Pokemon:Hoenn Version

[Pikachu & Bonsly master]

Hi,This is my first comic,so I would like some credit for trying.

The Adventure begins.
#1:Ooh!Start of A Comic!
#2:Please...
#3:That was easy!
#4:Wild wurmple Already?
#5:Oladle,Finally!
#6:Random Battle
#7:4th Gen in Hoenn?
#8:The're gone?
#9:Petalburg gym battle!<- Speechbubbles!
Rustboro,here we come!
#10:The Name's Jamie
#11:
#12:
#13:
#14:
Movie #1:
Specials:
Mother's Day!
Text Colors!
Credits:
The spriter's resource
VG maps
The ShyGuy kingdom
Coronis
Gridirion
Desgardes
GymleaderLily
mew001
Avegaille
Beco
AbraAce
brockman5
Mew!
kyledove

 

[Goreky]

Cool! How did you do it?

 

[Pikachu & Bonsly master]

Belive it or not,paint.

 

[Pokefan64]

I like it! It's pretty good, just remember to save in JPG. The speechbubbles are a big improvement in No. 9, keep that up.

Good work, keep it up.

~Pokefan64;245;

 

[Pikachu & Bonsly master]

Thanks,I'll start on #10 right now.
Edit:New special!
http://www.maj.com/gallery/superboy7/Pokemon-Comics/special2.bmp

 

[munchlaxboy]

I only read up to comic 5 and this is bad. There are no speech bubbles, you skip too many parts, and just bad. If only my brain combined with yours. I could give you a good storyline and you could teach me how too make a comic with backrounds and stuff.

 

[Pikachu & Bonsly master]

You should read #9,Speechbuubles.

 

[LGameboyR]

Whoa JPEG ruins my colors, I could go color blind! But I only saw the first one & #9, good PNG! It's messy! the speech is everywhere I can hardly tell who's talking but I guess THATS why I use text boxes! But other than that I like it!

 

[Soquid Fpoon]

It's actually pretty good, but three things that make this comic stink is one the Random battles. I mean come on first they In a PokeMon Center and they get a Random Battle from some guy. Then, all of a suddun their facing Ash, Misty, and Brock. Not to mention the line for those Battles: "Wanna Battle," what could be more cornyer.

A second thing your doing is to much Randomness. First of all thier in Hoenn and they find D/P Pokemon. This is called Hoenn Adventures right? Also not to mention the random D/P Trainers and Johnny from Rustoboro. Also somebody get a Medapod for a weird reason.

Thirdly your battles scenes are to short. When you did a Double Battle you showed all the Pokemon attacking at once and it looks horrible.

Although when the bubbles come it will be much better.

 

[Divine_Light]

Its not realy a comic, it doesn't make sence, Ash, Max, May and Brock are in hoenn, but you replaced may with misty
???
0-0

 

[Prime Wolf]

Belive it or not,paint.

PAINT!? Whoah, i have paint, lol, i must learn how do you do that on it?

 

[Pikachu & Bonsly master]

Do what,Speechbubbles?

 

[nattydbzmaster]

its very good
i love it

 

[Pikachu & Bonsly master]

Thank you.And the next comic won't come out for awihle.

 

[Kydd Yuri]

Can some tell me how I can make a Trainer's Card & sprites?

 

[Hazzer]

Its good but the speech bubbles need lots of improvment and you need to make the comic in line so you can read then easily.when you post then or edit the first post make it so it says comic 1, Comic 2, Comic3 Instead of http://www.maj.com/gallery/superboy7...mon_comics.png
Well Done
~Hazzer;009;

 

[Pikachu & Bonsly master]

Okay,But how do you do that?

 

[Maneachiz]

Type in Like, Episode 1, 2, 3...

and then Copy the link from your unloader, highlight Episode (whatever) and click on Hyperlink. Then post the link into the small tab that appears. simple.

 

[Pikachu & Bonsly master]

Okay,Confusing

Okay,that's confusing.
Like this?
http://Episode 1www.maj.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=509297

 

[nattydbzmaster]

plz make more plz