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Pokemon: Noble Trinity

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PokemonBreederChris

UnlimitedBlade Works
Credit goes to:
Serebiiforums
Sprite Resource
The Combusken foundation
&
individual donations from viewers like you

Remake of my origonal....
The first three were practise, to help me understand spriting more, now I am ready to do atleast recoloring of sprites, don't worry the main character will get a custom sprite, instead of the cool trainer sprite, soon, just got to practice and get better.

Note: This comic is more serious then funny, so those who are fans of pure funny, this comic is not for you...
Table of Contents:
Introduction


Recent comic:
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I am still accepting character, the ones from the old thread will be used still...

Character sheet:
Coming soon
 
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Lord of elements

BURN SUCKA BURN!
It's okay but there could be a few improvements
 
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PokemonBreederChris

UnlimitedBlade Works
Lord of elements said:
It's okay but there could be a few improvements
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Mind naming the 'few improvement,' so I can improve?

I may be a newcomer to Spriting, but the only way to improve is for people to point out my mistakes, I understand my comic is nothing close to perfection, but to strive for perfection I need to fix the flaws, and just saying I need improvements w/o telling me the improvements, well is a post to take up space. I would prefer you to next time write what I need to improve upon

But anyway, thanks for reading, By chapter 2 I hope I will have a full custom sprite for the main characters...

People, feel free to give your honest oppinion, I would like to know what you think, so I can Improve.
 
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HB5squared

I'm Back
I liked it untill you called the man, a man called a Hiker? but his names was Philopine?

It would've went better if it was like a hiker came up to me or Philopine was a man who enjoyed hiking, your way sounds too video-gamey.
 
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PokemonBreederChris

UnlimitedBlade Works
Thanks for the coment, yeah, I tried to imply his name and that of a hiker position in the Pokeverse, but I guess gramatically it was bad, so I edited it.
 
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PokemonBreederChris

UnlimitedBlade Works
pokeboy sarab said:
i din't like it too much at some points it looks very blurry
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Again, what parts were blurry?

Don't give constructive critism, unless you have evidence to back it up. To me it does not look blurry, but I am the creator....Anyway, what pannels is it blurry?
 
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blueguy

used Metronome!
It's sort of confusing. You need to have a gutter between your panels, or else they all converge into a mess. I find the dialogue to be a bit clichéed, what with the whole "fateful day" talk, as well as the concept of a protagonist being transported to another universe. Oh, and you spelled "hiker" wrong. Your grammar and spelling's not bad, just avoid the sorts of things that have been said over and over again before, such as "it was raining cats and dogs."
 
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PokemonBreederChris

UnlimitedBlade Works
blueguy said:
It's sort of confusing. You need to have a gutter between your panels, or else they all converge into a mess. I find the dialogue to be a bit clichéed, what with the whole "fateful day" talk, as well as the concept of a protagonist being transported to another universe. Oh, and you spelled "hiker" wrong. Your grammar and spelling's not bad, just avoid the sorts of things that have been said over and over again before, such as "it was raining cats and dogs."
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Thanks for the comments, but answer me this:

"Has there been anything NOT done, by previous artists? There are like 4.6 billion peole NOW on the earth, about 6 000 000 or more, are experianced sprite comicers....So what you are saying is that to come up with something origonal the rest of the population has not done, is like 1/4600000000 chance to do. Yes, the main protagonist gets teleported into the world, but I assure you, this is NOT going to be a cliched journey comic, more like a journey to find one's reasons, it is to dream, dare, and discover....

the theme: Dream, Dare, Discover

you can take that theme anywhere you want to go with it, but still, trying something completely 90% origonal is hard, for almost every plot modern man can come up with has already been done, even though you've never seen it. We are going to a time in place when almost every thing has been done, or discovered, even I did research to plots I came up with on my own, w/o ever reading something about them (inspired though), and would you look at that? Some Japanese kid had already done a sprite comic, so yes I know I am cliched...

I don't know why, but I continuosely spell 'Hiker' 'Hicker' must be something subconsciousely, or what? It is so annoying, my mind reads Hiker, but as soon as you point it out, I see Hicker.....and yeah, I understand about the gutter, my eyes tracked a differant way when reading it, making it thus confusing and such, but how exactly to you create a gutter? does it involve shading? Sorry, I still am a newb at this...
 
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Polymer

<-- The Best Pokemon
What was that thing she found that took her to the pokemon world? A haunted pebble or something? Anyways, I liked it, but the whole comic looked a little blurry, which would be okay, but the onix sprite is perfectly fine which kind of clashes with the rest of the comic, plus in the last panel, why is it streched out? The normal sprite should have fit in there, plus I don't realy get why it's there...and I like the way you worded it, so maybe you should consider making a fan-fic of this instead of a sprite comic.
 
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PokemonBreederChris

UnlimitedBlade Works
Working on second one, also please tell me

HOW IS IT BLURRY!?

To me it seems fine, I don't see any blurry, but how do you? Sorry my eyes are like 20,20...It just does not seem blurry to me...How do I fix this blurness?
 
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PokemonBreederChris

UnlimitedBlade Works
Thanks Jerry Francis, and well your character will be main for a chapter, take a break for a while and then rejoin, sort of like Brock.

Fixing small stuff on the next comic, hopefully it will be in before November 5th
 
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PokemonBreederChris

UnlimitedBlade Works
Ok, I can change it, except I sprited Chimeco, but I can easily change the dialogue so it would not be yours or something like that.

With the new revisions being done, and technical difficulties with my home computer (At school's one) It will be hard for me to update next one
 
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PokemonBreederChris

UnlimitedBlade Works
Didn't you read? My home computer with all my work stored on it, crashed, and has had other technical difficulties, Probably by tonight, if I really work hard, I can get second one up
 
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