Pokemon Survivor

[Feti]

Name says it all ..

Well, it's about sixteen Pokemons that begin with being split into two tribes of eight. I will start by revealing 4 Pokemon at a time until all 16 have been revealed...!

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Character Revealing 1/4

Comments?

 

[blueguy]

First off, the text is very hard to read (especially Geodude's and Spinarak's). Second, it's filled with grammatical errors and confused sentences. Mareep refers itself as a "happy and fun person" to be around? Mareep, if I'm not mistaken... is a pokémon (and you should use the accent in pokémon, too, by the way). "and I hope that I can win the game with not difficulties"? Huh? Also, you used "hope" twice in Geodude's paragraph. You should NOT use text-under-panel. Trust me. Your sentences and dialect are really awkward... >_< I don't really see much potential from this.

 

[Feti]

Just so you know.. I was really hurrying that.. I'm just making this for fun and don't really care about grammar errors, not using the accent or whatever.. =/.. If you don't like it.. Then so be it, I'm not gonna change it!

 

[blueguy]

Just so you know.. I was really hurrying that.. I'm just making this for fun and don't really care about grammar errors, not using the accent or whatever.. =/.. If you don't like it.. Then so be it, I'm not gonna change it!

Um... excuse me, but I suggest you restrain yourself from posting such a message again, because it will only make you appear ignorant and unintelligent. Why did you hurry it? Who was begging you to post it? No one, so your excuse means nothing.

You SHOULD care about grammar and using the accent, unless you're a Grade 3 drop-out. I mean, COME ON! If you're too lazy to make a good comic and you don't actually care about making it good, then DON'T POST IT.

If you're not going to change it, there's nothing I can do to stop you, but I hope you enjoy other intelligent reviewers' comments, who will undoubtedly point out the same downfalls of your comics. I advise that you change your attitude now, because other people won't be as merciful as I was.

 

[Feti]

I'm sorry, but it seems that you're the one with the bad attitude! I just said that I didn't care about your comment! Not everyone makes wonderfully great comics! I NEVER said I was hurrying the ****ing comic so you can read it, so just screw you! I think it was completely uncalled for! I was asking for comments, not some ******* insults like you're giving! Just keep it to yourself! I think that's what's wrong with this site, everyone must be perfect! No grammar mistakes are liked, and you just **** on anyone who isn't as good as you! So I can only say **** YOU!

 

[Davis the Gamer]

Wow, you guys are so alike!

Feti, if you want your comic to be half assed, then keep it up. You'll never become great, get a site, and become the next Bob & George.

Blueguy, I don't know if your from quebec with one of those french keyboards, but on an english keyboard, that little accent thing isn't there, and paint don't got it. Instead of going "XD NO ACCENT U PHAIL" teach them HOW to get the accent there.

So similar, yet so different.

 

[Feti]

Bob & George who?

I was making this comic for fun! Not everything must be perfect! Some people just like to do things like this for fun, and there's really nothing wrong with that! I just don't like doing comics that take 5 hours to make one frickin panel!

 

[blueguy]

I'm sorry, but it seems that you're the one with the bad attitude! I just said that I didn't care about your comment!

I should probably stop commenting, since you've already embarassed yourself, but I just CAN'T resist. How I love a good, little fight. It doesn't matter if you don't CARE about my comment. My attitude is fine, but if I'm not mistaken, it was you who reacted so poorly to my criticisms, which were intended to help, not irritate you.

Not everyone makes wonderfully great comics!

Obviously, so if you acknowledge that you don't make "great comics", why are you posting here?

I NEVER said I was hurrying the ****ing comic so you can read it, so just screw you!

I didn't say you were hurrying it for me. But you did say that the reason it was bad was because you "hurried it".

I think it was completely uncalled for! I was asking for comments, not some ******* insults like you're giving! Just keep it to yourself! I think that's what's wrong with this site, everyone must be perfect! No grammar mistakes are liked, and you just **** on anyone who isn't as good as you! So I can only say **** YOU!

Comments and criticism are one in the same, I'm afraid, and I haven't insulted you. I've simply advised you on how to improve, and what will come from other users in the future. I'm not asking you to be perfect, but better... Can't you understand that. All I was trying to do was help you... but I see you're too immature to comprehend my review.

If you reply in the same manner again, I'll report your thread.

Wow, you guys are so alike!

Feti, if you want your comic to be half assed, then keep it up. You'll never become great, get a site, and become the next Bob & George.

Blueguy, I don't know if your from quebec with one of those french keyboards, but on an english keyboard, that little accent thing isn't there, and paint don't got it. Instead of going "XD NO ACCENT U PHAIL" teach them HOW to get the accent there.

So similar, yet so different.

Davis. Get bent. Seriously. You're such a rude, immature, little child, and you need to grow up. Were you dropped on your head when you were younger? Or are your parents so horrible that you don't understand the meaning of 'tact'? You have no restraint for your idiocy and your malice, so perhaps it would be best if you just didn't regard me ever again?!

I'm not from Quebec either, btw.

 

[Feti]

Why should I even care if you report me! I haven't even had any interest in Pokemon or this site for over a year! So whatever..

**** you! =) Just report me and see if I care!

 

[Neopolis]

This thread is hilarious.

And I'm not referring to the comic. David is kinda right, you're both equally ignorant *gets anti-flame shields* Feti, you have to take criticism, you can't get only good comments. The comic is OK though. Blueguy, if someone can't make an accent, does that make the comic any worse?

 

[blueguy]

This thread is hilarious.

And I'm not referring to the comic. David is kinda right, you're both equally ignorant *gets anti-flame shields* Feti, you have to take criticism, you can't get only good comments. The comic is OK though. Blueguy, if someone can't make an accent, does that make the comic any worse?

Making the accent is so simple, though! >_<

1) Hold down "Alt"
2) Type "0233" in the number pad
3) Release
4) Voila

And I'm not truly ignorant, but that's a popular opinion.

 

[Shadowfaith]

o.o, Okay, first off, they were only giving you adivice, if you are going to post here, then you have to accept both criticism and comments.

Secondly, Double posting is against forum rules.

and Thirdly, blue, your just to blame for also flaming him, though he may have started the whole affair, you still replied...so basically, Davis was right, you are both as bad as eachother, and there was no need to go and flame Davis either no was there?

So, either accept the comments and criticism or this thread will be closed, it's your choice.

When people comment, they don't mean that you should change it, they only want to give their views on your work.

So chill, yeah?

 

[blueguy]

and Thirdly, blue, your just to blame for also flaming him, though he may have started the whole affair, you still replied...so basically, Davis was right, you are both as bad as eachother, and there was no need to go and flame Davis either no was there?

Alright... I understand and am going to try and use your comment to better myself... I shouldn't have replied to his comments afterwards. All I was doing was provoking him. I should have let my review speak for itself, and I apologize for my behavior. In the future I will do my best not to cause any fights or arguments.

 

[Feti]

Is no one going to ban me?

I WANT to be banned =)

(I'll continue in the next post - Which will be double, BTW)

 

[Feti]

Understood?

 

[Neopolis]

If you want to get banned, quadruple post. Post full of swearing, and put in your sig that this forum sucks. Also try breaking every rule in the forum rules with one post.

 

[Marril_Man]

I actually kind of agree with both of you.
Many people on this site need every post to be perfect or they go and call you a n00b. I'm not saying you did but in the past I have seen it.
I do agree it is a little hard to read and there was no need in rushing it.
People can't post a sprite comic here without being bombarded by a critizm which is on one comic, I guess that does help you though. YOu can only learn by making mistakes I guess.
But Blueguy you sometimes to appear to be thinking you are the best at these Comics. But does the presentation matter? No it is the plot and humour really. And I mean you can't say this is funny, I mean there is only one strip...