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Pokemon: Raichu's need.

GreenHero

Master Of The Clouds
Well, Here's a comic Called "Pokemon: Raichu's need."

Comic 1 is the prologue of the series.
http://i29.*******.com/312i6fk.jpg

Comic 2 is where the villain Raichu comes in.
http://i27.*******.com/35ldvgz.jpg

Comic 3 is where Raichu destroys the lab
http://i32.*******.com/icv03p.jpg

Comic 4 is where we find our heroes in an argument between Hotdogs and bad things.
http://i25.*******.com/23rl845.jpg

http://i26.*******.com/2lar4zm.jpg

http://i46.*******.com/apaeir.jpg

The Spriter's Resource for the Sprites

More comics might be posted soon.

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poke64

I Gotz Yo Broom!
I dont get it
 

poke64

I Gotz Yo Broom!
Sweet Comic!I like HotDogs!Now I get it
 

GreenHero

Master Of The Clouds
It will be posted right about..... now.

I added 6 captions and made the text smaller.
 

shaymin522

Active Member
this is interesting but arn't you goin to add credit where you got the sprites
 

Sparkleplex

<-My current Cosplay
These are very confusing. Its hard to tell what order to read it in, and I believe you aren't saving as PNG because the sprites are fuzzy. Resize the text and your speech bubbles because there is alot of empty space. Also, you might want to cut out some of the not needed scenerey. Also, I sense no plot development... That is all for now.
 

GreenHero

Master Of The Clouds
These are very confusing. Its hard to tell what order to read it in, and I believe you aren't saving as PNG because the sprites are fuzzy. Resize the text and your speech bubbles because there is alot of empty space. Also, you might want to cut out some of the not needed scenerey. Also, I sense no plot development... That is all for now.

I did Comic 5 the way you want it. HAPPY???
 
I did Comic 5 the way you want it. HAPPY???

I agree.
The speech bubbles are very big, the words should be size 24 in paint if you don't want it to look too sloppy.
Also, I really don't see any plot line.

And you don't have to be rude.
It's only constructive criticism.
 
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