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Pokemon: Judgement Day

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Euphoria

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Pokemon: Amethyst Star

Warning: May have various PG-13 Scenes

Pokemon:Amethyst Star


{Season 1}

{000}-Intro
(001}-"Niddy"
{002}-"Homework"
{003}-"Electrified"
{004}"A Cunning Plan"NEW!

Props and Sprites thanks to The Spriters Resource and Avatar. Thanks to Coronis for Alakazam and Pidgeot's overworld sprite.​

Please note that YES, I have changed the name. I have realised that the previous title, "Judgement Day" had no relevance to the plot whatsoever. The new title, "Amethyst Star" has relevance. Please excuse the old title on the Intro, and first two episodes. Thank you.
 
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blueguy

used Metronome!
I must say I'm fairly impressed! I dislike the title, however. It makes me think of law, and this certainly isn't about it...

One thing I advise against is using such recognizable characters (Misty, Hiro, Jasmine etc.). I would like to see original charsets. They're honestly not too difficult to do.

As Defearo said, why did the computer turn into a Pidgeot? Are they in some sort of "magical school"? Also... the T.V. disappears. What is up with that? A book also switches sides of the room... o_O

I like the charsets for this new team as well.

Your title looks professional, and the first issue is very intriguing!

I can't wait to see more from you! :)
 
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Beco

Beware...
It's ok for a intro.

Same question as Dafearo...?
 
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P-Man

Guest
Yeah, I need to ask that...

Nice. I'll keep my eye on this.
 
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Euphoria

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Thanks for the comments everyone! I appreciate it!
Chapter 1 is up! ^_^ Kinna short, but I don't have much time on my hands right now. Enjoy.
 

Tenten

"Just kidding!"
Interesting! The title sounds deep...lol. Blueguy pointed out all I was gonna say. Great intro.

Two people...making out? O__O;; Whoa. PG-13 is right. LOL. And what a battle, that thing with "Niddy" is funny. ^^
 

Matt Silver

Rest My Chemistry
Hehe. I like this comic, sure the sprites aren't unique but i dont care. Lesbo jokes are okay but dont use them to often. That Niddy thing is funny too.
Great job.
 

Jade

Myuu...
Very nice comic. A must-read comic for me... IMO
 
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Euphoria

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Mattthegreat995 said:
Hehe. I like this comic, sure the sprites aren't unique but i dont care. Lesbo jokes are okay but dont use them to often. That Niddy thing is funny too.
Great job.

Uhm, lesbo jokes? Where did you get that from? That girl is kissing a guy.. o_o;
 
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bass_forte

Guest
Very nice. Just one thing, in the first comic it was hard to tell who was speaking. Awesome comic, nonetheless.
 

The Noise

Banned
There seems to be a lack of errort put into the whole comic, which is a shame. The bubble placement is also bad.
 
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Euphoria

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Thanks Jade, Princess Zelda and bass_forte. I appreciate your comments.
Oh, and The Noise, thanks for pointing those out.. i'll keep it in mind.
^^
New Chapter is up.
EDIT: Name change! Please read 1st post for details.
 
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Hukuzo said:
It's so dumb that it's funny. I want more.

Haha, thats the whole idea.. I mean..*cough*.
The comic will definately get more serious as I update, I can promise you that; but that doesn't mean no comedy, either. :D
 

PK

SO BEAUTIFUL!!
God this is a GREAT comic, the randomness makes me laugh but how did the computer turn into a pidgeotto? I give this a 10/10.
 
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Euphoria

Guest
Hehe, thanks, Champ Kevin. I'm working on the third episode now. Should be done soon.
EDIT: Episode 3 is up! xD
 

Matt Silver

Rest My Chemistry
The blonde one is a dude? Wow shows what i know.
Anyhoo nice new comic. bit confusing but nice still.
 

PK

SO BEAUTIFUL!!
I wonder whats Tylers cunning plan is, considering this comic is great for its randomness its likely to be something crazy. Any way nice episode. When's the next update?
 
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