Pokemon: Capture The Power!

[Sakim]

This is a new comic by me. It is a Journey comic but the plot will twist and turn many times in the comic! So begin reading Pokemon: Capture the Power! Oh yeah! Do not SPAM!!

Season 1:

Spoiler: The Comics

Episode One: The First Pokemon! GO GO Squirtle!
Episode 2: The Bug Catcher!
Episode 3: Wild Pidgey!
Episode 4: ???

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Spoiler: Latest Comic

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Specials:
None...

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Want to be in my comic?
There are several spots in the comic, Send me your character through pm.

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Bios:
None for now.

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Credits:
Beco
Spriters Resource
Vgmaps
Jackster
Myself
Avatar
Imageshack
Thanks for Reading and Replying.

 

[Kinginsoar]

It's pretty good, but it's cliché unless you have a plot, and don't just say it's because you're just going on a journey to be a pkmn master. Also, what is your trainer's name? Is he related to Prof. Gary in any way, cuz he looks just like him, besides the fact his hair is red. Anyway, I'll see what happens, and maybe I'll post more. Keep improving!

EDIT: Also, I'll be in your comic, I just gotta make my overworlds and trainer. Keep in touch!

 

[Sakim]

No he's not related to Gary, when I was making the comic I forgot their hair was the same. I also have a Plot but it will not be revealed as of yet. And the Hero's name is Ken. I will stay in touch with you.

 

[Kinginsoar]

Good! I can't wait to see more of your comics!

 

[Sakim]

Yes, I might make another comic now or tommorrow morning.

 

[Kinginsoar]

I also thought the text boxes were odd. Maybe make them round.

 

[blueguy]

BORING.

I'm sorry, but we don't need to see this again. I advise you stop now, because the story is truly going nowhere. It's the stupid "im gonna get a pokemon today hi prof. can i have a pokemonz yay i gots a pokemon" beginning that every other cliche journey comic has. Yuck.

 

[zuloon]

BORING.

I'm sorry, but we don't need to see this again. I advise you stop now, because the story is truly going nowhere. It's the stupid "im gonna get a pokemon today hi prof. can i have a pokemonz yay i gots a pokemon" beginning that every other cliche journey comic has. Yuck.

What a nice thing to say.

 

[hydroswirl]

That was really unnecessary blueguy. You didn't have to be so harsh.

But regardless, he is right. It's really cliched, and wow "A plot twist." I don't see it now, and we probably won't see it for awhile. And regardless, there's only so much a plot twist can do.

You can continue the comic, but it'll be really cliched, and you'll lose a lot of fans. I too want to start a journey comic, but my first eppy is really long, to implement the twist right away instead of a lot later.

Also, I absolutelty DETEST when people zoom in on an image then splat the Mystery Dungeon Sprite right on it. It's looks ugly and really annoys me. But that's just me. It's not making it look anymore realistic, it jsut looks sloppy. All sprites whether it's MD or Coronis', they aren't going to be proportionable, so it's better it to make less sense and look good than whatever you're doing.

End.~

 

[.Bright Side.]

WOW A JOURNEY, IVE NEVER SEEN ONE OF THOSE BEFORE!!!

(sarcasm)

 

[Nixx]

How about having emotion in the dialogue? You can't just have your characters say how they feel. That makes me feel angry!

 

[.Bright Side.]

Lol Futurama much?

 

[Nixx]

Very much.

 

[.Bright Side.]

off topic:Nixx go check my new comic, and maybe become a new character?

Edit:New rank

 

[Nixx]

No, thanks. I avoid being in other people's comics, on the off chance privelages are widely abused. It's happened before.

 

[Sakim]

Blueguy, Thanks for the advice but the plot will change.
@Zuloon: Stay on topic no spam!
@Hydroswirl: Read what I said to Blueguy.
@Desperate Molitic: Stay on topic!
@Nixx: Stay on topic!

And a new episode is up along with the name for Episode 3.

 

[Timmie]

Cool!


Pm sended..

Sorry for being oftopic in those 2 words....

 

[Sakim]

It is okay, but how is my comic cool to you?

 

[Timmie]

Squirtle attacks an BugCatcher...

Its funny!

 

[Sakim]

He doesn'yt do it on purpose he thought there was three bug pokemon.