pokemon showdown

[evil bonsly]

epiclouge

this is the stror of a trainer named max (not the one in anime) who gos on a journey to collect badges. Although this isnt the pokemon world as you know it in this story everyone is a pokemon. They do not own pokemon they must fight gym leaders themselves which makes it harder. Instead of pokedexes there are battledexes which ecords data of all the pokemon youve seen. Team rocket is in this world too they illegally catch other pokemon since a law was passed saying you couldnt catch pokemon because you would be a pokemon yourself. This story takes place before the hoenn and johto pokemon were discovered. Although our main character is a treeko think of him being like togepi who was in the kanto region when johto pokemon werent discovered yet.

chapter1 coming soon

 

[Umbreevee]

HA! This was so short and so... not good-looking that I only read half of this. Which isn't much, mind you. I think you just typed this in the reply box when in a hurry. Waaaaaay too short, no description, you tell instead of show... bah. Far below standards, I think. If there are standards.

*reports*

 

[Yami Ryu]

An Epilogue is not a Prologue, an Epilogue is a finishing up bit to show it's an ending, or to close up loose ends.

But this is niether a decent length for an Epilogue, nor a Prologue. This looks like something you either sneezed into existence, or bashed your head against the keyboard a few times to make some jibber jabber, decided the spam was enough and hit post. THE NEW THREAD BUTTON IS NOT A TOY. NOR IS THE REPLY BOX.

Your rushed, squashed and very poorly written and thought out prologue can't stand alone- as there's barely anything to it. This is most likely something you thought up in a minute, and wrote down in just as little time. There's very little thought in it, and the grammar is as poor as what thought you put in it. You want to avoid having a long trail of closed trite threads to your name? READ THE RULES AND ADVICE FOR ASPIRING AUTHORS.

I now report this.