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Pokemon Shining (Rated PG 13)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Pokemon Shining, Jun 13, 2006.

  1. Pokemon Shining

    Pokemon Shining Beginning Trainer

    Pokemon Shining

    A Pokemon/The Shining Crossover

    A full moon shone high in the night sky. But this night was going to put something fearful in motion. A shadowy form of a Absol was running though the moonlit forest towards who knows where but it did seem that the dark type Pokemon was looking for something. Then it heard a noise and turned around. Something blacker then the night zoomed towards it and hit the ground. There was a bright flash of light and the Absol was gone. A shadowy figure of a man walked into a patch of moon light...Jack Torrence.

    "You will do..." he said darkly. "You will do just fine..."

    ~~~

    TWO YEARS LATER

    Two people looked up at the hotel. One was a female with black hair and blue eyes. Next to her was a boy about ten. They both looked up to the hotel like it was about to attack them. You see these two are Wendy and Danny Torrence. The wife and son of Jack Torrence. They still could not forget what had happened at this very hotel about three years ago. But times had changed and the two were needed to return. The Overlook Hotel had went out of business and it was being put up for sell. The two were needed to stay there till the day it was sold. But they could not forget that one Winter.

    "Come, Danny," Wendy said as she began to make her way over to the Hotel. "There is nothing to be afraid of. Maybe everything will be better without your Father."

    "But something's wrong," Danny said. You see Danny had a gift. A "Shining". He was able to see things that happened long ago as well as things about to happen. "What if HE is still here?"

    "Nothing bad is going to happen," Wendy said. "You have Snow now."

    A small silver and white colored Eevee looked up at its master. Danny picked the Pokemon up.

    "Your right," he said.

    But he could not shake the feeling that someone was watching them.


    ~~~

    End of Prologue. ​


    So there it is. The Prologue to what I think is the first ever Pokemon/The Shining crossover. Hope you like my story and tell me what you think.
     
  2. Angelic Elf Ivy

    Angelic Elf Ivy Well-Known Member

    Yay! I read it! And here we go!

    an Absol, not a Absol
    After Danny Torrence put a comma, and continue on with the wife and son of Jack Torrence.
    until the day it was sold
    you don't need to capitalize winter.

    One more thing, you're prologue is a bit short. Chapters are supposed to be at least a page long, and this seems a little short to be a page long. Other than that it's an interesting start.
     

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