pokemon capture

[Pikachu kiddo]

Spoiler: plot

Plot
The plot is about a boy named Josh and his dream is to discover the world outside and catch every pokemon in the world, so he go's on a adventure of a life time(not one of them comics where he go's to get a pokemon from prof oak and get every bagde)

I started this one beacuse, my old comic never got any more repiles and was never updated so,i put my best effot into this comic and hope this one wont turn out the same as the old one.

Season 1
Episode 1: Leaving home and drama
Episode 2: Pikachu's love
Episode 3: (Extra long) Win Win!
Credit
Me for the pikachu sprites
The spriters resource for people sprites
google for some cool backgrounds
gba maps for most of my maps
pokemon elite 2000 for alot of things
pikachu master for sprites
and others for pmd sprites

 

[Pikachu kiddo]

Thank you combusken1994 I'm happy you liked it.

 

[Munchy.42]

I like it!
Its not one of those comics where they start at Pallet/New Bark/Littleroot Town and go to Prof Oak/Elm/Birch lab and get a starter pokemon.

They start in Vendrudawf (i can't spell it) and already have a pokemon!
I think thats original and i rated your comic a 4!
Keep going and i'll keep reading!

 

[Pikachu kiddo]

thank you everyone for your posts i'm going to keep making beacuse, you all think my comic is good^_^(episode 2 is coming out in a few more minutes just need to finish the last 3 pannels)

 

[.Bright Side.]

Well that are a couple things wrong:

1)When he started the battle, you didn't recolor the sprite
2)Did you scratch the picachu sprite? You should have just used the PMD one.
3)This sounds a lot like a Journey comic.XP

Ceasar is not pleased.

 

[Charizard Champion#06]

The goal to be a Pokemon Master is to catch and train every Pokemon. Most trainers take the Elite Four Challenge. That is how you become The Pokemon Champion.

Now we see this guy trying to catch every Pokemon and he is about to battle with them (training). So that means he is trying to become a Pokemon Master. Does that mean that this is a journey comic? No, because he is not taknig the Elite Four Challenge.

^That was in case anyone comes in saying "Dat is A joUrnY coMIC dat nnnOT aloowed!!!1!!111!!!111"

So far this comic seems OK, you need to work on the writing a bit and make sure not to rush. Also I don't think you guy's can rate art/comics anymore. One more thing, the recolouring the sprite thing... well it's been overdone. To death. Then it came back up from the grave and they killed it again. I'm just saying that we've played the games, we se that little guy enough, and there are plenty of other sprites that you could edit to look like a Pokemon "Capturer".

 

[Pikachu kiddo]

sorry i havent had time to do the comic, beacuse of school and the new pikachu sprites, but there will be a new comic by tommorow.

 

[Charizard Champion#06]

Does he have to have Pikachu?

 

[Pikachu kiddo]

he has a pikachu beacuse pikachu's my number 1 pokemon fan.also
episode 3 is up

 

[Pikachu kiddo]

Hay guys, what happen to the posting on this thread, post more on this thread to say what you think.

 

[Controller of Flames]

Selling items of a house for drugs000000 now where could I have heard that? You have also shown just how lazy you are by using a recoloured sprite. This shows you have no sense of pride and you are willing to do the bare minimum to get a sprite character. Black lines as effects and as arrows are a bad choice for comics. You could have explained that the old man was the shop owner through text (ex: "Take it all don't worry I own this shop!").

Also this will help you.

 

[Charizard Champion#06]

Don't double post just to bump your topic. Also, who's talking when you use the red lined speech bubbles that don't lead anywhere? Is it a narrarator?

 

[Pikachu kiddo]

no it's when there are black things and the box colour is black you cant see the boxs so, i use red so you can see the box,it's just a normal box.

 

[EmberGryphon]

Visually, it's not bad, but it has a while to go, if you don't mind me saying. ^_^() Try to align the speech bubbles so that they're read from left to right or top to bottom across the comic frame- so if you have two people talking, the first person to speak has their speech bubble on the left/top, and the second person replies below and/or to the right. That way, you don't have to read the whole frame and then figure out what order they were talking in.

The plot could plausibly be stronger. There are an awful lot of pokemon out there- not to mention all the hundreds he'd have to raise to get -all- of them. And, at this rate, nine thousand comic pages later, after he's done, where is he? What... is the point? I understand the point is humor, but putting a smidge of motivation or characterization in your plot very rarely makes for bad humor or a worse comic.

...I'm going to try and say this in the nicest way possible, but why is a comic about a kid with an overpowered (for a just-starting-out pokemon, since he's already won a hundred battles) Pikachu walking around (on a journey!) to catch every pokemon alive made oh-so-much better because he doesn't earn gym badges?

I'm very very sorry if that sounds mean, but I had to get it out of the system. ^^() Best of luck to you and your comic!

 

[Pikachu kiddo]

i'm going to start making more episodes, i may be done with epiosde 4 tomorow or the next day.and i will try and find better sprites and try do a new episode every 2-3 days.