Victinifan100
V-create Everything!
Hello this is my first Fan-fic and i hope you enjoy it, don't be afraid to tell me if there are any problems.
Warning my story may contain cannibalism (eating other Pokemon)
Prologue
“Hello,” said a soft voice,
“Where am I? Who are you?” I asked,
“My world is in danger and you are the only one who can save it,” the voice said in a worried way, “you see, ten years ago a giant rock crashed directly into our home land. When we went to investigate it, a giant creature stepped out and started to freeze the land while we where running from it. The rock started to grow into a large spike, which pierced through the sky and also began to expand across the land; we had no choice but to escape while we could, to a nearby island which was aware of the giant rock, they told us that the rock was made out of ice,”
“So how is this effecting your world? Its just a giant growing ice meteor with a monster inside it,” I replied
“The monster in the ice was the monster from our old legends, the legend went that one day a giant rock made out of ice would crash into our world and freeze everything that our world has, it also says that one day a young hero shall come to our world and vanquish the beast and save us from its frozen wrath,” The voice replied, the voice was getting clearer and I noticed it was a lady talking to me,
“How are you telling me all this stuff? And where am I?” I asked
“You are in the spirit world, you might not remember but you where killed by a horrible accident two years ago and I am the one who is going to give another chance in life, and so you can save my word,” She replied
“Why can’t you do it? Aren’t you alive?” I replied, “wait your getting clearer, you’re a pokémon aren’t you?”
“Yes I am, I’m the spirit of the Gardevoir that was sacrificed so that I can visit the spirit world with this,” She said while pulling something out from a bag, “this is the orb of rebirth, this will revive you in my world in a different form, everyone there is waiting for you,”
“What? What do you mean by new form?” I asked
“Since I am destined to be your spirit guardian I have to answer all your questions, once you touch the orb of rebirth you shall be turned into a pokémon,” Gardevoir replied
“WHAT????”I replied shocked, “Couldn’t it be easier for me to be a human?”
“There is no other way of you leaving without changing form,” Gardevoir replied, “now touch the orb and you will be brought back to life as a pokémon,”
“How will I know which pokémon I will be?” I asked while I had my hand above the orb,
“Only fate can tell, go on and touch the orb,” Gardevoir replied
I lowered my hand and touched the orb, suddenly the orb glowed white and flashed.
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Please don't say the prologue is too short, the prologue doesn't have a minimum length.
Warning my story may contain cannibalism (eating other Pokemon)
Prologue
“Hello,” said a soft voice,
“Where am I? Who are you?” I asked,
“My world is in danger and you are the only one who can save it,” the voice said in a worried way, “you see, ten years ago a giant rock crashed directly into our home land. When we went to investigate it, a giant creature stepped out and started to freeze the land while we where running from it. The rock started to grow into a large spike, which pierced through the sky and also began to expand across the land; we had no choice but to escape while we could, to a nearby island which was aware of the giant rock, they told us that the rock was made out of ice,”
“So how is this effecting your world? Its just a giant growing ice meteor with a monster inside it,” I replied
“The monster in the ice was the monster from our old legends, the legend went that one day a giant rock made out of ice would crash into our world and freeze everything that our world has, it also says that one day a young hero shall come to our world and vanquish the beast and save us from its frozen wrath,” The voice replied, the voice was getting clearer and I noticed it was a lady talking to me,
“How are you telling me all this stuff? And where am I?” I asked
“You are in the spirit world, you might not remember but you where killed by a horrible accident two years ago and I am the one who is going to give another chance in life, and so you can save my word,” She replied
“Why can’t you do it? Aren’t you alive?” I replied, “wait your getting clearer, you’re a pokémon aren’t you?”
“Yes I am, I’m the spirit of the Gardevoir that was sacrificed so that I can visit the spirit world with this,” She said while pulling something out from a bag, “this is the orb of rebirth, this will revive you in my world in a different form, everyone there is waiting for you,”
“What? What do you mean by new form?” I asked
“Since I am destined to be your spirit guardian I have to answer all your questions, once you touch the orb of rebirth you shall be turned into a pokémon,” Gardevoir replied
“WHAT????”I replied shocked, “Couldn’t it be easier for me to be a human?”
“There is no other way of you leaving without changing form,” Gardevoir replied, “now touch the orb and you will be brought back to life as a pokémon,”
“How will I know which pokémon I will be?” I asked while I had my hand above the orb,
“Only fate can tell, go on and touch the orb,” Gardevoir replied
I lowered my hand and touched the orb, suddenly the orb glowed white and flashed.
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Please don't say the prologue is too short, the prologue doesn't have a minimum length.
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