least two months” said Missy.

“You know can always stop and take a rest” said Maggie.

The second she finished her sentence all four were in their sleeping bags.

“That was fast” said Mina.

“It was” said Megan.

“Anne!” yelled a voice.

Anne turned around and saw Jimmy who was in street clothes running to her, she stopped to catch his breath.

“Jimmy I can something’s wrong what is it?” said Anne.

“Well it’s like this…” said Jimmy.

“Steel Angel!” yelled a voice.

“Did anyone hear anything?” said Sammy.

“No I didn’t” said Mina.

“Me nether” said Maggie.

A red Streak came out of the bushes, it was a Scizor.

“Steel Angel, I’d like t be your trainer” said Scizor.

“Sure you can!” said Sammy, she did the V is Victory sign and said “I caught a Scizor!”

“You know catch a Scizor won’t make Ash notice you” said Beldum.

Sammy kicked it into a tree.

“As you were saying” said Anne.

“Well it’s like this” said Jimmy

A Meowth shaped Balloon appeared. Team Rocket was inside, with bull horns.

“Prepare for a very loud Trouble”
“And make and an extremely loud Double”
“To protect the world from devastation”
“To untie all people within out our nation”
“To denounce the evils of truth and love!”
“To extend out reach to the stars above!
“Jessie!”
“James!”
“Team Rocket! Blasting off at the speed of light!”
“Surrender now or prepare to fight!”
“Meowth that right!”
“Wobbufet!”
“Chime, Chime”

This woke Ash and the others.

“What’s going on?” said Ash.

“Glad your awake” said Jessie.

“Grabbing Time!” said Meowth.

Meowth shot on of metal hands at Pikachu yet again however Scizor stopped it.

“Scizor, use Metal Crawl to pop that balloon!” said Sammy.

The Balloon fell to the ground where April met them with a rope.

“Bow or Square?” said April.

“That’s weird, that’s what Emma in My Life in Anime says when she’s about to tie someone” said Mina.

After Team Rocket was all tied up, Ash and the others were introduced to Jimmy, since they couldn’t get back to sleep.
“So this is Anne’s boyfriend he’s pretty cute” said May.

“Thanks” said Jimmy blushing.

“Say Sammy since do you have a Scizor?” asked Max.

“UI caught while you guys were sleeping” said Sammy.

“Any ways what I saying…” said Jimmy.

“Wassup!” said Peter coming out of nowhere, he began to pat Mina’s and Ash’s backs. Great to see you guys again, Mr. Tomato Head, Ms. Anime fan first anything n else second.”

Mina reached behind her back pulled off a sign that said just that, “Let me guess there’s a sign that has “Mr. Tomato Head” on Ash’s back?” said Mina.

“What is Ash Ketchup better?” said Peter.

“Hey” yelled Ash.

“Peter…” said Anne.

“Hey guys!” said a voice, it was Matt of course.

“Hi Matt!” said Mina very haply.

“Oh hey Maggie” said Matt.

“Oh hi!” said Maggie, she began to look really sad about something “Why is he here when this is going to happen? Why?” she said to herself.

“Any ways… as I was saying” said Jimmy.

Suddenly there was loud sound, everyone turned around and it was Motor Cycle and Dianna and Charles were ridding it, Dianna was in a side car holding a rope gun.

“What on earth?” said Maddie.

“Looks like something from a lame action move if you ask me” said Sammy.

“It does” said Deborah.

Charles put on the break however it was there first time on motorcycle so both of them went flying.

“We are coming to you guys” said Charles’s who was very dizzy.

April tied them up and put them next to Team Rocket.

Jimmy cleared his throat, “As I was saying”, he looked around to see if there were any more distraction “They have a horrible plan set up to capture you”

Maggie fell to the ground.

“Maggie what’s wrong?” said mina going over to her friend.

“Leave now!” said Maggie.

“What?” said Mina.

“It working” said a familiar voice over a speaker.

“Jonathan!” said Anne.

“We have control over your little friend, and full control in 5, 4, 3, 2, and now!” said Lily.

Maggie sent out an energy wave to Mina, it hit her hard.

“Mina!” screamed Anne. She went to her cousin.

“I’m fine!” said Mina.

All 5 of Maggie’s Pokeballs began to float and all of her Pokemon came out. For some reason Celebi was under control as well, But Flygon wasn’t. She flew Maddie.

“At least Flygon’s on our side” said Kia.

“What about Celebi? I can’t get it to stop” said April;

“She has a Telepathic link to Maggie.

“We’ll give you a minute long head start then I’ll come to get you” said Maggie.

Mina was about to cry but she was under their control, “I say we take it, Maggie as powerful as all of us.” She said.

Maddie let out her Salamence and Dragonair, Sammy let out her Skarmory, Kia let out her Arcannie and Matt let out his Rapidash.

“Cool you caught one” said Mina.
“I’m taking your bike Mina get in, you not well enough to ride a Pokemon or transform.” said Anne.

Mina waited for a bit but got on. Most of them got on a Pokemon except for Jimmy who rode on the back of the motorcycle and the Pokemon Angels since they transformed.

“Hey what about us?” yelled Jessie.

“Can’t leave you behind” said Sammy.

She had Skarmory pick up Team Rocket and asked Scizor to carry Team Magma.

They began to search for a place to hide while this was happening. After a minute a Misdrevus showed up and used Shadow ball on Salamence which it dodged.

“It almost hit us!” said May who was on Salamence.

“Glad it didn’t” said Maya who was also on.

“Jimmy take the helm” said Anne.

“Okay” said Jimmy.

Anne transformed into her Angel Form. “Knock Off!” she said attacking Misdrevus. Who was knocked out. “Sorry” she said to Missadvreus.

Then a Scyther appeared, “Ill handle his one” said Deborah, “Ember!” she said attacking Scyther who became knocked out, she also apologized.

Then suddenly an Igglybuff came out. “I’ll do it” said Ronnie, she light kicked Igglybuff who was then knocked out, Ronnie also apologized to the Pokemon.

“I see a cave over there!” said April.

They all went into it, Anne and Megan helped Mina into it, and Jimmy went to dump the bike many feet away Matt helped.

With Team Aqua and Maggie they were making strategy about how to get them.

“We’ll combine Celebi’s and Hypno’s Powers to get them when their guard is down, when they think the coast is clear all wild Pokemon in the forest that none of protect will attack.” said Lily.

“They are hiding in a cave, let’s wait an hour or two.” said Maggie.
 

Emma Iveli

Fanfic Writer
Chapter 15: Tough Battle Ahead

All the Pokemon Angel transformed into the Angel form and relaxed for a bit.

“I doubt their find us here, not for a few hours at least” said Missy.

Mina began to cry.

“Mina…” said Anne.

“I’m trying to be strong. I’m unsure what will happen, I’m worried. Very worried.” said Mina who began to sob.

“I’m sure we’ll be fine” said Sammy.

“It’s not that, it’s Maggie… I’m worried about Maggie” said Mina.

“What about Maggie?” said May.

Mina began to cry more, “I don’t want to talk about, I don’t even want to think about what might happen” she said.

“I agree, with Mina” said Anne.

“Me too” said Peter.

“That’s right you know a lot more about Maggie’s power then we do” said May.

“I think it would best time to tell everyone that I know a lot about Maggie’s power too and I know what Mina’s talking about. But I won’t say it because it’s too sad to think about” said Deborah.

“Yeah whisper into my ear!” said Peter.

Deborah whispered it his ear and Peter said “That’s right Maggie will…” but before he could finish Mina’s Spheal tripped him using rollout.

“Don’t say that!” said Mina still crying.

“She right” said Deborah.

Both Matt and Jimmy got back.

“So Mina’s worried too.” said Matt.

“So what should we do?” said Ronnie.
“I think we have an Angel do look out, one that has a wand with the exception of Mina of course” said Maddie.

“I’ll be the first!” said Sammy.

“But you don’t have your wand yet” said Maddie.

“That’s right… yet” said Sammy.

She transformed into her Angel form. Mawile came out of its Pokeball, since it was the only one in on, so did Brock’s Forretress and Peter’s Aron. All 6 began to glow silver, the glow shot out into beams and that took the form of the wand.

“The Steel Ore Rod” said Kia.

She went to the mouth of the cave and hid behind a boulder. About a half an hour later a group of three trainers were traveling though the forest, it was Chrissie, Larry and Jon.

“How strange, I haven’t seen a Pokemon in a while” said Larry.

“I don’t think so” said Chrissie.

The got to the part of the path where the cave, since there was group of trainers Sammy deiced to shoe them off.

“There’s nothing in this cave, nothing! Nothing! I’m just in a costume! Honest!” she said very fast and wasn’t paying attention to who they were.

“Hey Sammy” said Chrissie.

“Oh hi guys…” said Sammy.

“Maybe you should seen who it was first then try to shoe them off they knew the secret all along” said Beldum.

“Since it’s the truth I won’t hit into the wall this time.” Said Sammy with a simile on her face trying to psyche out Beldum.

“I don’t even want to know their relationship is like” said Larry.

“You said it” said Jon.

“You should get inside the cave since you know and you might be seen” said Sammy pushing all three into the cave for some reason.

“What’s going on?” said Chrissie.

Sammy stopped for a second and said very sadly “You’ll know in a little while”

“What happened?” said Chrissie.

They got to the part of the cave where everyone was hiding.

“Hey we have company, and not the bad kind ether, friends of ours.” said Sammy.

“Chrissie!” said Missy.

“Jon!” said Maya.

“Hey guys” said May.

“Well isn’t the traitors” said Dianna.

Megan went up to with a thermos of soup, “You look hungry have some soup” she said with a smile.

Dianna drank the soup and began to get dizzy.

“No more soup please” said Dianna

“Okay just don’t bad mouth my friends” said Megan.

Dianna nodded very fast “I won’t” she said crying a little.

Mina still cried, she couldn’t stop.

Anne went into her backpack and took out a pillow. “You should take a nap” she said.

“Thank you” said Mina, she went to sleep very fast.

“This worse then when I was under Hypno’s control” said Anne.

“What happened?” said May.

Everyone told the story due to perspectives.

“I ask you not to tease her right now” said Peter after telling about what happened with him and Mina.

“So your fare game?” asked Maya.

“Hey!” he yelled.
“They’ve also put Matt, Kia and Nurse Joy under their control as well. With the exception of Matt, none of them were that tough.” said Kia.

“With Nurse Joy they forgot how to it but with Kia… I crack up about what happened” said Maya.

“So what happened?” said Ash.

“I don’t want to tell the whole story but let’s just say it was a Scooby Doo parody” said Maya.

As time went by nothing happened so Deborah went to mouth to switch places so that she could do watch, just then a bunch of Pokemon came swooping in.

“What’s going to on?” said Deborah.

“I think they are using the transmitter to send out singles to the Pokemon and control them to attack us.

“Hey guys come out right now!” yelled Sammy, “A lot of wile Pokemon has come to attack!”

“A lot.” said Deborah.

“We need everyone’s help except for Mina and Max, that means you Team Rocket and Team Magma!” yelled Sammy.

“Well we are tied up right now, thank you very much!” said James.

“We’ll untie you guys, and I’ll make you not steal Pikachu.” said April.

Cacnea came out and [pointed his arms at James.

“And you two better do it” said Missy with an aurora of anger.

“Fine!” said Dianna who became very scared.

“Okay” said Charles who also became very scared.

“Well I’m not doing it!” said Jessie.

Megan stuffed some soup into her mouth however, surprisingly she liked it.

“It’s delicious!” said Jessie.

“What?!” said Megan.
“I said it good” said Jessie.

“I’ll make you some more if you do please” said Megan.

“Okay” said Jessie.

Megan untied them and everyone went to battle

“Max watch Mina okay” said Anne.

“Okay” said Max.

Everyone ran out to find hundreds of Pokemon out.

“Looks like this is going to a tough battle” said Anne.

Everyone let out all their Pokemon but there were too many to battle.

Mina woke up from her nap to find everyone but Max gone.

“Where is everyone?” asked Mina.

“Some Pokemon showed up and their battling them.” said Max.

“I’m going help” said Mina.

She got up but fell; her leg was in a lot of pain.

“You’re still injured from when Maggie attacked you…” said Max.

“This is something I have to do, please help me up” said Mina.

He helped her to the mouth of the cave.

“There’s too many!” said Maya.

“We can’t stop them” said Maddie.

“What’s Mina and Max doing here?” said May.

“Mina, Max get back in now” said Anne.

“No” said Mina.

Mina felt a new power in her. Mina transformed to her Angel Form and took out her wand.

“What’s Mina doing?” said Maddie.

“I don’t know” said Kia.

She began to dance around but it wasn’t like Lovely Ice Snow Storm.

“Light Ice Healing Snow!” said Mina.

Snow flakes came from the wand and touched each of the Pokemon, all of the Pokemon became confused.

“No way!” said Kia.

“What is it?” said Maddie.

“That attack it never existed before, Mina created a new form of attacks” said Kia.

She collapsed and detransformed.

“No way, what was that?” said Mina.

“You just used a new attack” said Kia.

“Here let’s you back in the cave” said Anne.

“Right!” said Mina.

Anne helped Mina up and everyone went back into the cave when they got back in the talked.

“I think they know out location after all” said Anne.

“Its pretty clear on that, so what are we going to do?” said Maddie.

“Unless it’s happened I’m going to use my new attack on Maggie.” said Mina.

“What?!” said everyone else.
 
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