Pokemon - May and Brandon's Adventures

psyduck101 · Feb 15, 2006

Dabou8: For his support and spirits
Neopilis: (i've PM you but u havn't PM'd me) Some Spirits and overworld Spirits
www.vgmaps.com : for ALL of the backgrounds around Heonn

Don't need Magma sprits any more. The next comic should be up in 2-3 weeks (MAJIOR difference!)

Also i have new Brandon spirits so SoulGuardian i dont need yours though they will stay in the first few comics!

Thanx,

Psyduck101

Neopolis · Feb 15, 2006

This is very strange.

The league was rushed. Also, the order of panels is confusing, it's supposed to be...
[1][2]
[3][4]
[5][6]
...while you have...
[1][4]
[2][5]
[3][6]
VEry confusing.

"So what do you want?"
"Yep"
"We're gonna catch you"
"A pokemon"

HUH?

EDIT:

Here's some Team Magma and Aqua sprites...

psyduck101 · Feb 15, 2006

Neopolis said:
"So what do you want?"
"Yep"
"We're gonna catch you"
"A pokemon"

HUH?

No,

"Yep" (answering last frame)
"So what do you want?"
"We're gunna catch you"
"A Pokemon"

Magic kid930 · Feb 15, 2006

Hmm.. well I do find it confusing but other than that, pretty good. You didn't have to rush the league though...

Neopolis · Feb 15, 2006

"We're gonna catch you"?

Magic kid930 · Feb 15, 2006

It's meant to be this (i think)

"We're gonna catch you..."
"...a pok'emon"

Magical Trevor · Feb 15, 2006

Tis is really cnfusing. Do the sppech in the order people would read it

Blues · Feb 15, 2006

First off, get rid of that announcer, it's not funny AT ALL. Plus, it takes up a third of the comic, and makes it look like you don't have any better ideas. Second, the comic goes from left to right, not top to bottom. Third, your text boxes are WAY too confusing. You're supposed to put what is said first either at the top or the left. The way you do it doesn't make sense. Fourth, work on your humor, I didn't laugh once. Last: MAKE YOUR PANELS THE SAME SIZE. At first your panels are too big, when you could easily use that space for more panels. Oh yeah, and don't overuse uber pokemon, it got annoying the first time.

So, work on the things I said, I dunno how this comic will go...

psyduck101 · Feb 15, 2006

Re: Everything, I hope!

Magic kid930 said:
It's meant to be this (i think)

"We're gonna catch you..."
"...a pok'emon"

yea! It was!

anyway if you read the 2ND POST! you would know.

K, I've gotta idea - i'll try and do one how dabou8 does it

And the panels are different sizes 'coz i'm using VGMaps.com, and if i want different areas i NEED a different size. But, i'll try!

Thanx,

Psyduck101

SoulGuardian · Feb 16, 2006

psyduck101 said:
MAY AND BRANDON'S ADVENTURES!!!

By Psyduck101

Rated - UK - 12
Rated - Everywhere else - PG13

k, this is my first comic. It is about May and Brandon, I had a little help from dabou8, the credits though are at the end. It starts in a weird place for comics, so enjoy...

Chapter 1: The League!

Episode 1: http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/4527/no1yahoo8xw.jpg

Episode 2: http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/7440/no2yahoo7wj.jpg

Episode 3: http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/567/no3yahoo9fg.jpg

Episode 4: http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/9713/no4yahoo2up.jpg

Episode 5: http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/2326/no5yahoo5pv.jpg

Episode 6: http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/4135/no6yahoo6dy.jpg

Episode 7: http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/7527/no7yahoo7dm.jpg

Episode 8: http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/7676/no8yahoo1jo.jpg

Episode 9: http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/2806/no9yahoo0kv.jpg

Chapter 2: The very short, after the league chapter

Episode 10: http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/9...10yahoo5nx.jpg

Episode 11: http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/4425/no118xe.jpg

Chapter 3: The big, the bad, and the Emerald!

Episode 12: http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/6...12yahoo4ga.jpg

Episode 13: http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/3262/no137hw.jpg

Episode 14: http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/2150/no143am.jpg

k, i want to thank some people;

Me: for making the comic
Dabou8: For his support and spirits
Neopilis: (i've PM you but u havn't PM'd me) Some Spirits and overworld Spirits
www.vgmaps.com : for ALL of the backgrounds around Heonn

NOTE : IF ANYONE HAS ANY TEAM MAGMA OVERWORLD SPIRITS COULD YOU PM THEM TO ME AND I WILL GIVE CREDIT!

Thanx,

Psyduck101

You stole my Brandon sprites!
And you stole the Jacko sprites Beco gave to me!
I will report you if you keep using them!

SerenadeSP · Feb 17, 2006

SoulGuardian said:
You stole my Brandon sprites!
And you stole the Jacko sprites Beco gave to me!
I will report you if you keep using them!

Now how do you know that he stole them?Just answer that!

Magical Trevor · Feb 17, 2006

SoulGuardian said:
You stole my Brandon sprites!
And you stole the Jacko sprites Beco gave to me!
I will report you if you keep using them!

he/she can't of stolen them because there like every normal brendan sprite there is no difference

Serimew · Feb 17, 2006

SoulGuardian · Feb 17, 2006

Dark Starter said:
Now how do you know that he stole them?Just answer that!

I know because mine were recolored blue....

Toaster Man 5.6 · Feb 18, 2006

"I want Rayquaza to be the ultimate trainer!"? How can a Rayquaza be a trainer?

psyduck101 · Feb 19, 2006

Doomsday Edwin 5.6 said:
"I want Rayquaza to be the ultimate trainer!"? How can a Rayquaza be a trainer?

nope - She wants Rayquaza so SHE can be the ultimate trainer.

NOTE: If you really don't like this PM me - if i get 10 in the next week i'll shut it down.

Munchlax --> Snorlax · Feb 20, 2006

I liked the court bit;munchlax; ;munchlax; ;munchlax;

PK · Feb 20, 2006

By the way where did you learn about team emerald cause I don't know if you stole it but team emeralds sorta my idea. I'm not sayin you stole I'm just askin.

psyduck101 · Feb 21, 2006

PK said:
By the way where did you learn about team emerald cause I don't know if you stole it but team emeralds sorta my idea. I'm not sayin you stole I'm just askin.

nope - it came of the top of my head. as Rayquaza is the only legend who doesn't have a team after them... so i made team emerald (with Emerald being the name of the game he's in - yeah, i know it's lazy), and with some help with the spirits - i got Laura, and the grunts, and soon Shadow Rayquaza (yeah i know it's a spoof of XD but, you know...)

If you want to see this shut down please PM me.

If you want to see this keeped as is please PM me.

Thanx,

psyduck101

psyduck101 · Mar 7, 2006

SORRY FOR THE DOUBLE POST BUT NO ONE WAS POSTING

like to thank Munchlax --> Snorlax, SerenadeSP and mutten641, they, out of all the posts belived and/or backed me, everyone else has said "Really confusin'" or something along those lines, k, if you are going to tell me i'm c*** then please do so, but ATLEAST tell me how to inprove or in Neopilis' case give me something so i can in prove.

Here's some Team Magma and Aqua sprites...

Thanx, if i continue i will use these, but i WILL NOT waist MY time making those (i took up a whole weekend making those) and not get any POSITIVE replies, if you DO NOT like this post so, just three will make me shut it down.

Sorry i had to make a post like this. i double posted because this doesn't suite the post about a month ago.

Thank You,

psyduck101

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