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Pokemon Seaforma Adventures

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PK

SO BEAUTIFUL!!
Rather you say don't be mean or not. People will still not sympathize you.... TRUST ME... Ok as I was sayin... The text bubbles... I find them kinda odd. And not all of the sprites are really re-edited. (Then again what am I to say this). Over in my opinion not to bad.
 
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Chaotic Houndoom

Dark Trainer
Its good so far. ^^
 
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PK

SO BEAUTIFUL!!
Please don't display usless mesages. Anyway is this comic based on your fourms. Just askin.
 
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Silver Salamence

Guest
Nice but...

everything happended too fast, you didn't introduce her pokemon, the other pokemon, and the speech bubbles are kinda messed up.
 
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Kitsune

This Place is Death.
One tip, try not to use smileys (EX: :(, ^_^) In the speech bubbles.also, the very first panel, "u". Don;t use IM shorthand in comics. Anyways, it's good so far. Just fix up the speech bubbles. ^_^
 
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Blaze Dragon

T3h Blazing Ranger!
Some things:
1)Text Bubbles: bad, try to make them better
2)Too fast, I don´t understanded almost nothing
 
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~Kitty~

Aloha wau ia 'oe<3
poke_fan_12 said:
Hi then, what happened to ages?, nice brendan and may sprites :D
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I dont know one day I wanted to get online but it was offline does anyone have any idea where Koneko is?
 
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pokeinuyasha

:D!
Well, the speech Bubbles are kinda strange, and they are messed up. Also, it's happening to quick! Don't use abreviations or smilies. But nice sprites ^^ Just improve it a little and you will get up there!
 
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