Pokemon:Legendary Guardians

[ninja_squirl]

I know the name sux but its about two pokemon. 1 is the guardian of thesea, 1 is the guardian of the land.Anyway, here it is:
Ep 1
Credits: Pokemon Elite 2000 Sprites

 

[Typhlosion Dude]

can you give me the hyperlink? It's not working for me.

 

[.Bright Side.]

Well, its ok, but it could be better.
1)Dont use paint default colors Xo
2)Lines and textboxes need work
3)Look shotty, you probably saved as JPG.
4)Terrible backrounds


Although I do like how you used the backspritew of slwopoke.
Overall this is a C, take the time to fix the mistakes and work on it.

 

[ninja_squirl]

can you give me the hyperlink? It's not working for me.

The link doesnt go directly to the comic. You have to click on the linkon the actual page it goes to. And thanksfor the crit. Ill stop using the default colors.

 

[Reign G]

It's alright, except lucario isn't a legend;. And by that, neither is his Preevolution. Still, it is interesting. But you may nto want to use the battle poses, they're very limited.

 

[ninja_squirl]

It's alright, except lucario isn't a legend;. And by that, neither is his Preevolution. Still, it is interesting. But you may nto want to use the battle poses, they're very limited.

Yeah I know they arent legendary. But ill find a way around that, I guess.