Pokemon Extreme Adventure ( My comic )

[Kowo]

This is my comic. I hope you like and post comments about it...

p.d:Remember to click on the image for the normal view ( or you'll see rather bad ).

Chapter 1 : And this is how it started...
Chapter 2 : A lesson to remember.
Chapter 3 : New Friend ?
Chapter 4 : Assault in Pewter Part 1
Chapter 5 : Assault in Pewter Part 2
Chapter 6 : R-evolutions in Mt.Moon
Chapter 7 : Home, Sweet, Home.

Specials

Pokemon special Part 1

Bios
Hera
Ethan
Lila

Credits to Vgmap and Spriteresource Fireball

 

[Mega]

Well you should put the thing that says the episode on the top other wise it's okay

 

[Eric]

I don't read pokemon comics that much and I know for a fact that your story has been ran into the ground an infinite times. Try something new, like a trainer who in the game is a generic fighter and gets beat by (color). He gets obsessed with trying to beat him but fails all the time. In the end he goes back to his old spot to only find out that someone else has taken over his turf. You make up the rest.

I'm just saying that you plot is pretty cliched right now.

 

[Eric]

Yeah, but it's less cliched them I'm a trainer and I got squrtale/charmander/bulbasaur/johto/your momma/ohsoma's momma/etc.

 

[Tenten]

Yeah, but it's less cliched them I'm a trainer and I got squrtale/charmander/bulbasaur/johto/your momma/ohsoma's momma/etc.

I guess, but give Kowo a break. He's actually pretty good....but...

Don't use .JPEGs.

...yeah, don't use JPEG. Use .PNG or something...

 

[Eric]

Fine, I'm just trying to give him advice before he gets to far into it to change.

 

[Kowo]

For all the ones who told me about jpeg i've already changed it ..I hope it lookes better

 

[dabou]

dude your preety good (good thing you changed the JPEG thing)

hope to see more!

 

[Kowo]

Added Chapter 3 = New Friend ? and Bios for the three main characters.....until now.

 

[Pokefan26]

Give Kowo a break, Pixilated Penguin! I think it's pretty good.

 

[lokitheodd]

(Stares at the two fighting)

Personally, I rather like the way this comic functions. It's style is unique. But a unique style won't get you very far.

We...er you... need a unique plot to go with this just as unique style. I can't really suggest much... (I do have some ideas, but I should save that for my own comic, hee hee)

 

[Kowo]

First of all thanks to the ones that liked this comic. And if you have an idea to make it better, you're welcome to write it.

 

[lokitheodd]

(Looks left. Looks right)
You can't be serious.... Are you for real?

 

[Eric]

I don't read pokemon comics that much and I know for a fact that your story has been ran into the ground an infinite times. Try something new, like a trainer who in the game is a generic fighter and gets beat by (color). He gets obsessed with trying to beat him but fails all the time. In the end he goes back to his old spot to only find out that someone else has taken over his turf. You make up the rest.

I'm just saying that you plot is pretty cliched right now.

Hem hem....

 

[xXFallenButterflyXx]

Hm... pretty good! I'm certainly keeping my eye on this one cause I'm a big Oldrivalshipping fan and this is like Oldrivalshipping to me... but you should save your files in .PNG like the others said.

 

[Kowo]

Here is Chapter 4 Assault in Pewter Part 1 I hope you like it and comment about the battle scenes.

 

[lokitheodd]

Battle effects are much better than most, but we have no idea of what levels they are on. Interesting indeed. The plot thickens. (Brock's acting like an idiot... but whatever)

P.S. Nice choice of words. ('Team Rocket is "assaluting" the museum!') Heh.

 

[Sailor Universe]

I don't like the idea with Team Rocket having some other leader than Giovanni... But that's probably just me.
I like it, although the concept isn't very original. Keep up the good work!

 

[Kowo]

I didn't included levels for making it more realistic, like in the anime. And we will have to wait to see who is the new team rocket boss...

 

[PK]

YOU COPYED THE NAME OF MY COMIC. just kidding. so far so good actually. I hope to see more