Pokemon Master Journey (the comic)

[frogla]

Pokemon Master Journey

Ill make a real title later but for now i post the first few pages of my first comic.

Info
well.. i reveal this as the comic goes

Prolouge
Cover
Page 1
Page 2

Rate it please and heres credits.

Video Game Atlas- SOme maps
Shyguys Kingdom- Some extra people
MD- POkemon Sprites except Manyula i made it.

Oh yes i used text boxes to start with cuz i diddnt really begin speech until the story but tell me which is better

 

[Blaze Dragon]

Mmm, this look promising, not only because I´m a Ho-Oh fan and a new gen fan, but as it looks good, but why on the last part the boy is ordering an Aerial Ace from Swellow?

 

[frogla]

its a pokemon battle

 

[frogla]

dang im a idiot i put the wrong comic in ill change it (unfinished one)

 

[PK]

Please don't double post. Well its pretty diffrent from most journey comics. I should say and a neat use of Mystrious dungeon sprites. Still text under the panel..

 

[frogla]

sry dont worry itll stay bubble now but naratoin goes under

 

[frogla]

sorry for dp but i added a page

 

[PK]

0-0 the gengars are in diffrent colors. Odd. Well most likely Michels going to kick there sorry buts. But why sizor, I don't think his any help against ghosts. Even Manyula ALONE can take them (considering his part dark). A bit better than the first few I should say though

 

[Hiro xd]

Well this comic has started off really well! I really need some of those dungeon pokemon, whos MD?

Anyways I like this comic: good new characters, good plot for now (though Ho-oh didn't move when people came..) well good luck with this new comic!

Your's truely:
Hiro XD ;manafi;

 

[frogla]

Thanks , MD is mysteroius duengoun lol. And HO-oh was Kod

 

[Saorio]

Amazing sprites...the only probs I see are the spelling and grammer-PLEASE PROOFREAD IT!!!!! The text is also too small.