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Pokemon: Rise of Team Thunder.

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medamax

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Hey everyone! I'm Medamax and I am the author and storyboard expert for this comic called 'Pokemon: Rise of Team Thunder'. I'm new to this so this is my 1st online comic i have every done. I hope you enjoy. (I'll try to update once a week eles of scool and work gets in the way) I also have to point out i'm not the best when it comes to grammer and spelling. Finally i am glad to recieve prase, critisism and any other comments you have.

Note: As you can see they are a bit blurry, but i'll fix them once i find a good hosting site.

Chapter one: New Pokemon, New Contests!
1. Once upon a time. - Here we get to meet our characters!
2. Hunger trouble. - The story begins!
3. Does he ever shut up? - Heros gets their Poke Eggs
4. PLEASE HATCH! - Will the eggs hatch?
5. Welcome to East Oldale Pokemon Contest Hall! - AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
6. Let the contest begin! - Ken Vs. Haley
7. E-Bay Wonders. - Van Vs. Hal
8. Mr. Know-it-all. - Cane Vs. Jade
9. K.O. - Ken Vs. Gold
10. Friend Vs. Friend! - Van Vs. Cane

PS: As i create more comics, i shall be updating my attack effects on later episodes. Also i know you want speech bubbles, but as you can see there is a fair bit of text and not so much image so bare with me there won't be any speech bubbles until chapter 2.

Attention all readers: Plz suggest some good hosting sites that can handle 2000kb and over and doesn't resize or have a expiring date. Thank you.
 
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Magical Trevor

Guest
Well first comic so I dunno if I can crit right now. Also it's not a comic that is gonna get away without speech bubbles. Try and add speech buubles
 
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Neopolis

Battle Pyramid Champion
Yes, speech bubbles OWN text-under-panel. A lot.
Also, avoid using default trainer sprites.
 
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medamax

Guest
rightio. can u plz give me a good image hosting site, because i have comics that have 9 frames, but they are to big for some image sites like imageshack. Also, just to warn you all, i have already done 18 episodes with no speach bubble, and there is alot of text for some characters to say.

The part with the overworld hat thing, in pkmn ruby/sapphire/emerald, pkmn ranges (Van's hat) overworlds have greenhats and in battle they have red hats. i was trying to keep that part the same.

Since this takes place in Hoenn in a couple yrs after the game, the people are still in their towns and i was giving them their original game looks.

Thx for the critsizing, but i can only focus on speech bubbles after i finish this chapter, and get a good image site.

-Medamax

Episode 2 - like i said, i need a better image hosting site because as you can see, it goes blurry.
 
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MaskedManAbsolkid

Well-Known Member
it's confusing to tell some of the characters apart. that's why Speech Bubbles work well.
 
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medamax

Guest
I have pictures of the characters next to the text.

I'll have to fix the link to the 2nd comic since i'm on a slow scool cpu
 
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medamax

Guest
I know you all want speech bubbles! i will have thiem in the next chapter since i already started this chapter without them. Plus it looks more retarded with speech bubbles because you can't see the picture since there is so much text. they are png.
 
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Matt`

r u srs?
Plus it looks more retarded with speech bubbles because you can't see the picture since there is so much text
Click to expand...
Or you could make the comic a little bigger so you could fit it.
If it is really .png, how come it's blurry? All I see when I click is .bmp or .jpg
 
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Matt`

r u srs?
Do you use Paint?
If you do it will automatically save as .bmp on your computer.
Then all you have to do is upload it to Imageshack (a better image hoster) and it will be changed into .png format. Then post the url here.
 
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medamax

Guest
how will that work though? the image is to big in the 1st place, it won't upload.

It says: largest file can be only 1024, where mine is 1205.
 
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