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Pokemon: Nicola's school life

crystal-zephyr

i feel his pain
This is my first shot at comic making so it may not be that good. So far all i've got is a prologue. I am well asware i used The legend of Zelda: the minish cap backgrounds. I will update at least once every two weeks.

Prologue
Page 1: They were stolen
page 2: Geodude spit
page 3: Digs you
page 4: Learned Fire blast.
page 5.1: Nothing
page 5.2: Teleportation sickness
Page 5.3: Water i spilt

Specials:
special 1

Bio's:
Nicola bio #1

Extras:
Soulguardian-Andy
If you wish to, PM me a sprite sheet and i'll add you in to my comic for however long you want if you want that is.

Credits:
Me for Nic, random guy and grandfather sprites + Pidgey recolour.
Spriters resource for the Zelda backgrounds.
 
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crystal-zephyr

i feel his pain
Pikachu & Bonsly master said:
I can't even see it.

Ok well can someone please tell me how to make it be able to be seen? When i made it it was quite large.
 
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invadertab

Guest
I think it's because you've uploaded it to Photobucket, which shrinks large images. Maybe you should try a different image hoster, like Imageshack or something.
 

crystal-zephyr

i feel his pain
Maneachiz said:
I tend to use imageshack. and make sure its also saved in PNG.

I've just tried imageshack and it wont uplaod as it says the file's too big :confused: then when i try using the image re-sizer i just dont understand what it says.
 

crystal-zephyr

i feel his pain
Ok sorry for the double post and not to sound rude but CAN SOMEONE PLEASE TELL ME HOW TO MAKE MY COMIC BE SHOWN BIGGER. I've tried loads of things and they dont work.
 

Anton_91

Comic Trainer!
Try saving the file as .PNG and then upload it on This Site.
 

Chaos Sneasel

Sneasel of Chaos
Kind of repetetive in spots, like when you kept repeating the phrase "so far". The cursing really isn't funny eaither, unless you use it sporadically. I also noticed some text outside of the bubble, and in the first pannel of the prologue the girl's name was floating around in space out of line with the rest of the text.
Aside from that, not so bad.


~Chaos Sneasel ;215;
 

crystal-zephyr

i feel his pain
Ok new page up already.

I realise that in the prologue that the name is off becuase i made a mistake and had to put it right. I tried my best to get it right but i thought i did but guess i was wrong.

Also if anyone would like to take part in it PM me a sprite sheet and i'll add your character in. Some may be in quite a few some only two or three pages.
 

Blazekin Master

Are you scared yet?
I can't read Geodude Spit.
 

crystal-zephyr

i feel his pain
Pikachu & Bonsly master said:
I'll watch this comic,cause it's getting better.

Yay someone actually like it ^_^ i thought i might have to totally redo it all becuase no one liked it. I'll have the next page up either tomorow or the day after. To advance after that i'd need to get some new sprites in. It could be more help if someone wanted to have a character in becuase then i wouldn't have to sprite every person.

If you want a character in PM me a sprite sheet and what your character's like and i'll add them in hopefully the way that suits you ^_^;

EDIT: Once this comic is finished i'll start on a new one and if you send a sprite sheet in i'll put them in the next if you wanted. Just thought i'd better tell you.
 

SoulGuardian

PICHU ROXORZ!
crystal-zephyr said:
Yay someone actually like it ^_^ i thought i might have to totally redo it all becuase no one liked it. I'll have the next page up either tomorow or the day after. To advance after that i'd need to get some new sprites in. It could be more help if someone wanted to have a character in becuase then i wouldn't have to sprite every person.

If you want a character in PM me a sprite sheet and what your character's like and i'll add them in hopefully the way that suits you ^_^;

EDIT: Once this comic is finished i'll start on a new one and if you send a sprite sheet in i'll put them in the next if you wanted. Just thought i'd better tell you.

I'll join. I'll PM you right now. The reason I want to join your comic is because I think it's interesting (even though it's far from perfect). Also it reminds me of my comic "Pokemon: Andy's Amazing Life". The sprites for my character are on my thread "Pokemon: Andy's Amazing Life". Go to Bios and click on the second link. Then you will see the sprites.
 
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