Pokemon Rainbow

[Naterio]

Here is some character info for my upcoming story that I'm doing:

Pokemon Rainbow - The Alternate Universe, Pokemorphs Roam The World

Chars:

#1
Name: Nathan (Me)
What: Pokemon Trainer/Ranger
Race: Pokemorph
Gender: When human - Male, When Morph - Genderless, Male, Female, Male/Female
Age: When human - 20, When Morph - 3 stages - ageless, unknown, depends
Pokeforms: Nathan + Mew/Mewtwo = Nateo, Nathan + Celebi = Natebi, Nathan + Ho - oh = Nate-oh, Nathan + Lugia = Nagia, Nathan + Suicune = Naycune, Nathan + Entei = Natei, Nathan + Raikou = Naykou, Nathan + Lucario/Rukario = Nacario/Naterio

#2
Name: MewFii
What: Lover to Nathan
Race: Mew-ish/Mewtwo-ish
Gender: Female
Age: Over 20 human years
Caught how?: Master Ball, when I was a trainer

#3
Name: Celebri
What: Time Watcher - If Nathan makes a mistake while time traveling, Celebri will appear and help Nathan out
Race: Celebi
Gender: Unknown
Age: Unknown
Availability: Make a mistake in time travel then it will apperar
Caught how?: High Lev Master Top, when I'm a ranger

#4
Name: Uh - oh
What: Sky Watcher - If Nathan needs help with flying Uh- oh will appear and help Nathan out
Race: Ho - oh
Gender: Unknown (More female)
Age: Unknown (Really old)
Availability: Blast a Rainbow wing with a light attack
Caught how?: High Lev Master Top, when I'm a ranger

#5
Name: Lutea
What: Legendary Bird Watcher- If Nathan needs help from the legendary birds Lutea will appear and help Nathan out by calling the birds out of hiding
Race: Lugia
Gender: Unknown (More Male)
Age: Unknown (Really old)
Availability: Blast a Silver wing with a light attack
Caught how?: High Lev Master Top, when I'm a ranger

#6
Name: Suicone
What: Power Puifyer - If Nathan see some dirty water, he uses the power cone Suicone bestowed upon Nathan to puify water
Race: Suicune-morph
Gender: Unknown (But it can have sex both ways if it wanted)

#7
Name: Entey
What: Power Cleaner - If Nathan sees huge obstacles in his way he uses the power stone Entey bestowed upon Nathan to get past things in the way
Race: Entei-morph
Gender: Unknown (But it can have sex both ways if it wanted)

#8
Name: Ryuku
What: Electric Ball Blast- Nathan uses the Elecball a Ryuku bestowed upon Nathan to intensify Nathan's Electric skills
Race: Raikou-morph
Gender: Unknown (But it can have sex both ways if it wanted)

#9
Name: Naoxys
What: Nathan + Deoxys
Race: Pure Transformed Morphed Deoxys
Gender: Normal mode - Male/Female, aggressive mode - Male, Defence Mode - genderless, Speed mode - Female
How to get: Catch with DittoBall
How to use: Put the ball in mini mode, then swallow it whole
How to stop use: "Will" it out (No bathroom needed) or get hurt alot

#10

Name: Hoorachi
The rest is the same as original pokemon except this one stays out for longer time and is friends with Nathan

#11 + #12 + #13

Names: Rayquiza, Groudune, Kiogre
What: Wether Affecting Pokemon

#14 + #15

Names: Lastito, Lastita
What: Flight (Lastito) and Visual (Lastita) control Pokemon

#16

Name: Nucario/Runekario
What: Wave-Guiding Pokémon
Race: Lucario/Rukario
Relation to Nathan: Old friends/Master
How I got: True Friendship, no pokeballs, no ranger tops

Now this story has some adult content it...so if it's stuff I can't put on this forum...I can do the chapter that contains the content again, but without putting the adult stuff in there. But all I need someone to do is to tell me that it can't be put on the site, that all I need. Lets say I've red all the rules, but don't understand them, so I might need help... that's all.

Thanks for viewing, more will come

From Naterio! ;rukario;

 

[Naterio]

Here is the first part!

Act 1-1: First Impressions

Scene 1: First date...all wetto!

Characters: Nathan, Ditto

Warning: May contain Sexual Content

My name is Nathan, and this is my story about being a pokemorph, and encountering other pokemon.
My first fateful encounter was with a Mewtwo, not the same one from the anime tv show/movies that Ash Ketchum saw or the one Red has in the manga saga...totally different. This one was a female. But before I talk about MewFii, let me tell you how I got the pokemorph stat.

It all started when I was little, in a place called Santoo, when I got my first pokemon. I was still human then. My first pokemon was a Ditto. From then on I have gone through places (Indigo, Orange Isle, Johto, Hoenn, Kanto, Orre), caught pokemon, made friends, etc. Then one day, I was board with life and I wanted to do something that didn't involve hurting anyone. So I asked my Ditto to try something with me, allow me to morph into stuff. At first, what we were doing to do that did not work well...but...we tried something else...having sex. Now we were a little unsure about how to do it, but we found a way.

We were in a forest area, so we could be private, near a pool of water. I pick my pokeball with Ditto in it and trough it near the water. "POKEBALL GO!" *Poink* *Zap* *VERRRGGEERRLLL* Ditto came out and said "Ditto!" I looked at him and said "Ditto, I want you to stretch yourself out in the water, ok?" "Ditt!" it said. As it went over to to water, I started to take off my clothes and sat by the water naked. As Ditto started to dissolve into the water, which turned pinkish blue, I started to wade myself in. "Woah..." I said as I was getting in "...This feels, warm" When the water was chest deep, I felt a tingling in my body "Oh, yes...yess....yessss...tto...?" Suddenly I dunked my whole head under water and started to try and breath the water into myself. Water was entering trough my mouth, buttock, member, nose, and making me turn pink. -Ohhhhhhhhh-yyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaa- The last image I had was of a Mew flying above the water.

Several years later I was reawakened in the same place...but I was different...I was a Pokemorph. When I was reawakened, I was being pull up by an unseen force to the surface. -What is going on?- I thought *Wait was that the being down there talking?* *Could be...he feels like a psychic being* I heard in my head. -Hello?- *THERE! you see he was talking* *Well then bring him up faster!* Then a sudden jolt of energy boosted me up to the surface. "GASP!" I yelled when I resurfaced. *WAAA!* *TOO FAST DUMMY!* Water splattered everywhere! "COUGH...cough...cough!" I looked up and saw two pokemon, both Mew. But one was female and the other male. *Hey he kinda looks like madame Fii...but a male* The male Mew quiped. *Yaa...sort of...but the colors all off...wait...he keeps changing color...weird!* "Madame who?" I asked *MewFii, our mother* the male Mew said. **Bonk!** *OW! What was that for?* yelled the male Mew *MADAME Fii blockhead* the female Mew said *Shes not married any more.* I asked "Can you take me to her?" I asked *We aren't aliens you know...* the male Mew joked **Bonk!** *OW!OW!OW!* then the female Mew said *Don't mind my brother, but we can take you to mother, she needs help anyway* "Thanks" I said.

Next Chapter: Dinner and Show, with Fiilings(<-Feelings)

Thanks for viewing, more will come

From Naterio! ;rukario;

 

[Dragonfree]

I guess you can post this if you include a clear warning about all sexual content and don't make it too explicit, but for future reference, please always include a prologue or first chapter when you make a thread.

 

[Naterio]

I guess you can post this if you include a clear warning about all sexual content and don't make it too explicit, but for future reference, please always include a prologue or first chapter when you make a thread.

I know I can use the edit button for changing the post, but how do I change the title? Hit the Edit button and do what?

 

[Naterio]

Act 1-2: First Impressions Redux

Scene 2: Blowen Away!

Characters: Nathan, Two Mews

Warning: May contain Sexual Content...or not in this chapter...yet

*Where is he?* Fii ask to the air... *MEWTO! WHERE ARE YOU?!* No answer. *Mewt...* **Sniff** *WHERE DID YOU GO?* Silence... **Sniff, Sniff** *I can't go on...* Still no answer. **Sob** (To reader: Uh oh...shes gonna blow.....3....2...1..) WAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!! The whole area seems to pulse with power....

"So your mother...what kind of problem does she have?" *One you don't want to get caught in...* "What?" *She blows the place shes in to pieces with her psi power...only a few pokemon or anything else for that matter servive the blast.* When the female Mew said that...my Ditto like skin rippled with fear. The male Mew glanced at me and grinned *Skardy Katt! Skardy Katt!! Skardy Katt!!!* **KABOINK** The female Mew bounced off the male Mew's head... *Owwwaah...what was...* But before he could finish, Nathan and the male Mew heard the female Mew yell *MOTHER....REFLECT!!* the other mew went *Uh oh...MIRROR COAT!!!* and me...Nathan just stood there...confused. Then it happened...**HEARTBEAT**...the wind died...**HEARTBEAT**...there was no sounds...**HEARTBEAT**...**HEARTBEAT**...there was something in the distance...**HEARTBEAT**...it was coming this way...**HEARTBEAT** -HOLY...!-**HEARTBEAT!**....I quickly lost all feeling to my body, and turned in to a pile of glup! The psi wall was coming closer...**HEARTBEAT!!** The male Mew yelled *Uh oh! This is gonna hurt* **HEARTBEAT!!!!**.........CRASH!!!!!!! The wave over came us! The two Mews were holding out...but I was losing control....-NO, I'm losing it!- The female Mew heard my thought and quickly acted. She flew behind me and did a reflect move right before I lost it. -3.........2........1......I'm out!- I floped out of control into the female Mew's reflect barrier **SPLAT** *Gotcha!*

.....uhhhh what happened? *Mother had another meltdown* -She what?- I bolted upright and knocked my head into the two Mews.... *MEWW* They cried in unision. -_- (Sweatdrop) "Woops sorry." The two Mews fliped right side up and the male one said *No sweat!* Then the female Mew yelled *Come on we have to get back...she hurt herself again* Then I had an idea... "Guys...and girl...wait here...if you were right in that she is a female Mewtwo, then I know how to remedy her." *How?" They both asked "You'll understand when your older...it not for kids! **Wink**" and with that, I yelled "AGILITY!" and sped off to where the energy wave came from!

The next chapter will have two people, Me and MewFii haveing Sex in it so if you want to skip it and go on to the next chapter...you can...but you will be missing stuff.

 

[Demy]

Naterio you posted twice . It was also a bit confusing.

Demy

 

[Naterio]

Naterio you posted twice . It was also a bit confusing.

Demy

Fixed...(SweatDrops!)

 

[Dragonfree]

I recommend you make your chapters longer. Also, paragraph more. This is kind of borderline.

 

[Naterio]

I recommend you make your chapters longer. Also, paragraph more. This is kind of borderline.

The first two chapters were to be short because when I do the sex scene...it will be longer...way longer!

 

[Yami Ryu]

"Ditto, I want you to stretch yourself out in the water, ok?" "Ditt!" it said. As it went over to to water, I started to take off my clothes and sat by the water naked. As Ditto started to dissolve into the water, which turned pinkish blue, I started to wade myself in. "Woah..." I said as I was getting in "...This feels, warm" When the water was chest deep, I felt a tingling in my body "Oh, yes...yess....yessss...tto...?" Suddenly I dunked my whole head under water and started to try and breath the water into myself. Water was entering trough my mouth, buttock, member, nose, and making me turn pink.

.. ok so water went up the main characters *****? .. you know not only is that stupid, I think that's impossible too. Unless the Ditto water was forcing it's way inside 'you' I take it, as you state in what is a pathetic chapter two, that you and this Mewfii are going to be having sex. Which, if by any signs of how 'well' you're chapters, which are barely that, are, it's going to be a paragraph of something a five year old would write probably. No wait, that's insulting to five year olds.

I suggest you don't even attempt to write sex, as it'll probably make readers of this, if you have any, think two rocks humping, is a better sight.

Not only is this poorly made, poorly thought out/planned, and filled with more crap than a junkyard, it has badly designed characters and shallow plot. All you're making, it seems, is a sex fic >.> and personally this is not the right place if you want worshipers of that. I might have been easy on you when you drew Mewfii, but this man, there is no excuse for this. You should know by the rules how to properly write out a fic.

And tbh, I hope this gets closed and maybe you go try and learn how to make paragraphs, and write, without using 'NEWBIE RP ACTION!' as in using Alterisks and (authors notes in story) and the emoticon aka -_- faces like that.

 

[Naterio]

.. ok so water went up the main characters *****? .. you know not only is that stupid, I think that's impossible too. Unless the Ditto water was forcing it's way inside 'you' I take it, as you state in what is a pathetic chapter two, that you and this Mewfii are going to be having sex. Which, if by any signs of how 'well' you're chapters, which are barely that, are, it's going to be a paragraph of something a five year old would write probably. No wait, that's insulting to five year olds.

I suggest you don't even attempt to write sex, as it'll probably make readers of this, if you have any, think two rocks humping, is a better sight.

Not only is this poorly made, poorly thought out/planned, and filled with more crap than a junkyard, it has badly designed characters and shallow plot. All you're making, it seems, is a sex fic >.> and personally this is not the right place if you want worshipers of that. I might have been easy on you when you drew Mewfii, but this man, there is no excuse for this. You should know by the rules how to properly write out a fic.

And tbh, I hope this gets closed and maybe you go try and learn how to make paragraphs, and write, without using 'NEWBIE RP ACTION!' as in using Alterisks and (authors notes in story) and the emoticon aka -_- faces like that.

K...can you give me a chance to change things around...PLEASE??!