Pokemon: Revenge Of The Rockets

[Sakim]

Here I go at yet another comic..
This updates everyday or every two days.

Season 1
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/7729/episode10kd.png
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/9780/episode24tk.png

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Credits
Sprites: Beco and Avatar
Maps: The spriters resource and vgmaps.com

Other Comics you should read:
The Pokemon Journey
Living In Seacape

 

[Rikori]

Haha, my little brother is named Lucas. xD

 

[Sakim]

Wow! Well could you post c+c?

 

[Rikori]

c+c? Uuh.. I guess you mean char... My only char is in DotJ. (Dawn of the Journey)
Sovvy... :3

 

[Sakim]

C+C means what you like and dislike or needs work!

 

[Rikori]

Oh.. Is this your first? Then i'll say that this is a VERY good start.. The only thing that can make you faboulous, is the power of speech bubbles. ^^

 

[Sakim]

I know the comic that i'm making on free time will have speech bubbles and this is like my 4th comic.

 

[Beco]

It's a good start, hope to see more soon.
congrats

 

[Furizaa]

You did a great job with the grammar, and sprites, but this comic seems a little too much cliche... Though the title suggests a different plot change, which is good, and I hope to see more of this comic. =)

 

[Sakim]

Thanks for posting next episode will be up tommorrow!

 

[Nick Mckenzie]

Um,......,...
1. Another cliche. I predict that by the year 2010, just about everyone on this forum will have one.
2. I can't see any humor.
3. Some grammatical mistakes.
Not much else, really.

 

[Sakim]

Thanks for replying and episode 2 is up!

 

[Beco]

The plot's ok.
Characters look ok.
Comic looks ok.

 

[Sakim]

Thanks for posting episode 3 might be up today!

 

[EvilPikachu79]

This is pretty good please make more but with speech bubbles.

 

[Blue Latios]

Seriously this is way too cliche
Make your own story line! Make it humorous Nice text boxes and text though

 

[Pokemon dude]

Ok this is what I think.
This is a good comic, but there are things I want to tell you, so you can improve...
Use MD Pokemon, only beacuse they are better than Pokemon Icons.
Next, use speech bubbles, beacuse it look neat, also so we understand better whos speaking, also your grammer needs improving.
other then that, good. 7/10

Edit: Make the plot better, beacuse there was lots of comics which start of in starter towns.