Pokemon Serith Region

[fallinroxas]

ok this is my sprite comic well here you go

Bios:

Name: Dart Kami
Bio: His dad died three years ago 2004 (the comic takes place in the year 2007)
Pokemon: None as of now

Intro:http://www.maj.com/gallery/kh2forlife/pokestuff/into.png

 

[Pokefan64]

Uh ... I like it

, but you could improve it a bit on these:

- The text, I think it would be easier to read if it wasn't in italics.
- When there are more characters, you might want to make a pointer to the person who is speaking.
- You could kinda cut down on the part of the frame that you don't need - personally I don't care about that, but I know other comic raters do.

The overworld sprite isn't as bad as some (at least you've mixed two and recoloured it) but I think a few other people may comment on that.

~Pokefan64;245;

 

[Requesto]

the actual sprites are good, but there's a couple of things you miight want to re think about.

1. You shouldn't ba having the font in italics
2. Your charcter talks about a team and at the end it says 'ILL KILL HIM!' to me that doesnt make sense because a team and i'll kill him????

but i like

1. The actual over world sprite
2. where abouts he is (although we dont know, but the actual area sprites are nice. )

So far i'd say.... 7/10 good work, i'll be watching this comic for a while.

Requesto

 

[-Yoshi-]

This is a well done comic, except for the text. I recommend you to eliminate the italics, that makes it almost unreadable. Also, you could put an specific colour of text to each character to avoid any confusions in the future. I like the overworlds and the place he is, comics in new places are very cool. And a question: If they are in a new region, does that include new pokemon?

 

[fallinroxas]

ok

@Requesto: I'll kill him he is refering to someone in the furte of this comic and i cant tell you lol.


@-yoshi-: there will be no new pokemon just fusions of the old ones