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Pokemon:Hoenn Version

Pikachu & Bonsly master

PWNs all enemies!
Hi,This is my first comic,so I would like some credit for trying.

The Adventure begins.
#1:Ooh!Start of A Comic!
#2:Please...
#3:That was easy!
#4:Wild wurmple Already?
#5:Oladle,Finally!
#6:Random Battle
#7:4th Gen in Hoenn?
#8:The're gone?
#9:Petalburg gym battle!<- Speechbubbles!
Rustboro,here we come!
#10:The Name's Jamie
#11:
#12:
#13:
#14:
Movie #1:
Specials:
Mother's Day!
Text Colors!
Credits:
The spriter's resource
VG maps
The ShyGuy kingdom
Coronis
Gridirion
Desgardes
GymleaderLily
mew001
Avegaille
Beco
AbraAce
brockman5
Mew!
kyledove
 
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Goreky

Boulder Trainer
Cool! How did you do it?
 

Pokefan64

Lets-a-go!
I like it! It's pretty good, just remember to save in JPG. The speechbubbles are a big improvement in No. 9, keep that up.

Good work, keep it up.

~Pokefan64;245;
 
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munchlaxboy

Catching up on XY
I only read up to comic 5 and this is bad. There are no speech bubbles, you skip too many parts, and just bad. If only my brain combined with yours. I could give you a good storyline and you could teach me how too make a comic with backrounds and stuff.
 

LGameboyR

Pokemon Battler
Whoa JPEG ruins my colors, I could go color blind! But I only saw the first one & #9, good PNG! It's messy! the speech is everywhere I can hardly tell who's talking but I guess THATS why I use text boxes! But other than that I like it!
 

Soquid Fpoon

Amazing Trainer
It's actually pretty good, but three things that make this comic stink is one the Random battles. I mean come on first they In a PokeMon Center and they get a Random Battle from some guy. Then, all of a suddun their facing Ash, Misty, and Brock. Not to mention the line for those Battles: "Wanna Battle," what could be more cornyer.

A second thing your doing is to much Randomness. First of all thier in Hoenn and they find D/P Pokemon. This is called Hoenn Adventures right? Also not to mention the random D/P Trainers and Johnny from Rustoboro. Also somebody get a Medapod for a weird reason.

Thirdly your battles scenes are to short. When you did a Double Battle you showed all the Pokemon attacking at once and it looks horrible.

Although when the bubbles come it will be much better.
 

Prime Wolf

I got a Wii!
pikachumaster9 said:
Belive it or not,paint.

PAINT!? Whoah, i have paint, lol, i must learn how do you do that on it?
 
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