Pokemon Battle School!

[Dean]

This is a comic based on an RPG idea I made alooong time ago. It is a combined of Pokemon if it was Yu-gi-oh GX

Proloug

 

[Mastercougar]

Hmm. Incorporating Yu-gi-oh seems like an interesting idea, but you really oughta work on your spelling.

 

[Dean]

Hmm. Incorporating Yu-gi-oh seems like an interesting idea, but you really oughta work on your spelling.

Yeah, I noticed I did spelled some things wrong....

I'm making an epie tomorrow: Episode 1: Derek and Trevor! Roomate Battle!

 

[Feity]

Well, its visually decent, there's kind of a lot of spelling/grammar errors, but I think it has potential.

 

[UltaFlame]

yeah its good! grammar issues abound though... it was mentioned b4 though so yeah... anyways your making it a yugioh gx type-of-thingy huh? it will be hard though so keep it up ok! and take criticsm for what its worth ok don't toss it out like others i see here...

 

[Blaze Dragon]

Good, but your grammar errors:
-Panel 1: "Colloseum", or "Collo" if you are too lazy to write it all, not "collo"
-Panel 3: "Maybe" not "Maby"-Recieve not go, it would be strange to go to a letter

 

[Swampert_guy]

It has potential. Just get the grammar right, and you've got a successful comic in-the -making.

 

[UltaFlame]

agrees with the last two and says you need to make it longer i read this in two seconds practically

 

[Kite.of.Autumn]

Pretty cool, I'm looking forward to more of it ^^

 

[Clockworkz]

There a lot of blatent errors in your typography. It's not bad plot wise so far, I guess. Still, If I got a copy of that magazine, I'dbe upstairs for the next two hours. And not saying "ew" (not intentionally, anyway ;D).

 

[Dean]

Thanks for the C+C guys. I know there's alot of spelling and grammar errors. I'm not really good with grammer and i spell wrong when I type fast. I'm working on the 1 episode right now

 

[Avegaille]

Yes, I feel like this is incorperated with Yu-Gi-Oh! GX, even if I haven't seen the series, but played the game... =3

Nothing seems wrong as of now except for spelling... but meh... I'm just not a fan of Text under panel and such...

I need to see more of this to... rate it properly...

 

[Regiman]

Funny Comic keep up the good work!

----;manyula;