I've read some awsome fics frequently and I wanted to give this another shot. Hopefully this will be way better and not against the rules like my other one was. But with that I hopefully give you my first successful fic on this forum!! Enjoy people!! Please give comments and critics. Do not spam!! Narrator Devan xplained.
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The first Shinou gym match
A enjoyable young man and his fraternal twin brother decide to go back home to Kanto!! The two boys are Ash and Devan Ketchum. They have been traveling with their friends Brock and a beautiful young lady named Hikari!!
A cerulean blue car drove on a bumpy and crooked road. The car shined so bright you'd think that the sun was coming your way!! I was on my way to the first city in the Shinou Region!! It was called Kotobuki town, then from there they'd go to Futaba town!! Narrator Devan said informing you on some info.
" We are finally in Kotobuki Town! Hikari exclaimed. My feet hurt so bad right now! Hikari said with a frown on her face. But I'm alright! Hikari laughed and smiled joyfully.
" Don't worry Hikari. We are here now. Devan said pointing to the Pokemon Center. Race you to the Pokemon center Hikari!! Devan said happily.
" Ready...set...go!! Yelled Hikari while laughing.
" Wow! Look at them run Brock!! Said Ash with a stuned look on his face.
" I didn't know humans could run so fast. Said Brock look stunned as well. Brock then see's Nurse Joy open the door for Devan and Hikari. " Oh!! My heart has struck. I must run now Ash. See you later. Says Brock with his eyes looking like hearts.
" C'mon Pikachu!! We'd better catch up!! Brock! Brock wait up. When Ash got directly behind Brock the dust got into Ash and Pikachu's eyes. " Awwww....man. Talk about a bad day. Says Ash. Ash wipes the dust out of his and Pikachu's eyes. They continue running and finally get into the Pokemon Center.
" Hello Nurse Joy! How are you this fine morning. Asked Brock as calmly as he could.
" Hello Brock from the rock gym in Kanto's Pewter City. I'm fine today! Answered Joy.
" Yes you are Nurse Joy. Yes you are, muttered Brock. " So um...What are you doing today, I mean I know you are staying inside of the Pokemon Center but you know what I mean. Says brock.
" Um...Are you okay Brock? You should get your eyes checked. said Nurse Joy.
" As long as I can see you, then my eyes are quite alright Nurse Joy!! Brock declared quickly.
" Okay, thats enough. Said Hikari pulling Brocks ears.
" Hehehehe. Young people these days!! Hikari, Ash, Brock, and Devan!! Your Pokemon are fully healed. Said Nurse Joy, giving the poke'balls to them.
" Wow! Thanks alot Nurse Joy! You're the best!! They all said, but you heard Brock's voice the most.
" Well, thank you very much. It feels good when young people say how good of a job I've done. She said with a smile. " So, would you like a one dorm with two bunk-beds?
" Yes, please! Said Devan and Hikari.
" So how are you feeling Pochama? Asked Hikari.
" Pocha. Answered Pochama with a huge cool-aid smile.
" Charmander you feel good? Asked Devan with a smile.
" Char, char. Answered Charmander jumping around Pikachu, Pochama, and Brock's Hikozaru!
" Thats awsome Charmander. Said Devan happily. ' So, tommorow we go to the gym right!?Asked Devan. I'll be ready. Devan pointed out.
" Yeah, it's a double battle gym so we'll be able to get all of our badges at the same time!! Said Ash excitedly.
" But we are new here, and don't even have a clue of what hte gymleaders Pokemon will be like. You two will have to be extremly careful. Said Brcok informing Ash and Devan.
" Don't worry Brock. With my Lucario and Ash's Naetoro!! We'll at least have a chance!! Devan said determined.
" Now let's get some sleep you guys. Said Hikari interupting.
The next day Ash and Devan woke up early and already headed to the gym. Hikari was still sleep with her Pochama, and Brock went to the Poke'mart to get some well deserved items and food.
" I suppose you two are here to battle me in my rock gym!? Said a cute lady with a blue jacket, blue jeans, a purple undershirt, and a purple/blue sneakers.
" Yes! Do you accept our offer leader of the Kotobuki Town gym? Devan said quickly bursting out.
" Lets battle then boys. Smash em' Zugaidosu and Tatetopsu!! Said the gym leader choosing her Pokemon!!
" I choose you, Naetoru!! Said Ash. " I choose you, Lucario. Shouted Devan.
" Zugaidosu use headbutt and Tatetopsu use tackle!! Demanded the gym leader.
" Naetoru use your razorleaf attack on both of them!! Yelled Ash.
" Lucario use dark pulse, on Zugaiduso and Tatetopsu!! Devan commanded.
The dark pulse attack made Tatetopsu and Zugaiduso flinch immediatly..Making them wide open for the razorleafs. The razorleaf hit them super-effectivly. They knocked out hard.
" Return. She said returning her Pokemon.You two work together well. Here! She says with a smile, and hands their badges to them..
" Thank you, bye. Look forward to battling you again!! They both yelled walking away.
At the end of that day Devan, Ash, Hikari, and Brock returned to the path to Futaba Town!!
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Hope everyone enjoyed this!! I worked hard on it!! Please give me future advice, and comments. Critics too!!
Note: Devan isn't a like begginning trainer. He and Ash had just gone to Shinou.
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The first Shinou gym match
A enjoyable young man and his fraternal twin brother decide to go back home to Kanto!! The two boys are Ash and Devan Ketchum. They have been traveling with their friends Brock and a beautiful young lady named Hikari!!
A cerulean blue car drove on a bumpy and crooked road. The car shined so bright you'd think that the sun was coming your way!! I was on my way to the first city in the Shinou Region!! It was called Kotobuki town, then from there they'd go to Futaba town!! Narrator Devan said informing you on some info.
" We are finally in Kotobuki Town! Hikari exclaimed. My feet hurt so bad right now! Hikari said with a frown on her face. But I'm alright! Hikari laughed and smiled joyfully.
" Don't worry Hikari. We are here now. Devan said pointing to the Pokemon Center. Race you to the Pokemon center Hikari!! Devan said happily.
" Ready...set...go!! Yelled Hikari while laughing.
" Wow! Look at them run Brock!! Said Ash with a stuned look on his face.
" I didn't know humans could run so fast. Said Brock look stunned as well. Brock then see's Nurse Joy open the door for Devan and Hikari. " Oh!! My heart has struck. I must run now Ash. See you later. Says Brock with his eyes looking like hearts.
" C'mon Pikachu!! We'd better catch up!! Brock! Brock wait up. When Ash got directly behind Brock the dust got into Ash and Pikachu's eyes. " Awwww....man. Talk about a bad day. Says Ash. Ash wipes the dust out of his and Pikachu's eyes. They continue running and finally get into the Pokemon Center.
" Hello Nurse Joy! How are you this fine morning. Asked Brock as calmly as he could.
" Hello Brock from the rock gym in Kanto's Pewter City. I'm fine today! Answered Joy.
" Yes you are Nurse Joy. Yes you are, muttered Brock. " So um...What are you doing today, I mean I know you are staying inside of the Pokemon Center but you know what I mean. Says brock.
" Um...Are you okay Brock? You should get your eyes checked. said Nurse Joy.
" As long as I can see you, then my eyes are quite alright Nurse Joy!! Brock declared quickly.
" Okay, thats enough. Said Hikari pulling Brocks ears.
" Hehehehe. Young people these days!! Hikari, Ash, Brock, and Devan!! Your Pokemon are fully healed. Said Nurse Joy, giving the poke'balls to them.
" Wow! Thanks alot Nurse Joy! You're the best!! They all said, but you heard Brock's voice the most.
" Well, thank you very much. It feels good when young people say how good of a job I've done. She said with a smile. " So, would you like a one dorm with two bunk-beds?
" Yes, please! Said Devan and Hikari.
" So how are you feeling Pochama? Asked Hikari.
" Pocha. Answered Pochama with a huge cool-aid smile.
" Charmander you feel good? Asked Devan with a smile.
" Char, char. Answered Charmander jumping around Pikachu, Pochama, and Brock's Hikozaru!
" Thats awsome Charmander. Said Devan happily. ' So, tommorow we go to the gym right!?Asked Devan. I'll be ready. Devan pointed out.
" Yeah, it's a double battle gym so we'll be able to get all of our badges at the same time!! Said Ash excitedly.
" But we are new here, and don't even have a clue of what hte gymleaders Pokemon will be like. You two will have to be extremly careful. Said Brcok informing Ash and Devan.
" Don't worry Brock. With my Lucario and Ash's Naetoro!! We'll at least have a chance!! Devan said determined.
" Now let's get some sleep you guys. Said Hikari interupting.
The next day Ash and Devan woke up early and already headed to the gym. Hikari was still sleep with her Pochama, and Brock went to the Poke'mart to get some well deserved items and food.
" I suppose you two are here to battle me in my rock gym!? Said a cute lady with a blue jacket, blue jeans, a purple undershirt, and a purple/blue sneakers.
" Yes! Do you accept our offer leader of the Kotobuki Town gym? Devan said quickly bursting out.
" Lets battle then boys. Smash em' Zugaidosu and Tatetopsu!! Said the gym leader choosing her Pokemon!!
" I choose you, Naetoru!! Said Ash. " I choose you, Lucario. Shouted Devan.
" Zugaidosu use headbutt and Tatetopsu use tackle!! Demanded the gym leader.
" Naetoru use your razorleaf attack on both of them!! Yelled Ash.
" Lucario use dark pulse, on Zugaiduso and Tatetopsu!! Devan commanded.
The dark pulse attack made Tatetopsu and Zugaiduso flinch immediatly..Making them wide open for the razorleafs. The razorleaf hit them super-effectivly. They knocked out hard.
" Return. She said returning her Pokemon.You two work together well. Here! She says with a smile, and hands their badges to them..
" Thank you, bye. Look forward to battling you again!! They both yelled walking away.
At the end of that day Devan, Ash, Hikari, and Brock returned to the path to Futaba Town!!
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Hope everyone enjoyed this!! I worked hard on it!! Please give me future advice, and comments. Critics too!!
Note: Devan isn't a like begginning trainer. He and Ash had just gone to Shinou.
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