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Pokemon Inheritance! (PG)

Hiro xd

Charge at 3! 3!
Hello Ladies and gentleman! I am here to present to you a fanfiction that I have been wanting to write for a very long time.

Thank you for reading and please review!

Prologue
One hundred years since the Great War…One hundred years since the Pokemon war was held in the fields of Hope. One hundred years since the great leader: Omnis had fallen in war and lost his life. The war was fierce and the fields of Hope today are destroyed and only a small pink follower remains…where Omnis had fallen.

Many years before the Great War a star of light had destroyed the land of Johto complete and part of Kanto. The star of light had brought birth to chaos in Kanto. Giovanni’s heirs had taken the chance and concurred all of Kanto! As Team Rocket took over the world they had left out a small chain of islands. From this chain of island came a group that was named the Vardons who brought down Team Rocket.

After two years a new star had hit the water’s surface and fused Kanto and a new land together. When the land finished fusing together, the Vardons named it the land of Eiria. But after the land was named, a member of the Vardons betrayed their leader and killed him! He had killed his leader in rage that his Pokemon had died in the war! Orientis was his name and claimed himself king of the land of Eiria.

The youngest member of the Vardons had left with 12 other members of the Vardons towards the northern mountains where they trained to bring down Orientis who brought chaos to the land. Orientis had learned the location and the plan of the young ex-member of the Vardons and declared war: his whole army against 13 ex-members.

The war began and the young leader charged towards the tyrant of Eiria. Riding on his Dragonite, the young leader pulled out his old sword and slashed Orientis to death. The war had ended in three month but that was the Great War.

The young leader was declared king of the land by Jirachi the star Pokemon: King Omnis. The young leader grew into a man and he had fallen in love with a gorgeous women. The day before their marriage, the son of Orientis and 12 other men and women went against. Orientis’ son had convinced many tribes to go on his side to defeat Omnis.

Thus the Great War started and it had lasted ten years! Omnis and Orientis were both at equal strength but who could win? Omnis plan was to attack Orientis in the Canyon of Sunset but to get their, he would have to pass in fields of Hope.

Halfway at the Canyon of Sunset Orientis was waiting for them with his whole army! Omnis only had a few troops but how did Orientis know? It was the least of Omnis’ worries for know. The battle began and Orientis’ son and Omnis’ swords clashed together. Omnis’ Dragonite and Orientis’ son Lukario (Rukario) attacks clashed but no clues of a winner.

Finally, Orientis’ son got tired of the battle and took out a hidden dagger from the side of his boot and pierced it through Omnis’ chest armor. The last thing Omnis had ever heard were from the lips of Orientis’ son: “This dagger can pierce through anything…I wonder why I had not thought of it before!”

The fields of Hope were destroyed and Orientis’ son forced Jirachi to name him king of Eiria: King Gorion! Gorion is still alive today, the power that he has been given is god-like!

But Gorion has learned something that he did not want to hear! An heir of Omnis that was destined to bring him down was living in his land! Gorion ordered his man to kill the Oracle that had told him the news but the Oracle had fled.

“Omnis still live in the form of his heir!” Gorion told himself into the mirror of his room. Gorion looked into his own evil eyes and growled at his reflection. “Omnis will not win! It is time I send them to find me this heir of my old rival!”
 

SuperDude

Well-Known Member
Hmm, swear i posted on this already. But apprently not.

As a prologue it seems to explain the basic history of the story and shows potential. I can see this going well if you describe everything well and keep going with it. Looking forward to the first chapter and will rate it when i read it.
 
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