Pokemon: Sam's Journey

[SamsGFX]

Crappy title, I know xD
Well, it's more or less an adventure about someone who doesn't want to go on an adventure. He was forced to by his mother, who beats him often.
Lot's of you will post saying 'Cliche' or some crap like that, I'd rather you didn't flame, but actually post some C+C, so I can make it better.
Thank you xD
http://www.drunkduck.com/Pokemon_Sams_Journey/

 

[Mastercougar]

Hmm. There's not much to say so far. There are some errors in spelling and grammar, but not enough to detract seriously from the comic.

Now about the plot. I know you don't want us leaping on you and calling it cliche. The best way one would make a journey comic non-cliche would be to provide a new spin on things. Give readers a new perspective on the standard journey. The key to such a thing could very well be the fact that Sam was forced into a journey. I bet that could lead to somewhere very interesting if you tried.

~MC

 

[Blaze Dragon]

That was funny! But can you make the 1st and 2nd comic as big as the 3rd?

 

[Divine_Light]

In the 5th frame it says "mattersis" but apart from grammar its good, Please make it totaly different from the other "going to the professors" comics

 

[SamsGFX]

I'm trying my best to make it unique, if anyone has any suggestions, PM me or post here, I'll credit you in I use it ^_^

 

[Iron Lugia]

Yeah, well, it's good so far. Just don't make it another one of those cliche Pokemon comics like most people have.