Pokemon Diamond and Pearl

[Elekible's Shock]

Constructive Critisism needed, PM to ask me to be in it:



Season One:


Episode 1
Episode 2, Halloween of 2006 Special, #1
Episode 3, Halloween of 2006 special, #2
Episode 4








Characters:



Main Character: Quinton Info




OTHERS:


Jack Thurddann (Bonslax)
Devlin Purr (SoMunchlax42)
Rick Golem (firedude)
Chris Onagga (ground tamer)
Tylor Gaigge (gengar and alakazam fan)
Ryan Kaith (Bro of Fire Punk)
Brendon "the Dragon Master" Kaith (fire punk)
Haley Wheiner (PokemonBreederChris)














Specials and Others:



Episode 2, Halloween of 2006 Special, #1
Episode 3, Halloween of 2006 special, #2

 

[magmaman]

Okay the text is to small but this is okay.

 

[rybo5000]

lol, what a load of random

 

[.:Tom~Nook:.]

It's quite blurred, possibly due to imageshack. Try hosting it on photobucket, then I can give you a proper review =D

 

[Drei]

No it wasn't imageshacks fault. He jped the comic. Everything is too small. He is using a recolor for a main character. The character has loads of money? Very much like a basic comic made from a person without a story. The text boxes are too big in some cases. The lines to the text boxes are bent.

 

[Matt`]

When you're linking your comics use the "Direct link"

Otherwise, we'll get a bunch of ads when we click on the links on your first post, and it will be easier to see.

Also, Read this, and all of this.

 

[adamski148]

Your in!!! You'll have a Gengar, Umbreon, and a third one (Fourth Generation, Dark or Ghost). You'll be in by episode 8.

What Will this Character look like I may ask? I mean seriously, if you want someone to be in this comic, the person who asked has to provide a sprite and overworld character and possible personality and age and stuff not just "Put me in I wants uber legendaries and I r0xxorz!!!!!" That's just stupid and gives no inner depth to the characters.

 

[.:Tom~Nook:.]

What Will this Character look like I may ask? I mean seriously, if you want someone to be in this comic, the person who asked has to provide a sprite and overworld character and possible personality and age and stuff not just "Put me in I wants uber legendaries and I r0xxorz!!!!!" That's just stupid and gives no inner depth to the characters.

But Adam, that's how you got pretty much all your cast.

Basically, there's not too much I can say that Drei and the others haven't.

 

[Drei]

Yaaa... Have you been listening?

Also here is what I didn't cover. Everything is resized. Too much white space. You ened to sue the direct link not the top few with imageshack. The main character is style mixed with the houses. The main character is REVERSED-shaded. And with horrible colors at that. To fix most of your character problems make a sprite form scratch. Also if I see a "But I don't have (insetr awsome but hard progam) and i'm using (insert basic progam) so I can't (ummm... anything I guess).

Drei and his ;487; have finished yet another comic critisim.

 

[Tbone2356]

Fine....

Its kind of crappy...

It is called Pokemon Diamond and Pearl, yet it is in hoenn. Prof. Birch is not here and Prof. Oak is... The main character is an invert and has a vigoroth icon following him...

The speech bubbles could be better, and I won't get started on the comic's size.

The plot seems... Ok, you should've made your own main characters instead of just recoloring one and taking others from sprite sheets, it makes it seem journey-like.

And you should'nt let people join your comics, it is a lame way too get a fan base. Most of the people who apply, never come back. It presentes you as lazy. Also they don't give you any sprites, they choose any Pokemon, they are basically controlling your comic.

If you want your comic too succede I suggest you don't let anyone join before it's too late.

Anyway, good luck with this. It's good, but it could use improvment. Take my advice seriously and make your comic better. Use your own ideas and sprites and you will be just fine.

 

[Drei]

Tbone... thx for covering anything I didn't say. Also gengar and alakazam fan, i'm not complaining i'm helping him.

I also think you are getting too many characters that are unoriginal. plus you just ask what pokemon they have. You need their sprite to represent who they are. If you don't the character will turn out "crappy" in the peron who aksed to be in eyes. Then people will say they hate you.

 

[Arahabaki]

Its kind of crappy...

It is called Pokemon Diamond and Pearl, yet it is in hoenn. Prof. Birch is not here and Prof. Oak is... The main character is an invert and has a vigoroth icon following him...

The speech bubbles could be better, and I won't get started on the comic's size.

The plot seems... Ok, you should've made your own main characters instead of just recoloring one and taking others from sprite sheets, it makes it seem journey-like.

And you should'nt let people join your comics, it is a lame way too get a fan base. Most of the people who apply, never come back. It presentes you as lazy. Also they don't give you any sprites, they choose any Pokemon, they are basically controlling your comic.

If you want your comic too succede I suggest you don't let anyone join before it's too late.

Anyway, good luck with this. It's good, but it could use improvment. Take my advice seriously and make your comic better. Use your own ideas and sprites and you will be just fine.

i agree and i think its a little cliche

 

[Elekible's Shock]

October 31, 2006

Hi, I have installed the Fourth Episode. This one explains the theme. It bassicly says an evil is back and its trying to conquer. Here it is:



Episode 4

 

[splat]

1. The text is too hard to read.
2. There is only one mewtwo
3. The fusions (?) on the left top look awkward, especially the one with the yellow-black head..

 

[Abraace]

The text is way to small and frustrating to read. I gave up after episode 3. Episode four was impossible.

I think T-bone covered most of what I wanted to say.

 

[Drei]

You need their sprite to represent who they are. If you don't the character will turn out "crappy" in the peron who aksed to be in eyes. Then people will say they hate you.

Ya. Just take everything every has said and then use that to make a better comic. Also don't jpg then png it IF you are doing that. Otherwise use the bottom direct link when using imageshack, not the one you are using currently.

 

[Zephyr Flare]

I ask that the lot of you freakin' cool it. if soembody makes a comment that is possibly a flame of of extreme offense YOU REPORT IT, YOU DO NOT REPLY.

The amount of people who cannot seem to GRASP this absic subject altely. I don;t care if you ****** off, the orignal creator should neevr have come out with such blazen stupidity either.

Also oh orignal poster, please grasp that you ask for characters sent in by pm, ho about having the sense to, I don't know, sending a pm round to idiots who cannot be bothered to read asking them to delete their post and send it via that method hm? Too hard? Sorry but I'm not here to clean up after you.


One more blow out like this and I close the thread, simple as that.


Sandra

 

[Umi Mizuno]

All of you, STOP IT. This is seriously getting out of hand. I'm tired of you guys throwing insults back and forth while you guys are talking about "THE RULES" you guys obviously aren't following it. You're bashing each other yet you still tell each other to follow the rules, how nice. >> And yes we all know Elekible's Shock should work on his comic instead of accepting all these people to be in the comic but it is his comic. Stop it before I close this thread, got it?

NEO GOHAN, I know you're just trying to help but insulting isn't going to get you anywhere so I suggest you stop it.

Edit: Zephyr Flare beat me to it. :< *waves*

Edit 2: We both agreed on it, so we'll just be closing your thread now.