~Pokemon: Photography~

[ForeverFlame]

Notes>The trainer sprites were made by ME only for one purpose, for this comic. The sprites of the cameras are NOT for use, and I will NEVER claim that any of these maps are mine unless they are. I refuse to claim that Gridiron's Johto maps were made by me, or anyone else.

Story>Olivine City is where Rachel lives. She is a 15 year old girl, who has a DEADLY crush on her neighbor, Brian. Brian however, doesn't seem to like her as much as she likes him. He instead likes his little brother, who likes Rachel. Rachel doesn't like him, though, so it creates a Love Triangle.

The Comic>
000: To Become a Photographer!
001: Humble Pleasure
002: Group Photo! (Do I Look THAT Fat?)
003: "Cheating on Me!!!"
004: Free Willy
005: Mermaid
006: Doomed
007: Splendid
008: "You Photo-Theif!!!"

Credits>
Gridiron for the Johto Maps
Vgmaps.com For most of the Kanto Maps

 

[munchlaxboy]

Pretty good. it's funny and stuff. Just a little confusing the order and the way things are happening.

 

[Sahaqiel]

seems like a slightly off concept. Im not sure why theres MAKEUP EVERYWHERE OMGWTH(CK). The plot seems askew also. You should try improving the humor a smidge. Theyre ok, though.
Sahaqiel

 

[ForeverFlame]

Ok, guys, I have episode 7 done.
As an extra bonus, I have episode 8 aswell!

In these episodes, Rachel gets more serious about the Photography Contest. She goes to the Photography Contest Hall to meet other Photographers, and then she starts to [SPOIL](trys to)[/SPOIL] take some pictures!

 

[Neopolis]

What? Lapras is swimming on land? (Yes, it is swimming. It's fins are gone.)

Anyway, I liked comic 6. So... Stupid XD In a good way. But some stuff just doesn't make any sense. Certain grapihcs, and the order in which things are happnening. But I have to say it's original.

 

[XxGreivousxX]

What? Lapras is swimming on land? (Yes, it is swimming. It's fins are gone.)

Anyway, I liked comic 6. So... Stupid XD In a good way. But some stuff just doesn't make any sense. Certain grapihcs, and the order in which things are happnening. But I have to say it's original.

wow seconded

 

[ForeverFlame]

What? Lapras is swimming on land? (Yes, it is swimming. It's fins are gone.)

Anyway, I liked comic 6. So... Stupid XD In a good way. But some stuff just doesn't make any sense. Certain grapihcs, and the order in which things are happnening. But I have to say it's original.

Shhh.

Everyone keeps on saying that it doesn't make sense. xP I can't change the past, but I can create the future. Over three people said that it's confusing, so I really need to take it into consideration. But still, atleast people aren't ranting about how my comic is 'like every other one.'
I'm not going to consider your CC, I'm actually going to make my comic less confusing. o_o


EDIT: I have a very poor escuse with the Lapras thing. It's sitting on it's fins, like how cats sit on their paws.

 

[The Benmeister]

What a very odd plot. But interesting nontheless. Keep at it and this could become a decent comic.

I'm not that confused with the story at all...which is odd considering its me I'm talking about...well, as I always say to everyone, keep up the good work!

 

[Sahaqiel]

Ok, now, what is with the old man, and why did she think it was OK that his pants were off?!!?!?! WHATS WRONG WITH YOU!?!?!?!?!?!?GAH!!!!!!!!I have psychological problems, but THAT is just creepy!

 

[Bu†cH]

The most original comic of the month!

Great humor and a new story. This could be the "Pokechow" of the spring.

 

[~Austin~]

The most original comic of the month!

Great humor and a new story. This could be the "Pokechow" of the spring.

Right on ya! This comic rocks! I just love it! Its so funny! Hmmm... since Pokechow hasnt had a new comic in weeks.... well just what Beautiful Butch said.... its the POkechow of the spring!!!!

Great Job!

 

[blueguy]

Right on ya! This comic rocks! I just love it! Its so funny! Hmmm... since Pokechow hasnt had a new comic in weeks.... well just what Beautiful Butch said.... its the POkechow of the spring!!!!

Great Job!

PokéChow hasn't had a new comic in 1 week. An author needs a break occasionally. -_-

I don't like that my comic has been compared to this, as I find it to be of poor quality; it's not funny, and it's quite messy. It looks like certain things have potential, such as your strange love triangle, but you haven't really used them right just yet.

 

[XxGreivousxX]

the plot widens in the middle rather than the beggining

 

[Sahaqiel]

eh, i didnt really laugh that much during this comic besides the time i fell off my chair while reading this and the Oorelocks at the same time. Now, i had issues with semi-constructive critisism when i started out with a comic that was unique, but was only moderatly funny. Everytime i threw a sensible insult back to the guy who was not even being polite when trying to give my comic a crit, I grew angrier and angrier when he threw something back not even relating to the things i said. I hope you do not think i am like that when i say this comic isnt very funny, im sorry to say. This comic is unique but needs some humor that doesnt involve pantless elderly men, and speaking pokemon with self esteem issues. However i have to cut this short. Good night everyone,
Sahaqiel
P.S I still have absolutely NO IDEA WHAT IS WITH THE MAKEUP, and the FACT THAT NOTHING HAPPENED BETWEEN THE TIME PERIOD OF GOING ON THE SHIP AND THE GIRL SLAPPING THAT GUY IN THE FACE. HOW CAN SOMEONE BE ANGRY FOR SOMETHING THAT NEVER HAPPENED.