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battlebruvaz
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hey all! this is my first RPG so tell me what you think, any ideas/suggestions and some constructive criticism. enjoy! and sign up!
first ill give you the application form. then we'll have the layout then the map then the equitment then the number of sign ups and required roles. ok then. first the application form!
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Description:
Personality:
History:
Other:
fill in and PM to me. ok.
layout: the year is 2850 A.D. on the war torn continent of varrok. the war here ended 50 years ago but the natural landscape was permenantly destroyed. there is mostly no-mans land out there but for ONE huge forest in the bottom of the erea. there are multiple small towns but there is one huge main settlement in the middle. the air around there is poisonous so the settlement grandora is completely enclosed that is where the pokemon league lies. there is a underground passage from the closest settlement fragnon town leading straight into grandora. there are only a few species of pokemon in the 'dead-zone' as its called. these are: ghost pokemon who strive on the polluted air. and lraikon a poison/steel/ghost type. (pronounced ler-ike-on) its silver-gray and has red teeth. its doglike in physical and is aggressive and evil like the air around it. there are a mixture of pokemon from kanto, hoenn and johto here (where they can survive) as it was a regular trade area back a hundred years ago. the towns produce a large variety of trainers to challenge the elite four and this RPG follows the tales of some of them. lastly there is a large section of sea seperating varrok from its sister island virrik. this island is a paradise where three of the gym badges are held. the safari zone and various trade routes and towns also lie here.
snagging is a regular occurance though normal catching is also apparent.
I----------------------------------------------------------I
I (desert)---------------(orar town)-------(shual town) I
I (desert) * I
I [---------------------] I
I (ergor town)[ ----/--\ ------------]---------------- I
I **--------- [----/----\ (grandora)]----(snow)-----I
I **----------[--/ ----- \ --------- ] I
I (snow)--------[--\-----/-----------] \ I
I-------------------[--- \---/------------] \ I
I [---- \-/-------------] \ I
I (jurag town)----[ --------------------] \ I
I \ |-----| I
I------------------------(snow) |-----| I
I------------------------(orag town)--------------|-----| I
I------(port)------------------------------(fragnon town) I
I----------------------------------------------------------I
I--------------------------------------I
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virrok (all jungle. towns locations unknown)
pokedex
cell phone
pokenav
bike
gas mask
itemfinder
pack
pokeballs X5 before first town
various items found later on in story.
poke guide
and of course, clothes. lol.
sign ups: one. (battlebruvaz- ME!)
Name: zac
Age: 14
Gender: male
Description: tall, lean, handsome and inntelegent
Personality: intelegent, dark and brooding usually a loner except from his pokemon
History: not much is known about his family but it IS known by some that his family is varok born and bred 100%
Other: he has a dark sense of humor
required:
professor blackwood (yes another tree name.)
you give me his other info.
at least six other trainers. more will be accepted.
the eight gym leaders:
brach (male)
first gym leader
rock type
you pick personality and team
zawnur (female)
second gym leader
dark and ghost type
you pick personality and team
jimino (male)
third gym leader
psycic types
you pick personality and team
isabella (female)
fourth gym leader
water types
you pick personality and team
drakeo (male)
fifth gym leader
dragon/fire types
you pick personality and team
jarad (male)
sixth gym leader
steel type
you pick personality and team
gill (female)
seventh gym leader
grass type
you pick personality and team
belon (male)
eighth gym leader
digital type (read party)
porygon porygon 2 and three psycic/digital types: a cyber with gengar with such things as bio-limbs and a targeting system a bio-genetic life form suspended in the air it is red blue and white has arms legs and small black eyes it has amazing powers ((you get this pokemon from belon later on as its the last pokemon that needs to be filled in in your dex))
and finnaly a blaziken hyped up with cyber parts and a blast gun attached to to its arm that fires certain attacks includin psycic and flamethrower.
agressive snd dark personality.
and we will organise the elite four later on.
join up soon. thx!
(sorry about the main map im having trouble with it. it keeps collapsing in upon itself. ! well. just tell me if you can make anything out of it or ill just wright a map description. thx- battlebruvaz
first ill give you the application form. then we'll have the layout then the map then the equitment then the number of sign ups and required roles. ok then. first the application form!
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Description:
Personality:
History:
Other:
fill in and PM to me. ok.
layout: the year is 2850 A.D. on the war torn continent of varrok. the war here ended 50 years ago but the natural landscape was permenantly destroyed. there is mostly no-mans land out there but for ONE huge forest in the bottom of the erea. there are multiple small towns but there is one huge main settlement in the middle. the air around there is poisonous so the settlement grandora is completely enclosed that is where the pokemon league lies. there is a underground passage from the closest settlement fragnon town leading straight into grandora. there are only a few species of pokemon in the 'dead-zone' as its called. these are: ghost pokemon who strive on the polluted air. and lraikon a poison/steel/ghost type. (pronounced ler-ike-on) its silver-gray and has red teeth. its doglike in physical and is aggressive and evil like the air around it. there are a mixture of pokemon from kanto, hoenn and johto here (where they can survive) as it was a regular trade area back a hundred years ago. the towns produce a large variety of trainers to challenge the elite four and this RPG follows the tales of some of them. lastly there is a large section of sea seperating varrok from its sister island virrik. this island is a paradise where three of the gym badges are held. the safari zone and various trade routes and towns also lie here.
snagging is a regular occurance though normal catching is also apparent.
I----------------------------------------------------------I
I (desert)---------------(orar town)-------(shual town) I
I (desert) * I
I [---------------------] I
I (ergor town)[ ----/--\ ------------]---------------- I
I **--------- [----/----\ (grandora)]----(snow)-----I
I **----------[--/ ----- \ --------- ] I
I (snow)--------[--\-----/-----------] \ I
I-------------------[--- \---/------------] \ I
I [---- \-/-------------] \ I
I (jurag town)----[ --------------------] \ I
I \ |-----| I
I------------------------(snow) |-----| I
I------------------------(orag town)--------------|-----| I
I------(port)------------------------------(fragnon town) I
I----------------------------------------------------------I
I--------------------------------------I
I ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()() I
I ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()I
I (()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()I
I ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()(I
I()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()I
I()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()I
I ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()() I
I ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()() I
I ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()() I
I ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()() I
I ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()() I
I--------------------------------------I
virrok (all jungle. towns locations unknown)
pokedex
cell phone
pokenav
bike
gas mask
itemfinder
pack
pokeballs X5 before first town
various items found later on in story.
poke guide
and of course, clothes. lol.
sign ups: one. (battlebruvaz- ME!)
Name: zac
Age: 14
Gender: male
Description: tall, lean, handsome and inntelegent
Personality: intelegent, dark and brooding usually a loner except from his pokemon
History: not much is known about his family but it IS known by some that his family is varok born and bred 100%
Other: he has a dark sense of humor
required:
professor blackwood (yes another tree name.)
you give me his other info.
at least six other trainers. more will be accepted.
the eight gym leaders:
brach (male)
first gym leader
rock type
you pick personality and team
zawnur (female)
second gym leader
dark and ghost type
you pick personality and team
jimino (male)
third gym leader
psycic types
you pick personality and team
isabella (female)
fourth gym leader
water types
you pick personality and team
drakeo (male)
fifth gym leader
dragon/fire types
you pick personality and team
jarad (male)
sixth gym leader
steel type
you pick personality and team
gill (female)
seventh gym leader
grass type
you pick personality and team
belon (male)
eighth gym leader
digital type (read party)
porygon porygon 2 and three psycic/digital types: a cyber with gengar with such things as bio-limbs and a targeting system a bio-genetic life form suspended in the air it is red blue and white has arms legs and small black eyes it has amazing powers ((you get this pokemon from belon later on as its the last pokemon that needs to be filled in in your dex))
and finnaly a blaziken hyped up with cyber parts and a blast gun attached to to its arm that fires certain attacks includin psycic and flamethrower.
agressive snd dark personality.
and we will organise the elite four later on.
join up soon. thx!
(sorry about the main map im having trouble with it. it keeps collapsing in upon itself. ! well. just tell me if you can make anything out of it or ill just wright a map description. thx- battlebruvaz
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