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Pokemon ( season 4)

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ALTOCHARIZARD55

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Ash beat the hoenn leauge and is on a ship with pikachu. They find a strange rock that is very shiny. They then meet up with may, max, and brock.
Ash shows them the rock and they wonder what it is. Suddenly, a gold gyrados appears. everyone gasps at the sight. A yellow bolt of lightning strikes gyrados. the sky turns black and a storm starts blowing. Somehow, the ship makes it to land. Ash finds that the stone is glowing. this makes him wonder more as he heads out to the pokemon with his friends. Once there, he recives a map to the nearest town, Crystal town. Then he shows the stone to nurse joy. She says to bring it to the professor. They then set out for Crystal town.
 
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~*Ratiosu*~

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It's...short...and not descriptive.

Try to imagine your reader is a clueless person who is completely new to Pokemon. You want to give them description and stuffers.

And length. That sucked. It has to be a page on MS Word.

And plot. Definitely sucked. So a gold Gyarados came?

Not to mention there's already a season 4, whereas you are referring to the continents...

*reports*
 
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~*Ratiosu*~

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Microsoft Word is a program everyone has on their computer by pressing Start, then Programs, and it's there. You have to type your story there and the mispelled words will be underlined in red and the grammar mistakes will be underlined in green. I advise you read the rules...

I can help you with your fanfiction if you want...just PM me.
 
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