Pokemon ~ Loyalties Reversed

[.Dan.S.2006.]

(BTW I had to move this into another thread and deleted the old one because my old username was in the title so I had to cut it out!)

Here is my fan comic! Brought to you by the spriter who made Pokemon Teal: Kyota Region Stories, and In The Trees: A Kyota Special. This one is better than the others, and includes a plot to take over the Kanto, Johto, Hoenn and Kyota Regions using the all powerful Shadow Pokemon. It starts off slow but the pace soon quickens. Please enjoy my comic and make any suitable suggestions (flaming and spamming will be reported because I want to keep my thread squeaky clean)

Finished Volumes

[00i] Introduction to the series

Chapter 1 ~ The First Hurdle
[001] The Dark Figure
[002] Failure
[003] Birth Of A New Snagger

Chapter 2 ~ The First Switch
[004] Snag Of The Century
[005] The Big One
[006] Loyalty Revealed
[007] Another Round
[008] vs Quilava
[009] A Legendary Encounter
[010] Knock One Down

Chapter 3 ~ The First Wave
[011] New Recruit
[012] A New Form of Message
[013] Holy Ground
[014] March of the Masters

The Exploits of Stalking Wurmple

[W01] No people were harmed in the making of this comic ...
[W02] A tragic comedy ...

T3h Min1z

[M01] Have You Seen That Bird?
[M02]Free Willy
[M03] Hot Revenge
[M04] Coincidence eh?
[M05] False Advertising
[M06] Sahaqiel: Cliche Hunter

Appeal
Like Pokemon: Loyalties Reversed? Well how'd you like to help me out by advertising on Serebii? Stick one of these banners in your sig, if you have space that is, with a link to this thread to help me!

Credits

The Spriters Resource for overworld and trainer stuff.
Coronis for some of the Pokemon overworlds.
Gridiron for the Johto Maps.
brockman5, Mew! and ForeverDes for Mysterious Dungeon sprites.
Pokesho.com for base images in the new banner.

 

[SoulGuardian]

(BTW I had to move this into another thread and deleted the old one because my old username was in the title so I had to cut it out!)

Here is my fan comic! Brought to you by the spriter who made Pokemon Teal: Kyota Region Stories, and In The Trees: A Kyota Special. This one is better than the others, and includes a plot to take over the Kanto, Johto, Hoenn and Kyota Regions using the all powerful Shadow Pokemon. It starts off slow but the pace soon quickens. Please enjoy my comic and make any suitable suggestions (flaming and spamming will be reported because I want to keep my thread squeaky clean)

Finished Volumes

Chapter 1: The lonely road
Volume I - Introduction to the series
Volume 1 - The Dark Figure
Volume 2 - Failure
Volume 3 - Birth Of A New Snagger

Chapter 2: The First Switch
Volume 4 - Snag Of The Century
Volume 5 - The Big One

Credits

The Spriters Resource for overworld and trainer stuff.
Coronis for some of the Pokemon overworlds.
Gridiron for the Johto Maps (check your PMs man )

Great comic Zhou Tai! I like the plot and I LOVE the sprites!

 

[.Dan.S.2006.]

^ Thank you for the encouraging comments I may be able to finish the next volume today, feel free to comment while I work.

 

[Sahaqiel]

You know, im pretty sure i wrote a huge comment on this comic, whered it go?
Anyway,Im going to have to shorten this version. Im pretty sure it is a cliche to use that
"You'll see" comment. I find this comic trying to be so serious, I dont take it seriously. In any case i think this comic could be better if it wasnt so cliche-y. (For instance you used the so very old, "Ive been expecting you" cliche. Plus if she was expected then why didnt she know what he was after? Doesnt make sense) Though it is an ok concept i dont think that i enjoyed this comic very much, no offense,
Sahaqiel

 

[.Dan.S.2006.]

That is okay, it is only your opinion and you are perfectly entitled to it. Actually I had a huge reply to your huge post and now I have gone and deleted the thread so I can't copy it But never mind. I will try to use less cliches in the future. And it wasn't intending on being serious, only partly. The character Lloyd was included to add humour to the comic.

Anyways, I ran out of time yesterday, due to high coursework demand, so I will make the next colume today. Stay tuned.

Edit: Finished it (had a bit of trouble with tech stuff ~ Volume 6 - Loyalty Revealed

 

[Hiro xd]

I really like this comic alot! the speech needs some improvemt but I like the story line!

 

[.Dan.S.2006.]

Thanks Hiro Could you specify where I could improve my speech?

Anyway I have some spare time so I am going to make the next volume.

Edit: Done it Volume 7 - Another Round is up now, with a new sprite appearence.

Edit2: I also added a little mini comic for fun, I may make more of these. Now, for some coursework. Stupid biology o.o

 

[.Dan.S.2006.]

I am very dissapointed with the lack of response, but I will not let this thread die.

Anyway I have finished the next volume, where we conclude the battle between Lianne and the cipher peon: Volume 8 - vs Quilava

 

[Electrode]

Very well done I like the plot its not exactly an adventure and the sprites are great just a question are you spallding from fan sprites forum because if you are may I just say I love your work

 

[Politoed]

Well done Zhou Tai ^^

 

[.Dan.S.2006.]

Thank you Electrode and Politoed and yes, I was Spallding, as my rank says, and I'm glad to hear you liked my sprites -_^

I may have time for another volume today, possibly with some minis as well!

Edit: Sorry, I suddenly realised I had a pile of coursework to do But I managed to sneak the time for a mini

Mini 2 - Free Willy

 

[Politoed]

I love that Mini episode ^^.
But its sad for that little girl =(.

 

[.Dan.S.2006.]

Don't worry, it's nothing big (well, the kyogre is) but I mean it has nothing to do with the story. I am not sure how much time I will have today, as I have a major graphic design to fulfill, but I will come to it as soon as I am satisfied.

 

[Russian May]

I liked the episode with Willy! So funny, but I think it would be funnier if there was Wailord instead of Kyogre, because he's bigger! =)

 

[.Dan.S.2006.]

Yeah but I couldn't find any side sprites of Wailord from MD so I used Kyogre. Anyway I have been pretty deterred these last few days, due to my sudden purchase of Dynasty Warriors 5, but now I am back at school I will sort out the next volume. Stay tuned!

 

[XxGreivousxX]

Wow good comic, you have nice photoshop skills.
Not as funnt, but still the graphics and plot--Exellent.

 

[.Dan.S.2006.]

Thanks Grievous.

Grr! I just can't get this done, my computer is screwing with me, I swear it. I keep losing my file. I am going to do it today no matter what!

Edit: Finally finished: Volume 9 - A Legendary Encounter

I will now run along a new basis of posting. I will post a comic every monday, wednesday and thursday, because I am busy friday. This makes it easier for me.

 

[~Lucario Master~]

i got my eye on this comic this is a good comic keep up the work

 

[.Dan.S.2006.]

Thank you for the comments, but I am not sure whether I am able to finish an episode today, I have a pile of coursework (again ) But I may be able to fit in time for a mini

Edit: Just scraped this one: Mini 3 - Hot Revenge

 

[Sahaqiel]

MORE CLICHES GAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH. Ok the cliche in the last comic was the confident dude who think he is invincible and then gets toasted. So yeah, You did say you would stop, also the
free willy" comic had the cliche of something trying to jump, stops halfway and slams into someone. The order of the comic point toward no original plot and it gets kinda annoying,
Sahaqiel