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Pokemon, Revisited

Legend

Well-Known Member
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CHAPTER EIGHT: The Trek North! A Thieving Pokemon!

The water rose, the water fell. Though few had seen it who had not participated in it, an exodus of mass proportions had taken place. And Nature, powerful though it was to resist changes and disturbances, found itself shaken.

What had seemed a million people had walked through the Tokiwa Forest, and Nature, pressed for space, had fought back in its typically passive-aggressive manner. The Pokemon that had been disturbed had left the forest and begun terrorizing the surrounding areas.

Beedle and Caterpie, not to mention most of their brethren, had crawled outside the forest and began building a new nest, to the east, near a tiny village between Tokiwa and Nibi. The once graceful birds that had flown over the forest had opted to fly elsewhere, and now great flocks swooped through the air, east, west, south, north. Any direction. It did not particularly matter to the Pokemon.

Meanwhile, the Pikachu had retreated deeper into the forest, a once common Pokemon now becoming limited to smaller areas. Pikachu, unfortunately, lacked a pack instinct, and fights broke out amongst the habitats. A once common Pokemon quickly became amongst the rarest of the rare.

The trees of the forest lacked any particular urge to migrate, and were instead in ruins. Many had been torn down by the humans who had left Tokiwa. A great gash split one quarter of the forest from the rest, and any who flew over the forest would see it.

Then of course, came the damage from the overuse of Digda's Hole, a strange cavern system which led all the way to Kuchiba City. The Digda had not taken well to the sudden invasion, and had fled the cave, and settled in the village.

Meanwhile, of course, the villagers who had become so terrorized by the insect and mole Pokemon that had left the forest found their own ways of coping. They abandoned their homes, and made an exodus southward.

Their arrival was not welcome in Tokiwa City, which already sat on the brink of ruin. However, the exodus confirmed one theory regarding the missing people; that they had traveled away; and so the arrival also came as a reassurance.

But everything had fallen out of balance, and the few who knew the ways of the forest feared that the real effects of the ecological breakdown had not yet come to pass.

And when they did? Tokiwa City would find itself entirely unprepared to deal with the consequences of a rapidly collapsing environment, not to mention the more pressing concerns of the humans who did not know that the ripples of the exodus had spread, long and far.

So, the water rose, and the water fell, crashing against the shores of a lake that would soon fade away, as the numbers of those that drank its water multiplied.

***

Satoshi woke the next day feeling refreshed, and wondering what on Earth could possibly happen next. The last few days seemed like a blur; catching Fu, surviving the Lucky, and his reunion with Shigeru... Three days... It seemed like far too long a time for so much to happen.

He followed the same routine as he had the previous morning; quickly eating and then showering afterwards. Then, he dashed out the front door and into the wild world. It took him what seemed an eternity to cross the entirety of Tokiwa City, but once he'd left it, he found himself amongst the many-colored blossoms that made the wilderness before the abrupt beginning of the Tokiwa Forest.

Unfortunately, the passage between Tokiwa and Tokiwa Forest was long and arduous, containing rough terrain all the way across the path. Satoshi found that he became exhausted extremely quickly, and so decided to sleep beneath a tree before continuing on...

***

And so he dreamed. The majority of the spurts of temporary consciousness are uninteresting at best; disturbing at worst. Nightmares and constantly recurring (yet quickly forgotten) dreams played out.

And then something changed...

The world became one constant color, gold, shining, and then a woman stepped out of the gold. She was young, perhaps only fifteen years older than Satoshi. Her face, pale, cold smooth, shone out in contrast to her long dark hair. She wore a red uniform of some sort, with boots to match, and she walked towards Satoshi.

One of her hands held three cards, each sporting an intricate design of gold on a blue background. She held them out to Satoshi, wordless. Satoshi took a card, and flipped it over.

The design resembled that of a Tarot card. On it, an intricate picture, a cloaked man, hobbled over and sitting against a decrepit building, holding out a tin. Another man stood nearby, holding out a hand with a golden coin in it. Below were letters of a strange sort. It seemed as if each letter had an eye.

“Beggar.” The sound echoed, and yet... Satoshi could have sworn the speaker had not spoken up, nor done anything but whisper. He stared at the woman, uncertain.

“You are the beggar,” she explained kindly.

He glared at her, and reached for the other two cards, as if to change his fate, but she withdrew them and the cards burst into flames.

“Those are not for you,” she said forcefully. “You will find those who have them, of course, but you must not ask what the cards read. Tell of your own destiny. They will give you theirs, if they so choose.”

A strange fog began to appear around the woman, and she sighed. “The shields are being raised. Be sure you sleep properly three days from now, for I will visit you then. Your companions will soon find that destiny waits for no one.

“Are you ready?” she asked.

“What? Ready for what?”

“Are you ready?”

“Ready for what?”

“You are not ready. You must be ready. Do not assume that you can survive by wits alone. Follow the card. It means everything.”

“Beg for mercy?” Satoshi muttered sarcastically. “Yeah, that'll be a big help.”

The woman sighed again, longer, drawn out, exasperated. “I see faces and images all around you. Remember Mori. He's important.” Her feet were now covered in fog, and the tendrils of air began to glide upward, obscuring the rest of her.

“I know he's important! He stole that weird Monster Ball!”

“What?” the woman struggled against the fog for a moment, as if she wished to step forward but could not. Sighing (again), she said, “Did it have an 'M' on it?”

“Yes! Why?”

“Where is it? Is it safe?”

“It's been destroyed!”

The woman smiled for the first time in the dream. A cold smile, and cruel, but Satoshi thought that her expression might have been based upon the fact that her entire legs were now surrounded in thick fog.

“That is as it should be. If you find another, destroy it too. Destroy them all!” The fog spread upwards quickly now, covering her torso, her chest, her neck. “Goodbye, Satoshi. We both have things to do. Remember, she will-”

Her head disappeared into the fog, and Satoshi found himself alone, the last two words, an unfinished sentence, echoing throughout the dream world.

***

Satoshi awoke with a start. He sat up groggily, and rubbed his eyes. Doing so, he noticed he held something in his hand. A blue card with a gold design on one side, and a picture of a beggar on the other. He started.

He had not had that card when he had gone to sleep. It should have gone away when the dream ended, like all other shadowy parts of his subconscious. Yet there it sat, the beggar seemingly staring at him.

Satoshi felt rather uncomfortable about that.

Luckily, his discomfort over the card did not last long, for as he looked down, he noticed something wriggling in his backpack. His eyes widened and he snatched the bag away from whatever was inside.

It was a purple, rat-like creature, and it sat there, looking up angrily at him. Satoshi realized that it had clutched onto something in its mouth, but he couldn't tell what. It looked an awful lot like food though.

“Hey! Give that back!” he shouted angrily.

The rat Pokemon looked up at him for a moment, then rammed into his leg.

Satoshi had never had an idea of how strong Pokemon were. He'd thought, reasonably, that Pokemon like fighting types would be quite strong, but he'd never imagined that a single Koratta could knock a person over.

It could.

As he fell to the ground, his backpack fell out of his hands and back to where it had been sitting. In front of the Koratta, who eagerly bit onto one of the straps and started carrying it away.

Satoshi jumped up and dashed after it, across even more treacherous and bumpy terrain than before. The Koratta knew its habitat well, and jumped this way and that across the surface. Satoshi could hardly keep up with it.

“Go, Kya!” he shouted, throwing the Monster Ball ahead of the Koratta.

The green caterpillar popped out of the Monster Ball and began spraying its Spit Thread all over the Koratta, which quickly began to slow down. Satoshi darted forward, grabbed the backpack.... and tripped over a rock.

The backpack went flying into the air again, and the Koratta tried to run and pick it up, but it had become entangled in the various threads. It struggled for awhile, and then fell over. Kya, not wanting to waste a good opportunity, gave it a gentle nudge and knocked it over onto a sharp rock.

Satoshi stood up and retrieved his backpack. He took a quick look at the Zukan, which revealed that Shigeru had not yet caught a Koratta, so Satoshi readied a Monster Ball and tossed it forward.

The ball didn't work. Neither did the next one, or the one after that. Satoshi rapidly cycled through the Monster Balls he'd obtained in Mori's shop, even having Kya administer a few more Body Blows to the Koratta. Nothing worked, and soon Satoshi was down to one Monster Ball.

Satoshi shook his head angrily and nodded towards Kya, who administered one final body blow. The Koratta was knocked unconscious.

Satoshi turned to recall Kya, but froze. The Kya had burst into white light, and slowly began to shift in appearance. Suddenly, it was no longer a simple Caterpie, but had become a Transell!


AUTHOR'S NOTES: Hooray! Yay! Etc. Satoshi can't catch a Koratta, but Kya has evolved! Next chapter? THE TOKIWA FOREST! A FERAL POKEMON!

Cya.
 

porygon181

Master of the Riddle
Hahaha! That was so sad that he couldn't catch the Rattata! I certainly hope that he can at least re-use those Monster Balls, because that was such a waste.

This chapter was really good, better than the rest, I think. It really picks up a storyline, and it strays the farthest from the games and such. I like the explanation of the ecosystem being destroyed. It was very interesting, I had never thought of the toll that all those millions of trainers wandering around could take. Clever.

I'm also interested in seeing what his destiny as the Beggar is. That whole sequence with Sabrina was just really cool. I'm guessing that the other two will be Shigeru and a Green character, maybe Yellow, but I don't know. It's all very exciting.

And yay for evolution! XD
 

Legend

Well-Known Member
It wasn't so much the trainers as the 5,000,000 or so people who disappeared from Tokiwa City, but the effects are pretty much the same. I wanted to explain why Pikachu would be so rare when they're so adorable and you'd think that breeders around the world would have little Pikachu factories for all the five-year old girls.

And gasp, you knew it was Natsume! Sadly, she won't be showing up again for a little while. She, Erika, and Katsura (er... Blaine) are easily the most interesting to write (I have fun stuffs planned for each), and my only regret is how far down the line they are.

Thx for the review.
 

Legend

Well-Known Member
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CHAPTER NINE: The Tokiwa Forest! The Feral Pokemon!

A dense fog, more solid than iron itself, had settled over Yamabuki City, the center of Kanto, the crossroads between the other main cities. Many had noticed the fog, many were concerned. But none could penetrate it.

What few people did know, however, was the origin of the mysterious fog. The forces that had so adversely terrorized Mori and the rest of Tokiwa had not limited their scope of operations, but had spread the fires across all of Kanto.

Everything was in a state of flux, and nothing would be left alone, for the fog that had isolated Tokiwa City had arrived after a great journey. The world, which was still mostly unaware of the dangers that had befallen Tokiwa City, turned their eyes instead towards Yamabuki.

Soon though, nothing would be the focus of their attention, for each would look inward at their own problems.

That was, at least, the plan.

***

Three. Three cards, three starters, three trainers. Natsume could see each clearly in her mind's eye, the two boys, the girl. Zenigame, Fushigidane, and Hitokage. Each was important, each had a destiny.

Worse, the majority of their destinies were inescapable, and some parts fatal, although Natsume could not see if their dooms were avoidable.

Natsume, ever calm, looked up at her calendar. The month of May had begun so recently, only three of the squares on the page had been crossed out in her deep purple ink.

She shut her eyes, and wished that the fog would go away. It was difficult, speaking to the outside world beyond it, and so far, she could only find three conduits for her psychic energy.

The three with destinies. Worse, their destinies were highly... irregular. Changeable. Which, for them, meant only good things.

Natsume doubted very much that their destinies could possibly be improved, but she had to hope. It had been why she'd bothered reaching for them in their dreams in the first place. She shut her eyes, and began to meditate. She'd need to be calm and collected for when it came time to meet Dr. Okido's grandson. She expected some powerful things from him. The other boy's card had many interpretations... She hoped that Shigeru's card could help her find the perfect fit.

***

Satoshi sighed, clinging on to the only Monster Ball he had left. How could he have failed to catch such a pathetically weak Pokemon? No one considered Koratta to have any actual uses whatsoever, except perhaps as a training Pokemon. He'd only wanted one for the Zukan.

The more he thought about it, the more it seemed his career as a trainer consisted only of lucky victories and humiliating defeats. What if he wasn't really good at this sort of thing? He thought briefly of turning around, going home, and turning in his Zukan. He had three Pokemon, he could train them for awhile...

But... if he did that... he could only see Shigeru's smug face when he too returned home, with a complete Zukan, and saying to Satoshi, “I told you only one of us was needed to do the job...” Then came the image of Dr. Okido, disappointedly putting away the Zukan, and saying, “Well... there will be other trainers...” His mother... Setsuko might be the only one happy. Hadn't she told him to be back soon? Or would she too think that Satoshi was a failure?

“I have to keep going,” he muttered to himself. “I've caught four species of Pokemon, Shigeru only has two. If I keep catching Pokemon, I'm sure I can stay ahead of him. I just have to train harder.”

Training. Oonishi had given him a variety of training techniques, and Satoshi decided he might as well try a few of them out.

He released his three Pokemon, and took his first good look at them. Fu, Satoshi noticed, seemed lower to the ground than before, and his bulb had definitely begun to expand. The flower might come into bloom at any moment.

Ki had already settled himself onto a tree branch, and had probably only stayed because the Monster Ball controlled him enough to keep him within a certain radius of Satoshi (barring an emergency of some sort).

Meanwhile, Kya had not moved an inch, not even enough to have lost balance and fallen over onto his side. Apparently being a Transell put some serious limitations on mobility. Hopefully he'd be able to attack later or something.

In short, Satoshi thought, he had a better team than most beginners would, but hardly something that stood a chance against Shigeru. Shigeru, after all, lived with the famous Dr. Okido. He probably had all sorts of information.

“Alright,” Satoshi said calmly. “Let's get this started. First, let's focus on building your speed. So... we're a bit into the forest... Run to the edge, and back to me.”

He took out the stopwatch Oonishi had given him the previous day, and clicked the START button. Fu and Ki raced away, whilst Kya continued to sit on the ground. Satoshi sighed. He'd have to get Kya to evolve again, and soon.

Satoshi kept training his Pokemon for another hour. Kya was tossed back and forth by Ki and Fu's vines, then they mock battled against one another, and then Satoshi had the two of them uproot a nearby tree. Both Pokemon seemed stronger afterwards, and Fu's bulb had definitely become inflated. He would definitely evolve soon.

Satoshi gathered up his three Pokemon, and began to walk through the forest. He wanted to get to Nibi City before sunset. Satoshi briefly wondered if it too had suffered; if it too had suffered an evacuation and an attack like Tokiwa City had... Satoshi doubted he'd ever get anywhere.

Tokiwa Forest itself was a dense, overgrown area, with few paths that Satoshi could see. Until, that is, he found himself in an area whose trees had fallen to the ground, torn aside by something big. He looked around uncertainly. The path extended in two directions, moving northward up until where he stood, and then diverting suddenly to the east. Satoshi wasn't entirely sure what to make of all of that.

“What happened here?” he said aloud.

“Something you don't want to know about,” a voice answered.

Satoshi looked around, but as far as he could tell, no one else stood in the clearing. Then a man in a black uniform with a letter 'R' on it stepped into the clearing.

“I'm a member,” he began, “of a group of forest rangers who patrol the area. We believe that it is connected to that disappearance of people in Tokiwa City. We aren't sure how they could have caused this level of devastation, however. You'll notice that there isn't a single plant growing in this area.”

Satoshi looked around, and saw that not a thing grew in the clearing. “Who do you work for?” Satoshi asked after a moment's consideration.

“The forest rangers, as most of us guardsmen in Kanto, are paid for by private donations. Would you like to donate? The more money we get, the more effective we can be.”

Satoshi considered for a moment, but since he had heard of the Nature Guardsmen, and they did save many trainers from situations that got out of control, so it seemed like a reasonable donation, especially since he happened to be a trainer himself.

He reached into his bag, pulled out a wallet, and took out about half of his money, which wasn't much, and handed it to the man in the strange black uniform, who took the bills with a strangely hungry look in his eyes. He pocketed the money quickly, as if afraid that Satoshi would change his mind and take the money back.

The man then nodded to Satoshi, and walked away. “Thanks, kid,” he said. Satoshi could have sworn that once the man had disappeared into the bushes, he'd started running. Perhaps he had an assignment to complete.

Satoshi suddenly heard more noises in the bushes, and swung around. A yellow mouse had emerged from the clearing and was darting across it, heading towards a Beedle. The many-segmented attempted to ready the point on its head for a Poison Needle attack. Pikachu, however, released an Electric Shock, and shocked the Beedle before it could do anything.

The Pikachu then began to eat the berries that the Beedle had been attempting to guard, one after another. When it ran out, it released electric shocks into the nearby trees, knocking more berries down. Satoshi felt little jolts himself each time, even though he was standing well away from the trees.

Remembering his utter failure at an attempt to capture a Koratta, Satoshi decided that this Pikachu would be his saving grace and his major success. After all, these Pokemon didn't live in many other places. Still, he'd make sure Shigeru hadn't caught one himself.

He flipped open the Zukan and looked at the list. It displayed several important pieces of information.

POKEMON LIST
Pokemon Seen: 13
Pokemon Caught: 4
Total Pokemon Caught: 12

Satoshi gasped. Shigeru had caught six more Pokemon since yesterday? That couldn't be right. The list of Pokemon showed that Shigeru had caught a Zenigame, a Koratta, and the entire Beedle line, not mention had evolved his Hitokage into a Lizard.

Shigeru really was the better trainer, it seemed.

But Satoshi decided not to mope, but to prove himself Shigeru's better by actually training. Fu was close to evolution, and had been a wild Pokemon besides. He'd actually started out farther behind.

Satoshi decided that the best Pokemon to use for this battle would be Ki, who could probably use Kick Down to whittle away the Pikachu's health. He tossed the Monster Ball out, and Ki landed near the Pikachu, and quickly struck.

The Pikachu was decidedly unhappy about having its lunch interrupted, and struck back with a cold fury Satoshi had never seen in a Pokemon, not even the evil Lucky that had attacked.

Ki attempted to fight back, but the Pikachu was incredibly quick, and one lightning bolt after another after another rained down on the Mankey. When Ki had fainted, Pikachu turned in Satoshi's direction.

Satoshi wanted to run away as far as he could, but he didn't dare move.

The Pikachu smiled, and approached Satoshi. Once next to him, it began nuzzling his leg. Satoshi hesitantly reached down to pet it, and it made a sort of purring noise in its throat. It then leaned up and began licking his hand.

Satoshi sat down next to it, still letting the mouse lick his hand happily when...

“****!” Satoshi looked down at his hand. Three of his fingers were bleeding, and the Pikachu was licking its lips, intrigued by the new flavor it had discovered. Satoshi stood up and ran away, but the electric mouse followed happily. Or hungrily. Satoshi decided not to find out.

He turned around, recalled his Mankey quickly, and started running again, only to realize that the Pikachu was gaining, when he felt a nip on his ankle. He reached for a different Monster Ball and threw it straight at the Pikachu. Kya popped out and, weighing nearly four kilograms more than the average Pikachu, slowed the wild Pokemon's progress immensely, and caused it no shortage of pain.

Satoshi recalled Kya and threw the Monster Ball at the Pikachu again, and then a third time. This time, the Pikachu was expecting the assault, and fainted its opponent Transell before it hit. Satoshi recalled it, cursing. Now that it was fainted, the Monster Ball would not open until the Transell was healed.

So, he reached for a different Monster Ball altogether, and threw it right at the Pikachu, without clicking the release.

Pikachu, expecting a Pokemon, shocked the Monster Ball, and triggered the release function, popping open the Monster Ball and getting enveloped within it. The creature struggled for a few moments, but failed to get out before the locking mechanism had sealed.

Satoshi didn't waste any time celebrating, however. After retrieving the Monster Ball, he turned his attentions to his bleeding fingers, nursing them carefully. Still, he'd had another success. Perhaps he was getting better...


AUTHOR'S NOTES:

The evil Pikachu has arrived, we get our first encounter with the Rocket Gang (I presume you lot figured out that he scammed Satoshi out of his money? It's not a big spoiler, so I see no reason to hide it), and our first indications that a Zukan owner has the third starter. Assuming that it is not Shigeru but a third individual with a Zenigame, and that this person is the third in Natsume's vision... Well, at least you know it is a girl. Assuming all that's true. Next chapter:

The Rocket Gang! Save the Forest!
 
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Araleon

Chill
Wow, you certainly know how to dish out the chapters don't you? I like how he is more concerned with catching Pokemon then raising them. OK, I have a question that might have a spoiler-ish answer. Will Satoshi be keeping Fu, Kya, Ki, and the Pikachu on his final team? Till next time!

Araleon
 

Legend

Well-Known Member
Fu- YES. Shigeru will keep Hothead in much the same way.

The others- I honestly don't know his team throughout the whole series, so I can't make any promises. I just know about Fu because that's his first, so he'll start becoming more attached.
 

porygon181

Master of the Riddle
Wow! A devil Pikachu! That's horribly exciting. Really scary, too, when you realize that if it wanted to, it could just paralyze you and nibble all your fingers off...

Another great chapter, I think. It depressed me greatly that he did indeed lose all of those pokeballs, but his poor luck really does seem to make him fit the Beggar card. Poor guy.

Not that this has anything to do with anything, but my guess is that Shigeru has the Beedrill and the chick has the Zenigame and Koratta.

So yeah, I'm pretty excited to see the next chapter, see how he deals with Pikachu, and ultimately, see what all of this destiny business is about. You're doing an amazing job in this story. =)
 

Legend

Well-Known Member
Fixed stupidity. Natsume originally called the destinies "inescapable and fatal" and then later on "changeable."

The chapter has now been fixed. Natsume now sees that the majority of the destiny is inescapable, and there is a doom present, but she can't tell if the doom is inescapable as well.
 

flayer75

Mudkipz are awesome.
sup legend! long time no see. anyway time for the review thing... is that right Pippy?

Pippy: Yeah.. sure why not...

Ok! well here is the review of... um...

Pippy: Legend's fanfiction.

the legend of Palkia?

Pippy: No! the serebii. net account lege- just do the review...

well... anyway... here is the review. I like the fog description at the beginning of chapter nine. really good there. and the title also! and... the pikachu has arrived! you are really getting better. I'm reading every chapter.
 

Legend

Well-Known Member
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CHAPTER TEN: The Rocket Gang! Save the Pokemon!

Dr. Okido and his granddaughter bent over the computer displaying the data that the three Zukan trainers had collected. Dr. Okido had considered using his spare Fushigidane to gather data on Pokemon in the immediate area, but in the past four days, thirteen Pokemon species had been collected. At that rate, they'd be done in about a month and a half.

He had had considerable doubts about using three new trainers to collect data on the rumored one hundred and fifty species of Pokemon that were in the Kanto region, but he had realized that they had not peaked yet, and it would difficult to find good trainers amongst the experienced who hadn't already accomplished all that they were likely to.

He had also sent a different prototype, with larger capacities for data storage, to Dr. Odamaki of the Houen region, hoping that between the two regions, the framework for a true Pokemon encyclopedia could be laid.

Nanami sighed. “So, the Pikachu species is omnivorous,” she said, pointing to a detailed photograph the Zukan had provided. “That's new information. We thought they primarily lived on berries.”

Dr. Okido nodded, distracted. “Do you think I should have sent that girl after the two boys?” he asked. “I mean, it seemed like such a good idea at the time, but now I'm beginning to wonder if I didn't make some sort of mistake.”

Nanami rolled her eyes. “No, grandfather,” she said kindly. “I think she's perfectly competent, and besides, that girl can probably keep those two reigned in. If I know Shigeru-chan, he'll probably spend more time challenging Sato-san to the death than actually collecting Pokemon.”

Dr. Okido laughed. “He sounds just like your father, Nanami-chan. I hope he's half as good. And perhaps the battling will help him move on. It's been a year since your father died, but he's just become withdrawn, and is antagonistic to anyone who tries to get close, not to mention insulting to anyone who doesn't know him. I don't think he's used an honorific in six months. Sometimes I forget them.”

Nanami smiled, but the mention of her father had made her falter. She looked back down at the work below her.

“I know Shigeru-chan hasn't come as far as I have, but I don't think that's bad. You say it's been a year, but I think it's ONLY been a year. Mom hasn't exactly been around for us, so Shigeru has found himself short two parents... I miss him too, grandfather. If your reasons for sending Shigeru-chan out into the world were to make him stop grieving, I don't think you did the right thing.”

“No! Of course not! That's not why I sent him at all! I just said... I hope...”

***

Satoshi wrapped his fingers in bandages carefully, almost wishing that he had not encountered the Pikachu, which he had decided to nickname “Chu,” as it followed the naming pattern he had established.

Satoshi now sat against a tree, watching for any wild Pokemon and recovering. He wondered if he should return to Tokiwa and the Pokemon Center there; he had only one fully healed Pokemon. But.... it seemed rather a waste of time. After all, Shigeru could easily be in Nibi City right now, catching wild Pokemon and becoming more powerful.

Satoshi knew he'd have to become more powerful to stand a chance against Shigeru, but he had no idea how to go about it. First off, there came the obvious point that Shigeru's grandfather must have bestowed large amounts of experience upon him. Then, the fact that Shigeru's team already had superiority and that he would only continue to train as time went on.

Then, Satoshi had an idea. There had to be trainers traveling across Kanto, just like him, and some of them would easily be at Satoshi's experience level. If he could find them, he would be able to train much quicker than with merely battling the wild Pokemon he had encountered thus far.

Satoshi realized that they would have stayed on the roads that most trainers went through between towns. Thus far, Satoshi hadn't done a lot of following roads. Between the encounter with the Onisuzume, straying far from the beaten path to battle the Lucky, and chancing upon the clearing, Satoshi had found that even getting a little bit of data for his Zukan was easier accomplished by avoiding the main routes.

He briefly wondered if he should have tried to battle that forest ranger. But that man would have had Pokemon like Nidoking and Dodrio, powerful and fast creatures that a simple Pokemon like Fu would never had stood a chance against.

Still, there had to be trainers in the forest, and Satoshi knew he'd have to find one of them. And seeing as the only way to do that was to get onto a path and follow it, Satoshi stood up and began to look for a path, rationalizing that heading in a straight line north would at least get him to Nibi City, even if he couldn't find a path.

Luckily, there turned out to be a path only a few meters away, and Satoshi quickly began following it, looking for bug catchers and other types who would stay on the Tokiwa Forest paths.

Again, Satoshi proved to be remarkably lucky, for he found just such a character a few more meters down the road. The trainer was decked in loose clothing, wearing a straw hat, and carrying a large butterfly net.

“Hey!” The trainer cried happily. “Welcome to Tokiwa Forest, trainer. I suppose you'll be wanting a battle with me? But I should warn you, my bug Pokemon are fierce and you'll regret battling them.”

Satoshi laughed. Bug Pokemon were the laughingstocks of any real Pokemon competition, perhaps only beaten by Poison, who had no actual uses in battle. There was the minor risk that the trainer had a Strike, a powerful Pokemon armed with two scythes as arms, or perhaps a Kairos, with two pincers that would tear Pokemon apart, but... Besides that, there wasn't much that the insect world had to offer.

Still, Satoshi readied Fu's Monster Ball, waiting only for the other trainer to show Satoshi what he had to offer. The other trainer seemed just as reluctant, perhaps offended by Satoshi's laughter.

The two trainers stood facing each other another moment, each waiting for the other to strike, but they waited a few moments to long. Out of the forest jumped two men with guns, holding them up to the two battlers.

“Give us your Pokemon!” the first man shouted angrily.

“Or we'll shoot you!” the other man added unnecessarily.

The two trainers stared at their assailants, open mouthed.

“Hurry it up!” shouted the first man. “Come on! Just give us your Pokemon!”

Satoshi couldn't think of anything to do, so he sadly grabbed his four Monster Balls and handed them over angrily. 'How can this be happening?' he wondered. 'I just started and now I'm being robbed?'

Once the Monster Balls had been grabbed, the two men dashed back into the forest, leaving Satoshi and the bug catcher staring.

Then Satoshi realized that the men wore black uniforms with a red letter 'R' on them. That had been the uniform the ranger wore. “Great,” Satoshi muttered. “I gave my money and my Pokemon to those thieves. What's wrong with people?”

When there wasn't an answer, Satoshi looked up to discover that the bug catcher had disappeared. “Hey!” Satoshi shouted. “Where'd you go?”

He darted off into the trees, ignoring the obvious dangers of traveling without a Pokemon. “Come back!” Satoshi yelled angrily. “We've gotta get those Pokemon back!”

No answer. Nothing but the imposing shadows cast by trees, and the calls of wild Pokemon that Satoshi doubted he wanted to see even with Fu and the rest of his partners.

Satoshi knew he'd have to find the criminals and find a way to sneak his Pokemon back into his own possession, but the task required an insane amount of bravery and luck.

He had to start somewhere, though, so he stood still, shut his eyes, and listened. Listened for humans, Pokemon in states of agitation, anything. Once he heard something, he'd go that way.

***

A bike rode through the forest, sticking to the roads that Satoshi had ignored. Flying behind it was a Spear, the large wasp-like Pokemon buzzing contentedly, enjoying the exercise the trainer gave it. In the basket of the bike sat a Zenigame, wearing an overly large white hat.

The girl riding the bike stopped and leaned against a tree for a moment, panting for breath. “I'm probably way behind Satoshi-kun and Shigeru-kun...” she sighed.

“Zeh?”

The girl looked down at her hatted partner. “You'll like them, Keruma,” she promised. “Well, Satoshi-kun, I think. Shigeru-kun's probably way too over the top for you. He's a bit of a rough trainer.”

“Zeh?” the turtle repeated.

“Well,” the girl giggled. “You'll see what I mean. But they've both got a bunch of Pokemon for you to play with.” She reached into the bag she wore over her shoulder and pulled out the Zukan. “A Fushigidane, a Lizard, a Transell, a Poppo, a Koratta, a Pikachu and even a Mankey!”

The blue turtle grinned happily, and then noticed a passing Butterfree. It turned to its trainer. “Gah mee!” it cried.

“No,” the girl said uncertainly. “Someone already has a Transell... I should let them just evolve their Pokemon. We're looking for Pokemon in evolution trees nobody has yet.”

Keruma didn't seem to get this, and charged after the Butterfree anyways. The Spear, incidentally named Kureodora that the girl owned darted after it and gave the turtle a whack.

The girl laughed. “All right, we have to get to Nibi City before the boys leave, so come on. Into the Monster Balls.”

The girl recalled her partners, straightened her red skirt, and jumped back onto her bike, unaware that she had already passed one of the two boys she was so desperately chasing.

***

Satoshi looked at the two trainers he had managed to find after scouring the forest for what felt like ages. They had stashed the guns away into a wooden box, and now stood over some materials Satoshi couldn't see. Satoshi also noted that the Monster Balls were on the other side of them.

The men stood with their backs to him, muttering calmly. Satoshi listened intently, hoping he'd figure out what these two men had in mind with the Pokemon, or with whatever they were standing over, but he couldn't hear a word.

Satoshi gave up listening and quickly crept up to the box where they'd stashed the guns. Satoshi reflected for a moment of how stupid it was to put your weapons into a box when you could be snuck up on, but he realized it was his only chance.

The box opened easily, revealing both guns. Satoshi picked them up, and decided to turn the tables. “Hey, you!” he shouted.

The uniformed men swung around, and stared at Satoshi, kneeling on the ground, pointing both guns at them.

“Now,” Satoshi demanded, “give me back my Pokemon!”

The uniformed men laughed. “Those are empty!” one said with a grin.

“See for yourself!” the other man added.

Satoshi stared, and, deciding to aim at a tree, just in case, pulled one of the triggers. Nothing. He pulled the other. Nothing again.

“Um...” Satoshi froze. “Wait... you... YOU ROBBED ME WITH EMPTY GUNS?”

The men exchanged glances happily. “Yep,” once said. “Idiot. Go, Betobeta!”

Satoshi gasped as a pile of sludge landed on the ground. The 'mouth' of the Pokemon smiled maliciously, and it began creeping up to Satoshi, both of its arms outstretched. The stench was overwhelming, and Satoshi saw that the area it crept through withered instantly.

Satoshi took a deep breath, and charged right at the sludge Pokemon. Just out of arm's reach, he jumped over the sludge Pokemon and pushed the two men aside as he landed. He fell into the pile of Monster Balls and found his four Pokemon quickly. Then it occurred to Satoshi that only Fu was in any condition to fight, and its elemental types would not be the sort of thing to win a battle against a Betobeta.

So, he'd have to get lucky, and pull off a distraction or two. He grabbed Kya's Monster Ball and tossed it at the two men. The fainted Pokemon popped out and rammed into the two men, knocking them back in their surprise. The Betobeta sped towards it, only to discover it couldn't fight back.

He quickly recalled Kya and tossed out Chu, who still retained consciousness. “Electric Shock!” Satoshi commanded. The electric strike missed the Betobeta, but landed too near the thieves for their comfort.

“Dust Shot!” one of them cried.

The Betobeta retaliated with a move Satoshi had never seen before. Huge amounts of gunk and dust were raised up and sent straight towards Chu, who only barely managed to get out of the way in time.

“What the-!?” Satoshi cried before getting knocked off his feet and colliding with a tree.

“That Betobeta was imported straight from Shino, kid! It knows a few tricks that most other Pokemon don't!”

Satoshi glared. “Chu, try again!” he cried. Again the Pokemon missed, but the lightning hit a tree, which burst into flames.

“****!” one of the thieves cried, as the flames began to spread. He called out a Crab, which began spreading out bubbles, quickly dousing the flames.

Satoshi recalled Chu, grabbed the remaining Monster Balls, and darted northwards, taking the opportunity whilst the thieves were distracted.

***

Much, much later, Satoshi collapsed against the counter at a police station. “I'd like to report a LOT of Pokemon theft. I recovered the Pokemon though, so you should try to distribute these back to their trainers.”

The policeman looked down at the eleven-year old boy standing in front of him. “Slow down, kid. Tell me the whole story.”

And so Satoshi did.


AUTHOR'S NOTES: Yes, the Rocket Gang put out the fire. Satoshi couldn't have helped, and assisting would have been bad for him anyways. Let that be a warning to people who play with lightning in forests.

The girl's Pokemon are named after the second avatar of Vishnu, also a turtle, and a Thriae maiden (one of the many Greek nymphs). They are slightly altered to fit the Japanese language, however. The proper names are “Kurma,” and “Kleodora.” The mythological names are the patten she follows, much like Satoshi's syllable pattern. I carefully avoided her name, but it should be getting obvious.

Satoshi, Shigeru, and the girl will reunite (yes REunite, Satoshi knows her) in “The Third Zukan! Zenigame Battle!”
 

porygon181

Master of the Riddle
I love this story so much. Every time I read it, it has some new little tidbit that makes the story so much more exciting.

I liked the whole bit about Shigeru's padre being dead and the ethics behind Okido sending him off on the mission. It was nice to see why Shigeru is cranky.

I feel so bad for Satoshi! He's so clever, just not!! I mean, he was going to try and get in battle when none of his pokemon were even healthy? He cracks me up. But his "defeat" of the Rockets was really brilliant. His plan was good, and even when it didn't work as he had hoped, it still worked out for him.

I liked the introduction of the girl. She seems really cool. ^^

Keep it up!! Woohoo!
 

Legend

Well-Known Member
Well, Fu was healthy (hasn't been used since the previous day), which is why he made the challenge. And yes, Satoshi IS clever, but... not. Unlucky to the bitter end as well. I don't think it'll spoil anything if I say he's got to improve quite a bit.

And yes, the girl character is pretty cool. But that's all I'm saying.
 

Araleon

Chill
Oooh! Satoshi was brave for once. Wow. And, just who is this mystery girl? Well, that's all for now!

Araleon
 
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