orochi
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Art and Story by me
Here is another manga by me and a friend: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?580240-Blood-Type-P
I would REALLY appreciate some feedback. Fust ask questions, comment, critique, tell me your favorite part, or throw out some ideas. Something! ...Please ^w^
Since my camera doesn't take the greatest pictures I will type out the dialogue occationally. Sorry, my handwriting is terrible in all caps. XD
I will tell my viewers when the next pages will be up:
What's today....? 9/15/2013.
Um I've currently switch over to Blood Type P. I am switching back and forth to do both stories. I will spend a week on each manga.
Prologue
The story takes place with three characters. Zeru, Luna, and Miles have been life long friends who lived in Verdanturf town in the Hoenn region. Zeru obtained his shiny tailow from his grandfather. Luna met zorua while she was vistiting family in the Unova region. Miles bonded with his infernape when it was just a chimchar after he met Professor Rowan in the Sinnoh region during a business trip with his father. Each of them have a set goal while they stay in the Hoenn region. Luna wants to win at the grand festival with her zorua. Zeru wants to compete in races that use flying type pokemon. Miles being the one who has had the longest relationship with his pokemon, is trying to find a set goal for him and his pokemon.
Which brings us to today. Zeru, Luna and Miles have decided to travel together now that they all have a pokemon. It has been a week since they left Verdanturf Town, and they made it to Slateport City in hopes for Luna to win her first ribbon. (I know that there is a pokemon contest in Verdnturf, but I wanted her first contest to be away from home)
Zeru: I don't think Tailow is up for it
Taillow: NO!
Luna: Please Miles!!!!
Miles: Are you sure you want to go up against Infernape?
(Sorry this page is a bit backwards on dialogue)
Infernape: "Smerk"
Luna: Oh! What should I do now?
Miles:You need to work harder. Try to utilize zorua's illusion
Luna and Zorua: We are not as weak as they think we are...
Luna: Zorua! Show them what you can do!
Zorua: I'll show them what Unova is all about!
Miles: H...How is Zorua able to do that? Infernape it one thing, but Reshiram?
Zoroark watch as Luna helped train Zorua for the remaining days that Luna was to stay in the Unova region. Zoroark grew to trust Luna just as Zorua does. Luna's heart touched Zoroark's and zoroark decided to let Zoru train with Luna from now on.
Zorua: Before I left, I promised that I would become the very best Illusion Maste(r) AND I WILL *sorry about the misspell XD*
special chapter
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