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Pokemon Fading forever

Sadly to say, but it had to happen, who should die in a Snagger attack?

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Requesto

Pokemon FF Creator
THIS COMIC IS NOT BEING MADE OR USED BY ME ANYMORE​

hi all.
i have finally begun my true spriting abilities through a Pokemon comic. Hopefully you'll enjoy reading this comic and commenting on what you liked, what you didn't like and how i can improve on certain things; as much as i enjoyed making it.

If i dont get many replies i'll have to stop this comic that i enjoy making so much.... please reply. If you have any questions or things you'd like to send to me, either PM me or send them through here. Thanks

Note: I DO NOT make the comics on Wednesday, Friday, Saturday and sometimes Sunday (morning, afternoon. But i can make 'em on Sunday night.

The plot:

In this comic our three heroes, Lisa, Jason and Cris, are going along with their normal lives; until the day that they received notifications of a devistating incident in a nearby City. Whilst hearing this, every town/City/Village/Whatever must send out a group of three trainers to help stop these attacks from happening. (obviously Jason, Cris and Lisa are choosen.)

But as you may often think this is set a little bit in the future by a couple of years, therefore the towns have slightly adjusted for the better.

Quite obviously this comic is not set out like an ordinary Pokemon adventure, therefore i'm going to add in the POkemon snagging factor (Shadow Pokemon).

The set out:

Some of this comic is a bit confusing with the characters Pokemon etc. So i'm going to have another section on here where i shall update regularly, who has which Pokemon. There will aslo be a key, which to understand certain things, you'll need to keep glancing at.

Below is a link to the characters of Pokemon Fading Forever:


Character bio's here: http://i2.*******.com/zt7pzs.png <--- Its been updated

The Characters Pokemon (in team and PC): <--- it's been updated too

http://i1.*******.com/zt91f4.png

Below is a list of the comics (Which will be updated regularly. But i warn you, i do have my exams soon, so in that time of period no new comics will be posted.):

Introduction: http://i1.*******.com/xeh8g5.png

Episode 1: Pewter City Jam http://i1.*******.com/v4neag.png

Episode 2: Plusle Snagging http://i2.*******.com/v8lor6.png

Episode 3: Pathetic Caterpie http://i2.*******.com/v8n6lv.png

Episode 4: Back towards Viridian forest http://i2.*******.com/vdh9up.png

Episode 5: Meeting Mrs Attitude http://i2.*******.com/vdinn4.png

Episode 6: 6 New starters http://i3.*******.com/vobu2r.png

Episode 7: Rukkelberyy Town http://i3.*******.com/wbdzl2.png

Episode 8: The 6 chosen ones http://i3.*******.com/wgysz8.png

Episode 9: There's 2 Snaggers now!? http://i3.*******.com/wlr435.png

Episode 10: Simply Sally http://i3.*******.com/wujsie.png

Episode 11: Don't trust darkness http://i1.*******.com/xdsg44.png

Episode 12: Ranger Mission 1 http://i2.*******.com/zt6hqt.png

Episode 12.1: Ranger Mission 1

Episode 12.2 Ranger Mission 1

Mini Comics:

None made yet.....:(


Places in previous comics

WoRlD mAp!! http://i3.*******.com/xlj7zd.png
Rukkleberry Town: http://i2.*******.com/wvpzzp.png
Rukkleberry Lab: http://i3.*******.com/wvpzwn.png
Route 1: http://i2.*******.com/wvpydz.png
Route 2: http://i1.*******.com/wvpzrr.png
Route 2 (sallys Place): http://i2.*******.com/wvqu06.png


Little bit of info:

A snagger is someone who takes Pokemon from others. (a snag machine is required.)

A retriever is someone who captures those Pokemon back. (a snag machine is also required.)

For the public:

Hi, not only am i hoping that this comic will be a hit, but i want you to enjoy it too. That's why i'm doing this. In a certain amount of episodes, i thought it would be fun for you to post me a set of sprites for a charcter of your choice, their name, their Pokemon and what you want to happen, just to make the comic a bit more interesting! Enjoy!

Fan stuff:

None, Zip, Zilch


Script wirters:

BiZ

Credits

The spriters resource (big thanks)
Xychosis
Coronis
New001
BGH2
Lots and lots of credit go to Pokemon Treasures for the Pokemon used in this comic.

thanks

~~#*Requesto*#~~
 
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Tenten

"Just kidding!"
Ah! This is very interesting. A pokemon journey that has the pokemon snagging factor in it. Not a lot of overworld comic makers use panels, then put the text under them.

However, I kinda do prefer the comic style you're using right now. I'll keep my eye on this, I'm curious to see how this comic turns out.
 
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Requesto

Pokemon FF Creator
1st update

i've done 1 new comic for now.

http://i2.*******.com/v8n6lv.png

~~#Requesto#~~
 
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Imperial Flygon

My asparagus Burns!!
for a starter you are good. I suggest that you could sort the boxes out then right in them so they don't look strange and stuffy. Keep on cause i like your story.
 
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Requesto

Pokemon FF Creator
hi

glad u like my comic so far although it aint much at the moment

Hazuki-san, my insult (pathetic) i wasnt planning it to be funny, i was just think in the way of Jasons description (big headed)

my comic is not supposed to be 100% funny as me, myself am just a bore and have no funnyness inside of me

~~#Requesto#~~
 
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Mastercougar

The Infinite Fire
I'm liking it so far. The best text-under-panel style I have yet seen on these forums.
 
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Sahaqiel

Angel of the Skies
Yeah, we all know from Coloseum. I think this comic is good graphically, but the plot is basically a rip from Coloseum. I don't think one needs to say "snag power down, or up" to get it to turn on, basically you put the thing on an empty Pokeball and it activates, and changes the data in the ball to make it able to catch Pokemon that already have trainers (Or so it is beleived by most people who have actually thought about it, and the fact that the machine doensn't run out of battery or whatever). The problem here is the order of the frames, it is sort of confusing to read it,because I think its moved on to the next panel and they're still talking. Though the Fakemon sprites are pretty good, and the back sprites. At least they're not cheap mixes. Room for improvement, though,
Sahaqiel
 
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Requesto

Pokemon FF Creator
yeah, that was the main thing i was going to do. get rid of the on off thingy. You said it was a rip from coloseum, but we've only just started and only met one of the continously appearing 3 characters. And only one of them is a snagger (obviously Jason.) But the other two have another aspiration in life....

but still thanks

~#~Requesto~#~
 
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Requesto

Pokemon FF Creator
New comic update

http://i2.*******.com/vdh9up.png

"Due to the fact that i didnt like the snag machine on/off thing, and neither did some of the readers, i will no longer be using that idea."

~#~Requesto~#~
 
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Requesto

Pokemon FF Creator
Just for most readers to know, from now on i shall not be posting regular comic updates, you'll just have to look at the first page
 
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Requesto

Pokemon FF Creator
sorry i haven't updated recently, been very busy studying for my exams, new episode/episodes soon

Requesto
 
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Requesto

Pokemon FF Creator
okay, i think i will post when there's a new comic heres the latest

http://i3.*******.com/vobu2r.png

sorry the very big amount of white space, but i couldnt do anything 2 stop it
 
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Tech 64

SNA Tails Rip-off
looks promising, but Taddle looks like something that came out of a Pontya's rear end.
note: don't quad post
 
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magmaman

Ahhhhhh yeeeeeeah
Nice Comic
 
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Requesto

Pokemon FF Creator
hi everybody, thanks for all the coments.

sorry i havent updated l8ly i've been having some exam trouble urgh! Updates asap.

Everyones told me how they like the comic, but no one has yet to say how i could improve and make it better or add addition characters into it or given me some ideas for the next one.

Remember, if you want post ur character and he/she will be included in a future episode.

thanks again

Requesto
 
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