Contestents:
Sparky the ;025; (Eliminated Day 1)
Pierre the ;282;
Gilligan the
Spice the
Chris the ;284;
Jiggly the ;039;
Vladislav the
Vinny the ;090;
Yuki the
Norm the :599:
Nero the :571: (Eliminated Day 2)
Reading the ;466;
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:571:- *Just vanishes into nothing*
;039;- "By golly! I think his entire existence here was just a prank...What was that about?
:599:- I would say for his illusions to work he has to be nearby. He must have grown tired of projecting his image. We must find him.
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Day 3- The search for Nero
Commentary: Pierre, Yuki and Jiggly search the Backyard, Norm and Spice search the Rec Room, Gilligan, Reading and Vinny search the kitchen, Chris and Vladislav search the attic.
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BACKYARD(PIERRE, YUKI and JIGGLY)
;282; Sees something run into the bushes, but it was just a Squirrel
;039;Thought she saw Sparky through the fence but it was just a Squirrel
- Said she felt the presence of a dark Pokemon but all she saw was a Squirrel.
*The three chase that squirrel into the kitchen*
THE KITCHEN(Gilligan, Vinny, Reading)
- Heard Yuki yell so he tackled the Squirrel but tripped on his feet and slid into the table
;090;- Tried chasing the Squirrel ,but he freaked out when some chopsticks fell from last night's Chinese takeout
;466;- Grabbed the squirrel like a pro but it was nothing but an illusion.
* The six of them went into the Living where the other four were standing in front of Nero*
*FLASHBACK*
REC ROOM(NORM AND SPICE)
:599: Saw two squirrels. He argued with himself which one to follow, he almost screeched
- She spooked Norm out of screeching
*The two of them followed the squirrel, who ran up to the attic*
THE ATTIC(CHRIS AND VLADISLAV)
;284;- Starting flapping up a strong wind, ignoring the squirrels. Dust blew all around and suddenly they heard someone sneeze
- His OCD was swirling out of control with all the dust but he saw Nero and fought back and tackled the Zoroark
*The four chased Nero to the living where the other six ran into them at...*
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Whoa, where did this story come from?
I know this isn't the typical PBB style update. I thought I would try something new and interesting. If you liked the commentary portions and would like to see me do more *Interesting* updates alongside the more boring and straight forwards ones...I will.
In short, let me know what you think of the breaks and splashes of information that connected the portions while still giving each character one action.
I tried giving several people reason to be eliminated. If you have any complaints, please send them my way. Nero is eliminated but he was important to the story I wanted to tell so he still has some kind of impact.