Pokemon Steam Version

[PokeJourney]

The Series I have so far...;212;


Comic 1
Comic 2
Comic 3

 

[Dean]

It;s very good. but why old sprites?

 

[Matt`]

Read this. The part on "Journey Comics".

Things that can be improved
1. Speech Bubbles (you don't have any) - don't have text under panels
2. Cliche - The same story has been done a million times. Especially the part about going to the lab and getting a Pikachu

And that's about it. I'm sure I could add more though.

 

[Chinese Teletubbie]

Okay use pokemon Fire red/ Leaf green or Ruby/ Sappire sprites not from the older games. Oh and save in BMP save in PNG

 

[Divine_Light]

Its not that good, use colour

 

[Anton_91]

I think it's cool that you use old sprites. Still, the comic can be improved with lenght, maybe speech bubbles and maybe a character bio? We don't know anything about these characters. But besides that, keep on what you're doing here.

 

[Blaze Dragon]

1)Starting with a Pikachu is so boring and overused, that I´m sick of it
2)Use text bubbles and colour please