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Pokemon Shadow: Life Mixes With Death

Boonge

Cascade Trainer
Okay heres a new trainer fiction iv'e created im still a rather new author still learning. K here we go please rate and review.


Pokemon Shadow: Life Mixes With Death​




“Dad we have captured the three peace guardians.”

“Excellent Silver I am on my way, Giovanni over and out.”

There was a evil 16 year old boy in a open valley of green tall grass he was dressed in black from head to toe he had a black cap which sat comfortably on his fuchsia coloured hair, his black top had a big red ‘R’ symbol on it he was holding a black walkie talkie in his right hand. The boy looked up at the moon his brown eyes glistened as he stared upon the bright white moonlight.

The boys name was Silver.

He was a member of a cruel organization that treated Pokemon very harshly by hurting them; casting cruel experiments on them yes this was the evil organization known as Team Rocket which was led by honorable Giovanni.

Soon other members of Team Rocket arrived where Silver was by helicopters and black cars and other kinds of transportation.

The rockets were all in a circle and Silver was in the middle.

The lower class members all mumbled as they waited for Giovanni’s son Silver to make his long awaited comment.

“Fellow members we have captured the three Peace Guardians successfully, and I’d like to thank you for your support this is only the start of our beautiful evil mission soon hell will break loose in this peaceful world.” Silver smiled triumphantly.

“Well I got a big bruise.” Muttered one of the members.

“One thing Team Rocket doesn’t tolerate is complaining, GO TYRANITAR!”

A big green monster like creature appeared with spikes on its back a rather short tail and two little horns that stood firmly on the big green Pokemon’s head.

“Ty-Ty-Tar” The Tyranitar yelled as it stomped the ground with its strong feet making the ground shake.

“Tyranitar Hyper Beam!”

The Tyranitar launched a beam of energy towards the rocket that had previously complained the rocket received full blast of the energy and went flying out of site into the pitch black sky.

“Good job Tyranitar return.”

Silver held out his red and white Pokeball and Tyranitar gushed into the Pokeball in red light.

“Anyway the Three Peace Guardians are inside that machine.”

Silver pointed to the oval shaped machine which held the three special Pokemon.

The Team rocket members gathered around it.

There was a white little Pokemon with floppy ears and all other dangly things hanging of its body, this was Jirachi peace guardian of the sky. It was flying around in the machine like a mad bull trying to get out.

There was a green little Pokemon with two little white wing and it’s head was rather pointy at the top it had two small green arms and legs it was trying to teleport out of the machine but it was no use.

And last but not least was a pink small cat-like Pokemon it had a long skinny tail, two small ears on its head and two small arms and legs it was just sitting in the middle calmly with its eyes closed. It was the main Peace Guardian

Suddenly all the members heard a noise from the sky they all looked up and there was a helicopter flying quickly towards them the members all rushed away quickly making space for the chopper to make a perfect landing.

The chopper landed right in front of the machine which held the three Pokemon.

A man stepped out he wore a black suit which matched with his black tie, he wore black casual pants and brown shoes.

He had brown hair which was combed over and brown tired eyes.

This was the leader of Team Rocket Giovanni.

He walked out of the helicopter and approached the machine.

“Excellent well done.” Giovanni had a big smile on his face an evil smile to be precise.

“Thanks.” Replied Silver who was also satisfied.

“Now to kill these Peace Guardians and make hell of this world.”

Giovanni pressed a red button the machine turned bright red as energy was hitting the three peace guardians.

Celebi and Jirachi were screeching at the top of their lungs.

In a few seconds Celebi and Jirachi fell to the floor like feathers there eyes closed there bodies turning a light brown and there skin all wrinkly suddenly the two bodies had disappeared they were dead.

“Two down one to go, it’s all over.” Giovanni said enthusiastically.

<I don’t think so.> A voice that sounded like it had sucked helium for its whole life was heard it was Mew speaking.

“Well, well Mew you truly are extraordinary how much surprises have you got left?” Giovanni laughed to himself.

<Many!!!>

Mew’s body started to glow bright white then with all it’s might it exploded.

The members of team rocket went flying into the air some buried into the ground and Giovanni and Silver took full blow the two bodies went flying into the open grass.

The whole valley was destroyed fire was starting to flow and all the grass was nearly all gone all there were was holes of mud.

In the air little cells flew around then suddenly they all gathered together and formed and regenerated to Mew.

Mew created two small stars in its little palm and released them into the sky.

<Game Over.> Mew smiled then it quickly teleported out of the wrecked scene.

…2 years later…


“Zak wake up.”

“Muhhh”

“ZAK YOU MORON WAKE UP!”

The boy in his bed bolted straight up making all his blankets rush to the floor.

“Tim, jeezes what’s all the commotion?”

This was Zak he was 12 years old he had brown tired eyes, and dark brown hair that was all messy he wore a black plain t-shirt, blue jeans and a red Pokemon league hat he had won from a competition.

“What’s all the commotion? Were getting our Pokemon today and you’re still snoozing!”

This was Tim Zak’s friend he was also 12 he had short brown hair and bright blue eyes; he wore a green long sleeve shirt and black trousers.

“Oh no I totally forgot!” Zak exclaimed

“Well lets hurry will get Vicky on our way.” Tim replied

The two boys when downstairs.

“Hold on Zak I forgot to give you you’re backpack it has food, drinks, appliances and clothes.”

This was Zak’s mum she was aged in her late 30’s she wore a pink apron, white shirt and blue jeans. She had blue sparkly eyes and long brown hair which she kept in a normal pony tail.

“Thanks mum.”

“Ok now leave on your journey and do the best you can I’ll always be rooting for you. Bye son.”

“Bye mum.”

Zak gave his mum a kiss on the cheek and he left with Tim by his side.

The two boys walked along the street.

“Hey so how are we picking our Pokemon from Professor. Birch?” Zak asked

“Quite simple Oak has made a new rule since beginning trainers live far away from the lab and some live close people don’t get there preferred preference so it’s fairer his implanted a new rule it’s a random pick you don’t know who you’re choosing.” Tim said confidently.

“Hey look a big rock.” Zak smiled pointing at the rock.

“Did you even listen to what I said?” Tim replied.

“Rocky Road Flavored Ice Cream?” Zak answered.

“Why do I even bother?” Tim thought to himself.

“Okay heres Vicky’s house.” Tim said.

Vicky rushed outside with her pink backpack.

She was wearing a pink t-shirt, a blue skirt and a white cap that sat on her silky brown hair. She also had wide open blue eyes.

“Hi guys.” Vicky said happily.

“To Hot!” Zak yelled out

Tim gasped “You have a crush on Vicky!”

“No I mean the weather.” Zak smiled.

Tim fell anime style.

The trio walked along the road until they reached a big white building which had lots of antennas on the top.

“Well here it is the famous Birch Lab.” Tim said.

“What’s so famous about it?” Zak asked.

“Never mind.” Tim said embarrassingly.

They walked up the stairs and rushed inside.

Inside there was plenty of doors that led to different doors, old paintings, and heaps of paper work, notes, and computers.

Suddenly a man who was dressed in a Lab coat came out of a room.

“Oh hello I’m one of Professor Birch’s aides how may I help you?”

“Were trying to find Professor Birch were receiving our first Pokemon.” Zak grinned.

“Ok well follow me”

The aide led them to a hall which led to a room.

“Ok in here is Professor Oak proceed.”

“He seems weird.” Vicky quickly said after the Aide left.

“That’s because his a NERD, N-E-R-D just like Tim.” Zak laughed.

“I think being a nerd is better then being an IDIOT, I-D-I-O-T.” Tim laughed even harder.

“What does I-D-I-O-T spell?” Zak said dumbfounded.

“Guys lets just go into the room.” Vicky said.

They all walked into the room.

“Well hello you must be the three beginning trainers.”

This was Professor Birch he wore a Lab coat, glasses and brown sandals.

He had short spikey brown hair and dark brown eyes

“Yes we are.” They all said together.

“But there’s supposed to be one more trainer.”

“THAT’S ME, thank you very much.”

A boy walked into the room he was wearing a red t-shirt, black pants. He had blonde hair and brown eyes.

“My name’s Matt the future Champion.”

“I don’t think so I’m the next Champion.” Zak smirked.

“Ok there are four pokeballs on the table pick, Ladies are always first.” Birch said politely.

Vicky approached the table which had 4 pokeballs on it.

The pokeballs were coloured red and white.

Vicky picked up the one on the far left.

Vicky grinned with cautiousness “This one.”

Tim now approached the table he picked the one on the far right.

“Yep I’ve picked.”

Matt approached the table and picked the one on the right.

“With my luck I probably chose the best one.” Matt giggled to himself.

Zak approached the table and picked up the remaining Pokeball.

“Excellent I’ll go get all you’re pokedex’s, pokeballs and register you. In this time it will be wise to see who you’ve chosen.” Birch walked off towards another door.

“Go Pokeball” Vicky through it softly into the air.

A small blue rabbit/mouse like creature appeared it had two big long oval shaped ears that stood on its head it had two blue cheeks with a minus sign on them and a tail that was shaped like a minus sign.

“That’s a Minun by the looks of it.” Tim said with knowledge.

“Go Pokeball!” Tim threw his ball straight into the air.

A medium sized young monkey like Pokemon appeared it had brown strips on its back; it had 2 baggy eyes and a bright pink nose. And it stood on its four legs.

“That’s a Slakoth the slacker Pokemon it matches you’re personality” Zak laughed out loud.

“Out of all the Pokemon I get that one, why me lord? WHY?” Tim muttered to himself.

“Go Pokeball.” Matt threw his Pokeball out with all his might.

A black/grey dog Pokemon appeared from the Pokeball its fur was all messy, its tail had heaps of split ends its fur on its face and paw’s was black while the rest of the fur was grey.

“A Poochyena cool.” Matt smiled delightfully.

“Go Pokeball!” Zak threw the Pokeball up high.

A green dog like Pokemon appeared it had a yellow nose and a yellow pointy tail. It stood on its four green legs its ears were half yellow half green.

“Booyeah an Electrike” Zak jumped happily up and down with joy.

Birch came back into the room which the trainers were standing in.

“Well I see you’ve all seen your Pokemon here are your pokedex’s.

Birch handed each one of them the gadget.

“And you’re pokeballs.”

Birch handed them 5 pokeballs each.

The pokedex is used to record data for all Pokemon you’ve seen or captured and the pokeballs help you catch Pokemon along you’re journey, Good Luck everybody happy battling I got to go now, see you.”

And Birch once again left the room.

“Hey Vicky up for a battle?” Tim said

“You betcha” Vicky replied.

“Minun GO!”

“Slakoth GO!”

Minun stepped in front of its trainer jumping around enthusiastically.

<Mi-Mi>

Slakoth trotted in front of Tim.

<Slaaaaaaaa>

“Minun go tackle attack.”

“Scratch attack Slakoth.”

Minun started to charge towards the standing Slakoth.

It charged into Slakoth the Slakoth then swiped it aside with its claws sending Minun flying into a wall.

“Minun are you okay?” Vicky frowned.

Minun nodded.

“Quick attack Slakoth.”

“Minun wait for it then shock it with Spark Attack.”

Slakoth started to charge at Minun but at a slow pace.

“Oh no I forgot Slakoth’s main weakness is its speed.” Tim yelled with disappointment

“Let’s finish this Minun charge up your Spark to full power and when Slakoth comes Spark it.” Vicky yelled pointing at the slow Slakoth.

Minun’s cheek started to charge up electricity.

Slakoth was one metre away from Minun about to finish its quick attack.

“NOW!!!” Vicky yelled confidently.

Minun released its gathered electricity the shock hit Slakoth right in the head making it flip backwards and straight onto the floor.

<Sla-Sla-Slaaa> moaned the Slakoth.

It then closed its eyes it had fainted.

“Yay well done Minun.” Vicky screamed with joy.

<Nun-Nun> Minun jumped into Vicky’s arms.

“Return Slakoth nice try we’ll get better.” Tim frowned.

“Well that was certainly boring.” Matt taunted the two battlers

“Oh yeah I challenge you Matt.” Zak said

“Fine!”

“Poochyena GO!”

Matt’s Pokemon ran in front of him barking at the opposition.

“Go Electrike!”

Zak’s Pokemon jumped in front of him sparks flowing through its body.

“Poochyena Sand Attack then follow it up with a Tackle”

“Electrike Thunder Shock aim for its tail.”

“That’s a stupid move by Zak.” Tim said.

‘How dumb can you get?” Matt giggled

Poochyena started to dig up some sand but there was none because they were battling in doors on the floor.

“Oh no how could I over look that?” Matt yelled with anger.

“Full power Electrike!” Zak smiled.

Electrike released bright yellow electricity that hit Poochyena directly in its grey tail.

Poochyena fell to the floor.

It had fainted ONE HIT K.O

“No! Poochyena return.” Matt screeched

“Yay go Electrike!”

Electrike ran up to Zak and ran around his feet happily.

“Well Zak, Vicky are we ready to go we could travel together.” Tim suggested.

“Yep.” Both Vicky and Zak replied.

“Hey Zak you ran out of luck next time it will be different.” Matt snorted.

He walked out of the Lab followed by Zak, Tim and Vicky.

“Its time…” Tim smiled.

“For Rocky Road ice cream!” Zak smiled.

“No you idiot I meant for us to start our journeys and become Pokemon Masters!” Tim yelled

“Okay gotcha I’ve only got one question.”

“What…?”

“What’s a Pokemon master???”






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black cat, black cat
It's not exactly great. >_< But at least you're trying. I'll just tell you what you need to improve and and try to have an in depth review.

Okay, comma use:
“Dad, we have captured the three peace guardians.”
Okay, let me explain this concept. When you address someone (ex. call them by name), you need to have a comma after or before it. It depends on where it is. If it's in the back...
“Yay go, Electrike!”
You have to put it in front of the name.

Or if you have in interjection (ex. well, anyway, etc.) you still need to put one:
“Anyway, the Three Peace Guardians are inside that machine.”
Same thing. I dunno why but it's neater that way. ^_~


Now for the punctuation (ex. periods, comma etc.) in quotations (or dialogue):
“Well I got a big bruise,” Muttered one of the members.
If the dialogue (speaking parts) is one sentence together with the next part, ("muttered one of the members") then you have to have the comma there.

If not then you can put a period. Like here:
“Booyeah an Electrike.” Zak jumped happily up and down with joy.
Because they are different sentences and are not connected together.

There are many mistakes breaking those lessons/rules. Correct it then I'll tell you about the technical parts. (or in other words, I'll give you more lessons.)

~PEACE~
 
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