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Pokemon Ranger The Comic

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Typhlosion Dude

De Ja Vu...
Hi! It's me Typhlosion Dude with another comic on games that wouldn't normally have a comic. Before I post any comics let's lay down some ground rules:

The Most Important Rule: You may not make another Pokemon Ranger Comic with the same story, journey, etc.
You may not ask to be in this comic.
You may not ask me for the sprites.
I made the overworld ranger sprites so don't go around asking every spriter for the sprites.

There will be more rules in the future.

I'm not giving up PMD The Comic so don't worry.

Prolouge
Episode 1: The Angry Couple

Credits:
Abraace For Mime Jr. sprites.
The Spriters Resource For all most everything.
Pikachu Master For Sprites.
ShadowflareNova For Sprites.
MegaTravis For Sprites.
new001 For alot of sprites.
combusken1994 For shadow pokemon and possesed pokemon.
pokemonelite200.com For sprites.
Serebii Forums For letting me post my comic here.
Desprate Milotic For giving me the idea for Season Two.
Fred For some Sprites and the Pokecenter.
The Readers and Fans! Thank you guys for posting great things about this comic!
 
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MegaTravis

MegaTravis

Pokemon Trainer
Cool your making another comic. I like it so far and cool sprites of Hinata and Mike.
 
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PokemonBreederChris

UnlimitedBlade Works
Well, this COMIC, seems to be ok, but it looks more of a serious tone right now, sure you tried to implement funny, but funny is hard to implement. Nice try though.

Your spriting has gotten better since you started back in the days of a newbie, but I can see 8-bit theature type fame, if you continue this as a passion.

One thing though is organize your speech bubbles more, and use more elaborate vocabulary. Quality is often what makes a comic good.

Note: 10 is like 8-bit theature material, so you aren't perfect yet.


Your humor: (Even though this is your first one) I would give 3/10, needs improvement.

Your style: (Pannels are a little off, making some disorganization, but it is good, not perfect yet) I say, mmm, 6/10

Sprites: Awesome custom sprites! 9/10

Spriting: A wee bit off, but allot better then MOST comics here (7/10)

Organization/planning: Can't really be judged, but you just made Hinatta go off like that, no reason why, she just left, and that was confusing (5/10)

It if plagerizing if you don't give credit to the Anime as well, the Plusle is the Anime Ranger's, so give credit to the creator of pokemon if you are going to implement things like that.


There are tones more things to rate, but for an intermediate artist, you are almost top of your class

Good job TD, and may you NOT GIVE UP ON THIS COMIC!!!!!!

Or shall the Sprite gods, and Goddesses smite you into Spriteoblivion!
 
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Blaze Dragon

T3h Blazing Ranger!
Try to change the order of the text bubbles, is difficult to know who is talking first. Also, it is "Gyarados" not "Garydos", and "happened" not "happend"
 
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Timmie

<_< LMDS >_>
Its good..

Cant really say much cause it is only 1 epi now lol...
 
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PokemonBreederChris

UnlimitedBlade Works
A simple way to get normal size is by posting it on Serebii itself. Post it on a reply, and then on the first page of the comic, use the link of the post the comic is on, on it.
 
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gundam_remake

Team Leichi Boss Man
i had a little trouble following, and i had t squint to see the images. is it just me or is it really tiny? o.o

i liked how you made little overworlds for the rangers, but i'm not all too in love with their personalities. they seem more like (or you seem more like)in your delinquent stage, rather than, well, role models as most main characters are. or even in fact, they should have a personality that can be related to, not just... what is going on for such.

but other than that, the imagery is cleaner than what i've been seeing, it could be a little bigger though. ^^ try and clean up the character's personalities,a nd it'll be pretty good. you don't need to have conflict or trouble maker charactes to ahve a good storyline going.
 
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