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Pokemon: New stories (jirachis wish)

Jackson

Well-Known Member
a young boy is given an egg for his starter pokemon that turns out that Team Rocket, Magma, and Aqua want for evil doing. Will Jackson save his pokemon from evil along with the world? Find out by reading.
Ive tried this comic once before but i just droped it so now im gona try and do it again.

Worker: pantyer2

new:
21nsxc2.png


season1:
Comic1: http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/6571/1nszg2.png
Comic2: http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/678/2nsad1.png
Comic3: http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/1484/3nsgi1.png
Comic4: http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/6748/4nsoh3.png
Comic5: http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/1198/5nsxf7.png

season2:
Comic6: http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/392/6nsok6.png
Comic7: http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/3996/7nsbd7.png
Comic8: http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2848/8nsxm3.png
Comic9: http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/9396/9nser3.png
Comic10: http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/3262/10nshc6.png
Comic11: http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/5660/11nsxm1.png

Season3:
Comic12: http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/305/12nsyk4.png
Comic13: http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2682/13nsak2.png
Comic14: http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/8146/14nsre8.png
Comic15: http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/2033/15nsku2.png
Comic16: http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/5749/16nsuq7.png
Comic17: http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/5827/17nsxv9.png

Season4:
Comic18: http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/7029/18nsoz3.png
Comic19: http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/127/19nswd7.png
Comic20: http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/7748/20nsbt5.png
Comic21: http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/8167/21nsxc2.png


 
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blackgoodbye

Break the silence
its not bad. it started pretty good especially with the fire tehe fire:) nice
 

toton4

Aqua King
keep it up! nice and funny start ^_^
 

Cecil Lockheart

The Heavenly Trainer
lol he wanted to cook the egg lol well nice well done keep up
 

Jackson

Well-Known Member
well i have a update for tommorw. but im updating now so i dont forget tommorw.

so... here you go

Comic8:http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/5466/8nsjn2.png

and people please post more. i want to know how to make it better or if its good or bad...or both.
 

cabman

Well-Known Member
nice comic
EDIT: rank up
 

claona

#1 Qwifish fan
Wow, I love it, you are one of the few people that can pull together a serious story, but still keep it funny. I'm keeping my eyes on this one
 

Jackson

Well-Known Member
do you guys know what i got? guess!...come on...GUESS!! ok ill tell you!!
I got an update!!

Comic8:http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/5466/8nsjn2.png

well...i still need to find a way to get more reveiws

and claona i will try and put some more jokes in.
 
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XyronTheFalcon

I'm Back? YAY!
Very nice! I'll be watching this! Very nice concept using the Jirachi(s)
 

toton4

Aqua King
it's getting even better!
 

XyronTheFalcon

I'm Back? YAY!
Haha... I love yr Comic. It has a splash of Comedy in it! Nice!
 

Poke gal

HoresesPoniesPokemon
Ahhh, thats so sweet and the jirachi is so CUTE!! Wish is a good name for her. And where did you find the large pics. of jirachi?
 
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Jackson

Well-Known Member
Well this is the last comic of Season 2 and Im happy to put it up.

Comic11: http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/1561/11nsxw0.png

and on a side note I will be out of the country for the next mounth starting after tommorw so im not sure when ill be able to get to an comic put up so I will not up date often But I will try and update AT LEAST! once a Weak.

So happy summer to all!!

PS:

Ahhh, thats so sweet and the jirachi is so CUTE!! Wish is a good name for her. And where did you find the large pics. of jirachi?

I just google imaged search for Jirachi. lol
 
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Mewmie the shiny Mew

=Cute+Power+Smart
These are very good. I have seen some spellig and grammar errors though. You spelled "fined" instead of "find" in one episode and put" who know where" instead of "who knows where" in another and there are probable a few more I forgot or missed. But the comic itself is very nicely done. The story is great, serious to protect the legendaries, (by the way asre you going to add Manaphy and Shaymin?) but some funny notes in there, too. Why is the Jirachi blue, exactly? Was it just to make the comic more interesting or what other reason?
;151;
 
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